2026年温州高三英语二模读后续写深度解析讲义-2026届高三英语二轮复习

2026年温州高三英语二模读后续写深度解析 这篇读后续写属于温情治愈类 + 生命成长类 第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Every morning Mario visited his neighbor, Mr. Harper. Together they sat at the edge of his garden on the hill, looking down at the port. They made a game of spotting Mario's dad as he unloaded the morning catch, and Mr. Harper's daughter, Fiona, as she cleaned the fish one after another. "I see them!" Mario would say. Mr. Harper would laugh. "You win again, Mario." It was their favorite game. Mario's dad loved the ocean. He'd say, "Listen, Mario, the ocean's saying good morning." The lapping waves would whisper: O-mor-ning. O-mor-ning. Mario always returned the greeting, "Good morning, ocean." But on the day the big wave came, the ocean didn't whisper. It roared (咆哮). A big, watery hand swept into the port, grabbing everything — and everyone — in its grasp. Everyone lost someone that day. It took Mario's dad, Fiona, and it even took Mario's voice. Silence hung over the village like a dark, heavy cloud. Spring came. Here and there stood peach-trees that broke into delicate flowers of pink. One day: Tap-tap-tap. Bang-bang-bang. Mario watched from his window. Mr. Harper was building something in his garden. But what? It was a phone booth (电话亭), painted white and with many panes (窗格) of glass. Mr. Harper went inside and his voice floated out. "Fiona? It's your father. I miss you." Mario was confused. Fiona had been grabbed by the ocean, just like Mario's dad. When Mr. Harper left, Mario crept inside. An old-fashioned phone sat on a table. No plugs, no wires. It was a phone connected to nowhere. Mr. Harper visited his phone booth every day. Soon other villagers did too. They lifted the receiver to their ears and their voices floated on the wind. "Hello, cousin. Today I fixed the boat. I'll fish again soon." "Sister, how're you? I rode your bike today. It fits me now." For the first time since the big wave came, Mario wanted to use his voice. He went down to the port and screamed at the ocean. "Bring our people back!" Still, the waves lapped gently. O-mor-ning. O-mor-ning. Mario sighed and looked up. 注意：续写词数应为 150 左右；请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 1、 Paragraph 1:Mr. Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse. 2、 Paragraph 2:As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr. Harper down at the port. 二、全文深度解读 1. 读情节 情节阶段 内容描述 开端 Mario 与 Harper 先生每日在山坡眺望港口，温馨相伴；海啸突袭，夺走 Mario 父亲与 Fiona，Mario 失声，村庄陷入死寂。 发展 Harper 先生在山坡建造无绳电话亭，村民陆续前来与逝去亲人对话，Mario 内心重新燃起说话的渴望。 转折 Mario 冲向港口向大海呐喊，却只听见海浪轻语，内心失落又迷茫。 续写第一段 Mario 走向电话亭，鼓起勇气拿起听筒，对父亲轻声倾诉，终于重新开口。 续写第二段 Mario 走出电话亭遇见 Harper 先生，二人相互慰藉，Mario 彻底释怀，找回声音与希望。 2. 读人物 人物 人物特点 Mario 纯真念亲、因痛失声、内敛勇敢、渴望倾诉、最终被治愈重拾声音。 Mr. Harper 温和深情、痛失爱女、用善意温暖村庄、治愈 Mario 的心灵。 3. 读时态 全文以一般过去时态为主，续写需保持时态一致，动作、心理、场景描写均使用过去时。 4. 读冲突 冲突类型 冲突内容 外在冲突 海啸带来灾难，亲人离世，村庄被悲伤笼罩；无绳电话亭看似无法连通，却承载思念。 内在冲突 Mario 失去声音的痛苦；对逝去父亲的思念；沉默压抑与渴望发声的内心挣扎。 5. 读情绪发展 原文：温馨快乐→悲痛死寂→困惑好奇→渴望呐喊→失落迷茫续写：鼓起勇气→情感释放→温暖慰藉→释然治愈 6. 读主题 核心主题：爱与思念超越生死，无需有形连接，便能永远相通。延伸主题：悲伤终会被温柔治愈，陪伴与理解能让人重拾勇气与希望。 三、首句定位与续写框架（这就是你写作思路，高一高二好好学，高三同学记住类似故事类的写作方法！） Paragraph 1：走进电话亭，勇敢倾诉 电话亭如灯塔伫立山坡→Mario 走近电话亭→推门拿起听筒→轻声呼唤父亲→泪水滑落，完成情感释放。 Paragraph 2：相遇慰藉，释然升华 遇见港口的 Harper 先生→Mario 主动开口说话→Harper 温柔拥抱安慰→二人共听海浪，Mario 回应早安→点明思念无需电线，爱永恒存在。 四、原文伏笔与回扣 原文伏笔 回扣伏笔 Mario 与父亲互道 “Good morning, ocean” 结尾 Mario 再次对大海说早安，完成闭环。 海啸后 Mario 失去声音 续写中 Mario 重新开口说话，突破内心枷锁。 电话亭无插头无电线 升华主题：爱与思念不用有形连接，用心即可相通。 Harper 先生思念女儿 Fiona 与 Mario 相互治愈，共同守护对亲人的记忆。 五、高阶表达积累 必写场景 1：走进电话亭 Mario climbed the slope slowly, his heart beating fast. He pushed the door open and stood before the silent phone. 必写场景 2：倾诉与情感释放 His hands trembled as he lifted the receiver. Tears streamed down his cheeks while he whispered his missing to his dad. 必写场景 3：相遇与安慰 Mario gathered courage and talked to Mr. Harper, who hugged him gently with a warm smile. 必写场景 4：主题升华 Love for the lost ones lasts forever. The bond between hearts needs no wires, only memory and wind. 六、续写范文 Paragraph 1 Mr. Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse. Its glass panes caught the morning light, glowing warmly against the gray sky. Mario climbed the slope, pushing open the door and standing before the old phone. His hands trembled as he lifted the receiver. Then, closing his eyes, he lifted the receiver to his ear. "Dad..." he whispered,"I miss you." With the wind humming through the panes, somehow the silence on the other end didn't feel empty but was like listening. Tears streaming down his cheeks, he placed the phone down gently. Paragraph 2 As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr. Harper down at the port. The old man was staring into the distance, his hands in his pockets. When Mario approached him, neither spoke for a while until Mario broke the silence with an effort, "I talked to Dad." A smile emerged on Mr. Harper's weathered face. He knelt down and hugged the boy softly, "Dad heard you. They all did." Together they watched the waves lapping the shore—O-mor-ning, O-mor-ning—and this time, Mario whispered back, "Good morning." He came to realize that love for the lost ones persists beyond death and the bond with them doesn't require any tangible wires, only wind. 7、 微场景训练（不用考虑原文，按照微场景写） 微场景：海啸后男孩Mario 在无绳电话亭与逝去父亲对话，重拾声音，获得治愈 （1） 动作描写：马里奥轻轻拿起听筒，对着电话低语，风轻柔地穿过玻璃窗格。 （2） 情绪描写：：悲伤与思念充斥着马里奥的心，他失去的声音终于伴着勇气回来了。 （3） 语言描写：马里奥用平静而清晰的声音说：“我和爸爸说过话了。” （4） 心理描写：马里奥意识到，爸爸永远活在他的记忆里，陪伴着他。 （5） 主旨升华：爱与记忆可以跨越生死，真正的心灵相通不需要任何电线。 解析： 动作描写：Mario lifted the receiver gently and whispered to the phone, while the wind blew through the glass panes softly. 情绪描写：Sadness and longing filled Mario’s heart, and his lost voice finally came back with courage. 语言描写：Mario said in a quiet but clear voice, “I talked to Dad.” 心理描写：Mario realized that his dad was always with him in his memory. 主旨升华：Love and memory can cross death, and true connection needs no wires. 八、十句五定法拆解 口诀：承细渲心行，承动解情结 （学习好的用这个方法，续写会越写越快，下限会越来越高！基础弱的用这个方法，会慢慢学会写读后续写！如果你觉得这个方法不好，按照自己的写就行，能得到你满意的分数就可以！ KEEP TRYING!） 同学们，请按照如下口诀，套公式把这道题解出来！！ 读后续写 “10句话”公式 口诀：“承细渲心行，承动解情结” 句子序号 功能 核心任务（要写什么） 口诀 Para. 1 第1句 衔接首句 直接承接题目给出的段首句，描述第一个即时反应（动作或心理）。 承 第2句 细节/语言描写 扩展反应，加入语言或细节（如表情、语气）。 细/言 第3句 环境/感官描写 加入1个环境或感官细节（声、光、触觉），烘托氛围。 渲 第4句 内心独白/情感 写1句心里的感受或矛盾（用间接引语，如He wondered...）。 心 第5句 动作描写 描写具体连贯动作，形成“动作链”，让故事推进，并引出变化或发现，与下一段开头做好衔接 行 Para. 2 第6句 衔接首句 直接承接题目给出的段首句，描述第一个即时反应（动作或心理）。 承 第7句 动作/语言描写 写一个具体动作，或一句对话 动/言 第8句 解决问题 动作产生的结果，看到一个东西、一个人或一个变化。（为结局铺垫） 解 第9句 情绪描写 描写结果产生后的情绪变化。 情 第10句 结尾升华 点明主题或留下余味 结 按「10 句话公式」填空练习 Paragraph 1Mr. Harper's phone booth sat high on the hill like a lighthouse. 序号 口诀 续写（请填写） 第 1 句 承 第 2 句 细 第 3 句 渲 第 4 句 心 第 5 句 行 1. 承：It shone warmly in the morning light, guiding Mario to come closer. 2. 细：Mario walked up the hill and pushed the glass door open quietly. 3. 渲：The soft wind sang through the panes, making the booth peaceful. 4. 心：He strongly desired to speak to his dad from the bottom of his heart. 5. 行：He lifted the receiver and whispered his missing, with tears running down. Paragraph 2As Mario stepped out, he spotted Mr. Harper down at the port. 序号 口诀 续写（请填写） 第 6 句 承 第 7 句 动 第 8 句 解 第 9 句 情 第 10 句 结 6. 承：He walked towards the old man with a calm but brave heart. 7. 动：Mario said softly, “I talked to Dad just now.” 8. 解：Mr. Harper hugged him and told him their loved ones could hear. 9. 情：Mario felt relieved and warm, no longer sad or silent. 10. 结：He learned that love and memory would last forever without wires. ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $