2025-2026学年高二年级作文专项：读后续写 课件

该高中英语课件聚焦读后续写模块，系统梳理了第五档评分标准（内容逻辑、词汇语法、衔接连贯）、段落写作框架（Para1寻求建议-完成写作，Para2感动-感谢-感悟）及具体步骤（如告诉妈妈、妈妈建议等），通过关键词概括、句子练习（三连动、语法分析）等方式串联语言要素与写作逻辑，帮助学生构建完整的读后续写知识网络。 其亮点在于以核心素养为导向，通过“情境创设-步骤分解-语言训练”模式提升学生语言能力与思维品质，如设计“三连动句子练习”“语法结构填空”等活动，引导学生掌握衔接手段与逻辑表达，同时提供分层写作框架（Para1/Para2具体步骤）满足个性化复习需求。这不仅帮助学生巩固写作技巧，也为教师提供清晰的教学路径，提高复习效率。

读后续写 实战一篇！ 评分标准 第五档（21～25分） -创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写 完整，与原文情境融洽度高。 -使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能 有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。 -有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰， 意义连贯。 Learning objectives 2 人物缩影 关键词概括 人物缩影 stick her nose into my business nosy dancing, nosy, bossy Mum Dad sister Bethany Me boss me around dancing bossy bowling basketball writing “It’s my writer’s notebook,” I said proudly. Bethany yawned, opening the fridge. “I wanted to be a writer,” I explained to Mum. Bethany let out a laugh, took a bottle of milk from the fridge and walked upstairs. “Ignore her,” Mum said softly. Mum& Miss Mackinnon bowling, believer dancing, nosy, bossy, doubter bowling, caring, believer writing, self-doubter basketball 4 Para1: 寻求建议-完成写作 Para2: 感动-感谢️-感悟 电影影视传媒 时间：20XX年06月13日 add your title here add your title here add your title here add title here add your title here add your title here add your title here add title here 汇报人：独家设计 在此添加LOGO Scene 1： 方案一： Mum + I 寻求建议-受挫-完成写作 方案二： Mum+I+ Mackinon方案三： Mum+I+ Bethany 寻求建议-完成写作 方案三： Mum+I+ Bethany Para 1 妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 I decided to tell Mum about the competition. 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 Mum arrived, loaded with shopping bags. 第一句：三连动 help Mum put the groceries away； invite her to sit down at___；explain the whole _____（情况） Bethany took a bottle of milk and walked upstairs. Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第一句：三连动 help Mum put the groceries away； invite her to sit down at___；explain the whole _____（情况） I helped Mum put the groceries away, invited her to sit down at the dining table and explained the whole situation. Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第二句：doing，主+谓 Seeing my___look, Mum said ___ (温柔地)，“Why don't you take inspiration from ____(magic的来源)? ” Noticing my frustrated look, Mum said softly，“Why don’t you take inspiration from your wildest dreams？After all, that’s where true magic lies. ” Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第三句：done, 主+谓, doing,定从 ___(encourage) by her, I stopped hanging out with friends,___(lock) myself in my bedroom,__ I spent hours___(work) on my writing every night. Encouraged by her, I stopped hanging out with friends, locking myself in my bedroom,where I spent hours working on my writing every night. Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第四句：balled up what I had written 第四句：However, I always_________what I had written and started from scratch. “It’s my writer’s notebook. ” Writers always carried a notebook with them in case an idea came up. deleted Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第五句：As the deadline for the entries drew to a close, I was getting nowhere and about to give up. Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第五句：那时声音忽短又忽长 第五句：It was then that...(请大家自由发挥) It was then that Bethany’s triumphant laugh flashed through my mind, which pushed me to keep writing. Para1 告诉妈妈-妈妈建议(hopeful but helpless)- 写不好-想放弃-姐姐“刺激”-完成写作 第六句： 约稿信 In addition, you are supposed to submit your work by May,1st. 请大家灵活改编本句话 Eventually, I managed to submit my work before the deadline. 第二段已给句：A few days later, I received an e-mail saying I had won the competition. 评分标准 第五档（21～25分） 1.创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写 完整，与原文情境融洽度高。 2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能 有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。 3.有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰， 意义连贯。 1.创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写 完整，与原文情境融洽度高。 2.使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解。 3.有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰， 意义连贯。 16 I decided to tell Mum about the competition. I helped Mum put the groceries away, invited her to sit down at the dining table and explained the whole situation. Noticing my frustrated look, Mum said softly，“Why don’t you take inspiration from your wildest dreams？After all, that’s where true magic lies. ” Encouraged by her, I stopped hanging out with friends, locking myself in my bedroom,where I spent hours working on my writing every night. However, I always deleted what I had written and started from scratch. As the deadline for the entries drew to a close, I was getting nowhere and about to give up. It was then that Bethany’s triumphant laugh flashed through my mind, which pushed me to keep writing. Eventually, I managed to submit my work before the deadline. I decided to tell Mum about the competition. I helped Mum put the groceries away, invited her to sit down at the dining table and explained the whole situation. Noticing my frustrated look, Mum said softly，“Why don’t you take inspiration from your wildest dreams？After all, that’s where true magic lies. ” Encouraged by her, I stopped hanging out with friends, locking myself in my bedroom,where I spent hours working on my writing every night. However, I always deleted what I had written and started from scratch. As the deadline for the entries drew to a close, I was getting nowhere and about to give up. It was then that Bethany’s triumphant laugh flashed through my mind, which pushed me to keep writing. Eventually, I managed to submit my work before the deadline. I decided to tell Mum about the competition. I helped Mum put the groceries away, invited her to sit down at the dining table and explained the whole situation. Noticing my frustrated look, Mum said softly，“Why don’t you take inspiration from your wildest dreams？After all, that’s where true magic lies. ” Encouraged by her, I stopped hanging out with friends, locking myself in my bedroom,where I spent hours working on my writing every night. However, I always deleted what I had written and started from scratch. As the deadline for the entries drew to a close, I was getting nowhere and about to give up. It was then that Bethany’s triumphant laugh flashed through my mind, which pushed me to keep writing. Eventually, I managed to submit my work before the deadline. 电影影视传媒 时间：20XX年06月13日 add your title here add your title here add your title here add title here add your title here add your title here add your title here add title here 汇报人：独家设计 在此添加LOGO Scene 2： 感动-感谢️-感悟 高兴-感谢️-感悟 改 变 的 都 有 谁 要求：线索线+改变与成长+定语从句！ Work magic in your writing ! Summer Fun Scott Holmes Music Music For Media Vol. 3, track 4 2018-04-06T05:48:39 Pop 135345.8 eng - URL: http://freemusicarchive.org/music/Scott_Holmes/Music_For_Media/Scott_Holmes_-_03_-_Summer_Fun Comments: http://freemusicarchive.org/ Curator: Copyright: Attribution-NonCommercial: http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/4.0/�TPE2�������Scott Holmes Music�TSSE�������Lavf57.57.100�������������������������������������������������������������������������� $