2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---蜕变与成长 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Half a year ago, fat and lazy, I was in low spirits. During a free and easy gathering, as I struggled to button my over-sized T-shirt, my friends made fun of me, their sharp remarks about my “jiggling belly” and “elephant-like posture” cutting through the air like knives, though they said it was harmless joking. My face burned hotter than the sun as their imitations (模仿) of my walk drew attention from strangers, turning what should have been a joyful reunion into an embarrassment (尴尬) that is still fresh in my memory. Looking at the figure in the mirror, I realized myself out of shape, no wonder they were making fun of me! “I have to lose weight and keep fit,” I promised to myself, “no matter what.” Act on it! The next morning, I equipped myself with sports clothes and went out into the park, starting running. Yet everything was quite different from what I had imagined. Half an hour seemed so long and the path seemed endless. In a short while, I was out of breath, sweat down my face, legs aching. I stopped to take a breath, full of doubts on my decision. I was at the point of giving up when my neighbor, Jean, came into view, who was walking her dog in the park. “Hi, Adam. Are you free recently?” “Yes, a bit.” I answered. “Would you mind walking Amy, my little Pomeranian, every morning for one week when I am out on business?” “Walking a dog is a good workout, much easier than running.” I thought to myself. “My pleasure” was my reply. 注意： 第1页 共4页 第1页 共4页 第2页 共4页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 However, the first morning of my walking duties was bitter cold. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The seven-day duty turned me into a morning workout person. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I was fat, lazy and depressed--- _________________ --- friends’ joking embarrassed me deeply--- _________________ --- I decided to lose weight and keep fit--- _________________ --- running was tough and I wanted to give up--- I agreed to walk Jean’s dog for a week 4. 细节问答 What made the author determined to lose weight? ： ___________________________________ How did the author feel at the friend gathering?： _________________________________ Why did the author want to give up running?： ________________________________________________ What help did Jean offer to the author?： __________________________________________ Why did the author accept the dog-walking task?： _____________________________________________ What was the author’s initial state?： _________________________________________________ What benefit can dog-walking bring to the author?： ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者身材肥胖、状态低迷→聚会时被朋友取笑，倍感尴尬屈辱→作者下定决心减肥塑形、改变自己→初次晨跑疲惫不堪，濒临放弃→偶遇邻居Jean，答应帮忙一周遛狗替代跑步→_________________ →（续写）遛狗过程艰难，却咬牙坚持→（续写）坚持晨练实现蜕变，收获自律与成长 6．情感线 I：depressed and inferior→___________→determined and ambitious→___________→ relieved and hopeful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；独立主格 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: However, the first morning of my walking duties was bitter cold. 衔接句1——What difficulties did the author meet? How did he persist? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The seven-day duty turned me into a morning workout person. 衔接句2——What changes did the author experience? What lesson did he learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：然而，我开始遛狗任务的第一天清晨就格外寒冷。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：七天的遛狗任务让我养成了晨练的习惯。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 However, the first morning of my walking duties was bitter cold. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The seven-day duty turned me into a morning workout person. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（自卑颓废、知错能改、坚韧自律、勇于蜕变的少年）；Jean（善良热心、无意间帮助他人的邻居）；friends（随口调侃、无心伤人的朋友） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 I was fat, lazy and depressed--- I was laughed at by friends at a gathering--- friends’ joking embarrassed me deeply--- I realized my out-of-shape figure--- I decided to lose weight and keep fit--- running was exhausting and I wanted to give up--- I agreed to walk Jean’s dog for a week as daily exercise 4. 细节问答 What made the author determined to lose weight? ：He was teased and embarrassed by friends at a gathering because of his fat figure, inspiring him to change himself. How did the author feel at the friend gathering?：He felt extremely embarrassed, ashamed and humiliated. Why did the author want to give up running?：Running was exhausting, making him out of breath with aching legs, which wore out his determination. What help did Jean offer to the author?：She asked the author to walk her Pomeranian every morning for a week while she was on business. Why did the author accept the dog-walking task?：He thought walking a dog was easier and more suitable for him than tough running. What was the author’s initial state?：He was overweight, lazy, low-spirited and lacking self-discipline. What benefit can dog-walking bring to the author?：It served as gentle daily workout, helped him form morning exercise habits and build perseverance. What does the story tell us?：Perseverance and self-discipline lead to self-improvement. Small continuous efforts can bring amazing self-transformation. 5．情节线 作者身材肥胖、状态低迷→聚会时被朋友取笑，倍感尴尬屈辱→作者下定决心减肥塑形、改变自己→初次晨跑疲惫不堪，濒临放弃→偶遇邻居Jean，答应帮忙一周遛狗替代跑步→清晨天气严寒，遛狗过程充满艰辛→（续写）咬牙坚持完成每日任务，克服惰性→（续写）养成晨练习惯，成功减脂蜕变，收获自律与成长 6．情感线 I：depressed and inferior→embarrassed and determined→tired and discouraged→hopeful and relieved→persistent and confident（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者因身材肥胖被朋友取笑，决心减肥，初次跑步受挫后通过帮邻居遛狗锻炼，坚持每日晨练，最终克服惰性、实现自我蜕变与成长。 英文：Teased by friends for his fat figure, the author decided to lose weight. Frustrated by tough running, he chose dog-walking as daily exercise and stuck to morning workouts, finally achieving self-transformation. 8. 句式 状语从句：Yet everything was quite different from what I had imagined. 非谓语动词：my friends made fun of me, their sharp remarks cutting through the air like knives. 宾语从句：I realized myself out of shape. 定语从句：I was at the point of giving up when my neighbor, Jean, came into view, who was walking her dog. 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：所有蜕变都源于坚持与自律，直面自身不足、克服惰性、持之以恒，便能突破自我、遇见更好的自己。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: However, the first morning of my walking duties was bitter cold. 衔接句1——What difficulties did the author meet? How did he persist? Faced with freezing wind and laziness, the author resisted the urge to give up and stuck to walking the dog every morning carefully. Paragraph 2: The seven-day duty turned me into a morning workout person. 衔接句2——What changes did the author experience? What lesson did he learn? The author gained regular exercise habits, got in shape and realized perseverance is the key to self-improvement. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：然而，我开始遛狗任务的第一天清晨就格外寒冷。 →①寒风刺骨，早起十分煎熬，我萌生退意→②小狗活泼好动，遛狗远比想象劳累→③我回忆曾经的尴尬，咬牙坚持完成每日任务； 第二段：七天的遛狗任务让我养成了晨练的习惯。 →①我彻底摆脱惰性，坚持每日早起运动→②体能与体态大幅改善，整个人更加自信→③领悟坚持的意义，完成自我成长与蜕变。 四.段落续写（标准答案） However, the first morning of my walking duties was bitter cold. The freezing wind swept across the park, piercing my cheeks. Tempted by the warm bed, I almost gave up. But recalling the embarrassment of being laughed at by friends, I plucked up my courage and went out. Little Amy was energetic, running around constantly. Chasing her in the cold wind was tiring, yet I insisted on finishing the task carefully every morning. The seven-day duty turned me into a morning workout person. Gradually, I got used to getting up early and exercising outdoors. My body became stronger and lighter, and my former laziness faded away. Inspired by the small progress, I restarted running every morning. Months later, I successfully got in shape and regained confidence. I truly learned that self-transformation never comes easily, and perseverance always pays off in life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $