Unit 2 作文专练 2025-2026学年译林版七年级英语下册

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译林版7下unit 2作文专练 Helping each other 题目一:感谢信 题目: 假设你是李华,上周三放学时突然下大雨,你没带伞。你的同班同学王梅借伞给你,自己等她妈妈来接。请你给王梅写一封感谢信,内容包括: 1. 描述那天发生的事(时间、地点、发生了什么); 2. 说明她的帮助对你意味着什么; 3. 表达你的感谢,并表示以后也会帮助她。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为感谢信,属于应用文中的书信类。初一学生写感谢信的核心是:事情清楚、感情真诚、语言简单。学生需要写清一件具体的互相帮助的小事,表达真心的感谢。话题“Helping each other”贴近校园生活,每个学生都有类似经历,容易写出真情实感。 二、写作要点分析 第一段描述事情经过:要写清楚时间(上周三)、地点(学校门口)、发生了什么(下雨了,我没带伞,王梅借伞给我)。可以加上一点小细节:“雨下得很大”“其他同学都走了,只有王梅留下来”。描述要简洁清晰,让读者一看就明白。 第二段说明帮助的意义:要写出王梅的帮助对“我”意味着什么。例如:“如果没有你的伞,我会淋成落汤鸡”“你的帮助让我觉得很温暖”“你宁愿自己等妈妈也不让我淋雨,这让我很感动”。这一段是感谢信的核心,要让对方知道“你的帮助真的很重要”。 第三段表达感谢和回报的决心:先用一句话直接感谢,然后表明自己也会帮助别人或帮助她。例如:“谢谢你,你真是我的好朋友”“以后你有困难的时候,我一定也会帮助你”“我会像你帮助我一样去帮助其他同学”。这样就把“互相帮助”的主题点出来了。 三、语言与格式提醒 感谢信格式:称呼(Dear Wang Mei,)、正文、结束语(Yours sincerely, / Love,)、签名。语气要真诚、温暖。可以用“I will never forget that day”开头,增强感染力。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to say thank you for helping me. · I will never forget what you did for me. · Last Wednesday, it rained heavily after school. · I forgot to bring my umbrella, so I had to wait. · You lent me your umbrella and waited for your mom. · Your help really meant a lot to me. · Without you, I would have been all wet. · Thank you for being such a good friend. · From now on, I will also help you whenever you need it. · rainy day, lend an umbrella, get wet, feel warm, help each other 高分范文 Dear Wang Mei, I am writing to say thank you for helping me last Wednesday. I will never forget that day. After school, it rained heavily. I forgot to bring my umbrella, so I had to stand at the school gate, watching others go home. Then you came to me. You lent me your umbrella and said, “Take it. My mom is coming to pick me up.” Because of you, I went home dry and warm. But you waited in the rain for your mom. Your help really meant a lot to me. I felt so warm in my heart. Thank you for being such a good friend. From now on, when you need help, I will be there for you too. Let’s always help each other. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 题目二:倡议书 题目: 假设你是学校学生会成员,你发现有些同学在别人遇到困难时不帮忙,甚至嘲笑他们。请你以学生会的名义写一份英文倡议书,呼吁同学们互相帮助。内容包括: 1. 指出校园里需要帮助的情况(至少2种,如同学受伤、学习困难、忘记带文具等); 2. 说明互相帮助的好处(至少2点); 3. 提出具体的行动建议(至少2条),呼吁大家一起行动。 教师思路精讲 一、题目整体分析 本题为倡议书,属于应用文中的公开号召类文体。初一学生写倡议书的核心是:问题要具体、好处要明白、建议要简单。学生需要用简单的英语说清楚“为什么要互相帮助”和“怎么互相帮助”。语气要积极、温暖,不要批评太重。 二、写作要点分析 第一段指出需要帮助的情况:要写出至少两种校园里常见的情况。例如:“有的同学摔倒了,没人去扶”“有人忘记带笔或尺子,不敢借”“有同学题目不会做,被笑话了”。这些情况学生都见过或经历过,容易引起共鸣。不要写得太严重,用平实的语言描述就行。 第二段说明互相帮助的好处:要写出至少两点好处,简单明了。例如:“帮助别人的人会交到更多朋友”“当你需要帮助时,别人也会帮你”“班级会变得更温暖、更像一个家”。这些道理初一学生都能理解,要用简单的话说出来。 第三段提出建议并呼吁:写出至少两条具体的行动建议。例如:“看到同学拿不动书,帮他拿一下”“同学不会做题,耐心教他”“别人忘记带东西,主动借给他”。建议要小、要简单,让每个学生都觉得“我也能做到”。最后用一句温暖有力的话呼吁大家行动。 三、语言与格式提醒 倡议书开头用“Dear schoolmates,”,结尾用“Let’s help each other from today!”等号召句。多用“If you see..., please...”这样的简单祈使句。语气要温和积极,不要批评“有些同学不帮忙”,而是鼓励“我们可以这样做”。 重要句型与词组 · I am writing to call on everyone to help each other. · In our school, sometimes a classmate falls down but nobody helps. · Some students may need help with their study or forget to bring things. · Helping others is not difficult. A small act can make a big difference. · When you help someone, you make a new friend. · If you help others today, they will help you tomorrow. · Here is what you can do. · Let’s make our school a warm and friendly place. · fall down, lend a pen, teach a problem, carry books, be kind 高分范文 Dear schoolmates, I am writing to call on everyone to help each other. In our school, sometimes a classmate falls down on the playground, but nobody stops to help. Some students forget to bring a pen or a ruler, but they are too shy to ask. Others do not understand a math problem, but no one offers to teach them. This should not happen. Helping others is not difficult. A small act can make a big difference. When you help someone, you make a new friend. Also, if you help others today, they will help you tomorrow. A school where everyone helps each other is like a big, warm family. Here is what you can do. If you see a classmate carrying heavy books, help him. If someone forgets a pen, lend yours. If a friend has a problem and feels sad, listen to him. Let’s make our school a warm and friendly place. Start today — help one person, and you will see the smile on his face. Students’ Union 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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