2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---与小猫相伴的治愈时光 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At twenty-four, I moved to America, a massive 11,000 kilometers away from my homeland. The initial excitement of a new start soon faded, replaced by the harsh reality of fitting into an unfamiliar environment. Since I worked from home, my world was reduced to the four walls of my small apartment and a glowing laptop screen. I spent my days in video meetings where people spoke a language that was still a bit too fast for me to fully grasp. When the screens went dark, the silence of the rooms seemed to echo my own growing sense of displacement. I was physically in a new country, but mentally, I was still searching for a place to land. Desperate to break this suffocating (令人窒息的) isolation, I signed up as a volunteer at a local animal shelter. My supervisor, a kind woman named Sarah, introduced me to the residents. In the farthest corner of the cat section, she stopped before a small cage. “This is Luna,” she whispered. “She was found abandoned in a rainy alley. She’s terrified of everything.” Luna was a small, grey-and-white cat with large, lonely green eyes. Whenever I approached, she would cower (畏缩) in the corner, her tiny body shaking at the slightest sound. Sarah told me that my only task was to help Luna feel safe again. For the first two weeks, I sat outside her cage for hours every day. I brought my laptop and worked there, or I would speak to her softly about the home I missed, describing the busy streets and the scent of my mother’s cooking. I wanted to comfort her, but the invisible wall between us remained. One stormy afternoon, a sudden crash of thunder shook the shelter’s roof. The lights flickered, and the animals began to cry out in fear. I looked at Luna, who trembled more than ever, her breath coming in quick, tiny gasps (喘气) as she tried to hide behind a small wooden box in her cage. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I moved to America and suffered from loneliness and alienation--- _________________ --- I volunteered at a local animal shelter to fight isolation--- _________________ --- I met a scared abandoned cat named Luna--- _________________ --- I accompanied Luna patiently but failed to gain her trust--- a thunderstorm struck and terrified Luna 4. 细节问答 Why did the author feel lonely in America? ：___________________________________ Why did the author sign up to be a volunteer?：_________________________________ What was wrong with Luna?：________________________________________________ What was the author’s task at the shelter?： __________________________________________ What did the author do to accompany Luna?： _____________________________________________ What happened on the stormy afternoon?： _________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者远赴美国生活，身处陌生环境，饱受孤独与漂泊感的困扰→为摆脱封闭压抑的生活，作者前往动物收容所做志愿者→______________________________________→作者每日耐心陪伴、轻声安抚，试图获得猫咪信任，却始终存在隔阂→一场雷雨突袭，惊吓了本就胆小的Luna→（续写）作者打开笼子陪伴安抚猫咪，收获猫咪信任→（续写）________________________________________________________ 6．情感线 I：lonely and displaced→___________→gentle and patient→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. 衔接句1——How did I comfort Luna? Did Luna trust me finally? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. 衔接句2——What change did I experience? What did I learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我打开笼门，安静地坐在它身旁。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：Luna的改变也慢慢治愈了我。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。 四.段落续写 I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（作者）：远赴异国、孤独漂泊、内心敏感温柔，耐心善良、乐于陪伴治愈他人；Luna（小猫）：被人遗弃、胆小怯懦、极度缺乏安全感，渴望温暖与陪伴；Sarah（主管）：温柔善良、热心助人。 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I moved to America and suffered from loneliness and alienation→ I felt displaced and isolated in a foreign country→ I volunteered at a local animal shelter to fight isolation→ I met a scared abandoned cat named Luna→ I accompanied Luna patiently but failed to gain her trust→ a thunderstorm struck and terrified Luna 4. 细节问答 Why did the author feel lonely in America? ：She lived far away from homeland and struggled to adapt to the unfamiliar foreign environment. Why did the author sign up to be a volunteer?：She desired to get rid of the suffocating loneliness and isolation. What was wrong with Luna?：Abandoned by its owner, Luna was scared of everything and lacked a sense of security. What was the author’s task at the shelter?：To help the frightened cat Luna feel safe again. What did the author do to accompany Luna?：She sat beside its cage, worked there and talked softly about her hometown to comfort it. What happened on the stormy afternoon?：A heavy thunderstorm hit the shelter, scaring Luna and other animals greatly. What does the story tell us?：Companionship is mutual. We cure others with kindness and meanwhile heal ourselves. 5．情节线 作者远赴美国生活，身处陌生环境，饱受孤独与漂泊感的困扰→为摆脱封闭压抑的生活，作者前往动物收容所做志愿者→遇见被遗弃、胆小怯懦、极度缺乏安全感的小猫Luna→作者每日耐心陪伴、轻声安抚，试图获得猫咪信任，却始终存在隔阂→一场雷雨突袭，惊吓了本就胆小的Luna→（续写）作者温柔安抚受惊的猫咪，打破隔阂，收获信任→（续写）猫咪逐渐开朗，双向陪伴，治愈了作者的异国孤独，完成双向救赎 6．情感线 I：lonely and displaced→helpless and depressed→gentle and patient→healed and peaceful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：远赴美国的作者深陷异国孤独，前往动物收容所做志愿者，耐心陪伴胆小怯懦的流浪猫，在治愈小猫的同时，也被小猫的陪伴治愈，完成双向救赎。 英文：Feeling lonely and displaced in a foreign country, the author volunteered in an animal shelter to accompany a frightened cat. Gradually, they healed each other with sincere companionship. 8. 句式 状语从句：Since I worked from home, my world was reduced to the four walls of my small apartment. 非谓语动词：Whenever I approached, she would cower in the corner, her tiny body shaking. 宾语从句：I wanted to comfort her, but the invisible wall between us remained. 并列句：The initial excitement of a new start soon faded, replaced by the harsh reality. 定语从句： I spent my days in video meetings where people spoke a language that was still a bit too fast for me to fully grasp. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：陪伴是双向的救赎，温柔与善意不仅可以治愈他人，也能治愈自己的孤独与迷茫。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. 衔接句1——How did I comfort Luna? Did Luna trust me finally? I soothed the terrified Luna with soft words and gentle touches, and Luna gradually calmed down and trusted me for the first time. Paragraph 2: Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. 衔接句2——What change did I experience? What did I learn? Accompanying Luna helped me walk out of loneliness. I learned that sincere companionship could warm lonely souls. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我打开笼门，安静地坐在它身旁。 →①我轻声安抚、温柔抚摸瑟瑟发抖的Luna→②Luna逐渐放下戒备，不再躲闪→③雷雨过后，Luna主动靠近我，彻底接纳我； 第二段：Luna的改变也慢慢治愈了我。 →①日复一日的双向陪伴温暖了孤独的我→②我不再迷茫消沉，慢慢融入新生活→③我领悟陪伴双向治愈、温柔抵御孤独的意义。 四.段落续写（满分范文，150词左右） I opened the cage door and sat quietly beside her. Ignoring the roaring thunder outside, I stroked her trembling body gently and whispered soft comforting words. Nervous and scared, Luna attempted to hide but soon found no threat from me. Gradually, her breath steadied. Tentatively, she lifted her head and rubbed her tiny head against my hand. It was the first time she had actively approached me, breaking the invisible wall between us. Luna’s progress soon began to change me as well. As Luna grew braver and more affectionate in my company, my own loneliness faded little by little. Every quiet moment spent with her filled my dull foreign life with warmth. I no longer felt displaced or isolated. I realized healing was mutual. While I helped Luna regain courage and security, her sincere companionship cured my homesickness and loneliness, letting me finally find my settled place in the foreign land. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $