内容正文:
(3)强调句型的特殊疑问句:疑问词(被强调部!
分)+is/was十it+that+句子其他部分?
(4)not..until..结构的强调句型:Itis/was
not untilthat
完成句子/句型转换
(1)正是因为杰克上学迟到才使史密斯先生生气
的吗?
Mr Smith got
annoyed.
(2)妈妈大发雷霆道:“到底是什么使你与你的同
事冲突的?”
The mother exploded,“
caused you to conflict with your colleague?"
(3)正是有你慷慨的帮助,我坚信我会很快地适:
应大学生活。
I firmly believe that
I will adapt to the college life as soon as
possible.
(4)正是你不经意的善举对我产生了重大的影响。
It is your random act of kindness
(5)I didn't realize the significance of family until
I went through hardships.
(变为强调句型)
2.asif引导方式状语从句
[教材原句]Night came as if a lamp was being
turned out,and in another moment came the day.
夜幕降临了,仿佛一盏灯正在熄灭,转眼间,白昼
就来临了。(P8)
Period 6
写作项目
Write
本单元的写作项目是写一篇科幻故事。科:
幻故事是开放式作文的一种,一般给出一段材:
料,要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内
容,运用逻辑推理的方法,沿着材料的纵横方向
延伸,给故事添加开头、中间过程或结尾。想象
必须合理而且内容丰富,要抓住主题,运用恰当:
的词汇、句型与语句间的连接成分使表达连贯,
语言流畅,具有美感。
UNIT 1 SCIENCE FICTION
…/归纳点拨/…
此句中的asif,相当于as though,意为“仿佛,好
像”,用来引导方式状语从句和表语从句。asif/
though所引导的从句中的语气及时态:
「陈述语气(真实或极有可能发生的情况)
与现在情况相反:did
as if/
虚拟语气(不真
与过去情况相反:had done
though
实或不可能
与将来情况相反:would/.
发生的情况)
might/could+do
完成句子
(1)正如图画上所看到的一样,这个男孩看上去
好像再也承受不住沉重的学习压力了。
As can be seen from the picture,it seems
any more.
(2)一对年轻夫妇坐在船上吃着东西,说着话,大
笑着,好像他们是这世界上仅有的人。
A young couple in a boat are eating,talking and
laughing loudly,
(3)他张开嘴好像要说些什么。
He opened his mouth
(4)(读后续写之动作描写)班主任看着我的眼
睛,仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。
My headteacher looked at my eyes
locked away inside.
(5)(读后续写之情绪描写)她感觉她的心好像被
人从她的身体里扯开了。
had been ripped
from her body.
温馨提示
请做课时分层检测(三)
Writing
a sci-fi short story
由课文学写作范式(写得“像模像样”)
(一)课文范式提炼
第
如课文第一段:讲述“我”
部分
引入话题
第一次尝试启动时间机器
第二
具体描述故事
如课文第二至四段:介绍
幻故事
“我”乘坐时间机器的过
部分
发展的过程
程及感受
第三
如课文第五段:交代“我”
部分
故事结局
终于停止了机器的运行,
结果跨越千年、到达未来
英语选择性必修第四册
(二)写作要点指津
科幻故事的基本写作步骤为:
1.确定主题,明确方向
认真领会题目所给的文字或图画信息,然后通
过合理的想象确定写作的中心或文章主题,为下一
步写作明确方向。
2.创设情景,勾勒形象
确定主题后创设一种表现写作中心的情景,并
在具体的情景中通过其语言、行动、心理活动等手
段达到预设的写作目的。
3.叙述情节,连句成文
选定写作形象后根据要求在特定的情景中具
体展开故事情节或写作片段。在这一过程中要列
出写作素材,进行“精挑细选”继而组句谋篇并注意
时态、人称的合理使用。
由课文学亮点表达(写得“韵味十足”)
阅读文章第一、二自然段,习得以下素养
。学细节描写
第一段中在描写“我”的动作时,采用了动作链
的表达方式,如第二、三句中的gave,sat,pushed
等。在描写动作时,要学会细化动作,把动作过程
分解成一连串细微的动作,形成动作链,使动作具
有连贯性,这样才能使描写具有画面感,使人物更
立体。这个方法在读后续写中经常使用。
[微点写作](完成句子)
①I
Dad,proudly
my own
money and
it to him.
