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英语选择性必修第四册
Period 6
写作项目Write an argume,
本单元的写作项目属于议论文体类别中的“辩
论性议论文”。议论文是以议论为主要表达方式,
运用一定的材料通过一定的论证方法来表明自己
的立场、观点或态度的文体。议论文一般由论题、
论点、论据、论证和结论构成。在议论文中,作者先
就论题(某一问题或现象)提出论点,然后辅之以相
关的论据,并在此基础上进行论证,以使读者同意
自己的看法,最终得出结论
由课文学写作范式(写得“像模像样”)
(一)课文范式提炼
Part 1.
说明辩论
如课文Text 1和Text2
Argument
的主题
开头句点明主题
辩
表述正方的
如课文Text2中第一至三
段列举海洋探索的好处
Part 2.
观点及其理由
议
Evidence
表述反方的
如课文Text1中第二至四
观点及其理由
段列举海洋探索的弊端
Part 3.
陈述自已
如课文Text 1和Text2中最
Restatement
的观点
后一段总结了自己的观,点
(二)写作要点指津
要写好议论文,必须注意以下几点:
1.确定论点
论点通常在文章的第一段提出。
2.论据要充分
欲证明自己的观点必须有充分的证据。可以
列举事实、展示数据、提供事例、借助常识或利用亲
身经历。
3.论证要有严密的逻辑性
所有事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论连接
起来。
4.态度诚恳友好
因为议论文重在说理,以理服人,所以态度要
诚恳。
5.写作手法多样
议论文在写作手法上以议论为主,但有时也可
运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。议论文中的说明常
为议论的开展创造条件,或是议论的补充;议论文
中的叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据的,因此,叙
述应该是概括的,描写应该是简要的。
6
Writing
tative essay on sea exploration
由课文学亮点表达(写得“韵味十足”)
阅读两篇文章的第一自然段,习得以下素养
O学亮点表达
l.短文一第一句用exploiting对应exploring,
指出了海洋探索的实质。第二句提出“海洋探索已
经造成了许多问题,并将继续引发更多问题。”这一
观点为下文做好了铺垫。第二句中连续用了两个
cause并结合比较级more加强了表意的冲击力。
短文二在第一句开头的不定式短语中用truly修饰
动词understand,加强了表意效果;第四句中用
take action强调了海洋探索的目的和作用。
2.短文一第二句用and连接并列谓语,表达了
海洋探索已经造成了许多问题,并将继续引发更多
问题这一观点,逻辑紧凑,给读者留下强烈印象。
短文二第二句用转折连词but,强调了海洋探索的
重要性;第三句用For example对这一观点进行了
例证;第四句用what引导的宾语从句客观描述了
人类进行海洋探索的意义,用so that引导状语从
句准确描述了海洋探索的目的;最后一句则用
Therefore进行了总结一开展更多研究是有必
要的。
[微点写作](单句语法填空/完成句子)
DHearing that you have developed a new app
for students sharing books,I feel
(true)
proud of your novel idea.
2It takes time to develop good manners,
we'll be able to behave properly if we're
willing to learn.
③We should
to expand the
economy
我们应该利用我们丰富的资源发展经济。
4I told my mother to teach me to cook a dish
every month
when my family
was busy.
我告诉妈妈每个月教我做一道菜,这样我在家
人忙的时候就能帮上忙。
○学写作手法
短文一第一段开门见山地指出海洋探索往往
意味着对海洋的过度开发,这会导致许多问题,提
出弊大于利的观点。短文二的第一句话阐明观点:
要更好地了解我们的星球,就必须探索占据地球绝
大部分面积的海洋。紧接着,作者就反对者的担忧
提出第一个分论点,即为了更好地理解和解决气候
变化等全球问题,我们需要进行海洋探索活动。
阅读第一篇文章的第二至四自然段、第二篇文
章的第二至三自然段,习得以下素养
○学亮点表达
1.短文一第二段第三句中用分词短语killing
many birds and fish作状语,指出了塑料污染导致
的严重结果。第三段第一句中especially强调了资
源开采对北极地区造成的严重破坏。第四段第二
句中作者用so-called一词表达了对某些以研究为
名实则行捕捞之实这种做法的不认可。第四段第
三句中用介词短语without mercy修饰动词
murdering,表达了作者的严重担忧。
2.短文二第二段中作者连续用了三个help和
动词manage,improve,discover,predict。第三段中
用vast和valuable两个极具褒义的形容词,突出海
洋探索的积极作用,表意清晰,给读者以深刻印象。
[微点写作](单句语法填空)
D Online teaching,not like face-to-face
teaching,lacks interaction between teachers and
students,
cause)teachers not to receive
feedbacks from students in time.
