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Unit 4 Amazing plants and animals 作文素材
一、单元话题说明
本单元的话题是 “相同与不同”,核心围绕植物、动物的特征对比,以及 “人与自然(植物、动物)的联系” 展开。与此相关的写作一般是描述不同植物、动物之间的异同,介绍某一种植物或动物的独特特点,也可表达对 “植物、动物与人类关系” 的看法。
写作时,可以先引出话题(介绍某类植物 / 动物、对比不同植物 / 动物),然后通过具体特征(外形、习性、用途等)描述其相同点与不同点,最后表达对植物 / 动物的喜爱、保护意识或对人与自然关系的理解。
二、经典例题
一阶段 审题立意
我们生活的世界里,有各种各样神奇的植物和动物,它们有着不同的外形、习性和用途,也与我们的生活息息相关。请以 “An Amazing Plant/Animal” 为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍一种你认为神奇的植物或动物,描述它的特点,说明它的用途或与人类的联系,并谈谈你对它的看法。
要求:1. 包含 “外形 / 习性、用途 / 特点、你的看法” 三个要点,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于 100 词,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 正确使用形容词最高级表达(本单元重点)。
二阶段 谋篇布局
开篇点题:I think the most amazing plant/animal in the world is.../ There are many amazing plants and animals in the world, and my favorite is...
具体描述(核心部分):
外形 / 习性:It is the...(最高级)plant/animal I have ever seen. It has.../ It can.../ It grows.../ It lives...
用途 / 特点:It is very useful because.../ One of its most amazing features is.../ It plays an important role in...
表达看法:In my opinion, it is worth protecting because.../ I love it because it.../ We should protect it to keep our ecosystem balanced.
三阶段 积句成篇
开头句(引出话题)
There are many amazing plants and animals on our planet, and I think the most amazing one is bamboo.
I want to introduce an amazing animal to you—it is the blue whale, the largest animal in the world.
Among all the plants, bamboo is my favorite because it is not only beautiful but also very useful.
Have you ever seen a blue whale? It is the heaviest and largest animal on earth, and it is really amazing.
Plants and animals are important to us, and today I’d like to talk about one of the most interesting plants—bamboo.
中间句(描述特征、用途,用最高级)
Bamboo is one of the fastest-growing plants in the world. Some bamboo can grow almost one metre in one day.
The blue whale is the largest and heaviest animal on earth. It can weigh as much as 200 tons.
Bamboo is very useful. People can use it to build houses, make tools and even eat its shoots.
Bees are one of the most important animals because they help plants grow by carrying pollen.
The ginkgo tree is one of the oldest living trees on earth. It first appeared over 200 million years ago.
Unlike other plants, bamboo is a symbol of goodness in Chinese culture and often appears in Chinese paintings.
The cheetah is the fastest land animal. It can run much faster than other land animals.
Bamboo is not only beautiful but also strong. It is one of the most popular plants in China.
结尾句(表达看法、保护意识)
In my opinion, bamboo is the most useful plant in the world. We should protect it and make good use of it.
Blue whales play an important role in the ocean ecosystem, so we must try our best to protect them.
Plants and animals are our good friends. We can’t live without them, so we should take good care of them.
I love this amazing plant/animal because it brings joy and help to us. It is worth our protection.
Every plant and animal is important to our planet. We should respect and protect them to keep our world beautiful.
名言警句
Plants and animals are our friends; we can’t live without them. 植物和动物是我们的朋友,我们离不开它们。
Protecting plants and animals is protecting ourselves. 保护植物和动物就是保护我们自己。
The most amazing thing in nature is the diversity of plants and animals. 自然界最神奇的事情就是植物和动物的多样性。
三、范文欣赏
An Amazing Plant
There are many amazing plants in the world, and my favorite is bamboo. It is one of the most popular and useful plants in China.
Bamboo is the fastest-growing plant I have ever known. Some bamboo can grow almost one metre in one day. It has long and thin stems, and its leaves are green and beautiful. In Chinese culture, bamboo is a symbol of goodness, so it often appears in Chinese paintings. Besides being beautiful, bamboo is also very useful. People can use it to build houses, make tools and instruments. We can even eat its shoots, which are very delicious.
In my opinion, bamboo is the most amazing plant in the world. It is not only beautiful but also helpful to us. Plants like bamboo make our world more colorful, so we should protect them and love nature.
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