读后续写入门课件（含学案） -2025-2026学年高一英语作文复习专项

Continuation Writing 读后续写入门 ◆读后续写基本介绍： 读后续写提供一段 词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料所给段落开头语进行续写（ 词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。若词数少于 词，从总分中扣去2分。 ◆读后续写评分参考： 读后续写评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： （1）与所给短文的 度及段落开头语的 程度； （2） 的丰富性； （3）应用 结构和 的丰富性和准确性； （4）上下文的 ； 【注意！！！】如书写较差，以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。 350 150 130 衔接 内容 语法 词汇 连贯性 融合 2 第四档 （16－20） ·与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 ·内容比较丰富。 ·所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 ·比较有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 第五档 （21－25） ·与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 ·内容丰富。 ·所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 ·有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 01 原则 时态内容要前后衔接，上下连贯 语言表达风格一致。 03 原则 故事情节应跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。 02 原则 故事内容一定是弘扬社会主义核心价值观。 如失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了； 吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处； 犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人； 贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。 读后续写三大原则 写作指导 原文一致 正能量 曲折性 1 如何构思续写的内容 Step 1 Read for elements Step 2 Read for plots Step 3 Read for language Step 4 Read for predictions Read 5 Who Where When What Jenny home. The seller her to a bowl of noodles and her. She decided to to her mother. One afternoon At the selling noodles Jenny, her , the Step 1 Read for elements Why Jenny her mother and ran out of home. How ? mother seller left treated comforted apologize stand quarrelled with 6 Climax 2 Choose the right order. A stranger gave her a bowl of noodles when Jenny was hungry. One afternoon, Jenny quarrelled with her mother. Finally, Jenny felt regretful and decided to make an apology. The stranger’s words reminded Jenny of what her mother had done. Order How did Jenny feel ? Beginning ( )   Development ( )   Climax ( )   Later Development ( )   Ending ( ? )   B A D C Step 2 Read for plots angry mean and merciless regretful and grateful regretful ? She thought her mother was 7 The change of Jenny’s feelings …but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me. Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles… angrily, speechless and numb with shock... ran out of, couldn’t help weeping, wandered, sighed, cried silently actions words thoughts looks Step 3 Read for language 语言特色 1.分词短语作状语 （1）Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. （2）She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. （3）Hearing the words, the seller smiled… 2. with的复合结构 However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. 9 3.定语从句 The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. 5.形容词短语作伴随状语 Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock. 4.强调句 But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh, yes…but I don’t have money on me,” she replied. “That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mother’s familiar face and weathered (饱经风霜的) hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. How did Jenny feel then? Was her mother at home? What did she do before her mother came back? Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Why did her mother come back home so late? What would Jenny do? What happened to them? Step 4 Read for predictions 两段首句定一框 由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。 二框二首正能量 第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。 15 十句五定法 Para 1 （1）定1：承上衔接续写第一段第一句 （2） （3） （4） （5）定2：启下衔接第二段第一句 Para 2 （1）定3：承上衔接续写第二段第一句 （2） （3） （4）定4：正能量结局 （5）定5：升华主旨/画面定格 （亲情类，成长类，帮助类，遇险类） 反应 情绪 过程动作 反应 情绪 过程动作 Step 5 How to write 所见 所闻 所感 所思 外貌描写 环境描写 语言描写 动作描写 心理描写 情感描写 所见 所做 所感 优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件高考二轮复习之读后续写解题指导(共38张PPT) 优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件高考二轮复习之读后续写解题指导(共38张PPT) Step 6 Vivid writing and polishing Paragraph 1: Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she pushed the door open and entered the house, she found her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sank down onto the sofa. “Where could my mother be?” she wondered. “Was she still angry with me?” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Lost in thought, she realized that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her. She felt rather ashamed, with tears rolling down her cheeks. 参考范文 18 Paragraph 2: A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. “Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’s arms. “Mum, I’m so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently and hugging her firmly.It was then that she realized how deeply her mother loved her. 19 优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件高考二轮复习之读后续写解题指导(共38张PPT) 优秀ppt公开课ppt免费课件下载免费课件高考二轮复习之读后续写解题指导(共38张PPT) Thank you for your attention! Practice makes perfect! $2025级高一读后续写入门 审核人：高一英语备课组 Continuation Writing 读后续写入门 年级 班 级 姓名_ 使用时间 Teaching aims: To enable students to have a clear map of the structure and obtain a good understanding of the text To enable students to learn how to analyze,infer,develop and create a logical and reasonable ending of the story. To encourage students to logically organize information,ideas and language and learn to develop creative thinking. Important and difficult points: To learn some skills and use them correctly and properly in their continuation writing. 【Preview case】 Check yourself---Basic information about continuation writing ◆读后续写基本介绍： 读后续写是提供一段 词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料所给段落开头语进行续 写( 词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。若词数少 于 词，从总分中扣去2分。 ◆读后续写评分参考： 读后续写评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑： (1)与所给短文与所给短文的 度及段落开头语的 程度： (2) 的丰富性： (3)应用 结构和 的丰富性和准确性； (4)上下文的 【注意！！】如书写较差，以至影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。 ·与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 第四档 ·内容比较丰富。 (16-20) ·所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意 义表达。 ·比较有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 ·与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 第五档 ·内容丰富。 ·所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表 （21-25) 达。 ·有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 ◆读后续写三原则： 原则 原则 原则 2025级高一读后续写入门 审核人：高一英语备课组 >【Exercise case】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150左右。 Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn't help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?" "Oh,yes...but I don't have money on me,"she replied. “That's nothing.I'll treat you today,”said the man.“Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently. "What is it?"asked the man kindly."Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!"said Jenny. "Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!" Hearing the words,the seller smiled,"Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?"Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock,she remembered Mother's familiar face and weathered(饱经风霜的)hands.Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me." On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath. Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Step 1 Read for elements Who Jenny,her the What Jenny home.The seller. her to a bowl of noodles and her.She decided to to her mother. When ○ne afternoon Where At the selling noodles Why Jenny her mother and ran out of home. How Step 2 Read for plots Choose the right order. 3 2025级高一读后续写入门 审核人：高一英语备课组 A.A stranger gave her a bowl of noodles when Jenny was hungry. B.One afternoon,Jenny quarrelled with her mother. C.Finally,Jenny felt regretful and decided to make an apology. D. The stranger's words reminded Jenny of what her mother had done. Order How did Jenny feel? Beginning ) She felt Development() She thought her mother was Climax(） She felt Later Development ( She felt Ending(?） ？ Step 3 Read for language Surroundings (No) Words Task 1 The change of Actions Jenny's feelings Thoughts Looks Task 2 Underline the advanced sentences. Step 4 Read for predictions Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Step 5 How to write 十句五定法 Para.1 Para.2 Step 6 Vivid writing and polishing Step 7 Homework----Finish the writing 3 2025级高一读后续写入门 审核人：高一英语备课组 【Quiz case】) Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn't help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother.Having wandered in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However,with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,"Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?" "Oh,yes...but I don't have money on me,"she replied. “That's nothing.I'll treat you today,”said the man.“Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As she was eating,Jenny cried silently. "What is it?"asked the man kindly."Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness!"said Jenny. "Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me.She is so merciless compared to a stranger!" Hearing the words,the seller smiled,"Girl,do you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have you expressed your gratitude to her?"Jenny sat there,speechless and numb with shock,she remembered Mother's familiar face and weathered(饱经风霜的)hands.Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me." On the way home,Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath. Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back