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Unit 6
I love literature
Lesson 4 Writing a poem
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Lead in
New words
New lesson
Summary
Language points
Exercise
目录
Contents
学习目标
能够在问题引导下谈论自己的诗歌阅读兴趣与偏好,并在阅读日记中获取关键信息,回答关于课堂学习内容与诗歌表达意义的问题;
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能够识别并运用诗歌的基本形式特征,在词汇层面找出押韵词,理解并初步积累常见押韵组合,为后续仿写与创作做准备;
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能够在句型支架与词汇提示下完成仿写与简短小诗的创作,并进行同伴分享与简单评价。
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通过本节课学习,学生能够:
Lead in
Read the questions and give your answers.
A Do you like poems? Why or why not?
B What's your favourite poem?
Yes,I do.Because they’re beautiful/interesting/creative .
Spring morning/Thoughts on a Tranquil Night .
tranquil /'træŋkwɪl/ adj. 安静的
New words
tranquil /'træŋkwɪl/ adj. 安静的
hoar frost /'hɔːfrɒst/ n. 霜;冰霜
bow /baʊ/ v. 低(头);鞠躬
homesickness /'həʊmsɪknəs/ n. 思乡
tune /tjuːn/ n. 曲调;曲子 v. 调音;调整
weigh /weɪ/ v. 认真考虑;权衡;称重量
poetry /'pəʊətri/ n. 诗歌;诗
tranquil adj. 安静的
During our class, we read a beautiful Chinese poem called'Thoughts on a Tranquil Night" by the poet Li Bai.课堂上,我们品读了诗人李白的一首经典古诗 ——《静夜思》。
Before my bed a pool of light— 床前明月光,
Can it be hoar frost on the ground? 疑是地上霜。
Looking up, I find the moon bright; 举头望明月,
Bowing, in homesickness I'm drowned. 低头思故乡。
hoar frost n. 霜;冰霜
bow v. 低(头);鞠躬
homesickness n. 思乡
Writing poems can be challenging, and you should weigh your words, but it's also lots of fun. I can't wait to learn more about poetry in our next class!写诗并非易事,需要字字斟酌、推敲用词,但也乐趣满满。我已经迫不及待想在下节课学习更多诗歌知识了!
weigh v. 认真考虑;权衡;称重量 weigh your words:斟酌字句、推敲措辞
poetry n. 诗歌;诗
New Lesson
Dear Diary,
This week in class, we learned to write stories and poems. We read different kinds of poems, fables, and fairy tales. I think poems are more interesting than stories because they use creative forms and a small number of words to express strong feelings. During our class, we read a beautiful Chinese poem called'Thoughts on a Tranquil Night" by the poet Li Bai. This poem is about missing home and it painted clear pictures in my mind. Here's the poem:
Before my bed a pool of light—
Can it be hoar frost on the ground?
Looking up, I find the moon bright;
Bowing, in homesickness I'm drowned.
After learning about this special poem, my teacher encouraged us to try writing our own poems. At first, I tried to write about my favourite spot by the lake, but it was challenging. Instead, I wrote a poem about the months. Here it is:
In April, come he will,
In May, sing all day,
In June, change his tune,
In July, prepare to fly,
In August, go he must!
Writing poems can be challenging, and you should weigh your words, but it's also lots of fun. I enjoy expressing my thoughts and feelings through words. I can't wait to learn more about poetry in our next class!
Brian
A What did Brian learn in his class this week?
B What does the poem"Thoughts on a Tranqui l Night" express?
C Does Brian like writing poems?
He learned to write stories and poems.
Missing home.
Yes,he does.
Language points
1. Bowing, in homesickness I'm drowned.低头思故乡。
bow/baʊ/v.低(头); 鞠躬
She bowed her head in shame.她羞愧地低下了头。
he bowed and left the stage.她鞠了一躬,离开了舞台。
拓展(1)[名词]鞠躬
The music ended and the girl took a bow.音乐结束,女孩鞠躬致谢。
(2)[名词]弓
a bow and arrow弓箭
2. At first, I tried to write about my favourite spot by the lake...起初,我想写一个我最喜欢的湖边的地点……
at first起初 与at last意思相对
辨析at first与first of all
atfirst 起初;起先(用以讲述最初阶段的情况,尤指与后来的不同情况相比较) At first, we found itdifficult to eat and drink incomplete darkness. Butafter a while, we got usedto it.起初,我们觉得很难在完全黑暗的环境中饮食。但过了一会儿,我们就习惯了。
firstof all 首先;第一(用以引出一系列事实、理由、意见等) First of all, open thewindow. Then turn offthe gas. 首先,打开窗户。然后把煤气关掉。
3. and you should weigh your words,but it's also lots of fun.……需要字斟句酌,但也充满乐趣。
weigh /weɪ/ v.认真考虑;权衡;称重量讲(1)认真考虑;权衡
He was weighing his words carefully.他在仔细斟酌要怎么说。
(2)称重量;重量是……
She weighed the stone in her hand.她用手掂了掂那块石头的重量。
When Ya Ya was born in the Beijing Zoo, she weighed about 0.14 kilos. 丫丫在北京动物园出生时大约140克重。
拓展weight[名词]重量
put on weight增加体重
lose weight减重
Exercise
Match the words that have a rhyming relationship.An example is given.
Complete this poem. You can use the words from Activity 3.
I once saw a very ________(big/ small)________,
It was ________(wear/eat)a________(big/small)_______(colour)________ .
Ijumped really high, and then I said quietly,
Don't you think you look funny _______ _______?
small
cat
wearing
big
yellow
hat
in
that
1.You should ________ (weigh) your words carefully when writing.
2.The poem p________ beautiful pictures in the reader’s mind.
weigh
句意:写作时你应该仔细斟酌言辞。根据所给单词weigh可知,此处对应的变形单词是weigh,是动词原形,此处单词在句中语法结构为情态动词should的用法,should后必须接动词原形,故此处应填weigh。
aints
句意:这首诗在读者的脑海中描绘出美丽的画面。句子主语The poem是第三人称单数,描述客观事实用一般现在时,结合首字母提示,此处应填动词paint的第三人称单数形式paints,意为“描绘”。故填paints。
3.The words in the poem r________ with each other, making it sound nice.
4.She can’t wait ________ (learn) more about poetry.
hyme
句意:诗中的词语彼此押韵,让它听起来很优美。根据首字母r及语境“with each other, making it sound nice”可知,此处对应的单词是rhyme,是动词,意为“押韵”,句子陈述事实,用一般现在时,主语The words 是复数,动词用原形,故填rhyme。
to learn
句意:她迫不及待地想要了解更多关于诗歌的知识。根据所给单词learn可知,此处对应的变形单词是to learn,是动词不定式,此处单词在句中语法结构为固定搭配can’t wait to do sth.,意为“迫不及待做某事”,can’t wait后必须接动词不定式,故此处应填to learn。
5.He ________ (write) a poem about the months last week.
6.At first, it was ____________ (challenge) to write a poem.
wrote
句意:他上周写了一首关于月份的诗。句中时间状语“last week”(上周)表示过去,句子使用一般过去时。write的过去式为不规则变化,是wrote,故填wrote。
challenging
句意:起初,写一首诗是很有挑战性的。本句为“It is/was+形容词+to do sth.”固定句型,表示“做某事是……的”,be动词后接形容词作表语,challenge的形容词形式为challenging,描述事物的性质,意为“有挑战性的”。故填challenging。
Summary
tranquil /'træŋkwɪl/ adj. 安静的
hoar frost /'hɔːfrɒst/ n. 霜;冰霜
bow /baʊ/ v. 低(头);鞠躬
homesickness /'həʊmsɪknəs/ n. 思乡
tune /tjuːn/ n. 曲调;曲子 v. 调音;调整
weigh /weɪ/ v. 认真考虑;权衡;称重量
poetry /'pəʊətri/ n. 诗歌;诗
at first起初
put on weight增加体重
lose weight减重
Bowing, in homesickness I'm drowned.低头思故乡。
At first, I tried to write about my favourite spot by the lake...起初,我想写一个我最喜欢的湖边的地点……
and you should weigh your words,but it's also lots of fun.……需要字斟句酌,但也充满乐趣。
Homework
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基础作业:把静夜思这首诗的英文版熟练朗读;
进阶作业:创作你自己的诗,与你的同学分享。
拓展作业:采访你的家人或同学最喜欢的诗歌及原因并整理成一张手抄报。
Homework
Thank you
for listening!
再见
$静夜思,唐,李白,床前明月光,疑是地上霜。举头望明月,低头思故乡。In the quiet at night town, dennehy说,拜moonlight before my bed looks like frosty ground。I look up at the bright moon with dropped head. Think of home.