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Yoyo 绵阳三模 读后续写 The school bus came to a stop, and Bella stood up to get off. “Your mom’s not here yet, Bella,” the driver said. “Do you want to wait for her?” “I know the way,” she said. “Mom says I am old enough to walk by myself now.” Bella went along the sidewalk toward home at her own pace. She liked her new neighborhood. Two doors away from Bella’s house, a woman put a baby into a stroller (婴儿车). Then she wheeled him to the sidewalk. “Hello, Bella,” she said, smiling. “I met you and your mom last week when you moved in. I’m Mrs. Rodan.” Bella looked down at the baby, who was chewing on a toy dinosaur. “What’s his name?” she asked. “This is Finn,” said Mrs. Rodan. In a few weeks, Bella got familiar with almost all her neighbors. But her favorite neighbors were the Rodans. She met them outside every day. Mrs. Rodan liked to talk. Finn liked playing a game named Peekaboo. When Bella peeked and shouted “Boo,” Finn always laughed so hard. Bella learned that Mr. Rodan worked far away and wouldn’t be home until spring. But one day, when Bella reached the Rodans’ house, they weren’t outside. Maybe they went somewhere, she thought. But they weren’t outside the next day either. Or the day after that. Realizing something was wrong, she hurried home and asked her mom to check on them. “They probably changed their routine,” Mom said. “Or maybe they’ve been too busy to walk. I’m sure they’re fine.” “But they’re my friends,” Bella insisted. “Please?” “You can go and have a look if they’re not outside tomorrow,” Mom replied without looking up from her paperwork. The next day, the Rodans still didn’t appear, so Bella walked to their house and rang the bell. Mrs. Rodan opened the door. She was holding the red-cheeked Finn, who was crying so hard. The neighbor had circles under her eyes and a coffee stain (污渍) on her shirt. There was a bandage wrapped around her ankle and the house behind her looked unusually messy. Read the text 读原文 5 W+ 1 H how Theme 续写类型 主角+配角 who 地点 where 时间 when 故事情节 what 为什么要做 why Bella Mrs Rodan & Finn neighbors in neighborhood Mrs Rodan’ s house sth bad happened → helped Mrs Rodan 审题 1. 体裁： 记叙文 2. 人称： 第三人称 3. 时态： 一般过去时 4. 主题： 人与社会--助人 ①个人的善举行动可以给别人带来变化。 ②善良、助人让世界变得更好。 读Para 1+2→定情节发展 02 续写P1：“I have to do something,” Bella thought to herself. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写P2：Soon, word about Mrs. Rodan spread quickly through the neighborhood. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 读para 1+2→Read for coflicts What did Bella do? What’s her inner feeling? 协调原则 呼应原则 What’s the word? What did the neighbord do? What’s the ending Bella 的助人行为已完成 列大纲 03 Design the plots Para 1 “I have to do something,” Bella thought to herself. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 固定 续写首句 固定 承接下一段的首句 Para 2 Soon, word about Mrs. Rodan spread quickly through the neighborhood. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 固定 续写首句 固定 升华主旨 交代为何未能外出的原因 具体的动作？如何帮？ 固定 结局 一个小小的善举可以给别人的生活带来巨大的改变。 送花，拜访，送水果，送鸡蛋，帮忙照顾 etc. Bella 的观察或结合写Bella的情绪 Mrs Rodan的反应 邻居们的反应 善举可以产生连锁反应，激起善意的浪花。 Mrs Rodan的情绪？感激？ Bella如何帮助 Mrs Rodan 又外出了？脚踝好了？ Try to write 1. 看到芬恩通红的脸颊和罗丹太太疲惫双眼下的黑眼圈，一股担忧涌上贝拉的心头。 Seeing Finn’s red cheeks and Mrs. Rodan’s dark circles under her tired eyes, a feeling of worry washed over her. 2. 她走进去，环顾了一下凌乱的屋子，轻声问道：“我能帮忙吗？” She stepped inside, looked around the messy house and gently asked, “Can I help you?” 3. 罗丹太太点了点头，眼里噙满了泪水。 Mrs Rodan nodded with tears filling her eyes. 4. 贝拉毫不犹豫地跑回家，端来热汤递给罗丹太太。然后她径直在地板上挨着芬恩坐下。 Without hesitation, Bella rushed home to get warm soup to Mrs Rodan, then sat beside Finn and played with him. 5. 看到这一幕，罗丹太太终于深深地舒了一口气，泪水滑落脸颊——而这次，是因为如释重负。 Watching this scene, Mrs Rodan finally let out a deep breath, with tears streming down her cheeks — because of relief. Try to write 6. 邻居们一个接一个地来了。 Neighbors came one by one. 7. 有的帮忙打扫屋子，有的带着芬恩去散步。 Someone helped clean the house while others took Finn for a walk. 8. 在这么多人的帮助下，罗丹太太的脚踝逐渐痊愈，芬恩的笑容也回来了。 With the help of so many people,her ankle healed steadily, and Finn’s smiles returned. 9. 罗丹太太用低沉但充满感动的声音说：“我真不知道该怎么感谢你们大家。” Mrs Rodan said in a low but moved voice, “I don’t know how to thank you all.” 10. 看着忙碌又充满关爱的邻居们，贝拉渐渐意识到，...... Looking at the busy and caring neighbors, Bella came to realise that 助人为乐 1.从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说：“玫瑰予人，手留余香。” From then on,I made up my mind to pass on “love”to others.Just as a saying goes，“Roses given,fragrance in hand.” 2.有时，一个小小的善行会有足够的力量产生巨大的影响。 Sometimes,a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference. 3. 一个小小的善举可以给别人的生活带来巨大的改变。 A small act of kindness can make a huge difference in someone's life. 4.善举可以产生连锁反应，激起善意的浪花。 Small act of kindness can have a ripple effect,creating a wave of positivity. 5. 通过帮助他人，我们可以传播爱和温暖，让世界变得更美好。 Through helping others,we can spread love and warmth,making the world a better place. 示范范文 →积累拓展 04 Appreciate the essay “I have to do something,” Bella thought to herself. She noticed Finn’s endless crying and the dark circles under Mrs. Rodan’s tired eyes. A bandaged ankle explained why they had been missing from the sidewalk for days. Without hesitation, Bella rushed home to get a bowl of warm soup and handed it to Mrs. Rodan. She then sat right down on the floor next to Finn, making funny faces and playing with him. Watching this, Mrs. Rodan finally let out a deep breath, eyes filled with tears — this time, from relief. Soon, word about Mrs. Rodan spread quickly through the neighborhood. Neighbors began stopping by one after another, each offering whatever they could. Some brought home-cooked meals. Others offered to help with chores or simply stayed to keep her company. Mrs. Rodan, who had been struggling alone for days, finally felt the weight on her shoulders lift. With so many caring hands, her ankle healed steadily, and Finn’s smiles returned. Looking back, Mrs. Rodan often said she had never felt so grateful to have Bella and everyone around. $