内容正文:
eager to conduct a workshop on Chinese paper-cutting
and hold a mini-exhibition of Chinese New Year
customs.These activities are designed to offer students
a glimpse into the details of Chinese folk art and the
festive spirit of our most important holiday.I firmly
believe that my activities will add a unique touch to the
festival and contribute greatly to its aim of promoting
cultural exchange.
Looking forward to being a part of this wonderful
event.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
尊敬的先生/女士:
我是李津,一名来自中国的交换生。我写信是
为了申请参加我校即将举办的“国际文化节”。
这个一年一度的活动确实是一个绝佳的机会,
能够展示和欣赏来自不同国家学生所代表的多元文
化。我渴望举办一个中国剪纸工作坊,并举办一个
关于中国新年习俗的小型展览。这些活动旨在让学
生们领略中国民间艺术的细节以及我们最重要节日
的喜庆氛围。我坚信我的活动将为文化节增添一抹
独特的色彩,在很大程度上有助于实现其促进文化
交流的目标。
期待能参与这场精彩的活动。
真诚的学生,
李津
主题8感谢信
感谢招待
高分秘籍
1.I want to extend my heartfelt thanks for your
unwavering support in encouraging my reading
journey.
2.I'm going to attend the summer camp at our city's
science museum,which will offer workshops on
robot programming and astronomy.
3.I'll spend the holiday organizing a small book drive
in my neighborhood,collecting storybooks for kids
in the rural primary school nearby.
实战演练16
Dear Jenny,
How's everything going?I'd like to express my
heartfelt gratitude to you and your family for taking care
of me during my study tour in New Zealand-I still
cherish those memories!
This holiday,I'll travel to Chengdu with my
parents to see the pandas I've adored since childhood.
I've even signed up as a volunteer feeder for a day,
hoping to feed the cubs by hand.Besides that,I've
been trying to bake the butter cookies your mom made
for us.It's trickier than it looks,but I'm getting better
each time!
For university,I'm aiming for Shanghai
International Studies University,majoring in
Translation so I can keep building cultural bridges,just
as we did together.
Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours,
Li Jin
亲爱的Jenny:
一切都好吗?非常感谢你和家人在我新西兰游
学期间对我的照顾—一那些回忆我至今都十分
珍视!
这个假期,我会和父母一起去成都,看看我从小
就很喜欢的大熊猫。我还报名了当一天的志愿者饲
养员,希望能亲手给熊猫宝宝喂食。除此之外,我一
直在试着烤你妈妈以前给我们做的黄油曲奇。这事
儿比看起来难多了,但我一次比一次做得好!
大学方面,我打算报考上海外国语大学,主修翻
译专业。这样我就能像我们当初那样,继续搭建文
化间的桥梁。
向你和你的家人致以最美好的祝愿。
你的朋友
李津
主题9致歉信
失约致歉
高分秘籍
1.I'm terribly sorry to tell you that I can't go to the
movies with you this Friday as planned.
2.My little sister suddenly caught a fever,and my
parents are away,so I have to stay home to take care
of her.
3.I hope this temporary change doesn't mess up your
plan.
4.Could we go hiking next Saturday instead?The
weather forecast says it'll be sunnier then,which
would make the trip more comfortable.
5.Please accept my sincere apology and thank you for
your understanding.I'm really looking forward to
seeing you soon.
实战演练17
Dear Boyce,
I'm writing to apologize for being unable to attend
the Al lecture with you this Sunday as planned.I've
just remembered there'll be an important exam that
day,so I must focus entirely on preparing for it.I hope
this change won't cause you too much trouble.
145.
Could we go to the next lecture together instead?
The schedule shows another session the following
Sunday,which should be just as informative and give
us more time to discuss the materials what we have
collected.If that suits you,let me know when you'd
like to meet.
I'm truly sorry for any inconvenience and
appreciate your understanding.I'm looking forward to
our next meeting.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的Boyce:
我写信是想为无法按计划在本周日和你一起参
加人工智能讲座向你道歉。我刚刚想起来那天有一
场重要的考试,所以我必须全身心地投入到备考中。
希望这个变动不会给你带来太多麻烦。
我们可以改去参加下一场讲座吗?时间表显示
下周日还有一场,应该内容同样丰富,也能给我们更
多时间讨论所收集的材料。如果你觉得可以,请告
诉我你想什么时候碰面。
对于给你带来的不便,我深表款意,也感谢你的
理解。我很期待我们下次的见面。
你的朋友
李华
主题10求助信
短剧指导
高分秘籍
1.Hope this letter finds you well.
2.whether the colors and layout will attract students'
attention
3.Could you drop by the classroom at 10:00 a.m.this
Friday to share tips on public speaking with us?
实战演练18
Dear Miss Jenny,
Hope this email finds you well.My classmates and
I have decided to participate in the school's English
poetry recitation contest and would like your kind
guidance.
We've chosen Robert Frost's "Stopping by Woods
on a Snowy Evening".Its quiet winter scene and subtle
emotions,we believe,will touch the audience.
However,we're unsure how to convey that calm mood.
Could you advise us on pronunciation and intonation to
stress key words and highlight rhythm?We also need
tips on expressions and gestures that match the poem's
peaceful tone.
Would it be convenient for you to meet us in the
library reading room at 4:00 p.m.this Friday?
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I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱Jenny老师:
希望您一切安好。我和同学们决定参加学校的
英文诗歌朗诵比赛,希望能得到您的悉心指导。
我们选了罗伯特·弗罗斯特的《雪夜林边小驻》。
我们相信,诗中宁静的冬日景象与细腻的情感能打
动观众。但我们不确定该如何传递出那种平和的氛
围。您能在发音和语调方面给我们一些建议,以突
出关键词并体现诗歌的节奏吗?我们还需要一些关
于表情和手势的技巧,使其与诗歌宁静的基调相
契合。
本周五下午4点,您方便到图书馆阅览室和我
们碰面吗?
期待您的回复。
您的学生,
李华
第二章第四节
主题1家人相处
兄弟情深
高分秘籍
1.My sister's tense profile as she left silently with her
suitcase at the snowing platform wouldn't fade from
my mind.
2."This is for you,"she said,blushing,holding out
the gift box."Thanks for remembering,"he took it,
voice trembling slightly.
3.The teacher's encouragement "You can do it"finally
shattered my timidity.
4.Some confusion,it turns out,is meant to clear
especially when hope lies ahead.
实战演练1
I walked out of my room.Not surprisingly,my
mother and Max were both covered in mud.It was
evident that Max had led my mother on another wild
chase through the forest.My frustration melted away
instantly as I caught sight of my mother's apologetic
expression.“Sweetheart,”my mom said softly,“Im
sorry for scolding you earlier."When I served her a
warm cup of tea after her quick shower,she then
shared her own adventure with Max,including how he
had managed to escape from her grasp.It seemed that
we were both at our wits'end with this dog.
Dad stepped in,suggesting that we work together
to train Max.We spent the next few days teaching Max
basic commands like“sit”,“stay”and“come back”.
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主题9
道歉信
失约致歉
真题导练
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2021年北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你和
⊙主题同步
美国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用
人教版必修第一册
英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
Unit 1 Teenage Life
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
外研版必修第一册
2.提出建议并给出理由。
Unit 1 A New Start
注意:
译林版必修第一册
1.词数100左右;
Unit 3 Getting Along with Others
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
审题构思
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文体类别
道歉信
失约致歉
主题:向Jim致歉并说明无法赴约原因,提出替代建议
3维审题
主题要点
要点:①表达歉意,说明不能赴约的合理缘由
②提出新活动建议,并阐述理由
人称:以第一人称为主
人称时态
时态:以一般现在时为主
初稿搭建
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Dear Jim,
I'm truly sorry to tell you that I can't
(不能履行约定的事).I've just been informed
that
(陈述理由),so I have to
I hope this change won't cause you too much
inconvenience.
How about
(另约日期)?Could you let me know what time suits you best??fit's
convenient,let's meet at
(地,点)at
(时间).
Please accept my sincere apologies and thank you for your understanding.I'm really looking
forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
H061.
高中英语高分作文
高分润色
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Dear Jim,
⊙亮点词汇
I'm truly sorry to tell you that I can't go out with you this
as planned按计划
weekend as planned.I've just been informed that my grandfather in
the countryside is sick and has suddenly been admitted to hospital,
inform v.通知;告知
so I have to visit him.I hope this change won't cause you too much
inconvenience.
be admitted to接收;收治
How about next Saturday?Could you let me know what time
inconvenience n.不便;麻烦
suits you best?If it's convenient,let's meet at the school gate at 9:00
a.m.I'm free all next weekend.
suit v.适合;方便
Please accept my sincere apologies and thank you for your
understanding.I'm really looking forward to seeing you soon.
sincere adj,真诚的;诚挚的
Yours,
⊙出彩句式
Li Hua
亲爱的Jim:
①核心致歉句
很抱歉地告诉你,我没办法按计划和你在本周末外出了。
我刚得知乡下的爷爷生病突然住院了,所以我得去看望他。
②原因说明句
希望这个变动不会给你带来太多不便。
④方案补救句
下周六怎么样?你可以告诉我什么时间最适合你吗?如
果方便的话,咱们早上9点在学校门口碰面吧。我下周末都
⑤感谢包容句
有空。
⊙细节增色
请接受我诚挚的歉意,感谢你的理解。我真的很期待与
你会面。
③请求体谅句
你的朋友,
李华
规范誊写
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Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一章手把手教你写好提纲作文
高分秘籍
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1.【核心致款句】很抱歉地告诉你,我这周五没办法按计划和你一起去看电影了。
2.【原因说明句】我妹妹突然发烧了,爸妈又不在家,所以我得留在家照顾她。
3.【请求体谅句】希望这个临时变动不会打乱你的计划。
4.【方案补救句】我们改到下周六去徒步好吗?天气预报说那天天气更晴朗,这会让徒步更
舒服。
5.【感谢包容句】请接受我诚挚的歉意,感谢你的理解。我真的很期待很快见到你。
实战演练17
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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你和英国好友Boyce原定本周日一起参加关于人工智
能的讲座,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Boyce,
Yours,
Li Hua
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