内容正文:
Starter Unit 1 Hello! 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“问候与初次见面”,与此相关的写作一般是描述不同场景下的问候方式、初次见面时的自我介绍与对话,帮助我们学会礼貌、得体地与他人开启交流,掌握基础的日常交际用语。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
新学期开始了,班里来了一位新同学Emma,她来自英国,还不太熟悉中文的问候方式和初次见面的交流礼仪。作为她的同班同学,你想主动和她打招呼、做自我介绍,帮助她快速融入班级。请你写一段短文,记录你们初次见面的交流过程,包含问候、自我介绍、询问姓名和拼写姓名等内容。
要求:1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词,语言简洁、礼貌,符合初一入门难度;
3. 正确使用本单元所学的问候语和交际用语。
审题:
1. 要点:用正确的问候语打招呼、做自我介绍、询问对方姓名、请对方拼写姓名、表达友好(帮助对方融入)
2. 人称:以第一人称(我)和第二人称(Emma)为主
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 文体:短文(日常交际场景)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:It’s the first day of the new term. A new classmate comes to our class. I want to greet her and make friends with her.
二、具体介绍交流过程:
1. 问候对方:Firstly, I go to her and greet her politely. I say “Good morning” to her, and she greets me back.
2. 自我介绍:Secondly, I introduce myself to her, telling her my name and how to spell it.
3. 询问与回应:Thirdly, I ask her name and ask her to spell it. Then we talk a little about our school life and I tell her I will help her.
中间句
1. I greet her with “Good morning!” and she says “Good morning!” to me too.
2. I introduce myself: “My name is Li Ming. How do you spell your name?”
3. She tells me her name is Emma, and she spells it: E-M-M-A, Emma.
4. I ask her “How are you?” and she answers “I’m fine, thank you. And you?”
5. I say “I’m great, thanks. Welcome to our class. I will help you.”
6. May I have your name? I want to make friends with you.
7. Firstly, I greet the new classmate politely; Secondly, I introduce myself to her; Thirdly, I ask her name and spell it with her.
结尾句
1. It’s easy and happy to greet others politely and make new friends.
2. I hope we can be good friends and help each other at school.
3. Greeting others with a smile and kindness can make our school life happier.
4. I’m glad to make a new friend, and I will help her get used to our class quickly.
常用交际用语(替换名言警句,贴合入门难度)
1. Good morning / Hello / Hi. 早上好/你好。
2. Nice to meet you. / Nice to meet you too. 很高兴认识你。/ 我也很高兴认识你。
3. May I have your name? 能告诉我你的名字吗?
4. How do you spell your name? 你的名字怎么拼写?
5. How are you? I’m fine, thank you. And you? 你好吗?我很好,谢谢。你呢?
三、范文欣赏
It’s the first day of the new term. A new classmate comes to our class. She looks a little shy, so I want to greet her and make friends with her.
Firstly, I go to her and greet her politely. I say “Good morning!” to her. She smiles and says “Good morning!” to me too. Secondly, I introduce myself to her: “My name is Li Ming. How do you spell your name?” Thirdly, she tells me her name is Emma. I ask her to spell it, and she says “E-M-M-A, Emma. My family name is Miller, M-I-L-L-E-R, Miller.” I say “Nice to meet you, Emma.” She answers “Nice to meet you too, Li Ming.” Then I ask her “How are you?” She says “I’m fine, thank you. And you?” I reply “I’m great, thanks. Welcome to our class. I will help you get used to our school life.”
Greeting others politely and making friends is happy. I hope Emma can feel warm and融入 our class soon. I’m glad to have a new good friend.
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