Unit 4 作文 pass on help 课件 2025-2026学年外研版八年级英语下册

Unit 4 Helping out — writing 教材分析 Lead in What’s the video about? Helping others. The circle of goodwill Writing Task 每一份善意都值得被传递，每一份帮助都能温暖你我。你送出的善意，终会以某种方式回到你的身边或者照亮另一个人的世界。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Passing on help”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格内容，请用英语写一篇短文，分享一次传递帮助的经历，并谈谈你的感受。 要点 被帮助经历 时间/地点/人物/经过 5W1H 帮助别人的经历 时间/地点/人物/经过 5W1H 感悟 人称 第一人称 时态 一般过去时 Beginning Ending Writing structure Body The important of help The experience of being helped 5W1H The experience of helping others 5W1H Lessons 归纳总结文章的结果和语言 1. 众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。(动名词doing作主语) —————————————————————————— 2. 哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。(make a difference) —————————————————————————— 3. 我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。(I’d like to do sth; pass on) —————————————————————————— Beginning 互相帮助的重要性 As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience of passing on help. As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience of passing on help. 第一段：开篇点题，引出经历 写作指导1 写作模板 Tip1：学会使用过渡句，引出正文 Body 记叙文六要素： when(时间) where(地点) who(人物) what(起因，经过，结果) 1. When did it happen? 2. Where did it happen? 3. What did he/you do？ The experience of being helped 5W1H The experience of helping others 5W1H Body When last... Where at the school gate Who a kind woman and I What It rained heavily. How did you feel at first？ The experience of being helped 5W1H What did she do？ What did you feel at last？ 4. 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。(when引导时间状语从句) ————————————————————————————————— 5. 然而，我没有带伞。 ————————————————————————————————— 6. 我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。(have to do sth.) ————————————————————————————————— Body The experience of being helped 5W1H Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. 7. 突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。 (come up to sb.; hand sb. sth.) ————————————————————————————————— 8. 我被她的善良深深打动了。(被动语态) ————————————————————————————————— 9. 于是我下定决心要向她学习。(make one’s mind to do sth.) ————————————————————————————————— Body The experience of being helped 5W1H Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her. Tip2：用5W1H描述一个故事/经历 Body When the next morning Where in the park Who a little boy and I What The boy was crying. What happened to the little boy? The experience of being helped 5W1H What did you do？ What did you feel ？ 10. 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。(the next morning) ————————————————————————————————— 11. 然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。(see sb. doing sth.) ————————————————————————————————— 12. 他告诉我他迷路了。(be lost) ————————————————————————————————— 13. 所以我帮他找到了他的父母。(help sb. do sth.) ————————————————————————————————— 14. 他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。 ————————————————————————————————— Body The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. They thanked me, and I felt really happy. The experience of helping others 5W1H So I helped him find his parents. He told me he was lost. 写作指导2 第二段：被帮助和帮助别人的经历 Tip1：用5W1H描述一个故事/经历 Tip2：按时间顺序描述事情的经过 Tip3：正确使用过渡句，衔接两个故事。 Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her. The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy. Ending 15. 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。(such a/an +adj.+n.单) —————————————————————————— 16. 爱引发更多的爱。(lead to) —————————————————————————— 17. 让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。(lend a hand to sb.) —————————————————————————— 感悟 I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place. I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place. 写作指导3 第三段：感悟 写作模板 Passing on help As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience. Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her. The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy. I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place. Example Practice $