高考英语读后续写---人与动物温情类主题 讲义-2026届高三英语三轮复习专项

本次九大联盟读后续写（救狗主题）专项讲解，围绕考场实用步骤展开：先运用拉波夫原理读懂原文，明确文章体裁，梳理情节逻辑；再挖掘文中三处关键伏笔，用“五句定框架”搭建写作结构。同时针对同学们本次写作中暴露的常见问题进行分析指正，最后附上参考范文，帮助大家理清思路、规范表达，切实掌握读后续写的解题方法。 第一步：用拉波夫原理读懂原材料 1. Orientation（指向）：故事背景 时间、地点、人物、起因 I was doing my regular hike up Shadow Mountain when I encountered something unexpected.Near the top, a white dog was hiding behind the rocks.地点 时间 When I approached,it barked and tried to get away,but one of its front legs was injured.We were high on a ridge(山脊),and every time I moved closer,the dog put itself more in danger.I couldn't get close without putting both of us at risk.The ground was muddy underneath the loose rocks from recent rainfall,with almost no stable footing.I called my wife for help.It was getting dark,and this dog wasn't going to make it.人物 起因 After some time,several mountain rescue teams began climbing the mountain.When one rescuer finally got within shouting distance,he told me it was too dangerous to come down to me,and that a helicopter was coming.“You would need to hold onto the dog,”he said loudly to me. 2.Complicating action:主人公的一系列动作了解故事的进展 When I approached,it barked and tried to get away,but one of its front legs was injured.We were high on a ridge(山脊),and every time I moved closer,the dog put itself more in danger.I couldn't get close without putting both of us at risk.The ground was muddy underneath the loose rocks from recent rainfall,with almost no stable footing.I called my wife for help.It was getting dark,and this dog wasn't going to make it. I reached out to Non-emergency and Animal Control,but nobody could offer immediate assistance.Meanwhile,my wife searched online and discovered a social media post about a missing white dog that had been lost five days earlier,nearly four miles away.It had to be the same one. Eventually,I called 911.As I waited for the police to call me back with a plan,the dog panicked again, sliding down the ravine(峡谷)twice.I knew I had to take action,so I carefully positioned myself down the ravine under the dog's location,trying to prevent it sliding farther down the slope(斜坡).My phone battery was down to three percent,so I didn't call.Instead,I used my flashlight to signal my location. 第二步：确定体裁 1.体裁的种类： Genre体裁 Purpose Stages Recount 记录型记叙文 Recounting events 叙述事件 Orientation 背景介绍 Record of events 事件记录 Narrative 叙述型故事 Resolving a complication 解决矛盾冲突 Orientation背景介绍 Complication矛盾发展 Resolution结局化解 Exemplum 说教类故事 Judging character or behaviour 评判人物或行为 Orientation背景介绍 Incident事件经过 Interpretation 分析解读/诠释 Anecdote 轶事趣闻 Sharing an emotional reaction 分享情感反应 Orientation 背景介绍 Remarkable event特殊事件 Reaction 情感回应 Observation 现象观察 Commenting on an event 评价特定事件 Orientation背景介绍 Event description事件描述 Comment 观点评论 News story 新闻报道 Reporting current events 报道时事动态 Lead导语 Angles 报道角度 2. 读后续写常考的体裁种类： 叙述型故事、说教类故事和轶事趣闻 3.本篇读后续写确定体裁： 本文属于轶事趣闻类记叙文，讲述主人公在登山途中偶遇受伤小狗，历经险境、多方求助后成功救援的惊险经历。文章情节曲折紧张，充满意外与挑战，既展现了野外环境的危险与救援的艰难，又传递出关爱生命、勇敢助人的温暖主题，是典型的以真实奇遇为载体、兼具惊险性与正能量的记叙文题材。 