2026届浙江温州2026年4月第二次适应性考试-读后续写解析 讲义

2026届 浙江温州2026年4月第二次适应性考试-读后续写解析 --The ones we love never truly leave us. 【题目呈现】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Wind Phone Every morning Mario visited his neighbor, Mr. Harper. Together they sat at the edge of his garden on the hill,looking down at the port. They made a game of spotting Mario's dad as he unloaded the morning catch, and Mr.Harper's daughter, Fiona, as she cleaned the fish one after another.“I see them!” Mario would say. Mr. Harper would laugh.“You win again, Mario.” It was their favorite game. Mario's dad loved the ocean. He'd say,“Listen, Mario, the ocean's saying good morning.” The lapping waves would whisper: O-mor-ning. O-mor-ning. Mario always returned the greeting,“Good morning, ocean.” But on the day the big wave came, the ocean didn't whisper. It roared (咆哮). A big, watery hand swept into the port, grabbing everything — and everyone — in its grasp. Everyone lost someone that day. It took Mario's dad, Fiona, and it even took Mario's voice. Silence hung over the village like a dark, heavy cloud. Spring came. Here and there stood peach-trees that broke into delicate flowers of pink. One day: Tap-tap-tap.Bang-bang-bang. Mario watched from his window. Mr. Harper was building something in his garden. But what? It was a phone booth(电话亭), painted white and with many panes(窗格) of glass. Mr. Harper went inside and his voice floated out.“Fiona? It's your father. I miss you.” Mario was confused. Fiona had been grabbed by the ocean,just like Mario's dad. When Mr. Harper left, Mario crept inside. An old-fashioned phone sat on a table. No plugs,no wires. It was a phone connected to nowhere. Mr. Harper visited his phone booth every day. Soon other villagers did too. They lifted the receiver to their ears and their voices floated on the wind.“Hello, cousin. Today I fixed the boat. I' ll fish again soon.”“Sister,how' re you? I rode your bike today. It fits me now.” For the first time since the big wave came, Mario wanted to use his voice. He went down to the port and screamed at the ocean.“Bring our people back!” Still, the waves lapped gently. O-mor-ning. O-mor-ning. Mario sighed and looked up. 注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Mr . Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse._______________________ Paragraph 2: As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr: Harper down at the port._______________________ 【原文翻译】 风之电话 每天早上，马里奥都会去邻居哈珀先生家。两人一同坐在山顶花园的边缘，俯瞰着港口。他们玩着一个小游戏：寻找正在卸下清晨渔获的马里奥爸爸，还有正一条接一条清理鲜鱼的哈珀先生的女儿菲奥娜。“我看见他们啦！”马里奥总会这样喊。哈珀先生则笑着说：“你又赢了，马里奥。”这是他们最爱的游戏。 马里奥的爸爸深爱大海。他常说：“听，马里奥，大海在说早安呢。”海浪轻轻拍岸，低语着：早——安。早——安。马里奥总会回应：“早安，大海。”可巨浪来袭的那天，大海不再低语，而是发出震天咆哮。一只巨大的水掌横扫港口，攫走了一切，也卷走了无数人。那一天，每个人都痛失至亲。大海夺走了马里奥的爸爸，夺走了菲奥娜，甚至夺走了马里奥的声音。沉默如厚重阴沉的乌云，笼罩了整座村庄。 春天来了，村里的桃树纷纷绽放出粉嫩娇柔的花朵。