我走近父亲,骄傲地拿出我自己的钱并递
给他。
②
his ladder against the wall,he
and
over.
他把梯子靠在墙上,爬上去往外看。
阅读文章第三至第五自然段,习得以下素养
○学修辞手法
第三段中采用了比喻的修辞手法,如第二句把
“我”进行时间旅行的感觉比喻成在一条蜿蜒曲折
的路上开车;第四句把太阳和月亮的更替比喻成它
们被人抛着划过天空;第五句把周围的树木的成长
比喻成袅袅的烟雾升起等。修辞手法的运用,有助
于避免语言的枯燥,提高语言的表达效果,使故事
情节更为生动形象。
[微点写作](翻译句子)
DThe bus full of passengers went slowly as a
snail went.
2 Life is an unexplored river,full of twists
and turns.
○学写作手法
第五段采用了对话式结尾的方式,呼应了文章
开头,对整篇文章的内容起到了概括的作用。
积素材充盈写作“语料库”
(一)背写作词汇
1.science fiction films
科幻电影
2.search the universe
探索宇宙
3.artificial intelligence
人工智能
4.have a household robot拥有一个家用机器人
5.more and more intelligent machines
越来越多的智能机器
6.the rapid development of information technology
信息技术的飞速发展
7.this highly-civilized creature
这种高度文明的生物
8.require continuous diligence and progress
需要不断的努力和进步
9.advanced devices and technology
先进的设备和技术
10.motivate us to reach for more
激励着我们去追求更多
(二)背写作佳句
1.我经常梦想着时间旅行。
I often dream about time travelling.
2.也许我们将能够探索太空。
Perhaps we will be able to explore space.
3.旅行对我们来说更容易,因为我们有更先进的
工具。
Travel will be easier for us because we have
more advanced tools.
4.随着时间的推移,在…方面将有巨大的变化。
As time goes by/With time going by,there're
going to be great changes in...
5.宇宙飞船/时间机器主要由…控制。
The spaceship/time machine is mainly controlled by...
6.小汽车和公交车都是电脑编程。
Cars and buses are all computer-programmed.
7.环顾四周,我发现自己被许多智能设备包围。
Looking around,I find myself surrounded by
many smart devices.
8.想象一个时间旅行成为可能的未来。我们可以
自由地穿越时空到历史上的任何时间点。
Imagine a future where time travelling is possible.We
are free to travel through time to any point in history.
[应用体验]
According to the text "Satisfaction Guaranteed",
Claire fell in love with Tony,which led to Tony being
rebuilt.What would happen when Tony was taken
away?What would happen next time when Claire met
Tony again?Continue the story according to the given
sentences.
Para.1 After Tony was taken away,
Para.2 Claire was so surprised when seeing Tony
in Gladys'house.
第一步
审题谋篇
审题谋篇
文体:科幻故事,记叙文
审题
时态:以一般过去时为主
人称:第三人称
第一段:延续原文情感线,Claire爱上了
Tony,所以Tony走后,Claire会牵挂他。
而第二段开头说到了在Gladys的家里见
到了Tony,暗示Claire会在第一段中出于
某种原因到Gladys家里去。
第二段:描写重新组装后的Tony,按照
谋篇
设定,不能让人类爱上他。所以他的表
现应该异于从前。
注意事项—续写要遵从正能量的原
则,最后应该是让人能够愉快接受的结
尾。如果能够有感情升华,那就更好了。
第二步遣词造句
[核心词汇](含本单元词汇)
1.荒唐的
2.哭泣
3.内疚的
4.然而
5.冲动
6.使目瞪口呆
7.爱上
8.重新组装
[连词成句](含本单元句型)
1.她知道恋上一个机器人荒谬至极,但她还是忍不
住流泪。
She knew it was absurd to become attached to a
robot;
2.当她面对Larry时,她感到很内疚。
When she faced Larry,
UNIT 1 SCIENCE FICTION
3.毕竟,她的丈夫是Larry而不是Tony。
After all,Larry
was
her husband.
4.有一天,Claire收到了Gladys的邀请函,这让
Claire非常困惑。
One day,
and this
made Claire quite confused.
5.Tony和以前大不相同了。
Tony
what he used
to be.
第三步句式升级
1.将句1改为让步状语从句。
2.将句2改成“连词+非谓语动词”的形式。
3.用强调句改写句3。
4.用非限制性定语从句改写句4。
第四步组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加
上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
After Tony was taken away,Claire wept and wept
until Larry came back.While she knew it was
absurd to become attached to a robot,she just
couldn't hold back her tears.Tony was so sweet
and understanding.Everything he did for her made
her feel better about herself.However,when facing
Larry,she felt very guilty.After all,it was Larry
rather than Tony who was her husband.She knew
Tony would be rebuilt but she couldn't help
wondering what would happen if they meet again.
One day,she received an invitation from Gladys,
which made her quite confused.
Claire was so surprised when seeing Tony in
Gladys'house.“L,ook!This is the newest
household robot in the world!"Gladys had a
strong urge to introduce it to her guests,proudly.
Claire had a mixed feeling when Tony greeted her
politely with a bow.His voice was still deep and
pleasant,but he didn't recognize Claire.He was
quite different from what he used to be.Claire
suddenly felt relieved.Let bygones be bygones.
Yes,no matter how fine a robot is,a human being
can't fall in love with it.
英语选择性必修第四册
随堂练习
I.单词拼写
1.The frightened wife
(抓紧)her
husband's arm.
2.He
(力劝)me to go there,but I refused..
3.Many people were not satisfied with the
(速度)of change..
4.I got up,went to
(拿来)the book from
my bedroom and handed it to him.
5.As he stepped
(向后)she fell onto her
knees,then onto her face.
6.It is obvious that this team is
(占优势
to the others in this work.
7.I taught my daughter how to do
(除法)
at the age of six.
8.The teacher asked them to choose any number at
(随机).
9.I need the
(最大极限的)amount of
information you can give me.
10.There was a huge bang as if someone had
(爆破)a rocket outside.
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.Liu Cixin,a
(distinguish)science fiction
writer,has created many world-famous novels.
2.I think that I am superior
others in
solving conflicts with others.
3.When I conflicted
the salesman,I was
at a loss and didn't know what to do.
4.Keep in mind that our challenges won't fall
and we must labour to solve them.
5.
is hard to urge the lazy boy to put his
heart into studying English.
6.In the Time Machine,I saw trees
(grow)
like puffs of smoke.
7.My niece
(punish)by her father due to
her silly mistake at this time yesterday.
6
you take over the company,I strongly
believe that you have the ability to succeed.
Ⅲ.选词填空
turn out,take over,have an urge to,fall away,
conflict with
1.The vacation is coming and he
travel in an alien country.
语基综合训练
2.The chairwoman warned us not to allow personal
problems to
professional duties.
3.What stunned us was that the overall economic
growth started to
as trouble
appeared.
4.My niece didn't foresee her father would
at her graduation ceremony.
5.The salesman is moving out of this town,and I
need someone to
his position.
V.单句写作(话题写作之科幻故事)
1.2080年,我成了一名杰出的科学家。(distinguished)
2.结果,住在深海的外星人打算发动战争。(It turned
out that...)
3.为了避免与外星人冲突,我的同事们和我接手了
阻止这场战争的任务。(conflict with;take
over)
4.一到达目的地,我们就真诚地力劝他们不要向人
类宣战。(urge sb.todo..)
5.正是我们保护海洋不受污染的承诺使他们改变
了主意。(强调句型)
写作专项训练
I.应用文写作
最近某报社组织了一次英文大赛,主题是
“Your Ideal City in the Future”,你对此很感兴趣。
请你根据报社提供的以下信息写一篇英语短文。
1.每个人都有梦想,都对未来生活寄予了很多
的希望。
2.希望未来城市生活美好,没有战争、污染、灾
难;人们生活在和平、洁净、和谐的环境中,无忧无
虑,幸福快乐。
UNIT 1 SCIENCE FICTION
3.虽然未来城市有点理想化,但我们可以共同:
She rolled her eyes."You're a terrible winner."
努力,尽自己的每一份责任,建设自己的美好家园。
"What's wrong with celebrating my victory?"
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
Deandra crossed her arms and made a sour
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
face."You know,it wasn't cool the way you
ignored Alexa onstage.She tried to shake your
hand.”
Theo shrugged."I didn't notice.Anyway,
county bee,here I come!"
"You might want to crack open the dictionary
Ⅱ.读后续写(基础性)
before counties.In two weeks,you'll be facing the
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之best of the best.”
构成一篇完整的故事。词数80左右。
“And they'll be up against me,the alpha-best..”
Theo stood at the microphone.Silence settled
Deandra shook her head."Well,good luck.I
over the hall."Your word is onomatopoeia,"said think you're going to need it."
Mr Ramirez,the announcer.I got this!Theo Two weeks passed in a blink.At the county
thought.Spelling was sort of his superpower.He bee,students from different schools gathered
wasn't a math or science guy,but he had a gift for around onstage,some looking more worried than
spelling.
others.Finally,it was time for the contestants
Theo's brain fast-forwarded to the spelling:)to take their seats.
bees ahead:first the county championship,then the
After six rounds,the group of more than 100
state championship,and finally the national students decreased to just seven.This was no
spelling bee."Your answer,please,Theo?"He regular spelling bee.Theo had barely made it
glanced back at Alexa,another fourth-grader,through the last round with a lucky guess on
sitting on the edge of her chair.She wanted another conscience.And if he'd had to spell aerospace or
chance at winning.If he missed his word,she'd be conical,he'd be out already.His sister's advice
back in the game.But that wasn't going to happen.suddenly made sense.
Theo got the right spelling.
When it was his turn again,Theo stood
Theo's sister,Deandra,who had also competed frozen for the longest moment.
but missed her word,applauded with the rest of the
crowd.Mr Ramirez presented the trophy(奖杯)to
:
Theo.He lifted both arms into the air."I'm the
alpha-best."Then he raced toward his sister.
“Ha!”Theo said,making the trophy dance in front
温馨提示
请做课时分层检测(四)
of Deandra's nose.
单元基础知识核查(一)
I.单词拼写
:4.Profit is
(计算)on the basis of
1.In consequence of your bad work,I am forced to
average
(每周的)earnings..
(解雇)you.
:
5.I'll report what you did to your
(上级
2.The doctor finally
(宣布)that the man
的)office.
was dead.
3.The judge concluded that the prisoner was
6.Call his secretary and make an
(预约)
(有罪的).
with him.
21对点练①doesn'tcut②to blame③difficult to work out④laughed at!
达标检测
随堂练习—语基综合训练
完成下列语段,尽可能多地使用被动语态
'L.1.gripped 2.urged 3.pace 4.fetch 5.backwards 6.superior
1.is written by Liu Cixin 2.is considered as 3.was published 4.is based!7.division 8.random 9.maximum 10.exploded
on science 5.has been translated into many languages 6.is being read by'Il.1.distinguished 2.to 3.with 4.away 5.It 6.growing
people all over the world 7.will be treasured by future generations
7.was being punished 8.If
新知进补一学用结合方能“融会通”
Ill.1.has an urge to 2.conflict with 3.fall away 4.turn out 5.take over
1.on a daily basis On the basis of Based on/upon on a regular basis
IV.1.In 2080,I became a distinguished scientist.
2.①found himself walking②back at the hotel③find them prepared
2.It turned out that the aliens who were living under the deep sea intended to
Dfound herself greeted
launch a war.
Period 4
3.To avoid conflicting with the aliens,I,as well as my colleagues,took over the
task to prevent the war.
While-reading
4.The instant we reached the destination,we sincerely urged them not to
L.1.(1)checked (2)experience (3)strange and unpleasant feeling
declare war on human beings
(4)stopping
(5)backwards 2.A
5.It was our promise to preserve the ocean from being polluted that made
II.Activity 1
them change their minds.
1.C2.D3.B4.D5.B
写作专项训练
Activity 2
L[参考范文]
1.A2.D3.A
When it comes to "Future",everyone has various expectations about it,
Post-reading
because we all have our own dreams.
Activity 1
I want to live in an ideal and wonderful city in the future.In my mind,
1.If I could travel through time,I could see the results of my actions or other there will be no war,pollution or disaster in it.All the terrible things will be
people's actions,and if the results were bad,I could travel back to the kept away from people.We'll live in peace and harmony with each other with
present time,too,and then take another course of action that had a betterthe clean environment around us.All the people will live a happy and colorful
outcome.But I must learn not to depend on time travel and "cheat"every life free from worry and sorrow.
time when I failed or met something bad.I will choose the most important
Although it's an ideal city,which is far from the reality,we can make
moment to return and not to change others'fates without consideration.
efforts altogether and take the responsibility of building a more pleasant city.
2.Answers may vary
Remember:Where there is hope,there is possibility.
Activity 2
Ⅱ.[参考范文]
1.that 2.giving 3.went 4.was/were being turned 5.to explain
When it was his turn again,Theo stood frozen for the longest moment
6.was left 7.an 8.stopping 9.times 10.if
The silence hurt his ears.He wiped his sweaty palms on his pants.It seemed
Period 5
that his superpower disappeared at that moment.Theo couldn't spell every
following word.He remembered the school spelling bee and Alexa just missing
第一板块
the win.He hadn't even made it as far in his bee as she had in that one.He had
1.(1)were superior to (2)much inferior to her
to admit that Deandra was right.He was absolutely a terrible winner,and
(3)am senior to am junior to
now,a terrible loser.The following Monday at school,Theo found Alexa in the
2.taken over took on took in took up took on taken off
lunchroom.Theo gathered up his courage and apologized for his rudeness after
3.conflicted with come into conflict with in conflict with conflicts
he won the school bee.Alexa's smile seemed to wipe off Theo's frustration and
4.(1)turned out turned down turn to turn it in (2)turning on turnhe was really expecting to be the next alpha-best.
them off (3)turned up
5.(1)urgent (2)had an urge to urged me to hurry home/urged that I'
单元基础知识核查(一)
(should)hurry home (3)It is urged that we (should)go to bed early
I.1.dismiss 2.declared 3.guilty 4.calculated weekly 5.superior
第二板块
6.appointment 7.random 8.urge 9.explode 10.gripped
1.(1)It was because Jack came late for school that (2)What was it that II.1.off/out 2.is declared 3.calculation 4.appointed 5.had happened
(3)It is with your generous help that (4)that makes a great difference to6.has exploded 7.division 8.suspended 9.with 10.guilty
me (5)It was not until I went through hardships that I realized the'lll.1.are native to 2.experiment with 3.test out 4.major in
significance of family.
5.feel at home 6.make an impression on 7.made up 8.more than
2.(1)as if the boy can hardly bear the heavy study pressure (2)as if they'IV.1.more on pictures than pronunciation 2.It was because of his
were the only people in the world (3)as if he would say something
carelessness that 3.as if she could be blown away 4.more books
(4)as if she were seeing my inner self (5)She felt as if her heart
suitable for children should be written 5.It turned out that
Period 6
V.1.Many pros and cons about cloning were put forward at yesterday's
meeting.
阅读文章第一、二自然段
2.The science fiction novel has been translated into several languages.
微点写作①approached took out of handed
3.We had to take the small path because the major road was being
2Putting climbed peered
repaired then.
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4.When I entered the house,the model had been fixed by my son.
微点写作①这辆满载乘客的公交车就像蜗牛爬行一样缓慢前行。
5.Some new measures will be taken to solve the problem.
②生活就像一条未被涉足的河流,充满了各种曲折
第二步
UNIT 2
核心词汇
单元词句多读多背
1.ridiculous/absurd 2.weep 3.guilty 4.whereas 5.urge 6.stun
二、l.barbecue2.bakery3.joint4.butcher
5.premier
7.fall in love with 8.rebuild
6.hollow 7.vibrate 8.straightforward 9.slogan 10.minister
连词成句
11.entitle 12.dive
13.freedom 14.domain 15.sponsor
1.she just couldn't hold back her tears 2.she felt very guilty
16.liberty
17.golf 18.strait 19.sample 20.temporary
3.rather than Tony 4.Claire received an invitation from Gladys
21.phase
22.trunk 23.session 24.hatch 25.prison
5.was quite different from
26.grand
第三步
,1.found founder 2.politics politician 3.locate location
1.While she knew it was absurd to become attached to a robot,she just
4.free 5.distribute 6.license 7.frequent frequently
couldn't hold back her tears.
8.violence violently 9.biological biologist 10.capable
2.When facing Larry,she felt very guilty.
1.major in 2.share sth.with sb.3.in contact with
3.After all,it was Larry rather than Tony who was her husband.
4.agree with 5.be located in/on/at 6.at birth 7.come across
4.One day,Claire received an invitation from Gladys,which made Claire quite
8.in the wild 9.a handful of 10.refer to...as...
11.迫不及待地做
confused.
某事12.由…组成13.导致;通向14.原产于…;源于…的
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