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Continuation 2024新高考全国卷一 Writing Elara 解题步骤 写 续 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 扩情节 增细节 Elara 写 定 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 Step 1：读 扩情节 增细节 Elara 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 1. I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. 2.That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Elara 3.Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. 4. Just then I realized that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. 5.At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.” Elara 注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. _______________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. _______________________________________ Elara 前文概述： 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲的是作者赶着去坐大巴参加一个会议，花了很长时间打车去大巴地点，终于抵达后发现钱包里没现金，无法支付给出租车司机。作者去提款机那里取钱，但是机器出故障了，于是就跟司机约定过几天再给他。最终，作者如期赴约还钱。 文章主题： 歌颂善良真诚，信任他人，诚实守信和爱心传递的美好品德，从而形成正确的世界观、人生观和价值观。 Elara 解题步骤 写 续 读 读大意 划要素 定框架 定情节 扩情节 增细节 Elara 定框架（十句五定） Para1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Para2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Gunter听到坏消息的反应 作者拿到了Gunter的联系方式，并承诺回维也纳后会联系他。 Elara 定框架（十句五定） Para2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 电话内容——约见面 结局：还钱（带了小礼物....成为朋友...） 升华：文章主题 ①陌生人之间的信任 ②善良的传递 ③困境中的人性光辉 ④承诺的力量 Elara 定情节（A-R-E) Para1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ Para2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. Gunter听到坏消息的反应 作者拿到了Gunter的联系方式，并承诺回维也纳后会联系他。 Gunter的行为？（提出车费先别管 让我去赶车） 我的情绪？（感动....感激.....) 我的反应？（讲话感谢) 车费！ Elara 定情节（A-R-E) Para2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ 电话内容——约见面 结局：还钱（带了小礼物....成为朋友...） 升华：Gunter的热心帮助感动了作者，作者决定将这份善意传递下去。 见面后我的行为？ （抱他！讲话谢谢他！） 见面！ Elara 解题步骤 写 定 读 读大意 划要素 定情节 定框架 扩情节 增细节 Elara Para1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. __________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ Gunter听到坏消息的反应 他挠了挠头，担忧地看着正在发车的大巴队伍。 Gunter的行为 我的情绪 我的反应 我拿到联系方式并承诺 Gunter挥了挥手说：“车费先别管了，快走吧，不然你要赶不上大巴了。” 听到他的话，我感到一股感动之情在我心中奔腾翻涌。 “谢谢你，Gunter。我保证会还给你的，”我用颤抖的声音说道。 上车前，我快速记下了Gunter的号码，并承诺一回来就给他打电话。 Gunter的反应：他答应了！ Elara 1. 他挠了挠头，担忧地看着正在发车的大巴队伍。 2. Gunter挥了挥手说：“车费先别管了，快走吧，不然你要赶不上大巴了。” 3. 听到他的话，一股感动之情在我心中涌起，传遍全身。 4. “谢谢你，Gunter。我保证会还钱的，”我用颤抖的声音说道 5. 他脸上绽开一个温暖的微笑，点了点头。 6. 上车前，我快速记下了Gunter的号码，并承诺一回来就给他打电话。 He scratched his head, looking at the departing bus queue with concern. Gunter waved his hand and said, "Don't worry about the money. Just go, or you'll miss your bus." Hearing his words, I felt a sense of emotion welling up in my heart and surging through me. “Thank you, Gunter. I promise I'll pay back the money,” I said in a trembling voice. A warm smile spread across his face and he nodded. Before boarding the bus, I quickly wrote down Gunter's number and promised to call him as soon as I came back. Elara Para2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. __________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ 电话内容——约见面 我们约定在第一次见面的那个车站见面。 见面后：抱他！ 见面后：谢谢他！ 结局：还钱（带了小礼物....成为朋友...） 升华：Gunter的热心帮助感动了作者，作者决定将这份善意传递下去。 一见到Gunter，我就给了他一个感激的拥抱。 我真诚地感谢他在那个雨夜的帮助。 然后我把车费和我在布拉格买的一份小礼物递给他，我们像老朋友一样握了握手。 从那时起，我决定无论何时我看到有人陷入困境，我将会成为他们Gunter——把一位陌生人曾经给予我的善意传递下去。 Elara 1. 我们约定在第一次见面的那个车站见面。 2. 一见到Gunter，我就给了他一个感激的拥抱。 3. 我真诚地感谢他在那个雨夜的帮助。 4. 然后我把车费和我在布拉格买的一份小礼物递给他，我们像老朋友一样握了握手 5.从那时起，我决定无论何时我看到有人陷入困境，我将成为他们的Gunter——把一位陌生人曾经给予我的善意传递下去。 We agreed to meet at the bus station where we had first met. The moment I saw Gunter, I gave him a grateful hug. I thanked him sincerely for his help that rainy night. Then I handed him the fare along with a small gift I had bought in Prague, and we shook hands like old friends. From then on, I decided that whenever I see someone in trouble, I will be their Gunter — passing on the kindness a stranger once showed me. Elara $