内容正文:
仁爱八下unit 12作文专练
my favorite story character
题目一(推荐信)
题目: 学校图书馆正在举办“我最喜欢的书中角色”推荐活动,请你给图书馆负责老师写一封推荐信,推荐一个你最喜欢的故事角色。信中需要:
1. 介绍这个角色出自哪本书(或电影/故事)、作者是谁,以及角色的基本特点(性格、外貌等);
2. 讲述这个角色在故事中的一次精彩表现或成长经历(他/她做了什么、遇到了什么困难、如何克服的);
3. 说明你推荐这个角色的理由(他/她教会了你什么道理,或为什么值得其他同学认识)。
教师思路精讲
这是一封推荐信,要求学生为喜欢的角色“代言”。教师应引导学生选择一个自己真正了解且有话说的角色(如哈利·波特、孙悟空、夏洛、小王子等)。先介绍角色的出处和基本特点,让读者知道“他是谁”。然后讲一个具体的故事片段,展示角色的闪光点(勇敢、善良、聪明、坚持等)。最后说明推荐理由——这个角色对你产生了什么影响,或者能给其他同学带来什么启发。结构:第一段介绍角色及出处;第二段讲述角色的精彩经历;第三段说明推荐理由。
写作要点分析
1. 推荐信格式:称呼(Dear Librarian / Dear teacher)、正文、结尾(Yours sincerely)、署名。
2. 角色生动:用形容词描述性格(brave, kind, clever, determined),用具体事例证明。
3. 三个要点:①角色出处、作者、基本特点;②一次精彩表现或成长经历;③推荐理由(至少两点)。
重要句型和词组
· I am writing to recommend my favorite story character to your “Favorite Book Character” activity.
· My favorite character is... from the book... written by...
· He/She is... (brave / kind / clever / humorous / strong-willed)
· Let me tell you what makes this character so special.
· In the story, he/she once faced a great challenge: ...
· Many people would have given up, but he/she...
· Because of this experience, he/she learned that...
· I recommend this character for two reasons.
· First, he/she teaches us that... (courage / kindness / never giving up)
· Second, his/her story shows us that... (everyone can grow / friendship matters)
· I believe every student should meet this wonderful character.
高分范文
Dear Librarian,
I am writing to recommend my favorite story character to your “Favorite Book Character” activity. My favorite character is Charlotte from the book Charlotte’s Web, written by E.B. White. Charlotte is a kind, wise, and loyal spider who lives in a barn.
Let me tell you what makes Charlotte so special. In the story, her friend Wilbur the pig is going to be killed for Christmas dinner. Wilbur is scared and hopeless. But Charlotte, despite being just a small spider, decides to save him. She spins words like “Some Pig” and “Terrific” into her web above Wilbur’s pen. The farmer sees these amazing webs and thinks Wilbur is a special pig. Because of Charlotte’s cleverness and hard work, Wilbur is saved. Charlotte never gives up, even when she is very tired.
I recommend Charlotte for two reasons. First, she teaches us that true friendship means doing hard things for others without expecting anything in return. Second, she shows us that even a small creature can make a big difference if she uses her talents wisely. I believe every student should meet this wonderful character and learn from her kindness and loyalty.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Mei
题目二(邀请函)
题目: 学校话剧社准备将一部含有你喜欢角色的故事改编成话剧,正在招募小演员和观众。请你给你的好朋友王芳写一封邀请函,邀请她一起参加这次活动。信中需要:
1. 介绍这部剧的名字和你最喜欢的角色(角色特点、为什么吸引你);
2. 讲述这个角色在故事中的一个经典场景(发生了什么、角色说了什么或做了什么);
3. 告知活动的时间和地点(本周六下午2点,学校礼堂),说明活动内容(观看话剧/参与角色讨论/学习表演技巧等),并表达你希望和她一起参加的愿望。
教师思路精讲
这是一封邀请好朋友参加话剧活动的邀请函,语气要热情、兴奋。教师应引导学生先介绍剧名和角色,说出你喜欢这个角色的原因(善良、勇敢、有趣等)。然后讲一个经典场景,可以用一点点对话或动作描写,让朋友也对这个角色产生兴趣。最后说清活动的时间、地点和内容,并表达想和朋友一起去的愿望。结构:第一段介绍剧名和喜欢的角色;第二段讲述角色的一个经典场景;第三段告知活动信息并邀请同行。
写作要点分析
1. 邀请函格式:称呼(Dear Wang Fang)、正文、结尾(Yours sincerely / Your friend)、署名。
2. 场景生动:用对话或动作描写还原经典场景,让读者有画面感。
3. 三个要点:①剧名、角色名称及角色特点;②角色的一个经典场景;③活动时间、地点、内容及邀请意愿。
重要句型和词组
· I have exciting news! Our school drama club is putting on a play based on... (the story of Mulan)
· I know you love this story too, so I want to invite you to come with me.
· My favorite character in this story is... She/He is...
· What I love most about him/her is that... (never gives up / always helps others)
· Let me tell you about a famous scene. In this part, ...
· The character says, “...” That line always gives me chills.
· The play will be held this Saturday at 2:00 p.m. in the school auditorium.
· After the play, there will be a discussion where we can talk about our favorite characters.
· We can also learn some acting tips from the drama teacher.
· I really hope you can come with me. It will be so much fun to enjoy it together!
高分范文
Dear Wang Fang,
I have exciting news! Our school drama club is putting on a play based on the story of Mulan. I know you love this story too, so I want to invite you to come with me.
My favorite character in this story is, of course, Mulan herself. She is brave, clever, and full of love for her family. What I love most about her is that she never gives up, even when everyone doubts her. Let me tell you about a famous scene. In this part, Mulan has been discovered as a girl in the army. She is left behind in the snow, cold and alone. But instead of going home, she says to herself, “I will never give up. I will save China.” Then she climbs the mountain alone and starts an avalanche that defeats the enemy. That line always gives me chills! Mulan teaches me that courage is not about being fearless — it’s about doing the right thing even when you are afraid.
The play will be held this Saturday at 2:00 p.m. in the school auditorium. After the play, there will be a discussion where we can talk about our favorite characters and scenes. We can even learn some acting tips from the drama teacher. I really hope you can come with me. It will be so much fun to enjoy it together! Let me know if you can make it.
Your friend,
Li Hua
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