内容正文:
人教版七年级下第二单元作文专练
a letter to give advice
题目一(书信)
题目: 你的好朋友小明最近迷上了玩手机游戏,每天放学回家就玩游戏,作业很晚才写,第二天上课打瞌睡。成绩也下降了。请你给他写一封信,给他一些建议。
要点:
1. 指出他目前存在的问题(玩游戏时间太长、影响学习和休息);
2. 给他提出两到三条具体建议(如控制游戏时间、先完成作业再玩);
3. 表达你对他改变习惯的信心和鼓励。
TASK: Your friend Xiao Ming is addicted to playing mobile games. Write him a letter to give him some advice.
教师思路精讲
这是一封给朋友的建议信,语气要真诚、温暖,不能高高在上地说教。教师应引导学生先表达对朋友的关心,再委婉地指出问题。然后用“你可以试试……”的方式给出具体建议,而不是“你应该……”。建议要简单可行,比如“先做作业再玩游戏”“设一个30分钟的闹钟”。最后要鼓励朋友,表达相信他能做到的信心。结构:第一段表达关心并指出问题;第二段给出两到三条具体建议;第三段鼓励并表达支持。
写作要点分析
1. 书信格式:称呼(Dear Xiao Ming)、正文、结尾(Your friend / Yours sincerely)、署名。
2. 语气温和:用“I noticed that...”“Maybe you could try...”等委婉表达。
3. 三个要点:①指出问题及其影响;②两到三条具体建议;③鼓励与支持。
重要句型和词组
· I am writing to you because I care about you as a good friend.
· I noticed that you have been playing mobile games a lot lately.
· Playing games is fun, but too much of it can cause problems.
· You often stay up late playing games, and then you feel tired in class.
· Here are some suggestions that might help you.
· First, try to finish your homework before you start playing games.
· Second, set a timer for 30 minutes and stop when it rings.
· Third, find other fun things to do, like playing basketball or reading.
· I believe you can find a balance between fun and study.
· I am always here to support you.
高分范文
Dear Xiao Ming,
I am writing to you because I care about you as a good friend. I noticed that you have been playing mobile games a lot lately. Every day after school, you go straight to your phone and play for hours. You told me that you often stay up late playing games, and then you feel tired and sleepy in class the next day. Your grades have also been dropping. I am a little worried about you.
Playing games is fun, but too much of it can cause real problems. Here are some suggestions that might help you. First, try to finish all your homework before you start playing. When your homework is done, you can play without feeling guilty. Second, set a timer for 30 minutes before you start a game. When the timer rings, stop and put the phone away. This will help you control your playtime. Third, find other fun things to do, like playing basketball with me or reading an interesting book.
I know you can find a balance between fun and study. You are a smart person, and I believe in you. If you ever need someone to talk to or play basketball with, just call me. I am always here to support you.
Your friend,
Li Wei
题目二(倡议书)
题目: 学校图书馆里,有些同学大声说话、在书上乱画、甚至撕掉书页。请你以学生会名义写一份倡议书,号召同学们文明使用图书馆。
要点:
1. 指出图书馆里存在的不文明行为(大声说话、损坏图书等);
2. 说明这些行为带来的坏处(影响他人阅读、破坏公共资源);
3. 提出三项具体建议(如保持安静、爱护图书、看完放回原处)。
TASK: Write a proposal to call on your schoolmates to behave well in the school library.
教师思路精讲
这是一份倡议书,旨在引导同学们文明使用公共资源。教师应引导学生先描述不文明行为的具体表现(如“有人在图书馆里大声说话”“有人在书上画画”),并用“如果每个人都这样……”的方式说明后果。然后正面提出文明行为的标准(安静、爱护、归位)。建议要具体、易执行。语气要诚恳、有号召力,但不要过于严厉。结构:第一段指出不文明行为及其危害;第二段说明文明使用图书馆的重要性;第三段提出三项具体建议并呼吁。
写作要点分析
1. 倡议书格式:标题(如“Proposal: Be a Civilized Library User”)、称呼(Dear fellow students)、正文、署名和日期。
2. 对比说明:先说不好行为及其后果,再用正面建议引导。
3. 三个要点:①不文明行为及其坏处;②文明使用的重要性;③三项具体建议。
重要句型和词组
· The school library is a great place for us to read and learn.
· However, some students do not behave well in the library.
· Some talk loudly, which disturbs others who are trying to concentrate.
· Others write or draw on the books, or even tear out pages.
· These behaviors are not fair to other students who want to use the books.
· A good library user should be quiet, careful, and respectful.
· Here are three rules we should all follow.
· First, keep your voice down. Do not disturb others.
· Second, treat every book with care. Never write or draw in them.
· Third, after reading, put the book back where you found it.
· Let’s work together to keep our library a quiet and clean place for everyone.
高分范文
Proposal: Be a Civilized Library User
Dear fellow students,
The school library is a wonderful place for us to read, study, and explore new knowledge. It is quiet and full of books waiting to be opened. However, I am sad to say that some students do not behave well in the library. Some talk loudly on their phones or chat with friends, which disturbs others who are trying to concentrate on their reading. Others write or draw on the books, bend the pages, or even tear out pages. This damages the books and makes them unpleasant for the next reader.
These behaviors are not fair to other students who want to use the library. The library belongs to all of us, and we should share it with respect. Being quiet and careful is not just about following rules — it is about showing respect for others and for public property. A good library user is quiet, careful, and responsible.
Here are three simple rules we should all follow. First, keep your voice down. If you need to talk, whisper or go outside. Second, treat every book with care. Never write, draw, or tear pages. If you see a damaged book, report it to the librarian. Third, after reading, put the book back exactly where you found it. This helps others find it easily. Let’s work together to keep our library a quiet, clean, and welcoming place for everyone. Remember, a small act of good behavior makes a big difference.
Student Council
April 30, 2026
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