内容正文:
Unit 2 Stay Healthy 第6课时
学一篇
Imagine you are the school nurse. A student named Gina writes to you, saying she often has a stomachache because of bad eating habits. Write a letter to her and share some advice on what she should and shouldn’t do.
✅审题不变:应用文(书信)、第二人称、一般现在时、健康饮食+肠胃保护建议
高分范文
Dear Gina,
I’m sorry to hear that you often have a stomachache because of your eating habits. Don’t worry. I have some useful tips for you.
① First of all, you should eat three meals on time and stay away from cold or spicy food. Then, remember not to eat too much snack or fast food. If you feel hungry, you can eat some fresh fruit. ② In this way, your stomach will get better little by little. What’s more, drink enough warm water every day. ③ As the saying goes, “The first wealth is health.”
By following these tips, you will feel better soon!
Yours,
The school nurse
句子升格
① First of all, forming a good eating habit is the key to keeping healthy.(动名词作主语)
② This method can help you protect your stomach effectively.(stay away from同义替换)
③ As the old saying goes, health is the most important thing for us.
通一类
理结构
结构 原内容 改编替换(健康/急救主题)
开头(引出话题) I’m sorry to hear that… I’m sorry to know that you… / It’s bad to hear that you…
正文(提建议) First/Second/Third… To begin with… / Besides… / Last but not least…
结尾(祝福) I hope you will… Wish you a healthy life! / Hope my advice works for you.
理词汇
• 身体不适:have a stomachache / feel sick / have a headache / fall down
• 健康习惯:eat on time / keep away from junk food / exercise often / get enough sleep
• 急救/健康:ask for help / keep calm / do CPR / stay safe
学句式
1. You’d better… / You should/shouldn’t…(提建议核心句型)
2. It’s important for you to…(不定式作主语)
3. If you…, you will…(条件状语从句)
佳句积累(原题句子改编,保留核心语法)
提出建议
1. If you develop a healthy eating habit, your body will become stronger.(改编原题3a)
2. To keep your stomach healthy, you should stop eating cold food every day.(改编不定式作目的状语)
3. You should do sports outside instead of staying at home all day.(改编instead of用法)
4. One of the best ways to stay healthy is to have enough sleep.(改编one of…最高级)
表达祝愿&名言
1. Remember that your body is your best friend.(改编宾语从句)
2. If you stick to these rules, you will be healthier.(改编if条件句)
3. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.(保留经典谚语)
4. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.(保留经典谚语)
教材写作变式(改编原题作文情境,保留80词、要点、格式要求)
写作任务
当下,很多同学因为缺乏锻炼、爱吃垃圾食品导致身体素质变差。你是李华,校英文报“Healthy Life”栏目正在征稿,请你写一篇短文投稿,谈谈如何养成健康的生活习惯。
注意:
1. 包含:饮食、运动、作息三方面建议;
2. 词数80左右;
3. 无真实人名、校名。
参考范文(适配改编题)
Healthy Life
Nowadays, many students have bad living habits and they often feel tired. It’s important for us to have a healthy life.
First, we should eat healthy food like fruit and vegetables, and keep away from junk food. Second, we need to exercise for 30 minutes every day, such as running or playing ball games. Besides, we must get enough sleep and never stay up late.
As the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” Let’s develop good habits and keep healthy!
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