2 In conclusion,having a strong sense of
responsibility is very
value)to our life
and society.
3 Fresh fruits and vegetables are equally
important,which help to keep their diet
(balance)and make them eat healthily during this
special time.
○学逻辑衔接
短文一第二段第二句中描述了石油污染,第三
句在描述塑料污染的时候用also,even进一步指出
在我们的自来水中也发现了塑料污染,递进说明,
逻辑紧密。第三段第二、三句之间用转折连词But,
客观说明了化石燃料开采和冰川融化之间的这一
恶性循环关系。短文二第二段连续用了两个also,
进一步指出了海洋探索方面的好处。
阅读两篇文章的最后一个自然段,习得以下
素养
○学亮点表达
短文一最后一段第二句中作者用sensitive和
比较状语从句,突出了海洋脆弱的一面;第三句中
用f条件状语从句形象地指出如果我们不保护它,
子孙后代将不会原谅我们,感情真挚,发人深省。
短文二最后一段第一句中作者用Of course再次客
观地回应了反对者的担忧,然后用However话锋
一转,用balanced一词指出了平衡风险与经济需求
UNIT 3 SEA EXPLORATION
这一目标;最后一句中作者借助Hopefully这一副
词表达了对技术进步的期待。
[微点写作](单句语法填空/完成句子)
DI've found that with the College Entrance
Examination approaching I feel
(stressed)than I used to be.
©
hopeful),everyone is healthy
both physically and mentally.
③His gear was
even small metal
objects could be detected.
他的装备非常敏感,甚至连很小的金属物体都
能被探测到。
④
as I did,I strongly suggest that you
try to make friends with the people around you.
如果你遇到和我一样的问题,我强烈建议你尽
量和你周围的人交朋友。
。学修辞手法
短文一最后一段第一句话,作者采用比喻的修
辞手法,把海洋比作家园,形象生动,增强了个人观
点的说服力,能够激起读者保护海洋的意识和紧
迫感。
○学写作手法
两篇议论性质的短文,针对“海洋探索的利弊”
表达了针锋相对的观点。短文一最后一段,作者对
全文进行了总结并发出呼吁:海洋是生命的家园,
保护海洋迫在眉睫。短文二最后一段,作者再次回
应反对意见,表达了在环保与发展之间需要谋求平
衡的观点。
积素材充盈写作“语料库”
(一)表示对比
1.Some people support it while others do not.
有些人支持,然而有些人反对。
2.Different people hold different opinions.
不同的人持不同的意见。
3.Opinions are divided.
意见有分歧。
4.Others have different opinions.
其他人有不同看法。
5.I prefer to do...rather than do...
我宁愿做…而不愿做…
6....may be important,but it is...that
make(s)...happen.
…可能是重要的,但是正是…使…发生。
(二)表示论证
1.It is a good idea to do...
做…是一个好主意。
2.There is a famous saying that ..which
shows the importance of..
有句名言说…,表明了…的重要性。
英语选择性必修第四册
3.The message conveyed here is very clear...
这里所传达出的信息十分明确…
4.Measures should be taken to stop...
应该采取措施阻止…
5.We have had a survey on...
我们对…开展了一次调查。
6.There are several reasons for ...but in
general,they come down to three major ones.
导致…的原因有多种,但总的来说,它们可
以归纳为三个主要方面。
(三)作出总结
1.Hence it is not difficult to see that...
因此不难看出…
2.From what have been discussed above,it
can be concluded that ..
通过以上讨论,可以得出结论…
3.It may be briefly summed up as follows.
可以简要地概括如下。
4.Taking all these factors into account,we
naturally come to the conclusion that ..
考虑了所有这些因素,我们自然可以得出结
论…
5.Generally,I am in favour of the conclusion.
总的说来,我赞成这个结论。
[应用体验]
假设你是李华,最近你班就“人类是否应该进
行海洋探索”进行了讨论。请根据讨论结果,写一
封信给某英文报社的编辑来报道此事。
赞成的理由
反对的理由
你的看法
1.获取更多的海底资源;
1.造成海洋污染,导
2.提高对地球上生命的
致海洋生物死亡;
理解。
2.破坏生态系统。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
第一步
审题谋篇
审题谋篇
厂文体:议论文
审题十时态:以一般现在时为主
人称:以第三人称为主
开头:说明议论的话题,人类是否应该
进行海洋探索
谋篇
·主体:说明正方和反方的观点及其理由
结尾:表明自己的观点
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第二步遣词造句
核心词汇(含本单元词汇)
1.探索/开发海洋
2.支持
3.反对
4.食物和能量的来源
5.反对者
6.毁坏
7.杀害
8.怜悯
9.海生的;海的
连词成句(含本单元句型)
1.人们应该广泛探索海洋吗?
extensively?
2.昨天,我们班对此进行了激烈的讨论。
Our class
yesterday.
3.由于海洋探索使得发现新的食物和能源资源成
为可能,并提高我们对地球上生命的理解,一些
人支持海洋探索。
discover new
sources of food and energy and improves our
understanding of life on the earth,
4.海洋探索的反对者认为这可能会导致如此多的
污染以至于会破坏水下生态系统。
it can
destroy the underwater ecosystem.
5.如此多的海洋动物已被残忍地杀掉,海洋物种的
多样性正在被破坏。
So many marine animals
and the diversity of sea species is being
destroyed.
6.在我看来,平衡环境风险和经济需求可以保证和
谐的海洋探索。
Personally,
can
guarantee harmonious sea exploration.
第三步句式升级
1.请把句1和句2合成whether引导的宾语从句。
2.请把句5用with的复合结构改写。
the diversity of sea species is being destroyed.
第四步组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联
想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
Dear Editor,
Yesterday our class had a heated discussion
about whether people should explore oceans
extensively.
As sea exploration makes it possible to
discover new sources of food and energy and
improves our understanding of life on the earth,
some are in favour of it.Opponents of sea
随堂练习
I.单词拼写
1.Although she is a newcomer,she is
(拥有)
of great self-confidence in her present job.
2.Everyone had
(仁慈)on the children
living in such a terrible environment.
3.The beautiful sunset
(中止)our attention,
and we couldn't help stopping to watch it.
4.This brings new challenges to customers when
planning for
(移居).
5.That robber has been charged with attempted
(谋杀)of the bank clerk.
6.Norris twice knocked down his
(对手)
in the early rounds of the fight.
7.The company and its opponents compete to_
(利用)the troubles to their advantage.
8.Bob spent fifteen months alone on his yacht.
Ann,
(与此同时),took care of the
children on her own.
9.When the audience heard the inspiring speech of the
prime minister,they all stood up and a
10.You can get what you want by legal
(渠道)instead of violence..
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.Amazed,she stood and stared while the police
(arrest)her husband.
2.Any
(migrate)of this type requires
careful preparation and planning.
3.He didn't finish his work in time and we had no
mercy
him at all.
4.Now,standing among Matthew's accumulation of
(possess),I realize it's me who have
become a boy again.
5.This tour offers an opportunity to engage in a
lively,in-depth
(explore)of one of our
special exhibitions.
UNIT 3 SEA EXPLORATION
exploration think that it may bring about so much
pollution that it can destroy the underwater
ecosystem.Besides,with so many marine animals
murdered without mercy,the diversity of sea
species is being destroyed.
Personally,balancing environmental risks with
economic needs can guarantee harmonious sea
exploration.
Yours,
Li Hua
语基综合训练
Ⅲ.选词填空
grow up,all of a sudden,come up with,because
of,as well as
1.We have had to raise our prices
rising costs.
2
eating five course meals,they
drank seven bottles of wine.
3.If you
in a large family,you are
more likely to develop the ability to get on well
with others.
4.While giving us a speech,the professor fainted
5.She couldn't
a solution to the
problem,so she turned to me.
Ⅳ.单句写作(话题写作之海洋探索的利与弊)
1.随着世界人口的增长,开发海洋变得越来越有必
要。(as)
2.海洋拥有各种各样的物种,它们可以给我们提供
食物或能源。(possess)
3.然而,许多渔民无情地捕捞了如此多的海洋动物
以至于它们处于灭绝的危险。(so..that..;
without mercy)
4.因此,涉及过度捕捞的那些人应该被惩罚或逮
捕。(get arrested)
英语选择性必修第四册
5.把海洋探索和环境保护结合起来是一种完美的
解决方法。(动名词短语作主语)》
写作专项训练
I.应用文写作
假定你是某中学的高二学生李华,你刚刚做了
一个关于“保护海洋”的科学课题,请你给你的英国
朋友Jim写信向他介绍相关内容:
1.目前海洋面临的问题;
2.问题出现的原因;
3.解决措施。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅱ.读后续写(基础性)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之
构成一篇完整的故事。词数80左右。
It was probably her giggling(咯咯笑)that
drew my attention.English reading really wasn't
that funny as far as I knew.
It was early May and I was facing a class of
sixteen kids.Though I had almost three years of
teaching,this particular sixth grade class had
pushed me to the limits of my patience far too
many times,and I couldn't wait to wave goodbye to
them for the summer.
I had kept away from the ideal of my first year
of teaching.That first year I'd covered up the small
hole in the window with an inspirational poster.I'd
decorated the walls with pictures of famous
universities.I told the kids daily that they always
had something worth struggling for.Together we
would work hard and make something of their
lives.
The problem,of course,was that my ideals
kept being defeated by reality.Not just the reality
of troubled families.I was also faced with the basic
reality of the twelve-and thirteen-year-old mind.
The universal mind,“You can't make me!”
And now I was faced with a giggle when I
should have had only full attention.Walking over
to the young peacebreaker,I asked for the note she
had in her hands.Frozen,she refused to give it to
me.I waited,all attention in the room on the quiet
battle between teacher and student.When she
finally handed it over,saying,"Okay,but I didn't
draw it,"which showed this wasn't just an
ordinary note being passed.
After getting the class going on an English
reading test,I finally had a chance to look through
it.It was a hand-drawn picture of me,eyes
monitoring widely,teeth blackened,and the words
“I'm stupid'”coming out of my mouth.There was
no doubt about who it was supposed to be.
I managed to fold up the picture calmly.My
mind,however,was working angrily and wanting
to criticize some students on the scene.I figured I
knew the two most likely candidates for drawing
the picture.Maybe it was high time that I did it!
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Thank fully,calmness returned to my mind.
Looking over the notes later,I realized I was
too strict with them.
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UNIT 3 SEA EXPLORATION
单元基础知识核查(三)
I.单词拼写
:Ⅲ.单元语法—完成句子
1.We
(赞赏)your plan;you can go.当看到这只可爱的兔子时,我们很激动,就去
ahead with it.
追它。
2.The ship was
(在水下)when they:
When seeing the cute rabbit,we were so excited
reached it.
3.Mathew Webb's swim across the English
2,在试图我到一条走出森林的路却没有成功之后
further increased the sport's popularity.
:
我们感到又饿又累
4.Traditional festivals will sometimes be affeeted
After fruitless attempts to
by
(政治).
we felt hungry and tired.
5.Eva was cutting the grass;
(与此同:3.独立完成这项任务对我来说是一个巨大的挑战。
时),Adam was planting roses.
is a big challenge
6.As society develops,fewer and fewer people
for me.
regard it as a
(职业).
