内容正文:
高中英语《应用文写作》专练
答案与解析
第一篇
【答案】
Dear Ms. Liu,
I’m Li Hua, a university-bound student. Greatly interested in the beach combing and coastal life on Tik Tok, I’m writing to enquire of you about something detailed about your advertisement placed on Tik Tok for your homestay.
We, a group of 6 girls, are to arrive at your hotel the next morning after Gaokao ends, namely, June 10th, and will stay for a whole week. Could you tell me exactly how far it is from the hotel to the beach where we can go beach climbing and swimming? Is it convenient for us to listen to the waves at night in our room? Will you accompany us to the beach and guide us when we are there, essential equipment provided? Does the money you charge cover 3 meals?
Thanks! I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给刘女士写一封信,表明想去海边民宿体验生活,告知刘女士相关行程安排、咨询房屋及赶海相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
询问:enquire→inquire
准确地:exactly→accurately
陪伴某人:accompany sb.→keep sb. company
包括:cover→include
2.句式拓展:简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to enquire of you about something detailed about your advertisement placed on Tik Tok for your homestay.
拓展句:I’m writing to enquire of you about something detailed about your advertisement which was placed on Tik Tok for your homestay.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Could you tell me exactly how far it is from the hotel to the beach where we can go beach climbing and swimming? (运用了how 引导的宾语从句和where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Will you accompany us to the beach and guide us when we are there, essential equipment provided? (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
第二篇
【答案】
Last week I went to Hongxing Farm to pick apples with my classmates in the suburbs, which has impressed itself on my memory.
First, a farmer there gave us some direction, and then we started picking apples. Each of us carried a basket and a pair of scissors, quickly climbed up the ladder and started to pick apples.
Through this experience, I realize how tough it is to work in the fields in the burning sun. How great the farmers are! We all need to take part in this activity to cherish the work of farmers.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生所在的英语社团正在进行以“热爱劳动”为主题的交流会,现请你根据以下要点发言,分享你的劳动故事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难的:difficult →tough
开始:start→ begin
重视:value→ cherish
指导:instruction→ direction
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, a farmer there gave us some direction, and then we started picking apples.
拓展句:First, a farmer there gave us some direction, after which we started picking apples.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Last week I went to Hongxing Farm to pick apples with my classmates in the suburbs, which has impressed itself on my memory.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Through this experience, I realize how tough it is to work in the fields in the burning sun.(运用how引导的宾语从句)
第三篇
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to invite you, on behalf of our school, to participate in an upcoming event called “Respect others”. The event will be held next Wednesday at our school auditorium.
This event holds great significance as it aims to promote mutual respect and understanding among students. We believe that by fostering an environment where respect is valued, our students will develop into compassionate and empathetic individuals.
Personally, I am excited about this event as it provides an opportunity for students to interact with individuals from different cultures and backgrounds. It is through such interactions that we can broaden our perspectives and embrace diversity. Thank you in advance for considering our invitation. We look forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。下周三你校举行一次“Respect others”的活动,你将代表学校邀请外籍老师Mr Smith来校参加这个活动,要求考生给其写信进行邀请。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表:on behalf of→representing
参加:participate in→ take part in
活动:event→activity
举办:hold→ launch
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to invite you, on behalf of our school, to participate in an upcoming event called “Respect others”.
拓展句:I am writing to invite you, on behalf of our school, to participate in an upcoming event which is called “Respect others”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This event holds great significance as it aims to promote mutual respect and understanding among students. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】 It is through such interactions that we can broaden our perspectives and embrace diversity. (运用了强调句的结构)
第四篇
【答案】Welcome to Our English Club
March 28, 2024
Welcome to our English Club! It could serve as a platform to show your outstanding abilities and help you develop a range of great skills.
You can participate in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on. These after-class activities could offer you abundant opportunities. First, your active participation is helpful in strengthening the sense of responsibility and managing interpersonal relations. Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English. A good command of English will undoubtedly give you a competitive advantage over your peers.
You can file a written application to our staff office or email us via englishclub@163.com. The deadline for entries is April 9. Come on, and join us now!
English Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一则招新启事, 欢迎同学们加入到学校英语社团。
【详解】1.词汇积累
杰出的:outstanding→remarkable/distinguished
参加:participate in→ take part in
提供:offer→provide
首先:first→ first of all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:You can participate in a variety of activities including staging musical dramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on.
拓展句:You can participate in a variety of activities which include staging musical dramas, holding group discussions, watching Oscar-winning movies, and so on.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, various activities organized by us could raise your level of proficiency in English.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】A good command of English will undoubtedly give you a competitive advantage over your peers.(运用了一般将来时的结构)
第五篇
【答案】Dear Elly,
I am glad to receive your email, telling me you are interested in acting and eager to join us. I’m writing to share the information with you.
You are expected to sign up for it from next Monday to next Friday. We welcome individuals with a passion and talent for performing, good communication skills, and the ability to work in a team. No prior experience is necessary as we provide training and support.
Grab this opportunity to showcase your talent and join our vibrant club. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Elly回信,告知话剧团招募成员的信息。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:provide→offer
展示:showcase→show
机会:opportunity→chance
高兴的:glad→delighted
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We welcome individuals with a passion and talent for performing, good communication skills, and the ability to work in a team.
拓展句:We welcome individuals, who have a passion and talent for performing, good communication skills, and the ability to work in a team.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Grab this opportunity to showcase your talent and join our vibrant club. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
[高分句型2] No prior experience is necessary as we provide training and support. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
第六篇
【答案】Dear Terry,
I am Li Hua. Learning that you would like to take a characteristic course of our school, I strongly recommend the course of Chinese painting.
As a time-honored art form, Chinese painting enjoys a high reputation at home and abroad. This course will not only offer a systematic knowledge of its history but also guide you to appreciate the renowned masterpieces. On top of that, you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting. If you have any questions, please do feel free to ask me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自新西兰的交换生Terry发封邮件,给他推荐一门特色课程,介绍一下推荐的课程以及推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
享有:enjoy → be entitled to
提供:offer → supply
著名的:renowned → well-known
更重要的是:on top of that → most importantly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On top of that, you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting.
拓展句:On top of that, you can learn to use Chinese brush and ink to create your own painting, which will make you have a sense of achievement.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you would like to take a characteristic course of our school, I strongly recommend the course of Chinese painting.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】This course will not only offer a systematic knowledge of its history but also guide you to appreciate the renowned masterpieces.(运用了not only…but also…连接两个并列结构)
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$高中英语《应用文写作》专练
第一篇
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是李华,在抖音上碰巧刷到刘女士发布海边民宿招租信息,刚好打算今年高考结束
后和五位女伴前往体验生活一周。请写信向李女士咨询。
内容包括:
1.告知行程时间安排:
2.咨询房屋相关具体事项;3.赶海相关事宜等。
注意:
1.词数80词左右:
2.请在答题卡相应位置作答。
参考词汇:抖音Tik Tok赶海comb the beach民宿homestay
Dear Ms.Liu,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二篇
第二节书面表达(满分15分)
假定你所在的英语社团正在进行以“热爱劳动”为主题的交流会,现请你根据以下要点发
言,分享你的劳动故事。
1.描述一次难忘的劳动经历:
2.劳动的意义及自己的感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第三篇
第二节书面表达(满分15分)
假定你是李华,下周三你校举行一次“Respect others'”的活动,你将代表学校邀请外籍老师
Mr Smith来校参加这个活动,其内容如下:
1.活动的地点:
2.活动的意义:
3.你的感想。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第四篇
第一节(满分15分)
66.假定你是学生会主席李华。请为校英文报写一则招新启事,欢迎同学们加入到学校英语
社团,启事内容包括:
1.介绍社团的活动:
2参加社团的好处:
3加入社团的方式
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Our English Club
March 28,2024
Welcome to our English club!
English Club
第五篇
第一节(满分15分)
假定你是校话剧团团长李华。你校交换生Ey对表演很感兴趣,得知话剧团正在招募新的
成员,写信向你咨询相关信息。请给她写封回信。内容包括:
1.报名时间;
2.演员自身条件。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Elly,
Yours,
Li Hua
第六篇
第一节(满分15分)
46.假定你是李华,你校来自新西兰的交换生Tey发邮件请你推荐一门特色课程,请你用
英文给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的课程及简介:
2.推荐的理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
Yours,
LiHua