一天，窗外传来“嗒—嗒—嗒”“砰—砰—砰”的声响。马里奥从窗口望去，哈珀先生正在自家花园里搭建东西。那是什么呢？原来是一座电话亭，通体洁白，镶着多块玻璃窗格。哈珀先生走进亭中，声音随风飘出：“菲奥娜？是爸爸。我好想你。”马里奥满心困惑。菲奥娜早已被大海卷走，就像他的爸爸一样。哈珀先生离开后，马里奥悄悄走了进去。桌上放着一部老式电话机，没有插头，没有电线，是一部根本无法接通的电话。 哈珀先生每天都会来到这座电话亭。很快，其他村民也纷纷前来。他们拿起听筒贴在耳边，话语随风飘散：“嘿，表哥，今天我修好了渔船，很快就能再出海捕鱼了。”“姐姐，你还好吗？我今天骑了你的自行车，现在刚好能骑啦。” 自巨浪来袭后，马里奥第一次渴望开口说话。他跑到港口，对着大海嘶吼：“把我们的亲人还给我！”可海浪依旧轻轻拍岸，低语着：早——安。早——安。马里奥叹了口气，缓缓抬起头。 【解读故事（5R思路）】 Read for characters Mario：原本活泼开朗的渔村小男孩，热爱大海，与父亲感情极深。海啸夺走父亲后失声，内心充满无法宣泄的悲伤和对大海的复杂情感，核心诉求是找到与逝去父亲沟通的方式，走出创伤。 Mr. Harper：Mario 的邻居，同样在海啸中失去女儿 Fiona。善良、坚韧且共情力强，通过建造 "风之电话亭" 寄托哀思，也为全村人提供了情感出口，是 Mario 的精神引导者。 村民们：海啸的共同受害者，集体沉浸在沉默的悲伤中，缺乏有效的情感宣泄渠道。 Read for plot 过去：Mario 每天和 Mr. Harper 在山顶花园玩 "找亲人" 的游戏，生活平静幸福。 转折点：一场巨大的海啸席卷港口，夺走了 Mario 的父亲和 Fiona 的生命，Mario 因此失声。 现在：春天到来，Mr. Harper 在山上建造了一个没有电线的白色电话亭，每天对着电话和女儿说话。 发展：其他村民也开始使用这个电话亭，对着风倾诉对逝去亲人的思念。 当前：Mario 对着大海尖叫发泄情绪却无人回应，抬头看到了山上的电话亭。 Read for conflict 核心内心冲突：Mario 失去父亲后的巨大悲痛与无法表达的痛苦之间的矛盾；对大海的热爱与对大海夺走父亲的怨恨之间的矛盾。 次要外部冲突：整个村庄在海啸后笼罩在沉默和悲伤中，村民们缺乏集体情感宣泄的途径。 Read for emotional changes “我” 的情绪变化：幸福快乐→震惊麻木→悲伤沉默→愤怒怨恨→渴望表达→犹豫好奇 Read for theme 治愈与和解：通过真诚的情感表达与逝去的亲人和解，与自己和解，走出创伤。 爱与思念：真正的爱不会因死亡而消失，思念是连接生者与逝者的永恒桥梁。 社区的力量：在灾难面前，社区成员之间的相互理解和支持是治愈创伤的重要力量。 【写作思路】 第一段思路（五句） 环境渲染 承接提示句，用环境描写渲染氛围，突出电话亭在悲伤村庄中的指引作用。 情绪爆发 描写 Mario 站在电话亭外的内心挣扎，呼应他之前失声和对大海的怨恨。 动作推进 描写 Mario 走进电话亭拿起听筒的动作，表现他迈出的勇敢一步。 高潮倾诉 描写 Mario 对着电话说出对父亲的思念，这是故事的第一个小高潮。 情感转变 描写 Mario 说完话后的情绪转变，声音的回归象征着他开始走出创伤。 第二段思路（五句） 互动反应 承接提示句，描写 Mr. Harper 看到 Mario 后的反应和动作。 环境呼应 用环境描写烘托温暖的氛围，呼应原文中 "大海的问候" 伏笔。 情感共鸣 描写 Mario 和 Mr. Harper 之间的对话和互动，表现两人的相互理解。 集体治愈 描写其他村民也来到港口，形成集体治愈的场景。 主题升华 最后升华主题，环境为载体说明亲人即便离世，但爱意不会消失，永远陪伴。 【续写思路参考】 （每句话都有两个句式简单和升级，方便分层学习，下文不再复述了。） Paragraph 1: Mr. Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse. 1. 环境渲染：（Doing sth,sb did sth非谓语句式） ① 它高高矗立在蓝天之下，在下方宁静的村庄投下长长的影子。 Standing tall against the blue sky, it cast a long shadow over the quiet village below. ② 它高高矗立在点缀着白云的柔和蓝天之下，在依然寂静的村庄投下温柔的长影。 Standing tall against the soft blue sky dotted with white clouds, it cast a gentle long shadow over the still-silent village below. 2. 情感爆发（Having done sth, 情感名词 A was replaced by 情感名词 B） ① 对着大海徒劳地尖叫后，Mario 的愤怒被一种强烈的想和爸爸说话的渴望取代。 Having screamed at the ocean in vain, Mario's anger was replaced by a strong desire to talk to his dad. ②对着毫无回应的大海尖叫到喉咙发痛后，Mario 炽热的愤怒逐渐被一种深切的、渴望再次听到爸爸声音的思念取代。 Having screamed at the unresponsive ocean until his throat ached, Mario's burning anger was gradually replaced by a deep, aching desire to hear his dad's voice again. 3. 动作推进（At the sight of sth, sb did A, did B and did C） ① 看到敞开的门，Mario 走上山，推开玻璃门，拿起了听筒。 At the sight of the open door, Mario walked up the hill, pushed open the glass door and picked up the receiver. ② 看到微微敞开的玻璃门，Mario 慢慢爬上长满青草的小山，轻轻推开门，小心翼翼地将冰冷的听筒贴到耳边。 At the sight of the slightly open glass door, Mario slowly climbed the grassy hill, gently pushed open the door and carefully lifted the cold receiver to his ear. 4. 高潮倾诉（A wave of + 情感名词 + welled up in sb.’s heart and surged through sb, as sb did sth） ① 当他轻声说出 "爸爸，我想你" 时，一股悲伤涌上心头，席卷了他全身。 A wave of sadness welled up in his heart and surged through him, as he whispered "Dad, I miss you". ② 当他用颤抖的声音轻声说出 "爸爸，我好想你" 时，一股难以抑制的悲伤涌上心头，席卷了他全身的每一个角落。 A wave of overwhelming sadness welled up in his heart and surged through every part of his body, as he whispered in a trembling voice "Dad, I miss you so much". 5. 情感转变（When 动作 / 五感 + 主句） ① 当他听到自己的声音时，泪水顺着脸颊流下，他知道自己正在痊愈。 When he heard his own voice, tears rolled down his cheeks and he knew he was healing. ② 当他听到自己轻柔的声音随风飘荡时，温暖的泪水顺着他沾满灰尘的脸颊流下，他感到自己破碎的心有一小块开始愈合。 When he heard his own soft voice floating on the wind, warm tears rolled down his dusty cheeks and he felt a little piece of his broken heart start to mend. Paragraph 2: As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr. Harper down at the port. 6. 互动反应（方式副词（ly），主 + 谓） ① Mr. Harper 静静地向他走来，脸上带着一丝理解的微笑。 Quietly, Mr. Harper walked towards him with a small, understanding smile on his face. ② Mr. Harper 轻柔地慢慢向他走来，饱经风霜的脸上带着一个无需言语的温柔而了然的微笑。 Softly, Mr. Harper walked slowly towards him, his weathered face wearing a gentle, knowing smile that needed no words. 7. 环境呼应（无灵主语的虚拟语气） ① 温柔的风将他们的话语带到大海，仿佛要将它们送给他们爱的人。 The gentle wind carried their words to the ocean, as if it would send them to their loved ones. ② 柔和的春风将他们轻声的话语带过蓝色的海面，仿佛要将每一个思念都小心翼翼地送到天堂里他们所爱的人手中。 The soft spring wind carried their quiet words across the blue water, as if it would carefully deliver every single thought to their beloved ones in heaven. 8. 情感共鸣（时间状语从句 When... + 并列句...and even...） ① 当 Mario 告诉 Mr. Harper 他做了什么时，老人点了点头，甚至给了他一个温暖的拥抱。 When Mario told Mr. Harper what he had done, the old man nodded and even gave him a warm hug. ② 当 Mario 告诉 Mr. Harper 他终于和爸爸说话了时，老人慢慢点了点头，甚至将他紧紧抱在怀里，这个安慰的拥抱带着海盐和阳光的味道。 When Mario told Mr. Harper that he had finally spoken to his dad, the old man nodded slowly and even pulled him into a tight, comforting hug that smelled of sea salt and sunshine. 9. 集体治愈（with sb/sth doing A and sth doing B，sb did A, doing B） ① 阳光灿烂，海浪轻拍，更多的村民来到港口，分享他们的故事。 With the sun shining brightly and the waves lapping gently, more villagers came to the port, sharing their stories. ② 金色的阳光温暖地照在他们脸上，温柔的海浪低语着它们古老的问候，更多的村民慢慢聚集在港口，分享着他们对逝去亲人的回忆。 With the golden sun shining warmly on their faces and the gentle waves whispering their old greeting, more villagers slowly gathered at the port, sharing their memories of the loved ones they had lost. 10. 主题升华（无灵主语+并列结构） ① 爱与记忆将永远存在于风浪之中，指引我们前行。 Love and memory will always live on in the wind and waves, guiding us forward. ② 在每一声海浪低语、每一缕清风拂面中，爱永不消逝，记忆让我们所爱之人永远相伴。 In every whisper of the wave and every breath of the wind, love never fades, and memory keeps those we love forever by our side. 【范文参考】 范文一（基础版） Mr. Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse. Standing tall against the blue sky, it cast a long shadow over the quiet village below. Having screamed at the ocean in vain, Mario's anger was replaced by a strong desire to talk to his dad. At the sight of the open door, Mario walked up the hill, pushed open the glass door and picked up the receiver. A wave of sadness welled up in his heart and surged through him, as he whispered "Dad, I miss you". When he heard his own voice, tears rolled down his cheeks and he knew he was healing. As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr. Harper down at the port. Quietly, Mr. Harper walked towards him with a small, understanding smile on his face. The gentle wind carried their words to the ocean, as if it would send them to their loved ones. When Mario told Mr. Harper what he had done, the old man nodded and even gave him a warm hug. With the sun shining brightly and the waves lapping gently, more villagers came to the port, sharing their stories.Love and memory will always live on in the wind and waves, guiding us forward. 范文二（升级版） Mr. Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse. Standing tall against the soft blue sky dotted with white clouds, it cast a gentle long shadow over the still-silent village below. Having screamed at the unresponsive ocean until his throat ached, Mario's burning anger was gradually replaced by a deep, aching desire to hear his dad's voice again. At the sight of the slightly open glass door, Mario slowly climbed the grassy hill, gently pushed open the door and carefully lifted the cold receiver to his ear. A wave of overwhelming sadness welled up in his heart and surged through every part of his body, as he whispered in a trembling voice "Dad, I miss you so much". When he heard his own soft voice floating on the wind, warm tears rolled down his dusty cheeks and he felt a little piece of his broken heart start to mend. As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr. Harper down at the port. Softly, Mr. Harper walked slowly towards him, his weathered face wearing a gentle, knowing smile that needed no words. The soft spring wind carried their quiet words across the blue water, as if it would carefully deliver every single thought to their beloved ones in heaven. When Mario told Mr. Harper that he had finally spoken to his dad, the old man nodded slowly and even pulled him into a tight, comforting hug that smelled of sea salt and sunshine. With the golden sun shining warmly on their faces and the gentle waves whispering their old greeting, more villagers slowly gathered at the port, sharing their memories of the loved ones they had lost.In every whisper of the wave and every breath of the wind, love never fades, and memory keeps those we love forever by our side. 【相关的语料与词块】 1. 核心话题相关词块（治愈与思念） 1. 读后续写解析 第 1 页 共 3 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2. heal emotional wounds 治愈情感创伤 3. mend a broken heart 修复破碎的心 4. express grief and sorrow 表达悲伤 5. cherish memories of 珍惜对... 的回忆 6. keep the memory alive 让记忆永存 7. find comfort in 在... 中找到安慰 8. share one's feelings 分享感受 9. overcome loss and pain 克服失去和痛苦 10. connect with loved ones 与亲人联系 11. find strength in community 在社区中找到力量 12. move forward with hope 带着希望前行 13. honor the memory of 纪念... 14. process emotions 处理情绪 15. find closure 获得解脱 16. rebuild one's life 重建生活 2. 情绪变化相关词块 1. 2. be overwhelmed with sadness 被悲伤淹没 3. feel a sharp pain in one's heart 感到心口剧痛 4. be filled with anger and resentment 充满愤怒和怨恨 5. have a lump in one's throat 喉咙哽咽 6. tears well up in one's eyes 泪水涌上眼眶 7. tears roll down one's cheeks 泪水顺着脸颊流下 8. feel a sense of relief 感到一丝解脱 9. be overcome with emotion 情绪激动 10. feel a warm glow in one's heart 心中感到温暖 11. be lost in thought 陷入沉思 12. have mixed feelings 百感交集 13. feel numb with shock 震惊得麻木 14. be consumed by grief 被悲伤吞噬 15. find peace of mind 找到内心的平静 16. feel a weight lifted off one's shoulders 感到如释重负 3. 动作描写相关词块 1. 2. climb the grassy hill 爬上长满青草的小山 3. push open the glass door 推开玻璃门 4. lift the receiver to one's ear 将听筒贴到耳边 5. whisper in a trembling voice 用颤抖的声音低语 6. wipe tears from one's eyes 擦去眼中的泪水 7. nod slowly in understanding 慢慢点头表示理解 8. pull sb into a tight hug 紧紧抱住某人 9. gaze out at the ocean 凝视着大海 10. listen to the lapping waves 听着海浪轻拍的声音 11. walk slowly towards sb 慢慢走向某人 12. gather at the port 聚集在港口 13. share stories and memories 分享故事和回忆 14. breathe in the fresh sea air 呼吸新鲜的海风 15. look up at the sky 抬头望向天空 16. hold sb's hand gently 轻轻握住某人的手 4. 场景相关词块（海边村庄） 1. a quiet fishing village 宁静的渔村 2. a white phone booth 白色的电话亭 3. a grassy hill overlooking the port 俯瞰港口的长满青草的小山 4. the blue ocean stretching to the horizon 延伸到地平线的蓝色大海 5. gentle waves lapping the shore 轻拍海岸的温柔海浪 6. golden sunlight filtering through the clouds 透过云层的金色阳光 7. soft spring breeze 柔和的春风 8. peach trees in full bloom 盛开的桃树 9. weathered wooden boats 饱经风霜的木船 10. the smell of sea salt and fish 海盐和鱼的味道 11. a dark heavy cloud hanging over the village 笼罩在村庄上空的厚重乌云 12. the sound of seagulls crying 海鸥的叫声 13. the distant sound of a foghorn 远处雾号的声音 14. sandy beaches 沙滩 15. rocky cliffs 岩石峭壁 最后再和大家分享几句《Remember Me》里面的关于本次主题的经典台词： 1. Our fingerprints don’t fade from the lives we touch. 我们触碰过的生命，永远留有我们的痕迹。 2. If I knew you could hear me, I would say: I love you. God, I miss you. 若我知道你能听见，我会说：我爱你，我好想你。 3. Grief is just love with nowhere to go. 悲伤，只是无处安放的爱。 4. The ones we love never truly leave us. 我们爱过的人，从未真正离开。 5. You don’t get rid of pain. You carry it and grow with it. 痛苦不会消失，你要带着它，与它一同成长。 $