所以，在结尾主题升华时，不必刻意传递宏大价值观念，只需抒发自身的感悟与体验即可。 第三步：读懂故事的情节与逻辑 七步剧情逻辑：目标→阻碍→努力→挫败→意外→转折→结局 1. 目标（Goal） 主人公爬山时发现一只前腿受伤的小白狗，处境危险。 核心目标：救下受伤小狗，安全离开危险山脊。 2. 阻碍（Barrier） 地面泥泞、碎石松动，脚下站不稳，随时会滑下峡谷； 小狗害怕、情绪激动，一靠近就往后退，越退越危险； 附近没有救援人员，电话联系动物管理局没人能立刻赶来； 天色变黑、手机电量只剩3%，随时会关机失联。 3. 努力（Effort） 主人公慢慢靠近小狗，尝试安抚并靠近保护它； 给妻子打电话求助，妻子网上查到狗主人寻狗信息； 拨打911报警求助，等待救援方案； 主动下到峡谷下方，用身体挡住小狗，防止它滑落深渊； 手机没电，改用手电筒打信号，给救援队指路。 4. 挫败（Failure） 小狗受惊两次滑下峡谷，处境更危险； 普通救援人员下不来，地面太危险，无法近距离施救； 电话快关机，无法继续沟通位置； 现场环境随时可能塌方、滑坡，救人难度极大。 5. 意外（Accident） 救援队赶来之后，现场地面极度不稳，小狗剧烈发抖，马上又要滑下去，情况危急到极点。 6. 转折（Turning point）： 主人公小心靠近，伸出左臂搂住了小狗 7. 结局（Ending）： 主人公小心抱住小狗，艰难爬回安全位置； 直升机成功接应，人和狗全部平安脱险； 最后小狗顺利回到主人身边，暖心圆满结尾。 两段要续写的内容： 要续写的第一段： 6.转折（Turning point）： 主人公小心靠近，伸出左臂搂住了小狗 要续写的第二段： 7. 结局（Ending）： 主人公小心抱住小狗，艰难爬回安全位置； 直升机成功接应，人和狗全部平安脱险； 最后小狗顺利回到主人身边，暖心圆满结尾。 第四步：挖出原材料的三个伏笔 手电筒：定位，让救援队找到人 直升机：施救，最终解决危险困境 狗主人的寻狗帖：交代背景，让结局温暖圆满，提升故事温度 伏笔一：flashlight 手电筒 天色渐黑，手机电量仅剩 3%，无法继续通话。 主人公没有选择打电话，而是 used my flashlight to signal my location，用手电筒发出信号、标示位置。 伏笔二：helicopter 直升机 山路太险，救援人员无法下山靠近，只能等待 a helicopter was coming 伏笔三：狗主人 妻子在网上搜到一条社交媒体寻狗帖子，一条白色小狗已经走失五天，地点在四英里外，于是作者判断：一定是同一只狗。正因为有主人，最后救援成功、小狗平安回家才显得温暖圆满，不然救下来也不知道送给谁。 第五步：5句定框架 第一段 开头第1句：与第一段给出句衔接承上 结尾第2句：与第二段给出句衔接启下 第二段 开头第3句：与第二段开头给出句衔接 第4句：正能量的结尾，给出问题解决的最终结果 第5句：情感回应 第一段I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it.---①衔接句（回应首句内容——主述位推进法） It stopped barking suddenly, trembling slightly but no longer trying to escape, as if sensing my kindness.----②衔接句启下（过渡到第二段给出句）I looked up at the ridge and made a decision--I couldn't wait. I had to get us out now. 第二段Holding the dog under my arm,I struggled to climb my way back.---③衔接句（主述位推进法，回应首句内容）Every step was dangerous. I grabbed loose rocks to pull myself up. ----④解决问题)I climbed up the ladder of the helicopter slowly and finally reached the safe ridge. Soon, the dog's owner arrived, and we all sighed with relief.⑤情感回应续写结束 The little adventure eventually had a happy ending. 学生本次写作存在的问题： 一、情节瞎编，和原文对不上 1）Suddenly a car came and saved the dog. 原文根本没出现汽车，读后续写的大忌--凭空加情节。 应改为：I rushed over quickly and tried to help the dog out of danger. 2）My father came and helped me save the dog. 原文只有“我”在场，读后续写不可以多加人物，原文没有任何铺垫，显得很突兀。 应改为：I walked carefully and reached out my hands to save the poor dog. 二、动作描写太笼统，没画面、不生动 1）I saved the dog. It was safe. 只写结果，要把结果性动作过程化。 应改为：I ran to the dog at once, bent down and lifted it gently. 2）I helped the dog and it was fine. 只写结果，要把结果性动作过程化。 应改为：I held the dog carefully and checked if it got hurt. 三、心理、情感写得不符合常理 1）I was very excited when I saw the dog in danger. 小狗遇到危险，应该着急担心，而不是兴奋，情感正好写反了。 应改为：I felt quite worried when I saw the dog was in trouble. 2）I didn’t want to save it because it wasn’t my dog. 态度冷漠，不符合考试要传达正能量要求。 应改为：I couldn’t stand seeing it suffer, so I decided to help it immediately. 四、结尾不会升华，要么敷衍要么乱拔高 1）I saved the dog. That’s all. 结尾太敷衍，没有感悟，文章没深度。 应改为：I was happy to save the dog and learned to care for small lives. 2）This experience tells me that every life is important and we should protect them. 这篇读后续写属于轶事趣闻，升华部只需抒发自身的感悟与体验即可。 应改为：This little adventure eventually had a happy ending. 下水范文： I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it. It stopped barking suddenly, trembling slightly but no longer trying to escape, as if sensing my kindness. I held it securely in my arms, my heart racing at the thought of the dangerous slope beneath us. The sky grew darker, and time was running out for both of us. I looked up at the ridge and made a decision—I couldn't wait. I had to get us out now. Holding the dog under my arm, I struggled to climb my way back. Every step was dangerous. I grabbed loose rocks to pull myself up. My legs shook with tiredness and I moved slowly, fearing that a single misstep would send us sliding down. A loud noise from above reminded me that the helicopter was waiting nearby. I climbed up the ladder of the helicopter slowly and finally reached the safe ridge. Soon, the dog's owner arrived, and we all sighed with relief. This little adventure eventually had a happy ending. 原文呈现： 第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was doing my regular hike up Shadow Mountain when I encountered something unexpected.Near the top, a white dog was hiding behind the rocks. When I approached,it barked and tried to get away,but one of its front legs was injured.We were high on a ridge(山脊),and every time I moved closer,the dog put itself more in danger.I couldn't get close without putting both of us at risk.The ground was muddy underneath the loose rocks from recent rainfall,with almost no stable footing.I called my wife for help.It was getting dark,and this dog wasn't going to make it. I reached out to Non-emergency and Animal Control,but nobody could offer immediate assistance.Meanwhile,my wife searched online and discovered a social media post about a missing white dog that had been lost five days earlier,nearly four miles away.It had to be the same one. Eventually,I called 911.As I waited for the police to call me back with a plan,the dog panicked again, sliding down the ravine(峡谷)twice.I knew I had to take action,so I carefully positioned myself down the ravine under the dog's location,trying to prevent it sliding farther down the slope(斜坡).My phone battery was down to three percent,so I didn't call.Instead,I used my flashlight to signal my location. After some time,several mountain rescue teams began climbing the mountain.When one rescuer finally got within shouting distance,he told me it was too dangerous to come down to me,and that a helicopter was coming.“You would need to hold onto the dog,”he said loudly to me. The surface we were on was unstable,and the ground offered no real footing.The dog shook violently and it seemed that it was about to slide again. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I approached the dog carefully and threw my left arm around it. Holding the dog under my arm,I struggled to climb my way back. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $