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Unit 7 Happy Birthday! 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“生日快乐”,与此相关的写作一般是介绍自己或他人的生日,用英语规范表达日期(月份、序数词),描述不同的生日庆祝方式,运用购物相关的英语表达(询问价格、挑选物品),讲述生日当天的活动,同时学会理解生日的意义——感恩陪伴、珍惜成长,表达对家人和朋友的祝福。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
生日是生命中特殊的日子,不同的人有不同的庆祝方式,它承载着陪伴与成长的美好意义。你的澳大利亚网友Judy在论坛上分享了她的生日庆祝方式,她很想知道你是如何庆祝自己生日的,包括你的生日日期、准备的物品以及当天的活动。请你写一篇短文(或论坛回复),向她介绍你的生日情况。
要求:1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于100词,语言简洁,符合初一难度;
3. 正确使用本单元所学的日期表达、购物用语及一般现在时,语句通顺。
审题:
1. 要点:介绍自己的生日日期、生日庆祝方式、生日购物相关场景、当天的活动及感受
2. 人称:以第一人称(我)为主
3. 时态:一般现在时(描述固定的生日习惯、日常购物表达)
4. 文体:短文(或论坛回复,可灵活选择)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:Birthday is a special day for everyone. It’s a day to celebrate growth and feel the love from family and friends. I’d like to tell you about how I celebrate my birthday.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 生日日期:Firstly, my birthday is on... (日期,如13th June / June 13th). I’m... years old now, and I look forward to my birthday every year.
2. 生日准备与购物:Secondly, before my birthday, my parents and I go to the shop to buy things for the party. We ask the shop assistant, “How much is the birthday cake?” and “How many candles do we need?” We usually buy a delicious cake, some candles and my favourite juice.
3. 生日庆祝活动:Thirdly, on my birthday, I usually have a small party with my family and friends. My mother cooks birthday noodles for me—it’s a symbol of long life. Everyone sings the “Happy Birthday” song, I make a wish and blow out the candles. Then we enjoy the cake and chat together. Sometimes we take photos to remember the happy moment.
三、表达感受:
I feel very happy on my birthday. It’s not just about gifts and cakes, but about the love and care from my family and friends. Every birthday is a gift of life, and I will cherish every moment of growth.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. Every birthday is a gift of life. I love my birthday because it’s full of love and happiness.
2. When is your birthday? Let me tell you about my birthday and how I celebrate it.
3. Different people have different ways to celebrate birthdays. My birthday celebration is simple but warm.
4. I think your birthday celebration is great! Now I want to share my birthday with you.
中间句
1. My birthday is on 22nd August. It’s a special day for me every year.
2. Before my birthday, we go shopping for the party. I ask the shop assistant, “How much is the yogurt?” It’s five yuan a bottle.
3. On my birthday, my family and I eat birthday noodles together. Long noodles stand for long life in China.
4. My friends come to my party, and we sing the “Happy Birthday” song together. Then I make a wish and blow out the candles.
5. How many candles do we need? We need 14 candles because I’m 14 years old this year.
6. My father always takes a photo of our family on my birthday. It helps us remember the happy times.
7. Firstly, my birthday is on...; Secondly, we buy birthday things in the shop; Thirdly, I have a warm party with my family and friends.
结尾句
1. I love my birthday very much. It makes me feel loved and lucky to have my family and friends around.
2. Every birthday is a new start. I will grow up happily and cherish the love from the people around me.
3. Birthday is not just about having fun, but about remembering the love and care we get from others.
4. I hope everyone can enjoy their birthdays and feel the beauty of growth.
名言警句(贴合作日主题,简单易懂)
1. Every birthday is a gift of life. 每一个生日都是生命的礼物。
2. Grow happily and cherish every moment. 快乐成长,珍惜每一刻。
3. Love is the best birthday gift. 爱是最好的生日礼物。
三、范文欣赏
By: Li Ming on 09/07 6:12 PM
I think it’s a good idea to plant a tree on your birthday. My birthday is on 13th June. I usually celebrate it with my family and friends to make it meaningful. I do this because I want to feel the love from them and remember the happy moments.
Before my birthday, my parents and I go to the shop to buy things for the party. On my birthday morning, my mother cooks birthday noodles for me—long noodles are a symbol of long life. In the afternoon, my friends come to my home. We sing the “Happy Birthday” song together, I make a wish and blow out the candles. Then we enjoy the cake, oranges and yogurt. My father takes a photo of our family every year to remember this special day.
But this year, I want to plant a small tree for my 14th birthday. I’d like to watch it grow with me, just like how my family and friends watch me grow. Every birthday is a gift of life, and I will cherish every moment of growth.
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