:4.这个活动的目的是提高所有学生的环保意识。
7.Several months later,the master took the boy to
The purpose of the activity is
his first
(锦标赛).
environmental protection.
8.A
(王室的)family can be one with:5.等待结果使我感觉如坐针毡。
which the people of a nation identify,both in
Waiting for the result caused me
joyful times and sad alike.
g.When the twins walked out of the dark room,they IV,用所给词的适当形式或合适的词完成短文
(看见)a bright star shining in the sky.
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.It is a
10.A
(纽带)of friendship had been
great honor for me 1.
(introduce)this
forged between them.
English speech contest.As we all know,2.
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
(master)a foreign language is very important
1.The premier can not legally take possession
for us.Taking part in an English speech contest is
the property until he takes office.
a helpful way 3.
learn )English.
2.What angered us was that the workers in the bakery
Everyone wants 4.
(show)their best.
were
the mercy of their employer.
3.Nobody knows why the sponsor withdrew
When we have been preparing for it,we can
improve our listening and speaking ability,5.
the programme.
4.The political problem was under
(develop)a good habit of learning English.
(negotiate)by the two parties.
In the process of the competition,you should
5.Now that we have enough equipment
pay attention to the rules made by us.First,you
hand,we can go diving right now.
should make your voice heard clearly by everyone,
6.
extend)reading enables the prime
so reading aloud is very necessary.Second,you
minister to cite more convincing examples when
should try your best 6.
express)
talking.
yourself in English fluently.Finally,you should
7.Biochemistry is a
(mix)of biology and finish your speech in five minutes.
chemistry,as its name shows.
I am sure the English speech competition will
8.There is an urgent need
(get)a valid be a great success and the audience will feel
license before you set off.
satisfied with our performance.Thank you!
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713.We do not know what we don't know;we need to explore the ocean;写作专项训练
so that we can better understand issues such as acidification which!I.[参考s范文]
leads to seawater to become more acidic,and how to fight these'Dear Jim,
problems:studying the ocean causes the creation of new technologies'
How is everything going there?
that can help us in other areas
Recently,I just have finished my science subject which is about
Activity 2
Ocean Conservancy.It is said that our oceans are facing great pollution.
1.problems 2.pollution 3.harmful 4.are being hunted 5.which
Abundant marine resources are decreasing,and artificial waste kills
6.what 7.Understanding 8.its 9.With 10.considered
countless ocean lives every year.
There are two main reasons for these problems.First of all,the
Period 5
'discharge of untreated industrial waste water is one of the main causes
第一板块
of serious pollution of coastal marine water quality.Secondly,
1.(1)merciless (2)at the mercy of Merciful and thoughtful hadoverfishing in the fishing industry destroys the ocean life chain.
mercy on/showed mercy to (3)would be laughed at by the other Therefore,I think the government should strengthen the supervision of
kids without mercy
'the coastal enterprises and set up the closed season to ensure the fish
2.(1)possession possessions (2)are possessed of ancient Chinese features
breeding.
(3)①possesses②in possession of③in the possession of
Yours,
3.(1)arrested his attention (2)was arrested for (3)got arrested
Li Hua
under arrest
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第二板块
Thankfully,calmness returned to my mind.Suppressing my pride,I
1.(1)Making such a silly mistake it was useless/no use/no good
showed them the picture.The whole class was silent as I told them how
(2)Passing kindness and love (3)Reading English articles in thehurtful this was for a teacher.Struggling to control my emotion,I
English newspaper
demanded there must be a reason behind for such a picture and that
2.(1)As Teachers'Day was approaching (2)as the Romans do
now was their chance to tell me anything they needed to tell me.Asking
(3)as they thought of the surprise (4)As she listened
'them to get out of paper and write silently,I sniffled in the back of the
(5)Nervous as she was as her teacher instructed her As she performed well classroom.
3.(1)so much that so difficult a task/such a difficult task that so
Looking over the notes later,I realized I was too strict with them.
moved that (2)so many flowers in the garden that (3)such great
Where I thought I was driving them to success,I was actually driving
progress that (4)so foolishly that
'them away.After class,the girl walked up,handing me a card
embarrassedly.One side of the card was sincere regret for the ugly joke
Period 6
while the other side the appeal for forgiveness.I was deeply moved.
阅读两篇文章的第一自然段
Meanwhile,a great sense of guilt arose for being too harsh.After all,
微点写作①truly②but③exploit our rich resources
'students appreciate being appreciated,for teachers'encouragement is
their best motivating force.
④so that I could help
阅读第一篇文章的第二至四自然段、第二篇文章的第二至三自然段
单元基础知识核查(三)
微点写作①causing②valuable③balanced
I.1.applaud 2.underwater 3.Channel 4.politics 5.meanwhile
阅读两篇文章的最后一个自然段
6.profession 7.tournament 8.royal 9.beheld 10.bond
微点写作①more stressed②Hopefully③so sensitive that
'II.1.of 2.at 3.from 4.negotiation 5.in 6.Extensive
DIf you face the same problem
7.mixture 8.to get
第二步
IlI.1.as to chase it 2.find a way out of the forest 3.To finish the
核心词汇
task on my own 4.to promote all the students'awareness of
1.explore/exploit oceans 2.in favour of/be for/support
5.to feel like sitting on pins and needles
3.be against/object to/be opposed to 4.sources of food and energy
IV.1.to introduce
2.to master 3.to learn 4.to show
5.opponent
6.destroy/ruin 7.murder 8.mercy 9.marine
5.developing 6.to express
连词成句
UNIT 4
1.Should people explore oceans 2.had a heated discussion about it
单元词句多读多背
3.As sea exploration makes it possible to some are in favour of it
,1.parcel 2.mail 3.secondary 4.cotton 5.uniform 6.tablet
4.Opponents of sea exploration think that it may bring about so much
7.rigid 8.tube 9.circus 10.shade 11.wrinkle 12.forehead
pollution that 5.have been murdered without mercy 6.balancing
13.housing 14.platform 15.kettle 16.leftover 17.drag
environmental risks with economic needs
18.plug 19.resign 20.lately 21.input 22.tune 23.contract
第三步
24.grant 25.circuit 26.relay 27.criterion 28.pray
1.Yesterday our class had a heated discussion about whether people
1.dusty 2.chemistry chemical 3.ripen 4.privileged
should explore oceans extensively.
5.disability disable 6.deserving 7.consult consultant
2.With so many marine animals murdered without mercy
8.stable unstable
随堂练习一把知能落实
,1.not to mention 2.take (...for granted 3.relay to
4.adapt to 5.be relevant to..6.to be honest 7.get through
I.1.possessed 2.mercy 3.arrested 4.migration 5.murder
8.be proud of 9.in need of 10.take good care of 11.
6.opponent 7.exploit 8.meanwhile 9.applauded 10.channels
12.齐声:异口同声13.但愿14.参与:参加15.极想:渴望
,l.arrested2.migration3.on
4.possessions
5.exploration
16.除了17.也;还18.意义重大:有很大影响19.对某事转变
IlI.1.because of 2.As well as 3.grow up 4.all of a sudden
论调或改变看法20.支持
5.come up with
H,1.were cooking a Mother's Day breakfast clumsily in the kitchen
2.from where he could see nothing but trees
1.As the population of the world increases,it is becoming increasingly
necessary to exploit the sea.
Period 1
2.The sea possesses various species,which can provide us with food or
energy.
While-reading
3.However,many fishermen have caught so many marine creaturesiActivity 1
without mercy that they are in danger of dying out.
1.Paras.1-8I A D C B E G F
4.Consequently,those who are involved in overfishing should get,2.D
punished or arrested.
13.being a volunteer teacher a local family in the village
5.Combining sea exploration and environmental protection is a wonderfuliActivity 2
solution.
iI.1.She was so excited to receive the parcel.
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