2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---海滩漫步与生活的美好 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Will you please go on a beach walk with me?” My nine-year-old daughter Susie gazed up at me with her eager eyes. But my never-ending to-do list came into my head. I glanced over at the dinner dishes piled high in the sink, and then I heard the dryer buzzing (发出嗡嗡声). “Maybe tomorrow night. I have to do the dishes and fold the clothes, and I'm exhausted,” I refused. This was our first summer living in our house by the beach. Spending all day in the sand wasn’t enough for her. “Please, Mom. The summer is fading away,” Susie begged. She was right again. Summer was short in New England. But for me, there was always a to-do list, and going for a beach walk after dinner seemed like a waste of time, especially after spending all day sitting in the sand. “Oh, all right. But it has to be a quick walk,” I said. Susie screamed with excitement. As we walked along the shoreline, she couldn’t wait to pick pieces of shells and then pointed out the sun setting and the beautiful pink-and-orange sky. I didn’t notice much of anything except the time ticking (滴答地走时) by on my phone. After fifteen minutes, I said, “Okay, time to go home.” During the following week, I still took her for a beach walk after dinner, feeling like the walk was yet another task I was being forced to complete. One day, as we were on the way home, Susie asked, “Mom, did you see the sea birds skipping over the waves? Their wings looked golden in the sunset.” I froze. I had seen nothing — in those fifteen minutes, I had checked the time many times, mentally debating whether to fold the clothes or load the dishwasher first. It was then that I realized my endless to-do list was robbing me of joy in my life. So the next evening I decided to leave my phone. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ During the time, I noticed how much my life had changed. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I lived in a house by the beach with my daughter Susie→ _________________ → Susie begged me to go for a beach walk after dinner→ _________________ → I took her for walks but focused on my to-do list and phone→ _________________ → I realized my to-do list was robbing me of joy→ I decided to leave my phone for the next evening’s walk 4. 细节问答 Where did the writer and her daughter live that summer?： ___________________________________ What did Susie beg her mom to do?：_________________________________ Why did the writer refuse Susie at first?： ________________________________________________ What did the writer do during the first few beach walks?： __________________________________________ What made the writer freeze one day on the way home?： _____________________________________________ What did the writer realize then?： _________________________________________________ What decision did the writer make for the next evening?： ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 我和九岁女儿Susie住在海边的房子里→_________________ →Susie恳求我晚饭后陪她去海滩散步→_________________ →我答应但散步时总关注待办清单和手机，觉得是负担→_________________ →Susie的提问让我惊醒，意识到待办清单夺走了生活的快乐→我决定第二天晚上不带手机去散步→（续写）不带手机的散步中，我感受到了从未有过的美好→（续写）这段经历改变了我的生活，让我懂得珍惜当下 6．情感线 I：tired and distracted→___________→perfunctory and unwilling →___________→shocked and reflective→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式（写出对应句式例句） 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 So the next evening I decided to leave my phone. 衔接句1——What happened when the writer left her phone? What did she see and feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ During the time, I noticed how much my life had changed. 衔接句2——How did the writer’s life change? What did she learn from it? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：于是第二天晚上，我决定不带手机。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：在这段时间里，我注意到我的生活发生了多么大的变化。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 So the next evening I decided to leave my phone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ During the time, I noticed how much my life had changed. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（忙碌疲惫、最终学会珍惜当下的母亲）；Susie（天真执着、善于发现生活美好的九岁女儿） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I lived in a house by the beach with my daughter Susie→ It was their first summer living there, and Susie loved the beach deeply→ Susie begged me to go for a beach walk after dinner→ I refused at first because of endless housework and exhaustion, then agreed reluctantly→ I took her for walks but focused on my to-do list and phone→ Susie asked about sea birds and golden wings in the sunset, making me freeze→ I realized my to-do list was robbing me of joy→ I decided to leave my phone for the next evening’s walk 4. 细节问答 Where did the writer and her daughter live that summer?：They lived in a house by the beach. What did Susie beg her mom to do?：She begged her mom to go on a beach walk with her after dinner. Why did the writer refuse Susie at first?：Because she had endless housework to do (dishes, folding clothes) and felt exhausted. What did the writer do during the first few beach walks?：She didn’t notice the beautiful scenery, only checked the time on her phone and thought about her to-do list. What made the writer freeze one day on the way home?：Susie asked her if she saw the sea birds skipping over the waves and their golden wings in the sunset, but she saw nothing. What did the writer realize then?：She realized her endless to-do list was robbing her of joy in her life. What decision did the writer make for the next evening?：She decided to leave her phone and focus on the beach walk with Susie. What does the story tell us?：We should slow down, put aside our distractions, and cherish the present moment to find joy in life. 5．情节线 我和九岁女儿Susie住在海边的房子里→那是她们住在那里的第一个夏天，Susie非常热爱海滩→Susie恳求我晚饭后陪她去海滩散步→我起初因为没完没了的家务和疲惫拒绝了，后来勉强答应→我陪她去散步，但总关注待办清单和手机，觉得散步是负担→Susie询问她是否看到海鸟掠过海浪以及日落中它们金色的翅膀，这让我愣住了→我意识到待办清单夺走了生活的快乐→我决定第二天晚上不带手机去散步→（续写）不带手机的散步中，我感受到了从未有过的美好→（续写）这段经历改变了我的生活，让我懂得珍惜当下 6．情感线 I：tired and distracted→reluctant→perfunctory and unwilling→shocked and reflective→determined and peaceful→grateful and content（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者和九岁女儿Susie住在海边，女儿多次恳求作者晚饭后陪她去海滩散步，作者起初因家务繁忙而不情愿，散步时也总关注待办清单和手机，直到女儿的提问让她醒悟，意识到待办清单夺走了生活的快乐，于是决定不带手机，认真陪伴女儿感受生活美好。 英文：The writer lived by the beach with her nine-year-old daughter Susie. Susie begged her mom to go for a beach walk after dinner many times. The writer was reluctant at first because of busy housework and only focused on her to-do list and phone during the walks. She finally realized her to-do list was robbing her of joy after Susie’s question and decided to leave her phone to enjoy the moment with her daughter. 8. 句式（写出对应句式例句） 宾语从句：I realized my endless to-do list was robbing me of joy in my life.（我意识到我没完没了的待办清单正在夺走我生活中的快乐。） 定语从句：This was our first summer living in our house by the beach that we had just moved into.（这是我们住在海边那所刚搬来的房子里的第一个夏天。） 状语从句：As we walked along the shoreline, she couldn’t wait to pick pieces of shells.（当我们沿着海岸线散步时，她迫不及待地捡起贝壳碎片。） 非谓语：Spending all day in the sand wasn’t enough for her.（在沙滩上待一整天对她来说还不够。） 并列句：I have to do the dishes and fold the clothes, and I'm exhausted.（我得洗碗、叠衣服，而且我很累。） 9. 本文主题 温情感悟类：生活的美好藏在当下的陪伴与观察中，放下忙碌与分心，珍惜和家人在一起的时光，才能收获真正的快乐。 二.情节构造 So the next evening I decided to leave my phone. 衔接句1——What happened when the writer left her phone? What did she see and feel?：When the writer left her phone, she focused on the beach and Susie, saw the beautiful scenery she had never noticed before, and felt peaceful and happy. During the time, I noticed how much my life had changed. 衔接句2——How did the writer’s life change? What did she learn from it?：The writer no longer let housework take over her life, spent more quality time with Susie, and learned to slow down and cherish the present moment. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：于是第二天晚上，我决定不带手机。→①我放下手机，陪着Susie慢慢走在海滩上→②我第一次认真观察日落、海浪和贝壳，听Susie分享她的发现→③我感受到了前所未有的平静和快乐； 第二段：在这段时间里，我注意到我的生活发生了多么大的变化。→④我不再被待办清单束缚，学会合理分配时间，多陪伴Susie→⑤我开始主动发现生活中的小美好，不再疲惫焦虑→⑥我明白了陪伴的意义，也懂得了珍惜当下才是生活的真谛。 四.段落续写 So the next evening I decided to leave my phone. I left it on the kitchen table and walked out with Susie, determined to focus only on her and the beach. As we strolled, I finally noticed the way the waves gently kissed the shore, the colorful shells glistening in the fading light, and the sea birds Susie had mentioned, their wings truly glowing golden in the sunset. Susie chattered happily, pointing out every little wonder, and I listened carefully, laughing with her. For the first time, the fifteen-minute walk felt too short, not a burden at all. During the time, I noticed how much my life had changed. I no longer rushed through dinner to finish housework, but instead set aside time every evening to walk with Susie. I learned to slow down, put my distractions away, and appreciate the small joys around me. The endless to-do list was still there, but it no longer controlled my life. Most importantly, I grew closer to Susie, and I realized that the best moments in life are not the ones we check off a list, but the ones we spend with the people we love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $