内容正文:
Starter Unit 3 Welcome! 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是“农场和院子里的动植物”,与此相关的写作一般是描述农场或院子里的动物、植物,用数字说明它们的数量,用颜色描述它们的样子,同时学会用简单的问答句式介绍这些事物,掌握基础的动植物、数字、颜色词汇。
写作时,可以先引出农场或院子的整体情况,然后具体介绍里面的动植物,说明它们的数量、颜色和样子,再用简单的问答或描述展现事物特点,最后表达对农场/院子的喜爱之情。
2、 经典例题
一阶段审题立意
农场里有各种各样的动植物,充满了乐趣。老师让大家写一篇短文,介绍自己想象中的农场,说说农场里有哪些动物和植物,它们的数量、颜色是什么样的,用简单的语言描述农场的样子。
要求:1. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词,语言简洁,符合初一入门难度;
3. 正确使用本单元所学的动植物、数字、颜色词汇和简单问答句式。
审题:
1. 要点:介绍农场里的动植物、它们的数量和颜色,描述农场的整体样子
2. 人称:以第一人称(我)为主
3. 时态:一般现在时
4. 文体:短文(介绍性场景)
二阶段谋篇布局
一、开篇点题:This is my farm. It is big and beautiful. There are many animals and plants on my farm. Now I’d like to talk about them.
二、具体介绍相关内容:
1. 动物介绍:Firstly, there are many kinds of animals on my farm. I have some ducks, chickens, cows and rabbits. I have fifteen ducks and twelve chickens. The cows are black and white, and the rabbits are white.
2. 植物介绍:Secondly, there are many plants on my farm, too. There are two apple trees, some tomato plants and beautiful flowers. The flowers are red and pink.
3. 整体描述:Thirdly, the grass on my farm is green. There is a small house on the farm. I like to play with the animals and look at the plants after school.
三、表达感受:
My farm is very fun. I love my farm very much. I hope you can come to visit my farm one day.
三阶段积句成篇
开头句
1. This is my farm. It is big and full of fun.
2. I have a beautiful farm. There are many animals and plants on it.
3. Look at this farm! It is my dream farm with many lovely animals and nice plants.
4. There are many interesting things in the yard/farm, and I want to introduce them to you.
中间句
1. What’s that? It’s a dog. It is brown and lovely.
2. What are these? They’re tomato plants. They are green.
3. How many ducks do you see? I see fourteen ducks. They are yellow.
4. There are seven cows on my farm. They are black and white.
5. I have eight rabbits. They are white and small.
6. There are two apple trees and some flowers in the yard. The flowers are pink.
7. Firstly, there are many animals on my farm; Secondly, there are some nice plants; Thirdly, the farm is very beautiful and fun.
结尾句
1. My farm is very interesting. I love playing on my farm.
2. This is my lovely farm. I hope you can visit it and have fun.
3. The yard/farm is full of happiness. I like it very much.
4. There are so many lovely animals and nice plants here. It’s a great place to play.
常用基础词汇(贴合单元入门难度)
1. 动物类:cat, dog, rabbit, duck, chicken, cow, sheep, horse, pig
2. 植物类:apple tree, tomato plant, flower, carrot plant, grass
3. 数字类:one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, twenty
4. 颜色类:red, pink, green, yellow, black, white, brown
5. 常用句型:What’s this/that? It’s...; What are these/those? They’re...; How many... do you see? I see...; There are... on the farm/yard.
三、范文欣赏
This is my farm. It is big and beautiful. There are many animals and plants on my farm. Now I’d like to talk about them.
Firstly, there are many kinds of animals on my farm. I have fifteen ducks, twelve chickens, seven cows and eight rabbits. The ducks are yellow, the cows are black and white, and the rabbits are white. They are all very lovely. Secondly, there are many plants on my farm, too. There are two apple trees, some tomato plants and beautiful flowers. The apple trees are tall, the tomato plants are green, and the flowers are red and pink. Thirdly, the grass on my farm is green, and there is a small brown house on it. I like to play with the animals and water the plants after school.
My farm is very fun. It is my favorite place. I love my farm very much. I hope you can come to visit my farm one day and have fun with me.
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