打碎花瓶读后续写 课件-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦“读后续写”专题，依据高考评价体系明确了情节连贯、心理描写、主题升华三大考查要求，通过故事要素梳理（人物/起因/伏笔）和续写框架搭建，归纳了“坦白真相-反应反转”的常考情节模式，体现备考针对性。 课件亮点在于“真题情境+句型植入+核心素养融合”策略，如以“打碎花瓶”实例，运用“My fingers clutched... with a wave of... sweeping over me”等高分句型培养语言能力，通过情节逻辑构建提升思维品质，渗透诚实宽容的文化意识。提供“四段式写作框架”和“易错词汇表”，助力学生掌握细节描写技巧，教师可据此实施高效专题复习。

读后续写——打碎花瓶 LISA 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The sound of glass breaking is instantly recognizable. I’d been telling my best friend Missi a silly story and had spun (急转身) around in the living room when I heard that sound and froze. When I looked down at the floor, it was full of tiny red, pink and clear glass pieces. Missi said fearfully, “Oh, no, not the vase.” “Why? What did I do?” My face reddened. “Amy, that glass vase was one of the few items my grandparents had passed down to my mum through generations in my family,” Missi replied nervously. “If you’d broken anything else in the apartment, I would have gladly said I did it. But you’re going to have to tell my mom that it was your fault, and she’s going to be really mad.” I was terrified. I’d destroyed a priceless vase. Why did I have to spin around like that? We gathered up the broken pieces. I kept saying that maybe it could be fixed, but Missi said gently that it didn’t look possible. I insisted we keep the pieces. But the glass was so delicate that some of it broke even more as we tried to sweep it up carefully. Missi said her mom would be home at any time. I had got a few butterflies in my stomach. Would her mom criticize or punish me? Would she tell me I couldn’t stay in their apartment for the weekend? I couldn’t stop recalling those fifteen seconds in my mind, me spinning fast and the sound of glass crashing. The only thing I could think of to say was “I’m sorry.” A couple of minutes later we heard a key turn in the door. Her mom was home. Right from the start, we could see she was in a good mood. “Hello! It’s hot today. I want to treat you girls to that frozen yogurt. Let’s go!” her mom said, pointing at the open door. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150左右; (2)开头已给出。 “Before that, I need to tell you something really important,” I said. ________________________________ Her mom looked at me, saying nothing for what felt like forever. ________________________________   步骤一：通读原文，锁定核心要素（5分钟，审题破题） 1. 梳理故事基础信息 - 人物：I（主人公）、Missi（朋友）、Missi’s mother（关键人物） - 起因：和Missi玩耍时，不小心打碎她家珍贵的花瓶 - 经过：两人试图修复花瓶但失败，主人公内心充满愧疚、恐惧、忐忑 - 结局伏笔：妈妈回家，心情愉悦，未察觉异常，准备带两人去吃酸奶 2. 明确续写要求 - 两段续写，每段开头已给定，不可修改 - 词数：总计150词左右，段落字数均衡 - 主题导向：诚实、宽容、知错就改，禁止偏离主题 3. 分析两段开头写作重点 - 第一段开头：“Before that, I need to tell you something really important,” I said.（“在那之前，我有件非常重要的事情要告诉你，”我说） 任务：引出坦白真相的过程，重点刻画主人公紧张、愧疚的心理与动作 - 第二段开头：Her mom looked at me, saying nothing for what felt like forever. 任务：描写妈妈的反应，实现情节反转，升华诚实与宽容的主题 步骤二：搭建段落框架，确定情节走向（5分钟，列提纲） 第一段写作框架（坦白真相） 1. 承接开头句，描写主人公说话时的动作+心理状态 2. 详细叙述打碎花瓶的经过，表达歉意 3. 交代内心的愧疚与不安，为下文做铺垫 第二段写作框架（反应与升华） 1. 承接开头句，描写妈妈沉默时主人公的紧张心理 2. 写出妈妈的宽容反应（安慰、原谅、夸赞诚实） 3. 描写主人公的感受，结尾升华文章主题 步骤三：句型植入，积累高分表达（8分钟，句型套用） 将指定高分句型对应到段落中，讲解适用场景，大家可以直接套用 1. 第一段必用句型- My fingers clutched... tightly, with a wave of... sweeping over me. - After a moment of hesitation, I finally... - Noticing..., I..., leaving a surge of... passing through my chest. 2. 第二段必用句型- ...whispered/echoed, 伴随状语（表情/动作） - Outside the window, brilliant sunlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was... that truly illuminated my world. 步骤四：逐段动笔写作，细节填充 第一段写作实操引导 1. 开头承接：用给定句型公式，立刻加入动作心理描写 示例：“Before that, I need to tell you something really important,” I said. My fingers clutched the hem of my skirt tightly, with a wave of guilt and fear sweeping over me. 2. 中间叙事：加入犹豫、坦白的细节，套用句型 示例：After a moment of hesitation, I finally told her the truth that I had accidentally broken the valuable vase when playing with Missi. 3. 结尾铺垫：补充内心愧疚，衔接下文 示例：Noticing the broken pieces on the floor, I lowered my head in shame, leaving a surge of deep regret passing through my chest. 第二段写作实操引导 1. 开头承接：沿用给定句子，刻画主人公紧张心情 示例：Her mom looked at me, saying nothing for what felt like forever. My heart beat wildly and I was too nervous to say a word. 2. 中间情节：描写妈妈宽容的反应，套用对话句型 示例：“It doesn’t matter at all,” she whispered, a warm smile on her face. She praised me for my honesty and said the vase was not precious. 3. 结尾升华：加入环境描写句型，点明主题 示例：Outside the window, brilliant sunlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was her kindness and forgiveness that truly illuminated my heart that day. “Before that, I need to tell you something really important,” I said. My fingers clutched the hem of my skirt tightly, with a wave of overwhelming guilt and terror sweeping over me. After a moment of hesitation, I finally plucked up my courage and confessed: I had been spinning around while chatting with Missi, and accidentally shattered the priceless vase that had been passed down for generations. Noticing the ruined pieces on the floor, I whispered my apology, leaving a surge of profound regret passing through my chest. My legs shook slightly as I waited for her reaction. Her mom looked at me, saying nothing for what felt like forever. The silence felt endless, but then she smiled gently. “I’m so glad you told me the truth,” she murmured, her eyes softening with warmth and tolerance. She comforted me that material things could be replaced, but honesty was a gift. Later, we went to enjoy the frozen yogurt as planned. Outside the window, brilliant sunlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was her sincere forgiveness that truly illuminated my path to growth that day. 1.clutched the hem of my skirt tightly紧紧攥着裙摆 2. a wave of overwhelming guilt and terror 一阵强烈到几乎让人窒息的愧疚与恐惧 3. sweep over me 席卷我 4. after a moment of hesitation 犹豫片刻后 5. pluck up my courage 鼓起勇气 6. shatter the priceless vase 打碎无价花瓶 7. pass down for generations 代代相传 8. a surge of profound regret 一阵深深的悔恨 9. murmur 低声说 10. eyes softening with warmth 眼神变得温暖 11. material things 物质的东西 12. honesty is a gift 诚实是一份礼物 13. frozen yogurt 冷冻酸奶 14. brilliant sunlight 灿烂的阳光 15. sincere forgiveness 真诚的原谅 16. illuminate my path to growth 照亮我的成长之路 Before that, I need to tell you something really important,” I said. My fingers clutched my chest tightly, with a wave of overwhelming guilt and terror sweeping over me. After a moment of hesitation, I finally plucked up my courage and confessed: I had been spinning around while chatting with Missi, and accidentally shattered the priceless vase that had been passed down for generations. Noticing the ruined pieces on the floor, I whispered my apology, leaving a surge of profound regret passing through my chest. My legs shook slightly as I waited for her reaction. Her mom looked at me, saying nothing for what felt like forever. The silence felt endless, but then she smiled gently. “I’m so glad you told me the truth,” she murmured, her eyes softening with warmth and tolerance. She comforted me that material things could be replaced, but honesty was a gift. Later, we went to enjoy the frozen yogurt as planned. Outside the window, brilliant sunlight spilled across the vast sky. Yet, it was her sincere forgiveness that truly illuminated my path to growth that day. 1. clutch my chest tightly 紧紧抓住胸口 2. a wave of overwhelming guilt and terror 一阵强烈的愧疚与恐惧 3. sweep over me 席卷我 4. after a moment of hesitation 犹豫片刻后 5. pluck up my courage 鼓起勇气 6. spin around 转身 7. shatter the priceless vase 打碎无价花瓶 8. pass down for generations 代代相传 9. a surge of profound regret 一阵深深的悔恨 10. shake slightly 微微发抖 11. what felt like forever 漫长的沉默 12. murmur 低声说 13. eyes softening with warmth 眼神变得温暖 14. material things 物质的东西 15. honesty was a gift 诚实是一份礼物 16. frozen yogurt 冷冻酸奶 17. as planned 按计划 18. brilliant sunlight 灿烂的阳光 19. sincere forgiveness 真诚的原谅 20. illuminate my path to growth 照亮我的成长之路 1. the beauty of honesty and tolerance 诚实与宽容之美 2. the warmth of kindness and forgiveness 善意与原谅的温暖 3. the preciousness of honesty 诚实的可贵 4. the power of sincere apology 真诚道歉的力量 $