2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---后院玫瑰与深沉父爱 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was young, my father worked as a high school teacher in a small town. As the only breadwinner of our family, he was always buried in his school work, so I seldom had the chance to chat or play with him, making me feel a little distant from him. My mother, a full time homemaker, took charge of the whole family and looked after my younger brother and me, busy with cooking, cleaning and shopping. Our backyard was a special place for our family. It was not only a safe place for us kids to play, but also my dad’s favorite hobby corner. Whenever he was free at home, he would spend most of his time taking care of his beloved roses, which my mother also loved very much. My dad looked after his roses with great care and love. I often stood beside him, hoping to get his attention, but he was usually focused on his roses. He watered them regularly, cleaned the dry leaves, loosened the soil and fed them with nutrients carefully. All he expected was to see the beautiful flowers and enjoy their sweet smell. One day, I saw him cut some branches. Then, with a small knife, he made marks on the thick branches carefully. He cut the marked spots to put young sprouts in and wrapped them with cloth. After that, he told us never to touch them. From then on, every time he came home from work, he would go straight to the backyard to look after these special plants. About a month later, we all watched the whole process: the tender stems grew, formed buds and finally bloomed into colorful flowers. The backyard soon became a beautiful garden, full of roses and their nice fragrance. My parents, my brother and I all loved staying there. Those roses brought us great happiness, and none of us, especially me, wanted to lose such beauty. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One stormy night, strong winds and heavy rain hit our small town, and I was woken up by a loud crash from the backyard. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, we rushed to the backyard and were shocked by the scene before us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 My father worked busily as a teacher and felt distant from me--- _________________ --- The backyard was Dad’s hobby corner for planting roses--- _________________ --- Dad carefully grafted and tended rose branches--- _________________ --- The roses bloomed beautifully and brought the whole family happiness 4. 细节问答 Why did the author feel distant from her father? ： ___________________________________ What was father’s favorite hobby?：_________________________________ How did father look after his roses?： ________________________________________________ What special thing did father do to the rose branches?： __________________________________________ What changes did the roses bring to the family?： _____________________________________________ How did the author feel about the beautiful roses?： _________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 父亲身为教师忙于工作，与作者相处甚少，二人关系生疏，母亲独自操劳家务→后院是家中专属小天地，也是父亲种植玫瑰的专属角落→父亲精心照料玫瑰，时刻专注花丛，作者渴望获得父亲关注→__________________________________________→一个月后玫瑰尽数绽放，后院繁花似锦，为全家带来治愈与欢乐→（续写）暴风雨深夜突袭小镇，后院遭遇重创→（续写）____________________________________________________ 6．情感线 I：distant and lonely→___________→worried and upset→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 亲情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One stormy night, strong winds and heavy rain hit our small town, and I was woken up by a loud crash from the backyard. 衔接句1——What did I do at night? What might happen to the roses? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next morning, we rushed to the backyard and were shocked by the scene before us. 衔接句2——How did father react to the ruined roses? What did I learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一个暴风雨的夜晚，狂风暴雨袭击了我们的小镇，我被后院传来的巨大声响惊醒。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：第二天早上，我们冲到后院，被眼前的景象惊呆了。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。 四.段落续写 One stormy night, strong winds and heavy rain hit our small town, and I was woken up by a loud crash from the backyard. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next morning, we rushed to the backyard and were shocked by the scene before us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（作者）：幼时与父亲生疏、内心敏感细腻，热爱家中玫瑰，善于观察、懂得感悟成长；Father（父亲）：勤恳顾家、沉默内敛、温柔坚韧，热爱生活，不善言辞却深爱家人；Mother（母亲）：勤劳顾家、温柔质朴，悉心照料全家起居。 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 My father worked busily as a teacher and felt distant from me→ My mother took full responsibility for housework and family care→ The backyard was Dad’s hobby corner for planting roses→ Dad tended roses carefully and grafted new branches→ The grafted roses bloomed beautifully→ The gorgeous roses brought the whole family endless joy and warmth 4. 细节问答 Why did the author feel distant from her father? ：As the only breadwinner, her father was occupied with school work and had little time to accompany her. What was father’s favorite hobby?：He loved planting and tending roses in the backyard. How did father look after his roses?：He watered roses regularly, cleared dry leaves, loosened soil and provided nutrients carefully. What special thing did father do to the rose branches?：He cut, marked and grafted rose branches to cultivate new roses. What changes did the roses bring to the family?：The blooming roses beautified the backyard and brought the whole family great happiness and warm memories. How did the author feel about the beautiful roses?：She loved the gorgeous roses deeply and was unwilling to lose the beautiful scenery. What does the story tell us?：Silent parental love is warm and tough, and life’s setbacks help us grow and cherish what we own. 5．情节线 父亲身为教师忙于工作，与作者相处甚少，二人关系生疏，母亲独自操劳家务→后院是家中专属小天地，也是父亲种植玫瑰的专属角落→父亲精心照料玫瑰，时刻专注花丛，作者渴望获得父亲关注→父亲嫁接玫瑰枝丫，细心培育、禁止家人触碰→一个月后玫瑰尽数绽放，后院繁花似锦，为全家带来治愈与欢乐→（续写）深夜狂风暴雨突袭，作者担忧后院玫瑰，彻夜难安→（续写）满园玫瑰残破凋零，父亲坦然面对、细心修整，作者读懂父亲藏在花草与陪伴里沉默深沉的爱 6．情感线 I：distant and lonely→joyful and satisfied→worried and upset→moved and enlightened（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：平日忙于工作的父亲悉心培育后院玫瑰，繁花为家庭带来温暖，一场暴风雨摧毁花丛，面对残破的花园，父亲温柔坚韧的态度让作者读懂了沉默深沉的父爱与生活的真谛。 英文：The author’s father patiently cultivated roses in the backyard, bringing happiness to the whole family. After a storm destroyed the beautiful roses, father’s calm and tough attitude taught the author the true meaning of love and life. 8. 句式 状语从句：Whenever he was free at home, he would spend most of his time taking care of his beloved roses. 非谓语动词：As the only breadwinner of our family, he was always buried in his school work. 宾语从句：All he expected was to see the beautiful flowers and enjoy their sweet smell. 并列句：It was not only a safe place for us kids to play, but also my dad’s favorite hobby corner. 定语从句：It was not only a safe place for us kids to play, but also my dad’s favorite hobby corner. 9. 本文主题 亲情成长类：父爱沉默内敛、温柔坚韧，藏于细碎日常与无声陪伴，历经挫折方能读懂温暖本心，学会珍惜与坦然释怀。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One stormy night, strong winds and heavy rain hit our small town, and I was woken up by a loud crash from the backyard. 衔接句1——What did I do at night? What might happen to the roses? Worried about the delicate roses, I lay awake anxiously, fearing that the fierce storm would destroy my father’s months of efforts. Paragraph 2: The next morning, we rushed to the backyard and were shocked by the scene before us. 衔接句2——How did father react to the ruined roses? What did I learn? Instead of feeling frustrated, father remained calm, repaired the broken branches patiently and taught me to face setbacks bravely. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一个暴风雨的夜晚，狂风暴雨袭击了我们的小镇，我被后院传来的巨大声响惊醒。 →①窗外风雨肆虐，我满心担忧父亲悉心培育的玫瑰→②辗转难眠，牵挂数月盛放的繁花会被风雨摧毁→③默默期盼后院的花草能够熬过这场暴雨； 第二段：第二天早上，我们冲到后院，被眼前的景象惊呆了。 →①满园玫瑰枝叶残破、花瓣散落一地，一片狼藉→②父亲平静面对残局，细心修整残枝败叶→③我读懂父亲的温柔坚韧，领悟沉默的父爱与生活的哲理。 四.段落续写（满分范文，150词左右） One stormy night, strong winds and heavy rain hit our small town, and I was woken up by a loud crash from the backyard. Thunder roared and wind howled violently outside the window. Knowing how much time and love my father had devoted to those roses, I tossed and turned restlessly in bed. Seized by anxiety, I was extremely worried that the delicate flowers could not survive such fierce weather. I prayed silently that my father’s painstaking efforts would not be ruined by the sudden storm. The next morning, we rushed to the backyard and were shocked by the scene before us. Most rose branches were broken, and colorful petals scattered all over the wet ground. However, father remained calm instead of feeling upset. He gently picked up broken branches and cleared dead leaves patiently. He told me gently that setbacks were inevitable, and regrowth always came after destruction. At that moment, I finally understood my father’s silent love and profound attitude towards life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $