内容正文:
Unit 3 What makes a great team?
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教材分析
Lead in
What’s the video about?
Teamwork.
Lead in
What role is it in the team?
The team leader.
Writing Task
一个优秀的团队离不开一位出色的领导者。假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在进行社团负责人的换届选拔活动,你作为上一届的负责人被邀请经验分享。请你以“How to be a good team leader?”为题,写一篇英语短文,分享你对如何成为团队领导者的看法并提出建议。
提示:1. What are the important qualities of a team leader?
2. What should you do to be a good team leader?
要点
1. 领导者需要具备的品质
2. 一个出色的领导者需要做什么
人称
第一人称
时态
一般现在时
Beginning
Ending
Writing structure
Body
领导者的重要性
如何成为一名优秀的领导者
对领导者的看法
归纳总结文章的结果和语言
1. 众所周知,领导者在团队中扮演着重要的角色。(play an important role in)
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2. 然而,要成为一名优秀的团队领导者并非易事。(it’s adj. to do sth.)
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3. 我想分享关于如何成为一名优秀团队领导者的建议。(I’d like to do sth)
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Beginning
领导者的重要性
As we all know, a team leader plays an important role in a team.
However, it’s not easy to be a good team leader.
I’d like to share my advice on how to be a good team leader.
As we all know, a team leader plays an important role in a team. However, it’s not easy to be a good team leader. I’d like to share my advice on how to be a good team leader.
第一段:开篇点题,引出建议
写作指导1
写作模板
领导者的重要性
Tip1:学会使用过渡句,引出正文,使文章更顺畅
过渡句
Here is some advice for you.
I want to tell you something about...
There are some ways to...
I’d like to share my advice on......
Body
如何成为一名优秀的领导者
What are the important qualities of a team leader?
A team leader should be...
helpful
calm
friendly
kind
responsible
patient
brave
What should you do to be a good team leader?
A team leader should ...
take responsibility
work with team members
listen to team members’ opinions
4. 首先,团队领导者应当有责任心。(first of all)
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5. 有时,团队合作很难实现。(be hard to do sth.)
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6. 在意见不合的时,领导者应该承担责任。(take responsibility;in times of)
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Body
如何成为一名优秀的领导者
First of all, a team leader should be responsible.
Sometimes, teamwork is hard to achieve.
The leader should take responsibility in times of disagreement.
responsible
7. 此外,团队领导应当有耐心且友好。(in addition)
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8. 与团队成员合作并发现他们的长处和短处是个好主意。
(it’s a good idea to do sth.;work with;find out)
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Body
如何成为一名优秀的领导者
patient and friendly
In addition, a team leader should be patient and friendly.
It’s a good idea to work with team members and find out their strengths and weaknesses.
Body
如何成为一名优秀的领导者
9. 最后,别忘了要做一个好的倾听者。(don’t forget to do sth.)
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10. 每个团队成员都有各自不同的想法。
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11. 所以,倾听每个人的建议是十分重要的。(it’s adj. to do sth.)
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Finally, don’t forget to be a good listener.
to be a good listener
Every team member has different ideas.
It’s (really) important to listen to everyone’s opinions.
First of all, a team leader should be responsible. Sometimes, teamwork is hard to achieve. The leader should take responsibility in times of disagreement. In addition, a team leader should be patient and friendly. It’s a good idea to work with the team members and find out their strengths and weaknesses. Finally, don’t forget to be a good listener. Every team member has different ideas. So it’s really important to listen to everyone’s opinions.
写作指导2
第二段:提建议(如何成为一名优秀的领导者)
Tip2:学会使用连接词,使文章更有逻辑性
Tip3:学会使用不同的句型,使文章更生动
Tip4:表达观点或建议时,补充原因或优点等,使文章更具体
Ending
12. 总之,一位优秀的团队领导者应当与团队成员共同协作,而不是下达指令。(in short; instead of; give orders)
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13. 毕竟,团队合作能使梦想成真。(after all)
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对领导者的看法
In short, a good team member should work together with the team instead of giving orders.
After all, teamwork makes the dream work.
In short, a good team leader should work together with the team instead of giving orders. After all, teamwork makes the dream work.
写作指导3
第三段:总结
写作模板
Tip5:学会引用习语
How to be a good team leader
As we all know, a team leader plays an important role in a team. However, it’s not easy to be a good team leader. I’d like to share my advice on how to be a good team leader.
First of all, a team leader should be responsible. Sometimes, teamwork is hard to achieve. The leader should take responsibility in times of disagreement. In addition, a team leader should be patient and friendly. It’s a good idea to work with the team members and find out their strengths and weaknesses. Finally, don’t forget to be a good listener. Every team member has different ideas. So it’s really important to listen to everyone’s opinions.
In short, a good team leader should work together with the team instead of giving orders. After all, teamwork makes the dream work.
Example
Beginning
Ending
Body
As we all know, a team leader plays an important role in a team. However, it’s not easy to be a good team leader. I’d like to share my advice on how to be a good team leader.
First of all, a team leader should...(品质1). +具体做法1
In addition, it’s a good idea to...(品质2).+具体做法2
Finally, don’t forget to...(品质2). +具体做法3
In short, a good team leader should work together with the team instead of giving orders. After all, teamwork makes the dream work.
写作模板
领导者的重要性
如何成为一名优秀的领导者
对领导者的看法
归纳总结文章的结果和语言
Practice
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