2026届高考英语应用文写作介绍展品 2026深圳一模”应用文写作为例 课件

Practical Writing ——以“2026深圳一模”应用文写作为例 Introduce an object(work) Teaching objectives By the end of this class, you will be able to: Master useful words and sentence patterns to properly introduce objects in recommendation emails. Learn about typical Chinese cultural relics and introduce them in English clearly and confidently. Analyze cultural relics from multiple aspects and organize writing ideas in a logical way. Apply learned structures to finish a practical writing task of describing a cultural relic independently Lead-in: Guessing Game 教考衔接s it function as ? BOOK 2 Unit 1 Cultural Heritage Workbook(p.64) 2026年深圳一模 教考衔接 (2024年新高考I卷) 假定你是李华, 上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： (1)你完成的作品；(2)你的感想。 (2025年广东一模)学校委托校英文报开展“校运会班服最佳创意设计”评比活动。请你写一篇短文，介绍你们班的班服，内容包括：1.作品特点；2.灵感来源; 3.设计目的。 (2026年惠州二调) 假定你是李华，你准备赠送一幅中国书法作品给外教 Peter 作为新年礼物，请你附上一张英文卡片。 内容包括：1. 作品简介；2. 新年祝福。 哪段详写，哪段略写？ 推荐类主题 Para. 1 Para. 2 Para. 3 Greeting+ Recommend an object Detailed Introduction Wishes Structure Analysis Q: How to organize the structure? Among (+所有集合), (某一类型) is the one I wholeheartedly recommend. (2024浙江1月高考·范文) ...向同学们推荐一项可以在课间做的运动。 How to write Para 1: Purpose Among all the sports that you can do during the break, jogging is the one I wholeheartedly recommend. With your arms stretching and your breath getting deep and fast, ... How to write Para 1: Purpose Practice 假定你是李华。你的朋友Alex计划参观中国国家博物馆，他来信请你推荐一件你喜欢的展品。请你给他回复邮件，结合外观、功能等，推荐这盏汉代的雁鱼青铜灯(Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp)。 Dear Alex, Glad to hear you're visiting the National Museum of China! _____________________________________________ Para 1: Among_________________________________________,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________is the one I wholeheartedly recommend. Sentence structure: Among (+所有集合), (某一类型) is the one I wholeheartedly recommend. Among the countless treasures housed in the National Museum of China, the Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp from the Han Dynasty is the one I wholeheartedly recommend. How to write Para 2: Core Introdution XB3 U1 ART Introduction of an exhibition Painting: Clearing After Snow on a Mountain Pass Para 2: Core Introdution Example from textbook Q: What aspects of the painting does the author cover? Name/ category Author/ origin Appearance/ details Historical value Your Curator Mission Begins Now! Practice: Introduction of the Lamp Para 2: Core Introduction 假定你是李华。你的朋友Alex计划参观中国国家博物馆，他来信请你推荐一件你喜欢的展品。请你给他回复邮件，结合外观、功能等，推荐这盏汉代的雁鱼青铜灯(Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp)。 Sample Para 2: Dating back to Han Dynasty, the artwork, featuring elegant shape and lively style, is shaped like a wild goose holding a fish in its mouth. What makes it unique is its eco-friendly design. When the oil burns, smoke travels through the goose's neck into its body and is absorbed by the water inside. There is no doubt that not only does the lamp present the ancient Chinese philosophy of harmony between human and nature, but also shows the great wisdom and excellent skills of ancient Chinese craftsmen. learn to use Para 2: Core Introduction 曾侯乙编钟Bronze Chime Bells 千里江山图 A thousand Li of Rivers and Mountains what’ the differences when describing them? Para 2: Core Introduction tips Category 核心价值 (core value) 描述重点(key points ) 实用器物 (practical objects) eg:Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp Bronze Chime Bells practical use clever design ideas appearace function the wisdom and ingenuity of the craftsman 艺术品 (artwork) eg:A thousand Li of Rivers and Mountains aesthetics history cultural significance appearance artistic style cultural and historical value How to write Para 3: Closing & wishes Sentence bank 1. 不要错过欣赏这个杰作的机会，我相信你一定会被这件珍贵的宝物深深吸引。 2. 愿这件非凡的文物点燃你对中国文物的兴趣。 Don’t miss the chance to appreciate this masterpiece. I’m sure you will be deeply amazed by this wonderful treasure. May this remarkable artifact spark your interest in ancient Chinese culture. 3. 希望你在那里有一次大开眼界的体验。 Hope you have an eye-opening experience there! Independent Writing 要求 切题 内容必须围绕“雁鱼青铜灯”展开，不能跑题写成泛泛的博物馆介绍 完整 外观、功能两大要点必须覆盖，不能只写其中一个 准确 词汇和句式要符合“朋友间推荐邮件”的语体，不能写成学术论文 连贯 各段之间要有自然的过渡，不能像流水账一样把信息堆砌在一起 Conent:Four key words:. Use the checklist to check: Is the email format correct? Does it include appearance, function, and comment? Is the word count about 80? Has his writing fulfilled the four requirements? Has he used advanced expressions? Give your partner one suggestion for improvement. Presentation & Peer Editing Relevance, Completeness, Accuracy, and Coherence Sample Writing Dear Alex, Glad to hear you’re visiting the National Museum of China! My top recommendation is the Han Dynasty Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp. This lamp is designed as a wild goose with a fish in its mouth. What’s special is how it works. When the lamp is lit, smoke rises through its neck and into its body, which is filled with water. There, the smoke is purified by the water, greatly reducing indoor air pollution. I find its design clever and eco-friendly. It truly reflects the wisdom of the ancient Chinese people. I’m sure you’ll like it! 基础版（85 words） 核心要点齐全： 造型+排烟+净水+环保 Sample Writing Dear Alex, Glad to hear you’re visiting the National Museum of China! I’d like to recommend a remarkable exhibit to you — the Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp from the Han Dynasty. This lamp is shaped like a graceful wild goose looking back with a fish in its mouth. What makes it incredible is its function. When the oil burns, smoke travels through the goose’s neck into its water-filled body. Then the water captures some of the lamp’s pollutants, effectively purifying the air. This lamp is not just a light source, but a window into how the ancient Chinese combined art, science, and environmental awareness to create practical masterpieces. You’ll find it truly impressive. Enjoy your visit! 进阶版（105 words） 增加外观细节 增加功能专业词 Sample Writing Dear Alex, Glad to hear you’re visiting the National Museum of China!Of all the exhibits there, I’d most recommend the Bronze Wild Goose-and-Fish Lamp from the Han Dynasty. The lamp is shaped like a goose holding a fish in its beak, crafted in bronze with vivid feather patterns. What truly sets it apart is its brilliant design. Standing before it, not only can you admire the intricate craftsmanship from over 2,000 years ago, but you can also explore its mechanism — the fish serves as a cover, guiding smoke through the goose’s curved neck into its water-filled belly, where the air becomes clean. An ancient eco-friendly design — how amazing is that? Only when you see it in person can you truly feel the blend of science and art. I’m confident you’ll love it! 冲刺版（121 words） 外观描写：极致细腻 功能描写：完整流程 增加文化评价 语法词汇：句式密度高：倒装，多重定语，分句 连接连贯：过渡性极强 Choose a Chinese relic to write a short recommendation. Homework 曾侯乙编钟Bronze Chime Bells 千里江山图 A thousand Li of Rivers and Mountains $