Unit 6 作文讲义 2025-2026学年译林版英语七年级下册

译林版7下unit 6作文专练 Landscapes of China 题目一：书信（给外国笔友的信） 题目： 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国很感兴趣，他写信问你中国有哪些美丽的风景。请你给他写一封回信，介绍一处你最喜欢的中国风景（如桂林山水、黄山、西湖、长城等）。内容包括： 1. 介绍这处风景在哪里，有什么特点（至少2点）； 2. 描述你在这处风景的游览经历或感受； 3. 邀请Tom以后来中国亲自欣赏这些美景。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为书信，属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写这封信的核心是：地点明确、特点清晰、感受真实。中国风景这个话题很丰富，学生可以选择自己去过或听说过的地方。写信给外国朋友，语气要热情友好，像在分享一件开心的事。关键是要把风景的特点写清楚，让Tom读了以后也想去看看。 二、写作要点分析 第一段介绍风景在哪里和特点：先说出风景的名称和位置，然后写出至少两个特点。例如：“桂林在广西，那里的山很奇怪，像从地里长出来的大牙齿，水很清很绿”“黄山在安徽，山上有奇怪的石头和云海，还有迎客松”“西湖在杭州，湖水平静像一面镜子，湖边有柳树和荷花”。特点要形象生动，让读者能在脑海里想象出画面。 第二段描述游览经历或感受：写一次你在这里的经历，或者看到这片风景时的感受。例如：“去年暑假我和爸爸妈妈去了桂林，坐在竹筏上，感觉像在画里一样”“站在黄山顶上，云在脚下飘，我好像变成了神仙”“早上在西湖边散步，风吹过来很舒服，我感觉特别放松”。“感受”可以简单真实，不要太夸张。 第三段邀请Tom来中国：热情地邀请他以后来中国玩，亲眼看看这些美丽的风景。例如：“希望有一天你能来中国，我带你去看看这些美丽的地方”“如果有机会来中国，我一定会带你去爬长城”。最后表达期待见面的心情。这样的结尾既点题，又增进了友谊。 三、语言与格式提醒 书信格式：称呼（Dear Tom,）、正文、结束语（Yours sincerely,）、签名。语气要亲切自然，像朋友聊天。描写风景时可以用比喻句，如“the water is like a mirror”，让文章更生动。 重要句型与词组 · I’m happy to tell you about the beautiful landscapes in China. · One of the most beautiful places is... · It is in... province / in the south/north of China. · The mountains there are very special. They look like... · The water is so clear that you can see the bottom. · When I was there, I felt like I was in a painting. · I hope you can come to China one day and see it yourself. · I will be very happy to be your guide. · landscapes, mountains, rivers, lake, clear water, take a boat, feel relaxed 高分范文 Dear Tom, I’m happy to tell you about one of the most beautiful landscapes in China — Guilin. Guilin is in the south of China. The mountains there are very special. They are not long and high like other mountains. They just pop up from the ground like green teeth. The Li River runs between the mountains. The water is so clear that you can see the fish. I went to Guilin with my parents last summer. We took a bamboo raft on the river. The wind was soft, and the mountains were all around us. I felt like I was in a painting. It was so quiet and beautiful. I will never forget that day. I hope you can come to China one day. I will take you to Guilin. We can take a bamboo raft together and enjoy the beautiful view. You will love it, I’m sure. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二：倡议书 题目： 假设你是学校环保社的社长，你发现一些美丽的自然景区被游客乱扔的垃圾污染了，还有人乱刻乱画，破坏了风景。请你写一份英文倡议书，呼吁同学们在旅游时保护中国美丽的风景。内容包括： 1. 描述中国风景的美丽和珍贵（用1-2个例子）； 2. 指出游客的不文明行为及其危害（至少2点）； 3. 提出具体的文明旅游建议（至少2条），呼吁大家爱护每一处风景。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为倡议书，属于应用文中的公开号召类文体。初一学生写这份倡议书的核心是：先说风景多美，再说不文明行为多不好，最后说我们应该怎么做。中国有很多美丽的自然风景，但也有被破坏的现象。这份倡议书要让学生意识到“美丽的风景需要我们共同保护”，培养环保意识和文明旅游的习惯。 二、写作要点分析 第一段描述中国风景的美丽和珍贵：先说出中国有很多美丽的风景，用一两个例子说明它们有多美。例如：“中国有美丽的黄山、桂林山水、西湖、长城。这些风景吸引了很多游客，也让我们中国人感到骄傲”“漓江的水像镜子一样，映着两边的青山”。这段要让读者觉得“这些风景太美了，不能失去”。 第二段指出不文明行为及其危害：至少写出两种不文明行为，并说明后果。例如：“有些游客把垃圾扔在山上、河里，水变脏了，动物也会吃掉塑料袋生病”“有人在石头上、古迹上刻‘某某到此一游’，这些痕迹永远去不掉，后来的游客看到会很难过”。描述要客观，不要过于愤怒，但要让人意识到问题的严重性。 第三段提出建议并呼吁：至少写出两条具体的文明旅游建议，要简单易行。例如：“把自己的垃圾带走，扔进垃圾桶”“不要在石头或建筑物上刻字”“看到别人扔垃圾，可以礼貌地提醒他”“拍照时不要踩进花丛或爬上石头”。最后用一句号召结束，例如：“让我们一起守护中国的美丽风景，让它们永远美丽”。 三、语言与格式提醒 倡议书开头用“Dear schoolmates,”，结尾用“Let’s protect our beautiful landscapes together!”等号召句。语言要简单、积极、有感染力和号召力。可以用“Our country has many beautiful landscapes. We are proud of them.”开头，先建立自豪感。 重要句型与词组 · Our country has many beautiful landscapes. · We are proud of places like the Great Wall and Guilin. · But sadly, some visitors are hurting these beautiful places. · They leave rubbish on the mountains and in the rivers. · Some people write or draw on the stones and walls. · These behaviors are bad for the environment and for other visitors. · Here is what we can do when we travel. · Always take your rubbish with you and put it in the bin. · Do not write or draw on stones, trees, or buildings. · Let’s be good visitors and protect our beautiful China. · protect, landscape, rubbish, carve, environment, be proud of 高分范文 Dear schoolmates, Our country has many beautiful landscapes. We are proud of places like the Li River in Guilin, the Yellow Mountain in Anhui, and the Great Wall in Beijing. These places are like beautiful paintings. People from all over the world come to see them. But sadly, some visitors are hurting these beautiful places. They leave plastic bottles and bags on the mountains. Some throw rubbish into the rivers, making the water dirty. Others carve their names on stones or walls. Those marks stay there forever. When other visitors see them, they feel sad and angry. Here is what we can do when we travel. First, always take your rubbish with you and put it in the bin. Second, never write or draw on stones, trees, or old buildings. If you see someone doing these things, you can politely say, “Please help protect our beautiful place.” Let’s be good visitors. Let’s protect our beautiful landscapes so that everyone can enjoy them for many years to come. Environmental Protection Club 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $