2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---被毁的画作 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sophia was a 16-year-old girl who had a great passion for painting. Ever since she was little, she had dreamed of becoming an artist, and every brushstroke she made was filled with love. For months, she had been working on a special painting for the district art competition. It was her most precious piece, full of her hope and effort — a vibrant landscape of the park where she used to walk with her grandfather. She kept it carefully in her schoolbag, planning to hand it in the next day, her heart fluttering with anticipation. That afternoon, her deskmate Ethan noticed that she was anxiously searching everywhere for her notebook, so he offered to help her look for it. In his eagerness to assist, he accidentally knocked the painting onto the floor in his hurry. Worse still, before either of them could react, a cup of coffee that Sophia had left on the corner of the desk was knocked over, and the dark liquid poured directly onto the painting. The colors ran, the paper soaked through, and the beautiful scene was badly ruined beyond repair. Seeing her months of hard work destroyed in an instant, Sophia felt as if her heart had been torn apart. Her face turned red with anger and she shouted at Ethan, her voice shaking. She accused him of being thoughtless and careless, and told him she never wanted to talk to him again. Ethan stood frozen, his face pale with shock and guilt. He opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out. He felt extremely sorry, but he didn’t know how to make it right. For days, they didn’t speak to each other. The classroom felt cold and empty without their usual laughter, and their friendship was in deep trouble. At night, Sophia stared at the ruined painting, feeling a mixture of sadness and regret. She missed Ethan’s jokes, his help with homework, and the way he always cheered her up. But her pride kept her from reaching out. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next morning, Ethan showed up in front of Sophia with a nervous look. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tears came to Sophia’s eyes as she truly understood Ethan’s kindness. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Sophia loved painting and dreamed of being an artist--- _________________ --- Ethan helped Sophia look for her notebook and ruined her painting accidentally--- _________________ --- Sophia shouted angrily and broke their friendship--- _________________ --- Sophia felt sad and regretful at night but refused to apologize 4. 细节问答 What was Sophia’s dream? ：___________________________________ What did Sophia prepare for the district art competition?： _________________________________ Why did Ethan knock over Sophia’s painting?： ________________________________________________ What was the result of the accident?：__________________________________________ How did Sophia react to the accident?： _____________________________________________ How did Ethan feel after ruining the painting?： _________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 热爱绘画的Sophia耗时数月创作画作，准备参加地区艺术比赛→______________________________→Sophia愤怒斥责Ethan，二人断绝交流、友谊破裂→夜晚Sophia看着被毁的画作，满心后悔却碍于面子不肯道歉→（续写）___________________________________→（续写）Sophia读懂同桌的善意，放下执念、原谅对方，修复友谊 6．情感线 Sophia：expectant and hopeful→___________→sad and regretful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next morning, Ethan showed up in front of Sophia with a nervous look. 衔接句1——What did Ethan do to make up for his mistake? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Tears came to Sophia’s eyes as she truly understood Ethan’s kindness. 衔接句2——How did Sophia fix their friendship and what did she learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天早上，Ethan神色紧张地出现在Sophia面前。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：Sophia潸然落泪，真切读懂了Ethan的善意。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________。 四.段落续写 The next morning, Ethan showed up in front of Sophia with a nervous look. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tears came to Sophia’s eyes as she truly understood Ethan’s kindness. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Sophia：热爱绘画、心怀梦想，冲动易怒、自尊心强，善于反思、懂得知错自省；Ethan：热心善良、乐于助人，愧疚真诚、勇于承担过错，珍惜友谊。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Sophia loved painting and dreamed of being an artist--- she spent months finishing a painting for the art competition--- Ethan helped Sophia look for her notebook and ruined her painting accidentally--- the precious painting was completely destroyed--- Sophia shouted angrily and broke their friendship--- Sophia felt sad and regretful at night but refused to apologize 4. 细节问答 What was Sophia’s dream? ：She dreamed of becoming an artist. What did Sophia prepare for the district art competition?：A landscape painting of the park where she walked with her grandfather. Why did Ethan knock over Sophia’s painting?：He hurried to help Sophia find her notebook and accidentally knocked down the painting and coffee. What was the result of the accident?：Sophia’s months of hard-won painting was badly ruined and couldn’t be repaired. How did Sophia react to the accident?：She was extremely angry, shouted at Ethan and refused to talk with him again. How did Ethan feel after ruining the painting?：He felt shocked, guilty and extremely sorry. What does the story tell us?：True friendship lies in tolerance, understanding and mutual forgiveness. 5．情节线 热爱绘画的Sophia耗时数月创作画作，准备参加地区艺术比赛，承载着回忆与梦想→同桌Ethan热心帮Sophia寻找笔记本，慌乱中意外损毁画作→Sophia怒火中烧，斥责Ethan，二人冷战、友谊破裂→夜晚Sophia独自感伤，怀念友谊却碍于自尊不愿低头→（续写）次日Ethan带着临摹的画作真诚道歉，尽力弥补过错→（续写）Sophia深受触动，放下芥蒂原谅对方，懂得包容与珍惜，修复珍贵友谊 6．情感线 Sophia：expectant and hopeful→furious and heartbroken→sad and regretful→moved and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：少女Sophia的参赛画作被同桌Ethan意外损毁，她愤怒地断绝友谊，事后心生悔意，最终被同桌真诚的弥补与善意打动，学会包容，重归于好。 英文：Sophia’s precious competition painting was accidentally ruined by her deskmate. After losing her temper and breaking their friendship, she was touched by his sincere apology and learned to forgive and cherish friendship. 8. 句式 状语从句：Before either of them could react, a cup of coffee was knocked over. 非谓语动词：Seeing her months of hard work destroyed in an instant, Sophia felt heartbroken. 宾语从句：She accused him of being thoughtless and careless. 并列句：Her face turned red with anger and she shouted at Ethan, her voice shaking. 定语从句：It was her most precious piece, full of her hope and effort — a vibrant landscape of the park where she used to walk with her grandfather. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：真正的友谊贵在包容与谅解，遇事多一份体谅、少一份执拗，珍惜身边真挚的陪伴与善意。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next morning, Ethan showed up in front of Sophia with a nervous look. 衔接句1——What did Ethan do to make up for his mistake? Ethan held a newly-finished copied painting, made a sincere apology and explained that he tried his best to restore her work. Paragraph 2: Tears came to Sophia’s eyes as she truly understood Ethan’s kindness. 衔接句2——How did Sophia fix their friendship and what did she learn? Sophia let go of her anger, apologized for her rude behavior and realized friendship was more precious than a painting. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天早上，Ethan神色紧张地出现在Sophia面前。 →①Ethan手持连夜临摹的画作，忐忑地向Sophia道歉→②他解释自己尽力复刻原画，弥补过错→③Sophia十分惊讶，内心深受触动； 第二段：Sophia潸然落泪，真切读懂了Ethan的善意。 →①她为自己冲动易怒、咄咄逼人的行为愧疚道歉→②二人解开误会、重归于好→③Sophia领悟画作可以重来，友谊值得珍惜。 四.段落续写（满分范文，150词左右） The next morning, Ethan showed up in front of Sophia with a nervous look. Clutching a rolled painting tightly, he lowered his head and made a sincere apology. He explained that he had spent the whole night copying her landscape painting, trying his best to restore every detail of the original work. “I’m truly sorry for ruining your hard work,” he murmured anxiously, waiting for her blame. Staring at the carefully painted picture, Sophia was stunned, warm waves sweeping over her heart. Tears came to Sophia’s eyes as she truly understood Ethan’s kindness. She felt ashamed of her rude and impulsive behavior. Smiling softly, she forgave him without hesitation and apologized for losing her temper. She realized paintings could be recreated, but precious friendship could never be replaced. From then on, they cherished each other more deeply, learning to understand and tolerate one another in their daily life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $