内容正文:
题目要求:
假定你是李华,你校部分学生过度依赖AI完成作业。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1. 陈述现象;
2. 提出劝告和建议。
一、审题
审题侧重以下几个方面:
1.审体裁: 投稿类--现象+建议类短文
2.审人称:第一人称we 为主
3.审时态: 一般现在时为主
4. 审现象本质:从题目提到的“过度依赖AI”可知本文的写作意图不是全盘否定AI,而是反对滥用、倡导合理使用AI。
5. 审写作重点:不仅要指出问题,更要给出可操作的建议。
2. 所用到的词汇和词汇表达:
过度依赖
over-reliance / rely too much on
合理使用
use ... wisely / properly / in a reasonable way
完成作业
complete / do homework
使用AI工具
use AI tools
缺乏独立思考
lack independent thinking
影响学习效果
affect learning outcomes
依赖……做某事
depend on ... to do sth.
把AI当作辅助工具
treat AI as a helping tool / an aid
先自己思考
think on your own first
遇到困难时
When getting stuck / when facing difficulties
寻求帮助
seek help / ask for assistance
提高学习能力
improve learning ability
对自己的学习负责
take responsibility for one’s own learning
三、搭框架结构:
第一段开头:陈述现象
简要陈述现象
第二段正文:
劝告和建议
1. 指出这样做的问题:如影响思维发展,降低学习效果)
2. 提出具体建议(如先独立思考,AI只作辅助)。
第三段结尾:总结
再次强调合理使用AI的重要性
四、所用到的高级句型:
1.It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.
It is common for some students to rely too much on AI when doing homework.
2.Not only ... but also ...
This not only affects their learning but also weakens their thinking ability.
3.Instead of doing sth., we should do sth.(对比建议)
Instead of turning to AI directly, we should try to solve problems on our own first.
4.Only by doing ... can we ...(倒装句强调方法)
Only by using AI properly can we truly improve our studies.
5.I strongly suggest that ...(提出建议)
I strongly suggest that students treat AI as a tool, not a crutch.
五、范文:
范文1.
Say No to Over-Reliance on AI for Homework
Nowadays, some students in our school rely too much on AI to finish their homework. They simply copy answers without thinking.
This habit is harmful. It weakens independent thinking and reduces learning outcomes.Instead of overusing AI, we should use it wisely. First, try to solve problems on our own. If we get stuck, we can turn to AI for help—but only as a guide, not an answer machine. After that, we must understand the solution by ourselves.
Remember: AI is a tool, not a brain. Let’s say no to over-reliance and take charge of our learning.
范文2:
Say No to Over-Reliance on AI for Homework
Nowadays, it is common that we students rely too much on AI for homework, which may encourage laziness, thus affecting our attitudes toward study.
As we know, AI is a practical tool that we can use to help us boost learning efficiency. Therefore, it’s strongly recommended that we should do our homework independently and only use AI as a guide instead of getting direct answers. Only in this way, can we foster problem-solving habits and equip ourselves for the future.
To sum up, we should strive to solve difficult problems on our own rather than turn to AI for help.
六、其他投稿类作文
我最喜欢的科目:
你校英文报举办主题为“我最喜欢的科目”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你最喜欢的学科,以及为什么喜欢它。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
1. 框架结构:
第一段开头:话题引入——我最喜欢的科目
第二段正文:喜欢的原因——1.思维训练,
2.培养解决问题,逻辑推理的能力
第三段结尾:总结
2. 范文:
My favorite subject
I’m excited to share my preference for my favorite subject: Mathematics.
First of all, mathematics appeals to me because it’s a mental exercise that keeps my brain engaged and provides a sense of satisfaction when I address complex problems. More importantly, learning the subject can assist me in solving problems and cultivate the ability of logical reasoning. I think these skills are invaluable, not only academically but also in everyday life.
In conclusion, mathematics isn’t a subject. It’s a passion that offers challenges.
给妈妈的礼物:
假定你是李华,近日你校英语报正在征集英文稿件,请以“A Special Gift for Mom”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,讲述三八妇女节那天你为妈妈准备礼物的过程。内容包括:
1.准备礼物;
2.妈妈收到礼物的反应;
3.你的感悟。
注意:要求字数80左右。
1. 框架结构:
开篇——引入主题,说明投稿的目的
短文投稿 正文——叙述具体内容或描述具体问题
结尾——你的看法、感悟或表达期望
2. 范文:
A Special Gift for Mom
On Women’s Day, I decided to give Mom a special gift—doing a thorough cleaning.
When she went to work, leaving me alone at home, I got down to it. First, I wiped the dust off the furniture. Following that, it was time to mop the floor. I mopped it again and again, until it became cleaner than before. I was removing all the garbage from the dustbins when my mother came back. She was so surprised to see the tidy and neat rooms that she couldn’t help giving me a big hug, saying that I did a good job and she was very proud of me.
That day, I realized love isn’t about grand gestures but sincere efforts Mothers deserve appreciation every day, not just on special occasions.
分享思想:
你校英文报正在开展主题为“Benefiting from Sharing Ideas”的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.述分享的重要性;
2.举例说明分享带来的收获。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Benefiting from Sharing Ideas
1. 框架结构:
开篇——引入主题,说明投稿的目的
短文投稿 正文——叙述具体内容或描述具体问题
结尾——你的看法、感悟或表达期望
2. 范文:
Benefiting from Sharing Ideas
Sharing ideas is a powerful way to deepen our understanding and broaden our horizons. When we exchange perspectives, we’re exposed to new ways of thinking and encouraged to reflect on our own views. In this way, sharing ideas becomes a bridge connecting people and promoting intellectual growth.
In my school life, sharing ideas has brought me many benefits. During a group project, I shared my insights on organizing information. A teammate introduced a creative approach to presentations that improved our work. A friend shared her way of dealing with exam stress, which helped me build healthier study habits.
These experiences have taught me that sharing ideas is a process that helps us become better learners and thinkers.
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