Unit 5 Saving animals in danger 书面表达10篇（单元话题：动物保护）-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（沪教版）

**基本信息** 聚焦“动物保护”单元主题，设计10篇梯度化书面表达题，覆盖基础巩固与重难提升，适配初中英语单元复习，强化语言运用与跨文化意识。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|10篇|动物保护相关词汇、句型，不同文体（征文/倡议书/演讲稿）结构|情境贴近社会热点，如世界野生动植物日、学校专栏征稿；基础题（如“How to protect endangered animals”）夯实要点表述，重难题（如思维导图演讲稿）提升逻辑与创新思维，契合语言能力与思维品质培养需求。|

Unit 5 Saving animals in danger 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 动物保护 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．根据要求完成作文，词数：80~90词。 为了增强学生们保护动物的意识，学校英文杂志开设了“保护濒危动物”专栏，现在面向全校学生征稿。你对这个话题很感兴趣吗？请以“How to protect endangered animals”为题，写一篇短文，向该杂志投稿。 要点提示： 1. What kinds of animals are endangered? 2. Why are the animals endangered? (至少两条) 3. What should we do to protect these endangered animals? (至少两条) 注意： 1. 短文内容须包含所有要点，语意通顺连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息。 How to Protect Endangered Animals ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．结合拯救濒危生物的核心话题，选择亚洲象/大熊猫/丹顶鹤（任选其一），参考课文《Our huge friend—the Asian elephant》的结构，写一篇不少于60词的短文。 要求： 包含动物的外貌、食物/栖息地、现状（濒危原因）、保护意义； 语句通顺，条理清晰。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．大熊猫是我国的国宝，你对大熊猫了解多少呢？请你以“Pandas—the national treasure”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍一下大熊猫。 内容包括： 1. 大熊猫的基本情况； 2. 大熊猫数量减少的原因； 3. 保护大熊猫的措施和建议。 要求: 1. 语法正确，语义连贯； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名或校名； 3. 80词左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 Pandas—the national treasure ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，学校英语角将举办“Saving wild animals”主题分享活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 提示： 1. 现在很多野生动物处于濒危状态，它们是人类的朋友； 2. 濒危原因：失去家园、没有足够食物、被人类猎杀； 3. 我们的行动：保护森林、不购买动物制品、加入动物保护组织。 要求： 1. 包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80词左右，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving wild animals Now many wild animals are in danger. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是学校“自然保护俱乐部”的成员，近期你了解到某种濒危动物的生存现状令人担忧。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英文网站上，呼吁同学们共同保护该动物。内容包括： 1.描述该动物的外貌特征及生活习性； 2.说明其濒危的原因； 3.提出具体的保护建议。 要求： 1.80—120词，题目已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文章不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Protect Our Animal Friends ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语报的“人与自然”栏目正在以保护野生动物为话题征文，请你给该专栏投稿。 内容包括： （1）野生动物濒危的原因； （2）我们应该怎样保护野生动物（2—3点）； （3）呼吁人们保护野生动物，与动物和谐相处。 作文要求： （1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear editors, Many wild animals around the world are in danger. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We should live with wild animals in peace. Yours, Li Ming 7．3月3日是世界野生动植物日，旨在提高公众对野生动植物保护的意识。假如你是李辉，你们学校论坛上正在征集How to Protect Wild Animals and Plants的帖子。请你写一篇英文帖子，倡议大家保护野生动植物。 内容包括： （1）保护野生动植物的重要性； （2）保护野生动植物的方法； （3）倡议大家保护野生动植物。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物。假如你参加此次活动，请根据写作要点提示完成演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. What situation are the blue whales in? (very few blue whales, die ... ) 2. Why are they in such a situation? 3. How to protect them? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：die out灭绝；throw litter扔垃圾；try one’s best尽力 Dear my friends, As we all know, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 重难语篇练习 9．为纪念世界动物日，学校英语广播站将举办“Protecting Endangered Animals”主题演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示，并结合自身思考，写一篇演讲稿，向同学们传递保护濒危动物的重要性。 要求：（1）演讲稿必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 参考词汇：endangered 濒临灭绝的 Protecting Endangered Animals Boys and girls, Good morning! Today, I’d like to talk about protecting endangered animals. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 10．某英语报社针对人类为了自己的利益对动物滥捕滥杀，而导致越来越多的动物濒临灭绝的现象，举行“How to Protect the Wild Animals”为题的征文大赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。文章要包括以下几个要点。 1.如今，世界上的许多野生动物正处于危险中，这儿有很多原因。 人们砍伐树木，动物们没有地方可住。因为水污染问题，这儿没有足够干净的水可以喝。人们为了钱、皮毛、肉等而杀害动物。 2.动物是我们的朋友，我们应该与动物和平生活，因此保护动物是非常重要的。 我们该如何保护动物呢？首先，没有买卖就没有杀害，因此我们必须阻止人们杀害动物。其次，我们可以筹款去保护动物，同时，我们应该爱护环境。最后，为了保护野生动物，政府应该建立更多的自然公园并制定其他计划。 3.想起野生动物处于危险中是令人伤心的。但是如果我们可以做一些事情去帮助它们，地球上将会有更多的野生动物，世界也会更美丽。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Saving animals in danger 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 动物保护 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．根据要求完成作文，词数：80~90词。 为了增强学生们保护动物的意识，学校英文杂志开设了“保护濒危动物”专栏，现在面向全校学生征稿。你对这个话题很感兴趣吗？请以“How to protect endangered animals”为题，写一篇短文，向该杂志投稿。 要点提示： 1. What kinds of animals are endangered? 2. Why are the animals endangered? (至少两条) 3. What should we do to protect these endangered animals? (至少两条) 注意： 1. 短文内容须包含所有要点，语意通顺连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息。 How to Protect Endangered Animals ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to protect endangered animals Many wild animals like pandas and tigers are now endangered. They are facing the danger of disappearing forever.   There are two key reasons for this problem. First, people cut down too many trees, which destroys their natural homes. Second, some people hunt animals illegally for money, making their numbers drop quickly.   To save them, we should take action at once. We must set up nature reserves to protect animals and stop people from hunting. Let’s work together to keep the balance of nature. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：列举濒危动物、说明濒危原因(至少两条)、提出保护措施(至少两条) 确定人称：第一人称(we) 注意事项：无真实信息   [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：承接标题，列举濒危动物 主体段：分述动物濒危的原因 结尾段：提出保护濒危动物的措施   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：濒危动物类型 内容：pandas/tigers/golden monkeys/face disappearance risk等   要点二：濒危原因 原因1：cut down trees/destroy natural homes/water pollution/air pollution等 原因2：illegal hunting for money/reduce animal numbers/nature disaster等   要点三：保护措施 措施1：set up nature reserves/protect habitats/protect environment等 措施2：stop illegal hunting/spread protection awareness/habitat restoration等 2．结合拯救濒危生物的核心话题，选择亚洲象/大熊猫/丹顶鹤（任选其一），参考课文《Our huge friend—the Asian elephant》的结构，写一篇不少于60词的短文。 要求： 包含动物的外貌、食物/栖息地、现状（濒危原因）、保护意义； 语句通顺，条理清晰。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Giant Panda The giant panda is a famous rare animal in China. It has black and white fur and looks very cute. It mainly lives in the forests of Sichuan and eats bamboo every day. However, giant pandas are in great danger now. People cut down the bamboo forests, so they lose their homes. Protecting giant pandas is very important. They are our national treasure and a symbol of China, and they help keep the balance of nature. We should protect them by building more nature reserves. Let’s work together to save these lovely animals. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时 明确要点：动物的外貌、食物/栖息地、现状（濒危原因）、保护意义 确定人称：第三人称（It/they） 注意事项：词数不少于60，语句通顺，条理清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：介绍动物的外貌、食物/栖息地 第二段：介绍该动物濒危的原因及保护意义 第三段：介绍保护措施 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：动物基本介绍 动物选择：giant panda/Asian elephant等 外貌描述：black and white fur/looks very cute/a long trunk, big ears and strong legs/Its skin is thick and grey等 栖息地介绍：mainly lives in the forests of Sichuan/mainly live in the forests of Asia等 食物选择：bamboo/plants, fruits and grass等 要点二：现状及保护意义 现状描述：in great danger/lose their homes/their living places are becoming smaller and smaller等 原因描述：People cut down the bamboo forests/People cut down too many trees等 保护意义：They are our national treasure/a symbol of China/help keep the balance of nature/They are important to the ecosystem/they are our friends等 3．大熊猫是我国的国宝，你对大熊猫了解多少呢？请你以“Pandas—the national treasure”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍一下大熊猫。 内容包括： 1. 大熊猫的基本情况； 2. 大熊猫数量减少的原因； 3. 保护大熊猫的措施和建议。 要求: 1. 语法正确，语义连贯； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名或校名； 3. 80词左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)。 Pandas—the national treasure ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Pandas—the national treasure Pandas are China’s national treasure. They have lovely black-and-white fur, live mainly in Sichuan, and feed mostly on bamboo. They are so cute that people around the world love them. However, pandas are in great danger. People cut down bamboo forests, so pandas lose their homes and food. Some people even hunt them illegally for profit, making their numbers drop sharply. To protect pandas, our government has built many nature reserves. We should also stop cutting down bamboo forests and never buy panda-related products. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：大熊猫的基本情况、数量减少的原因、保护大熊猫的措施和建议 确定人称：第三人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数控制在80词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，介绍大熊猫的基本情况 (外形、栖息地、食性、受欢迎程度) 主体段：分析大熊猫数量减少的原因 (栖息地破坏、非法捕猎) 结尾段：提出保护措施，发出倡议，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：大熊猫的基本情况 外形特征：lovely black-and-white fur 栖息地：live mainly in Sichuan 食性：feed mostly on bamboo 受欢迎程度：so cute that people around the world love them 要点二：大熊猫数量减少的原因 栖息地丧失：People cut down bamboo forests, so pandas lose their homes and food 非法捕猎：Some people even hunt them illegally for profit, making their numbers drop sharply 要点三：保护大熊猫的措施和建议 政府措施：our government has built many nature reserves 个人行动：stop cutting down bamboo forests and never buy panda-related products 4．假设你是李华，学校英语角将举办“Saving wild animals”主题分享活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 提示： 1. 现在很多野生动物处于濒危状态，它们是人类的朋友； 2. 濒危原因：失去家园、没有足够食物、被人类猎杀； 3. 我们的行动：保护森林、不购买动物制品、加入动物保护组织。 要求： 1. 包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80词左右，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving wild animals Now many wild animals are in danger. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Saving wild animals Now many wild animals are in danger. They are our friends and we live on the same earth with them. They are in danger because they lose their homes, don’t have enough food and are hunted by people. We should do something to help them. First, we should protect forests and give animals safe homes. Second, we mustn’t buy any products made of animal fur or ivory. Third, we can join animal protection clubs. Let’s work together and take action now to save wild animals around the world! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文（呼吁保护野生动物），以一般现在时为主（阐述现状、原因及措施） 明确要点：野生动物的濒危现状、濒危原因（栖息地丧失、食物不足、人类捕猎）、保护措施（护林、拒买动物制品、加入保护组织）、呼吁行动 确定人称：第一人称（we） 注意事项：聚焦“保护野生动物”的紧迫性，逻辑清晰，传递责任意识   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明野生动物濒危现状，强调其与人类的共生关系（朋友、共居地球） 主体段1：分析野生动物濒危的三大原因（失家园、缺食物、被捕猎） 主体段2：提出三大保护措施（护林、拒买动物制品、加入保护俱乐部） 结尾段：呼吁共同行动，拯救全球野生动物   [要点展开] 要点一：现状与共生关系   现状：many wild animals are in danger 关系：they are our friends, live on the same earth with us 要点二：濒危原因   原因1：lose their homes 原因2：don’t have enough food 原因3：are hunted by people 要点三：保护措施   措施1：protect forests, give animals safe homes 措施2：mustn’t buy products made of animal fur or ivory 措施3：join animal protection clubs 要点四：呼吁行动   呼吁：work together and take action now to save wild animals around the world 5．假设你是学校“自然保护俱乐部”的成员，近期你了解到某种濒危动物的生存现状令人担忧。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英文网站上，呼吁同学们共同保护该动物。内容包括： 1.描述该动物的外貌特征及生活习性； 2.说明其濒危的原因； 3.提出具体的保护建议。 要求： 1.80—120词，题目已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文章不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Protect Our Animal Friends ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Protect Our Animal Friends The giant panda is one of the most beloved animals in the world. It has soft black-and-white fur and loves eating bamboo. Sadly, pandas are endangered because of human activities and climate change. To protect these amazing creatures, we need to take action. We should plant more bamboo forests and avoid buying products that harm their environment. If we do nothing, these gentle animals may disappear forever, and our planet will lose part of its beauty. Let’s take action now! Even small steps, such as reducing waste and telling others about panda protection, can make a big difference. Remember, every small effort counts. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为一般现在时，用于客观介绍大熊猫特征、现状及保护措施；   ③提示：写作要点清晰，围绕大熊猫的特点、濒危原因及保护行动展开，逻辑连贯，可适当补充细节强化呼吁效果，突出“保护熊猫”的核心主旨。   [写作步骤]   第一步，先介绍大熊猫的外形、习性等基本特征，再点明其濒危现状及背后原因。   第二步，接着提出具体的保护措施，最后发出呼吁，强调微小行动的重要性，升华主题。   [亮点词汇]   ①giant panda大熊猫   ②endangered濒危的   ③make a big difference产生很大影响   [高分句型]   ①Sadly, pandas are endangered because of human activities and climate change.（because of 引导原因状语，后接名词短语，简洁明了说明濒危原因）   ②If we do nothing, these gentle animals may disappear forever, and our planet will lose part of its beauty.（if 引导条件状语从句，表假设，增强呼吁的紧迫感） 6．假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语报的“人与自然”栏目正在以保护野生动物为话题征文，请你给该专栏投稿。 内容包括： （1）野生动物濒危的原因； （2）我们应该怎样保护野生动物（2—3点）； （3）呼吁人们保护野生动物，与动物和谐相处。 作文要求： （1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 （2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear editors, Many wild animals around the world are in danger. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We should live with wild animals in peace. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】 例文 Dear editors, Many wild animals around the world are in danger. There are two main reasons for this. First, their homes are destroyed by human activities like cutting down forests. Second, some people hunt them for money. To protect these animals, we should take action immediately. We can build more nature reserves to give them safe places to live. Also, we must stop buying products made from wild animals. Let’s work together to protect wildlife. Remember, every animal is important to our world. We should live with wild animals in peace. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于野生动物濒危原因、保护措施以及呼吁保护的内容要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接阐述许多野生动物处于危险中这一现象，引出后文对原因和保护措施的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“野生动物濒危的原因”“保护野生动物的措施”两个方面重点介绍具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。呼吁人们保护野生动物，与动物和谐相处。 [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险中 ②cut down砍倒 ③hunt...for...为……而猎杀…… ④take action采取行动 ⑤nature reserves自然保护区 [高分句型] ①There are two main reasons for this.（“There be”句型） ②Also, we must stop buying products made from wild animals.（动名词作宾语） 7．3月3日是世界野生动植物日，旨在提高公众对野生动植物保护的意识。假如你是李辉，你们学校论坛上正在征集How to Protect Wild Animals and Plants的帖子。请你写一篇英文帖子，倡议大家保护野生动植物。 内容包括： （1）保护野生动植物的重要性； （2）保护野生动植物的方法； （3）倡议大家保护野生动植物。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Protect Wild Animals and Plants Animals are our good friends. Humans and animals depend on plants. Wild animals and plants play an important role in the ecosystem of our planet. But they are in great danger. It’s necessary to protect them. Here are some ways to protect them. First, we should protect the environment. We should plant more trees. Second, we shouldn’t kill wild animals. We mustn’t buy things made of wild animals. Third, we should tell more people to protect wild animals and plants. All in all, it’s important to protect wild animals and plants. Let’s protect wild animals and plants. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为一般现在时； ③提示：需涵盖重要性、保护方法和倡议三部分。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山说明野生动植物的重要性，强调环境健康； 第二步，列举三条具体保护方法，使用祈使句简洁明了； 第三步，用号召性语言鼓励行动。 [亮点词汇] ①depend on依靠 ②play an important role in在……中发挥重要作用 ③All in all总而言之 [高分句型] ①Here are some ways to protect them.（倒装句） ②Let’s protect wild animals and plants.（祈使句） 8．你校英文报“人与自然”栏目对蓝鲸进行了报道，并决定在校内组织一次英语演讲活动，以此呼吁大家从小事做起，保护动物。假如你参加此次活动，请根据写作要点提示完成演讲稿。 写作要点： 1. What situation are the blue whales in? (very few blue whales, die ... ) 2. Why are they in such a situation? 3. How to protect them? 要求： 1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：die out灭绝；throw litter扔垃圾；try one’s best尽力 Dear my friends, As we all know, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear my friends, As we all know, blue whales live in the deep sea and are the largest animals in the world. They feed on small fishes in the sea. Sadly, they are in danger now. There are very few blue whales left. They are dying out. There are some reasons. People are taking away their homes, so blue whales have fewer safe places to live. People kill them for different uses. People also kill other sea animals, so they don’t have enough food. In order to protect blue whales in the wild, we should make plans. Firstly, we shouldn’t throw litter into the sea. Secondly, we should stop people from killing them. We can do this by not buying things made of whales. At last, we can think of as many other ways as possible to protect sea animals. I really hope that we can try our best to save them! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇英语演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：需包含蓝鲸的处境、处境形成的原因以及保护措施等信息，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、连贯，词数约80词，开头已给出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，说明蓝鲸的现状； 第二步，阐述蓝鲸处于危险处境的原因； 第三步，提出保护蓝鲸的具体措施，并呼吁大家尽力保护它们； [亮点词汇] ①in danger处于危险中 ②die out灭绝 ③try one’s best尽力 [高分句型] ①Sadly, they are in danger now. There are very few blue whales left. They are dying out. (“in danger”“die out”短语的运用，清晰说明蓝鲸的处境) ②People are taking away their homes, so blue whales have fewer safe places to live. (“so”引导结果状语从句，说明人类行为对蓝鲸的影响) ③In order to protect blue whales in the wild, we should make plans. (“in order to”表目的，引出保护蓝鲸的举措) ④I really hope that we can try our best to save them! (“hope that”引导宾语从句，表达希望) 重难语篇练习 9．为纪念世界动物日，学校英语广播站将举办“Protecting Endangered Animals”主题演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示，并结合自身思考，写一篇演讲稿，向同学们传递保护濒危动物的重要性。 要求：（1）演讲稿必须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥； （2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。 参考词汇：endangered 濒临灭绝的 Protecting Endangered Animals Boys and girls, Good morning! Today, I’d like to talk about protecting endangered animals. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you. 【答案】例文： Protecting Endangered AnimalsBoys and girls, Good morning! Today, I’d like to talk about protecting endangered animals. Now many endangered animals are in great danger. They are our good friends—some help keep the environment balanced, like pandas and tigers. Protecting them is also protecting ourselves, because a world without these animals will be very boring. We can do small things to help. First, stop cutting down forests, as they are animals’ homes. Second, tell more people about the importance of saving endangered animals. Let’s work together to give these animals a safe home! Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已通过思维导图给出，包括濒危动物的现状、保护它们的重要性以及我们可以采取的行动。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，以突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过提及“Today, I’d like to talk about protecting endangered animals”来引出主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先描述濒危动物的现状，接着阐述保护它们的重要性，最后提出我们可以采取的行动； 第三步，书写结语。通过“Let’s work together to give these animals a safe home!”表达共同保护濒危动物的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①in great danger 处于极大危险之中 ②keep the environment balanced 保持环境平衡 ③work together 共同努力 [高分句型] Protecting them is also protecting ourselves, because a world without these animals will be very boring.（原因状语从句） 10．某英语报社针对人类为了自己的利益对动物滥捕滥杀，而导致越来越多的动物濒临灭绝的现象，举行“How to Protect the Wild Animals”为题的征文大赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。文章要包括以下几个要点。 1.如今，世界上的许多野生动物正处于危险中，这儿有很多原因。 人们砍伐树木，动物们没有地方可住。因为水污染问题，这儿没有足够干净的水可以喝。人们为了钱、皮毛、肉等而杀害动物。 2.动物是我们的朋友，我们应该与动物和平生活，因此保护动物是非常重要的。 我们该如何保护动物呢？首先，没有买卖就没有杀害，因此我们必须阻止人们杀害动物。其次，我们可以筹款去保护动物，同时，我们应该爱护环境。最后，为了保护野生动物，政府应该建立更多的自然公园并制定其他计划。 3.想起野生动物处于危险中是令人伤心的。但是如果我们可以做一些事情去帮助它们，地球上将会有更多的野生动物，世界也会更美丽。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： How to Protect the Wild Animals     Let’s talk about some ways to protect the wild animals. Today, many wild animals in the world are in danger. There are many reasons for this. People cut down trees, so animals lose their homes. Water pollution also means there is not enough clean water for them to drink. Worst of all, people kill animals for money, for their fur, for meat, and for other things. Animals are our friends. We should live peacefully with them. So, protecting animals is very important. How can we protect them? First, we must stop people from killing wild animals. Remember, no buying, no killing! Second, we can raise money to help protect animals. At the same time, we should take good care of our environment. Finally, governments should build more nature parks and make other plans to protect wild animals. It is sad to think about wild animals in danger. But if we can do something to help them, there will be more wild animals living happily on Earth, and our world will become a more beautiful place. Let’s all work together to protect our animal friends!    I hope these ideas will help the wild animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍野生动物处于危险的原因； 第二步，介绍如何保护动物； 第三步，表达感受并号召大家保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down砍倒 ②worst of all最糟糕的是 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①Water pollution also means there is not enough clean water for them to drink. (宾语从句) ②But if we can do something to help them, there will be more wild animals living happily on Earth, and our world will become a more beautiful place.  (if引导的条件状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $