2026届高三英语读后续写专项---专属甜甜圈 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My father became my only guardian after my mother passed away. Chatting with others helped ease his deep sadness. Every morning, he would go to his beloved local donut (甜甜圈) shop, where he always started warm conversations with the people there. When we left, along with the bear claw pastry in a small box, there was always a chocolate-covered donut prepared just for me. On the ride in Dad’s truck, my little task was to hold Dad’s coffee between my knees, to stop it from spilling on the way. As time went by and I grew up, that donut shop became a special place for us to celebrate all kinds of my achievements. Even if I didn’t win or get a ranking, Dad would still take me there. Finally, I grew into an adult and moved out of Dad’s house. On my wedding day, Dad handed me a small gift box. Inside it was a tiny chocolate-covered donut. My heart was deeply moved, melting faster than the chocolate frosting would in a hot oven. In October 1989, Dad was told he had incurable cancer. We lived an ocean apart, so our visits were very rare. A year later, I was hurt in an attack, and had to receive three back surgeries in hospital. Dad’s cancer had developed so badly that his body could barely support him. But he ignored the doctor’s orders, and flew to the hospital to comfort me. His weak body leaned over my chest, his thin arms hugging me tightly, saying how much he wished he could take my place. As the nurses prepared me for surgery, I saw Dad’s face cloud over with worry. They wheeled me out of the room and into the operating room. When I woke up, I was back in my hospital room, lying in bed alone. There was nobody around. As I reached for the telephone to call Dad, I saw a paper plate on the bedside table, holding a chocolate-covered donut. 注意： 1. 续写词数应在150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The cancer took Dad away just a few days after he left my bedside. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Years later, every time I pass by a donut shop, I always stop to buy a chocolate-covered donut. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 mother passed away, father became my guardian--- _________________ --- the donut shop witnessed my growth and achievements--- _________________ --- Dad suffered incurable cancer--- _________________ --- Dad flew to hospital to accompany me before surgery--- _________________ 4. 细节问答 What did the father do every morning to relieve sadness? ： ___________________________________ What special treat did the author always get from the donut shop?： _________________________________ Why was the donut shop special for the author and her father?： ________________________________________________ What misfortunes happened to the father and the author?： __________________________________________ What did the father do despite his severe illness?： _____________________________________________ What did the author find on the bedside table after waking up from surgery? _________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?： ________________________________________________ 5．情节线 母亲离世，父亲成为唯一监护人→_________________ →甜甜圈店成为陪伴作者成长、庆祝得失的专属场所→作者成年搬家，婚礼收到父亲赠送的迷你巧克力甜甜圈→_________________ →父女二人接连遭遇病痛磨难，重病的父亲远赴医院陪伴手术的作者→作者术后醒来，在病床边发现专属巧克力甜甜圈→（续写）父亲离世，甜甜圈成为父爱的专属印记→（续写）多年后作者始终保留习惯，珍藏父爱、感念温情 6．情感线 Father：sad and lonely→___________→loving and tough→___________ I：warm and happy→___________→painful and moved→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情亲情类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The cancer took Dad away just a few days after he left my bedside. 衔接句1——How did I feel after father’s death? What did the donut mean to me? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Years later, every time I pass by a donut shop, I always stop to buy a chocolate-covered donut. 衔接句2——Why do I keep this habit? What’s the ending and insight? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：父亲离开我没几天，癌症就夺走了他的生命。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：多年后，每当路过甜甜圈店，我总会停下买一个巧克力甜甜圈。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。 四.段落续写 The cancer took Dad away just a few days after he left my bedside. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Years later, every time I pass by a donut shop, I always stop to buy a chocolate-covered donut. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（细腻感性、深爱父亲、感念亲情的主人公）；Dad（温柔坚韧、深爱女儿、隐忍无私的父亲） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 mother passed away, father became my guardian--- Dad went to donut shop every morning and chatted with people--- the donut shop witnessed my growth and achievements--- I moved out and got married with a special donut gift--- Dad suffered incurable cancer--- I got injured and needed back surgeries--- Dad flew to hospital to accompany me before surgery--- I found a chocolate-covered donut beside my bed after surgery 4. 细节问答 What did the father do every morning to relieve sadness? ：He went to the local donut shop and chatted warmly with people there. What special treat did the author always get from the donut shop?：A chocolate-covered donut was specially prepared for her. Why was the donut shop special for the author and her father?：It was a place for them to celebrate all kinds of the author’s achievements and accompanied her growth. What misfortunes happened to the father and the author?：The father got incurable cancer while the author was injured and needed three back surgeries. What did the father do despite his severe illness?：He ignored doctor’s orders and flew to the hospital to comfort and accompany the author. What did the author find on the bedside table after waking up from surgery?：A paper plate with a chocolate-covered donut. What does the story tell us?：Ordinary trivialities carry deepest parental love, and precious family love will never fade with time. 5．情节线 母亲离世，父亲成为唯一监护人→父亲每日去甜甜圈店排解悲伤，总会给我带专属甜甜圈→甜甜圈店成为陪伴作者成长、庆祝得失的专属场所→作者成年搬家，婚礼收到父亲赠送的迷你巧克力甜甜圈→父亲确诊晚期癌症，作者意外受伤需要手术→父女二人接连遭遇病痛磨难，重病的父亲远赴医院陪伴手术的作者→作者术后醒来，在病床边发现专属巧克力甜甜圈→（续写）父亲离世，甜甜圈成为父爱的专属印记，让我悲痛又难忘→（续写）多年后作者始终保留购买甜甜圈的习惯，珍藏温柔父爱、感念平凡温情 6．情感线 Father：sad and lonely→gentle and loving→loving and tough→devoted and selfless I：warm and happy→moved and grateful→painful and moved→sorrowful and cherished（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：失去妻子的父亲靠着甜甜圈店的烟火慰藉自己，常年用专属巧克力甜甜圈陪伴女儿成长，即便身患绝症，依旧远赴医院陪伴手术的女儿，平凡的甜甜圈承载着深沉厚重的父爱。 英文：After losing his wife, the father relieved his sorrow at the donut shop and accompanied his daughter’s growth with exclusive chocolate-covered donuts. Though suffering from incurable cancer, he accompanied his daughter through her surgery, with ordinary donuts carrying profound fatherly love. 8. 句式 状语从句：Even if I didn’t win or get a ranking, Dad would still take me there. 非谓语动词：His weak body leaned over my chest, his thin arms hugging me tightly. 宾语从句：saying how much he wished he could take my place. 定语从句：Every morning, he would go to his beloved local donut shop, where he always started warm conversations with the people there. 并列句：We lived an ocean apart, so our visits were very rare. 9. 本文主题 温情亲情类：平凡细碎的日常陪伴藏着最深沉的父爱，亲情温柔恒久，跨越病痛与离别，温暖一生。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The cancer took Dad away just a few days after he left my bedside. 衔接句1——How did I feel after father’s death? What did the donut mean to me? I was overwhelmed with grief. The plain chocolate-covered donut became the most precious reminder of my father’s endless love. Paragraph 2: Years later, every time I pass by a donut shop, I always stop to buy a chocolate-covered donut. 衔接句2——Why do I keep this habit? What’s the ending and insight? This lifelong habit helps me recall my father’s gentle love. Though my father is gone, his love always accompanies me. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：父亲离开我没几天，癌症就夺走了他的生命。 →①父亲的离世让我悲痛万分，难以释怀→②病床边的甜甜圈是父亲留给我最后的温柔→③它承载着从小到大，父亲从未间断的偏爱与陪伴； 第二段：多年后，每当路过甜甜圈店，我总会停下买一个巧克力甜甜圈。 →①我一直保留这个习惯，纪念逝去的父亲→②平凡的甜甜圈承载着厚重的父爱，治愈我的人生→③纵使离别不可避免，父爱永远温暖如初。 四.段落续写（标准答案） The cancer took Dad away just a few days after he left my bedside. I was consumed by overwhelming sorrow and could hardly recover from the loss. The small chocolate-covered donut beside my bed was the last gift my father had given me. It was not just a simple dessert, but a symbol of his consistent love and company throughout my life. Recalling every sweet moment with my father, I held back my tears and kept this precious memory deep in my heart. Years later, every time I pass by a donut shop, I always stop to buy a chocolate-covered donut. This simple habit has accompanied me for decades. Every bite of the sweet donut reminds me of my father’s gentle smile and selfless love. Though he left me forever, his warm love rooted in every trivial detail of my life never fades. It is the most precious treasure that he has left me, comforting and warming me all my life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $