2026届高三英语二轮复习书信类应用文专练：现象描述+建议高分技巧讲义

书信类应用文专练：现象描述+建议高分技巧 假定你是李华，发现常有同学在教室里吃零食，影响了学习环境。请给校英文报“Student Voice”栏目写信反映，内容包括：1.描述具体情况；2.提出建议。 第一步：审题 本题属于应用文中的书信体，具体为“现象描述+建议”类。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。重点在于客观描述不良现象，并给出合理化建议。 第二步：确定核心词汇 common phenomenon 普遍现象 learning atmosphere 学习氛围 annoying noises 恼人的噪音 snack-free zone 无零食区 take into account 考虑 第三步：要用到的高级句型 1.现在分词作伴随状语：ignoring the surrounding learning environment 2.not only…but also… 结构：不仅产生噪音，还留下垃圾 3.which引导的非限制性定语从句：which seriously affects the classroom atmosphere 4.only + 状语 + 部分倒装：Only by paying attention to small details can we… 第四步：三段式框架 第一段：描述现象。开门见山，指出教室吃零食这一行为。 第二段：指出危害并提出建议。说明该行为对学习环境的负面影响，并给出具体解决办法。 第三段：总结展望。希望建议被采纳，呼吁共建美好校园。 范文 ： I am writing to reflect a common phenomenon in our school: some students often eat snacks in the classroom, ignoring the surrounding learning environment. This behavior not only produces annoying noises but also leaves behind trash, which seriously affects the classroom atmosphere. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we should define the classroom as a "snack-free zone” and enjoy snacks only in the canteen. I hope my suggestions will be taken into account. Only by paying attention to small details can we create a better campus together. 现象+建议类万能框架 第一段：现象引入 I am writing to reflect a common phenomenon in our school… 第二段：危害与建议 This behavior not only… but also… which… Therefore, I suggest that… 第三段：总结与展望 I hope my suggestions will be taken into account. Only by… can we… 课堂练习： 题目一： 假定你是李华，发现近期有部分同学在晚自习或午休自习课上偷偷使用手机玩游戏、刷视频，严重影响了自己的学习效率和周围同学。请给校英文报“Student Voice”栏目写信反映此现象，并提出你的建议。 第一步：审题 本题重点在于指出在应该安静学习的场合使用电子产品的负面影响，并给出管理或自律层面的建议。 第二步：核心词汇 self-study classes 自习课 be addicted to 沉迷于 distract one's attention 分散注意力 violate school rules 违反校规 concentrate on 专注于 第三步：高级句型 1）现在分词作伴随状语： ignoring the people around them. 2）非限制性定语从句： which severely affects their academic performance. 3）only + 状语 + 部分倒装：Only by getting rid of distractions can we achieve academic success. 第四步：三段式框架 Para 1: 引出现象（自习课玩手机普遍） Para 2: 阐述危害 + 提出建议 Para 3: 总结呼吁 范文： Recently, I have noticed a negative phenomenon that some students secretly use phones in self-study classes, playing games or watching videos, ignoring the people around them. This behavior not only distracts themselves but also disturbs others, which severely affects their academic performance. Therefore, I strongly suggest that a "phone-free” policy should be carried out. It is high time that we put our hearts into study instead of being addicted to screens. I hope my suggestion will be considered. Only by getting rid of distractions can we achieve academic success. 题目二： 假定你是李华，发现校园内存在随手乱扔垃圾（如饮料瓶、纸巾）的现象，破坏了优美的校园环境。请你给校英文报“Green Campus”专栏投稿，反映该现象并提出整改建议。 第一步：审题 本题属于典型的现象批评与建议。需注意语气既要客观指出问题，又要积极提出建设性意见。 第二步：核心词汇 litter randomly 随意丢弃垃圾 damage the environment 破坏环境 sense of responsibility 责任感 set up bins 设置垃圾桶 keep the campus tidy 保持校园整洁 第三步：高级句型 1.with复合结构：With the environment getting worse… 2.非限制性定语从句： which makes it urgent to take action. 3.倒装句：Only in this way can we… 第四步：三段式框架 Para 1: 描述现象－－校园垃圾随处可见 Para 2: 分析后果 + 提出建议 Para 3: 总结 范文： I am writing to reflect a worrying situation on campus: many students throw garbage randomly, leaving waste paper and bottles here and there. With the environment getting worse, our school’s image is damaged, which makes it urgent to take action. I suggest setting up more recycling bins and putting up signs to remind students to behave. Besides, a supervision team can be formed to stop such behavior. Let’s join hands to protect our home. Only in this way can we enjoy a green and beautiful campus. 现象+建议类作文通用模板： 开头段：I am writing to reflect a common phenomenon that… (现象） 中间段：This behavior not only… but also… which… (危害） Therefore, I suggest that… (建议） 结尾段：I hope… (希望） Only by… can we… (倒装句升华） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $