2026届高三英语读后续写专项---海边漫步，治愈时光 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My nine-year-old daughter looked up at me, hoping I would join her for a walk on the beach. But my never-ending to-do list jumped instantly, and my eyes drifted to the dinner dishes piled high in the sink, a silent refusal forming in my mind. I planned to tell her we could go tomorrow—I had to wash the dishes, and the whole day’s busyness exhausted me. Staring at her eager eyes, I remembered making the same excuse the night before, and I could not help but notice the disappointment in her eyes. It was our first summer living by the beach, and my daughter’s love for the beach was far beyond my imagination. Spending the entire day playing in the sand and waves was never enough for her. She whispered that summer was slipping away, and I knew she was right— summer in New England was always short, and if I kept putting it off, we might miss it entirely. Finally, I told her we could go but only for a quick walk. She rushed to put on her flip-flops (拖鞋). As we walked along the shoreline, she stopped now and then to gaze at the beach beneath her feet and the sky in the distance. She would glance at the setting sun and the beautiful pink-and-orange sky. But my mind was always elsewhere, barely noticing the beautiful scenery around us. After just fifteen minutes, I urged her to head back home. My attitude did not change at all over the next week. Every night, I accompanied her along the beach walk unwillingly, never truly calming down to enjoy the moment. To me, it was just another task I had to finish, bringing no joy at all. Then one day, everything changed. As we approached the dunes (沙丘), the color of the sky began to shift gradually. When we reached a place, a breathtaking sunset unfolded before our eyes— shades of orange, yellow, and red lit up the sky like a natural painting. My daughter and I stood there in surprise, all my restlessness and impatience fading away in that very moment. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next evening, instead of fearing the beach walk, I turned to my daughter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ From that evening on, our beach walks were no longer a task. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author was busy with daily chores and refused daughter’s beach walk invitation--- _________________ --- the author agreed to a short beach walk reluctantly--- _________________ --- the author regarded beach walks as a boring task for a week--- _________________ --- a stunning sunset changed the author’s mood completely--- _________________ 4. 细节问答 Why did the author want to refuse her daughter’s invitation at first? ： ___________________________________ What did the author notice in her daughter’s eyes?： _________________________________ Why did the daughter cherish the beach walk so much?： ________________________________________________ How did the author feel about beach walks in the following week?： __________________________________________ What made the author’s restlessness fade away?： _____________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 日常琐事缠身的作者疲惫忙碌，想要拒绝女儿的海边散步请求→想起屡次推脱带来的失落，勉强答应短暂散步→连续一周作者都敷衍陪伴，将海边漫步视作任务、毫无乐趣→一次绝美海边日落震撼作者，驱散内心浮躁与不耐烦→（续写）作者主动邀约女儿散步，用心陪伴→（续写）海边散步成为治愈亲子时光，作者领悟陪伴与活在当下的意义 6．情感线 I：exhausted and impatient→___________→shocked and peaceful→___________（续写） Daughter：eager and disappointed→___________→joyful and warm 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 生活感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next evening, instead of fearing the beach walk, I turned to my daughter. 衔接句1——What did the author do? How did the daughter respond? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: From that evening on, our beach walks were no longer a task. 衔接句2——What changed in the author? What lesson did she learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天傍晚，我不再抵触海边散步，主动看向女儿。 →①我主动邀请女儿海边漫步，放下繁杂家务→②女儿欣喜万分，欢快奔赴海边→③我静心欣赏海景，享受专属亲子时光； 第二段：从那晚起，我们的海边散步不再是一项任务。 →①我卸下浮躁，用心陪伴女儿、感受生活美好→②短暂的海边时光治愈疲惫，温暖彼此→③领悟生活真谛：珍贵的陪伴胜过琐碎忙碌。 四.段落续写 The next evening, instead of fearing the beach walk, I turned to my daughter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ From that evening on, our beach walks were no longer a task. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（忙碌浮躁、后自我醒悟、懂得珍惜陪伴的母亲）；daughter（单纯热爱海边、珍惜亲子陪伴、温柔纯粹的孩子） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author was busy with daily chores and refused daughter’s beach walk invitation--- she noticed daughter’s disappointment and agreed to a short walk--- the author accompanied her daughter unwillingly for weeks and treated walking as a task--- they witnessed a gorgeous and breathtaking sunset--- the author’s restlessness faded and she gained new understanding of life 4. 细节问答 Why did the author want to refuse her daughter’s invitation at first? ：She was exhausted from endless housework and busy daily tasks. What did the author notice in her daughter’s eyes?：She noticed obvious disappointment in her daughter’s eyes. Why did the daughter cherish the beach walk so much?：Because the summer in New England was short and it was their first summer living by the beach. How did the author feel about beach walks in the following week?：She felt unwilling and regarded it as a tiring task with no joy. What made the author’s restlessness fade away?：A breathtaking and gorgeous sunset on the beach. What does the story tell us?：We should slow down our pace of life, put aside trivial busyness and cherish precious family companionship. 5．情节线 日常琐事缠身的作者疲惫忙碌，想要拒绝女儿的海边散步请求→想起屡次推脱带来的失落，勉强答应短暂散步→连续一周作者都敷衍陪伴，将海边漫步视作任务、毫无乐趣→一次绝美海边日落震撼作者，驱散内心浮躁与不耐烦→作者彻底醒悟，主动放下忙碌陪伴女儿散步→海边散步成为治愈身心的亲子美好时光，作者领悟陪伴的珍贵与生活的美好 6．情感线 I：exhausted and impatient→reluctant and restless→shocked and peaceful→grateful and serene Daughter：eager and disappointed→quiet and longing→joyful and warm 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：琐事缠身的母亲起初敷衍陪伴女儿海边散步，直至一场绝美的日落抚平她的浮躁，让她幡然醒悟，学会放慢生活节奏、珍惜珍贵的亲子陪伴与当下的美好。 英文：Burdened with endless housework, a mother accompanied her daughter’s beach walks reluctantly until a stunning sunset calmed her restlessness, teaching her to slow down and cherish precious family time. 8. 句式 状语从句：If I kept putting it off, we might miss it entirely. 非谓语动词：But my never-ending to-do list jumped instantly, and my eyes drifted to the dinner dishes piled high in the sink. 宾语从句：I knew she was right. 定语从句：It was our first summer living by the beach, and my daughter’s love for the beach was far beyond my imagination. 并列句：She would glance at the setting sun and the beautiful pink-and-orange sky. 9. 本文主题 生活感悟类：生活不必终日奔波忙碌，放慢脚步、告别浮躁，珍惜当下与家人陪伴，方能感知人间温柔与美好。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next evening, instead of fearing the beach walk, I turned to my daughter. 衔接句1——What did the author do? How did the daughter respond? The author took the initiative to invite her daughter for a beach walk and put aside all housework. Delighted and surprised, the daughter enjoyed the pleasant time with her mother wholeheartedly. Paragraph 2: From that evening on, our beach walks were no longer a task. 衔接句2——What changed in the author? What lesson did she learn? The author abandoned her restlessness and cherished every walk with her daughter, realizing that sincere family companionship matters most in life. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天傍晚，我不再抵触海边散步，主动看向女儿。 →①我放下繁杂家务，主动提议去海边散步→②女儿惊喜又开心，雀跃地奔赴海滩→③我静心观赏落日海景，沉浸式享受亲子时光； 第二段：从那晚起，我们的海边散步不再是一项任务。 →①我彻底摆脱浮躁，不再将散步视为负担→②每日的海边漫步治愈疲惫，拉近亲子距离→③作者顿悟：琐碎忙碌微不足道，陪伴与当下美好最珍贵。 四.段落续写（标准答案） The next evening, instead of fearing the beach walk, I turned to my daughter. I voluntarily suggested going to the beach and set aside my endless housework without hesitation. Hearing my words, my daughter’s eyes lit up with delight. We wandered slowly along the shore. Bathed in the gentle sunset glow, I admired the gorgeous scenery quietly, letting go of all daily worries and tiredness. Witnessing the lovely waves and colorful sky, I finally understood why my daughter loved the beach so much. From that evening on, our beach walks were no longer a task. Instead, they became the most precious part of my daily life. I no longer focused on trivial chores but devoted myself to accompanying my daughter. Every sunset, every gentle wave and every warm conversation bonded us closer. Those peaceful beach moments taught me a valuable lesson: life is not about endless busyness, but about slowing down to cherish simple happiness and warm family companionship. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $