Unit 6 作文专练 2025-2026学年沪教版（五四学制）八年级英语下册

该初中英语单元复习讲义围绕“memories with friends”主题，通过框架图系统梳理书信、邀请函两种实用文体的写作结构，用表格归纳写作要点（格式、细节描写、核心内容）及重要句型词组，清晰呈现从“情境理解-内容构建-语言表达”的知识脉络。 讲义亮点在于情境化写作任务设计，如“给转学好友写告别信”“邀请小学同学参加聚会”，引导学生通过时间、地点、对话等细节描写回忆事件，培养语言表达能力和思维品质。高分范文提供范例，重要句型辅助不同层次学生掌握表达方法，教师可据此实施精准教学，助力学生提升写作综合素养。

八下沪教五四制unit 6作文专练 memories with friends 题目一（书信） 题目： 你的好朋友小明下个月将要转学到另一个城市。临别前，你给他写一封信，回忆你们之间的美好友谊。信中需要： 1. 回忆你们从认识到现在的一件难忘的事情（时间、地点、发生了什么、为什么难忘）； 2. 分享你从这段友谊中学到的东西（如信任、分享、互相鼓励等）； 3. 表达你对他未来的祝福，并表示你们会保持联系。 教师思路精讲 这是一封告别信，情感真挚，语气温暖。教师应引导学生选择一件具体的、有画面感的事情来回忆（如一起准备考试、一起参加运动会、你生病时他帮你补课等）。用细节让回忆鲜活（如天气、对话、当时的感受）。然后总结这段友谊带给你的成长——可能是学会了分享、学会了坚持、或学会了理解他人。最后表达祝福和保持联系的承诺。结构：第一段表达不舍并引出回忆；第二段详细回忆一件难忘的事及收获；第三段表达祝福和保持联系的承诺。 写作要点分析 1. 书信格式：称呼（Dear Xiao Ming）、正文、结尾（Yours sincerely / Your friend）、署名。 2. 细节描写：使用过去时，加入时间、地点、动作、对话、心理活动，让回忆生动。 3. 三个要点：①一件难忘的事情（时间、地点、事件、为什么难忘）；②从友谊中学到的东西；③祝福及保持联系的承诺。 重要句型和词组 · I still can’t believe you are moving away next month. I will miss you so much. · I want to share one of my favorite memories with you. · Do you still remember the time when we... (stayed up late to study for the exam) · It was a rainy afternoon. We were both feeling nervous because... · But you said to me, “...” · That day, I learned that a true friend is someone who... · From our friendship, I also learned the importance of... (trust / sharing) · Although you are moving far away, we can still stay in touch through video calls and messages. · I wish you all the best in your new school. Please write to me often! 高分范文 Dear Xiao Ming, I still can’t believe you are moving away next month. I will miss you so much. Before you go, I want to share one of my favorite memories with you. Do you still remember the time when we prepared for the English speech contest together? It was a cold November evening. We were both feeling nervous because we had to speak in front of the whole school. I wanted to give up, but you said to me, “We can do this together. Let’s practice one more time.” So we stayed after school until 6 p.m., taking turns reading our speeches and correcting each other’s pronunciation. In the end, I won second place and you won third. We were so proud of each other. That day, I learned that a true friend is someone who lifts you up when you want to give up. From our friendship, I also learned the importance of trust and encouragement. Although you are moving far away, we can still stay in touch through video calls and messages. I wish you all the best in your new school. Please write to me often! You will always be my best friend. Your friend, Li Hua 题目二（邀请函） 题目： 你的小学同学小华很久没见了。你想组织一次小学同学聚会，一起回忆快乐的童年时光。请你给他写一封邀请函，邀请他参加聚会。信中需要： 1. 说明聚会的时间和地点（本周六下午2点，学校附近的公园/你家）； 2. 回忆你们在小学时的一件有趣或难忘的事情（如一起上学、一起参加活动、一起闯祸等）； 3. 告知聚会的安排（如一起野餐、看老照片、玩游戏等），并表达你期待见到他。 教师思路精讲 这是一封邀请函，语气要热情、亲切，充满期待。教师应引导学生先用一个小回忆唤起情感（如“还记得我们以前一起偷偷吃零食吗？”），让收信人感到温暖。然后说明聚会时间、地点和活动安排（简单有趣，适合朋友聚会）。最后再次表达期待。结构：第一段发出邀请并说明时间地点；第二段回忆一件小学时的难忘趣事；第三段介绍聚会安排并表达期待。 写作要点分析 1. 邀请函格式：称呼（Dear Xiao Hua）、正文、结尾（Yours sincerely / Your friend）、署名。语气亲切自然。 2. 回忆生动：用过去时和细节描写，让回忆有趣、有画面感。 3. 三个要点：①聚会的时间和地点；②一件有趣或难忘的回忆；③聚会安排及期待。 重要句型和词组 · How time flies! It has been two years since we last met. · I am writing to invite you to a primary school class reunion. · We will get together this Saturday at 2:00 p.m. in the Central Park near our old school. · Do you still remember the time when we... (rode bikes to school together every morning) · I will never forget the day we... (built a “secret base” behind the library) · We used to... Those were such happy days. · At the party, we will have a picnic, look through old photos, and play games we loved as kids. · Please bring one old photo of yourself if you can. · I really hope you can come. It will be so great to see you again! 高分范文 Dear Xiao Hua, How time flies! It has been two years since we last met. I am writing to invite you to a primary school class reunion. We will get together this Saturday at 2:00 p.m. in Central Park, near our old school. Several of our old classmates will come too. Do you still remember the time when we secretly shared candy during math class? We were in third grade. I had a bag of gummy bears in my pocket. We passed them back and forth under the desk without the teacher noticing. We almost laughed out loud when one gummy bear fell on the floor! That was so silly, but it still makes me smile today. I also remember how we walked home together every afternoon and talked about our favorite cartoons. Those were such happy days. At the party, we will have a simple picnic. I will bring an old album with photos from our primary school years. We can look through them and share more memories. We can also play the games we loved as kids, like hopscotch and skipping rope. Please bring one old photo of yourself if you can. I really hope you can come. It will be so great to see you again and laugh about the old days! Your friend, Zhang Wei 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $