体育竞技读后续写 课件-2026届高三英语一轮复习

Continuation Writing Sports competition 参赛教师：舒婷 道县敦颐高级中学 Lead in Activate Action Psychology Environment 1.launch a final sprint发起最后冲刺 2. leap/dive 跃起/俯冲 3. shoot 射门/投篮/射击 4. score a goal 进球 5.dash across the finish line 冲过终点线 1.one’s mind racing with... 脑海中飞速闪过…… 2. confidence surging 信心倍增 3. heart pounding 心跳加速 4. doubt 疑虑 5. despair 绝望 1.the air was thick with 空气中弥漫者... 2.thunderous applause 雷鸣般的掌声 3. erupted into loud cheers... 爆发出热烈的欢呼 4. chants echoing through 口号声回荡在…… 5. wind whistling through 风在……间呼啸 part 1 Action 动作描写 场景：田径比赛 With the loud sound of the starting gun, sb rushed out from the starting line like arrows. Sb quickly took the lead with.... 随着发令枪一声巨响，选手们如离弦之箭般冲出起跑线。某人迅速抢占了领先位置。 With the loud sound of the starting gun, all the competitors rushed out from the starting line like arrows. Tom quickly took the lead with his excellent explosive power from long-term training.(take the lead 领先；explosive power爆发力） 随着发令枪的一声巨响，所有选手如离弦之箭般从起跑线向前冲去。汤姆凭借长期训练积累的出色爆发力迅速抢占了领先位置。 动作句式1 动作描写(比赛初期） 场景1：田径比赛 随着发令枪的一声巨响，他的对手们如离弦之箭般从起跑线向前冲去。埃迪瞬间就被甩在了身后，一时间，恐慌攫住了他。（be left behind) (14周周测卷读后续写改编) , his opponents . .Eddy 。 For a moment, panic him. 练习 With the loud sound of the starting gun rushed out was immediately left behind 动作句式1 :With the loud/sharp sound of the starting gun/signal, sb rushed out from the starting line like arrows.Sb.... from the starting line like arrows seized 场景2：游泳比赛 随着发令枪的鸣响,所有选手如飞鱼般跃入水中。汤姆凭借爆发力立马确立了明显的领先优势，这让他即开心又兴奋。（跳入：dive into ；飞鱼darting fish） , all swimmers into the water like . Tom quickly with the strength ，which made him . 进阶练习 With the sharp sound of the starting gun dived darting fish explosive took the lead delighted and excited 动作句式1 :With the sharp sound of the starting gun, sb...like.... 主语 took the lead...,which made him... 场景1：射击比赛 动作句式2： The world around sb fading into a blur, sb focused only/solely on the... (目标) 翻译：The world around him fading into a blur, the shooter focused only on the distant target (blur 模糊) 动作描写(比赛中期） 周围的世界渐渐模糊成一片，射击手只专注于远处的靶心。 场景2：足球比赛射门 , (人群的欢呼声渐渐模糊) Nike .the flying . 练习 The cheers of the crowd fading into a blur focused only on 动作句式2 :sth fading into a blur, 主语 focused only on the... (目标) soccer ball 翻译：人群的欢呼声渐渐模糊，Nick只专注于飞来的足球。 场景1：田径赛最后冲刺 sb’s+肢体部位+ screaming in pain/aching badly, 主语+ pushed himself to the limit , +doing...（描述爆发性动作）。某人的肢体部位酸痛难忍，但他拼尽全力.... 翻译：His muscles screaming in pain, David pushed himself to the limit , surging past his two opponents just meters before the finish line.(pushed himself to the limit拼尽全力，surging past :爆发性的超越) 肌肉酸痛难忍，David 拼尽全力，在距离终点线仅剩几米处，冲过了身前两名对手。 动作句式3 动作描写(比赛冲刺） 场景2：自行车比赛爬坡（奋力猛蹬踏板，pedal） , the cyclist ,. to climb the last steep slope. 练习 His legs screaming in pain pushed himself to the limit pedaling as fast as he could 动作句式3 Sb.'s +肢体部位+ screaming in pain, 主语+ pushed himself to the limit ,doing.... 翻译：双腿酸痛难忍，这位骑行者拼尽全力，奋力猛蹬踏板，冲上了最后一段陡坡。 His arms screaming in pain，Mike pushed himself to the limit and launched a final sprint to the wall，exhausted but determined. 练习 场景3：游泳比赛终点触壁 ( launch a final sprint 发起最后冲刺) 动作句式3 His +肢体部位+ screaming in pain/aching badly, 主语+ pushed himself to the limit and launch a final sprint , +adj.1 but adj.2. 尽管Mike的双臂酸痛难忍，但他拼尽全力，向池壁发起了最后的冲刺，精疲力尽但意志坚定。 Tips：在句式后面可以加双形容词来进一步丰富人物状态和态度,比如： sweaty but strong-willed 满身大汗但意志顽强; breathless but bold 气喘吁吁但勇敢无谓; tired but ambitous 疲惫但志在必得. part 2 Psychology 心理描写 场景1：攀岩比赛前，对未知挑战的复杂心情 心理句式1 A mix of +情绪名词1 and 情绪名词2 surged through sb as sb ... , sb's mind racing with...当某人……时，一阵...与 ...的交织的情绪涌上心头，脑海中闪过…… 翻译：A mix of nervousness and excitement surged through me as I stared at the towering climbing wall, my mind racing with tough path ahead. 心理描写1 一股紧张与兴奋交织的情绪向我涌来，当我凝视着高耸的攀岩墙时，脑海中飞速闪过前方的艰难路线。 场景2：田径比赛前，对自身努力价值的怀疑与肯定 翻译：一股自我怀疑与希望交织的情绪向她涌来，当她凝视着起跑线时，脑海中飞速闪过所有为此刻付出的训练时光。（自我怀疑:self-doubt ） 。 that had led to this moment. 练习 A mix of self-doubt and hope surged through her as she stared at the starting line,her mind racing with all the hours of training 心理句式1 : A mix of ... and ... surged through 主语 as 主语 stared at... , 主语's mind racing with... 场景1：赢得比赛后，认识到过程比结果更重要。 心理句式2: In the moment of ... (victory/defeat/exhaustion), sb came to a profound realization: ... 在（胜利/失败/精疲力竭）的那一刻，某人深刻地领悟到... 翻译：In the moment of exhausting victory, I came to a profound realization: the true trophy was the courage I had built within myself throughout the competition. 心理描写2 在精疲力竭赢得胜利的那一刻，我有了一个深刻的领悟：真正的奖杯是我在整个比赛中建立起来的勇气。 场景2：完成极限挑战后，对自我能力的重新认识 在冲过终点线后精疲力竭的那一刻，他有了一个深刻的领悟：他的极限远比他曾经想象的要高。（极限：limits； 远超：far beyond） after ， ： what he had once imagined. 练习 心理句式3 : In the moment of ... (victory/defeat/exhaustion), 主语 came to a profound realization: ... In the moment of exhaustion crossing the finish line he came to a profound realization his limits were far beyond =强调句：It was in the moment of doing sth that sb came to a profound realization... part 3 Environment 环境描写 场景1：自然环境 环境句式1: (The sound of ) sth.... seemed to cheer on sb... ...的声音仿佛在为某人加油助威 The sound of the wind whistling through the leaves seemed to cheer on the tired runners. 环境描写 风穿过树叶的声响，仿佛在为疲惫的选手们加油鼓劲。 练习：雨后彩虹的仿佛在庆祝奔跑者们的坚持。(perseverance) The rainbow after the rain seemed to celebrate the runners’perseverance. A rainbow appeared after the rain , as if celebrating the runners’ perseverance. 场景2：社会环境 环境句式3: When sb.+动作（夺冠/进球/冲线）, the crowd +情绪爆发动作（欢呼/尖叫/鼓掌/呐喊） When Mike struggled to cross the finish line, the crowd erupted into wild cheers and thunderous applause. （erupt爆发） 环境+动作描写 当迈克奋力冲过终点线时，人群爆发出震耳欲聋的欢呼与雷鸣般的掌声。 翻译：当Jack在最后10秒将球射入球门时（scored a goal），人群激动地尖叫 起来，互相拥抱。 When Jack score a goal in the last 10 seconds, the crowd screamed with excitement, hugging each other. part 3 writing Writing 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On the big cross-country run（越野跑） day, students from seven local primary schools warmed up and checked the forest route. I spotted David, a small 10-year-old, standing alone by a fence, his usual big smile gone—he’d decided not to run. His coach, fearing he’d be laughed at by other kids, had let him choose. David had a brain disease that slowed his walking or running , yet he never missed a practice, always finishing long after others but surely. As his special education teacher, I hugged him, stressing participation matters more than results. Inspired, David looked up firmly: “I will run.” (2022年新高考I卷 越野跑 改编） I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.(字数75词左右） 8 mins Show Time！ “作文互评” 评分量表 评分维度 4分（优秀） 3分（良好） 1分（待改进） 动作描写 用2+课件句式，细节生动 用1个课件句式，细节较完整 无课件句式，细节模糊 心理描写 用2课件句式，贴合比赛场景，情感真实 用1个课件句式，情感平淡 脱离场景，情感突兀 环境描写 用2课件句式，贴合环境氛围，有渲染作用 用1个课件句式，基本贴合环境 不贴合环境 逻辑连接 过渡自然，衔接紧密 有过渡词，略显生硬 无过渡，逻辑断裂 Evaluation Sample I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.With the loud sound of the starting gun, all the competitors rushed out from the starting line like arrows, except for David, who was left behind soon despite great efforts.(动作描写）“Come on, David!”I shouted crazily in the crowd.（语言描写） Hearing the encouraging words, David felt a mix of hope and self-doubt ,his mind racing with all the hours of training, which kept him running. The sound of the wind passing through leaves seemed to cheer for his determination.（环境描写）Finally, when David struggled to cross the finish line, the crowd erupted into wild cheers and thunderous applause. (动作+环境描写）It was this experience that David came to a profound realization:his limits were far beyond what he had once imagined.（心理描写） Summary Action： 1. With the loud sound of the starting gun, sb rushed out from the starting line like arrows. Sb quickly ... 2. The world around him/her fading into a blur, 主语 focused only on the... (目标) 3. sb’s+肢体部位+ screaming in pain/aching badly, 主语+ pushed himself to the limit , +doing...（描述爆发性动作） Psychology： 1 A mix of +情绪名词1 and 情绪名词2 surged through sb as sb ... , sb's mind racing with... 2. In that moment of ... (victory/defeat/exhaustion), 主语 came to a profound realization: ... Environment： 1. (The sound of ) sth.... seemed to cheer on sb... 2. When sb.+动作（夺冠/进球/冲线）, the crowd +情绪爆发动作（欢呼/尖叫/鼓掌/呐喊) 名言 1. “Teamwork makes the dream work” —— Michael Jordan 2. “Victory is not final, defeat is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.” —— Winston Churchill 温斯顿·丘吉尔 （前英国首相） 成功不是终点，失败也非致命，重要的是继续前进的勇气。 3.“The most important thing is not to win but to take part.” —— 皮埃尔·德·顾拜旦（现代奥运会之父） 最重要的不是赢得金牌，而是参与。 4.“Sport has the power to change the world.” —— 纳尔逊·曼德拉（前南非总统） 5. “Greatness is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.”—— 孔子 伟大与否不在于永不失败，而在于每次都能卷土重来。 游泳比赛 Homework 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “JAMIE EVANS.” Oh no. Please tell me that Coach Cafferty did NOT just say my name. Not for the one-hundred-meter breaststroke（蛙泳）.Except all eyes were turned to me when she announced it，and her eyes met mine over the clipboard（剪贴板）that held the list of events and swimmers for the Plain Township Aquatic Center meet. The PTAC meet was the first of the season, and I was not ready. “Remember, the meet is on Wednesday night. Be here at four-thirty for and the race kicks off at six. I'll see you at practice tomorrow.”Coach Cafferty added. The crowd cleared quickly and I headed back home,feeling desperate. “Did you find out your events for Wednesday?”Mom asked as she slid the pizza box across the table to me. “Yeah. One-hundred breaststroke,”I finally said, not meeting her eyes.“I don't know why Coach didn't give me backstroke（仰泳）.She knows it's my best. I can't swim breaststroke！” “Maybe she sees something you don't.”Mom said. “Or maybe I should just quit the swim team.” Mom frowned.“Is that what you want？” I sighed.“No.”I took a bite of my pizza.“I'm terrible at breaststroke. What happens when I show up on Wednesday and race，and I sink to the bottom of the pool？Or even worse，come in last？” “Someone has to be last.”Mom pointed out. 游泳比赛 Homework “But I don't even know if I can swim breaststroke for one-hundred meters!”I set my pizza down.“She had submitted the names,but there's no way I can do this.” “You could. But how will you know unless you try?”Mom persuaded. “Yeah, but if I try, I could fail. In front of everyone.”I pictured the entire crowd watching as I finished last,pointing and laughing. My belly squeezed. Mom set her pizza down and gave me her I’m-saying-something-important-so-listen face. “Don't worry about other people. Just race against yourself.Forget about anything else except doing your best and swimming your own race.Prove to yourself that you can do it.” Somehow, there seemed a mysterious power in her words comforting my unsettling heart and I decided to have a try. The next day,I was at practice as required. Paragraph 1: The first practice was a disaster. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Then everything crashed in the last 5 meters of the race. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 要求： 1. 使用至少两个课堂上学过的句式 2. 必须包含心理描写和动作描写 3. 加入1处环境描写和1句名言引用（进阶层） 4. 字数不超过150词 Thank you for listening $