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新高考应用文专项突破——建议信 假定你是李华，你校英文报发起了"Upgrading Our School Canteen"活动，面向学生征集学校食堂改造方案。请你给英文报主编Jack写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）现存问题； （2）改造方案。 注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 高分应用文写作要求： 1. 书写：规范整洁。 2. 布局：三段式写作，共10行。 3. 高分句型：定语从句、非谓语、独立主格结构等。减少语法错误。突出逻辑性。 三审：审题 1. 文体：邮件 2. 人称：第一人称（I） 3. 时态：一般现在时为主 一列：列出要点 1. 背景要点 2. 现存问题 3. 改造方案 布局： 第一段：背景要点 第二段：现存问题 第三段：改造方案 Para. 1 Beginning : 背景+提出“分享想法”。 首段背景：巧用非谓语动词 1. Learning about the "Upgrading Our School Canteen" activity, I'm writing to share my opinions /suggestions / advice. 2. I’m Li Hua. Knowing/Learning that you are collecting ideas on upgrading our school canteen, I’m writing to share my opinions /suggestions / advice. 3.I’m Li Hua, a student of our school. I’m glad to contribute my suggestions to the "Upgrading Our School Canteen" activity. 1.菜品种类有限：have limited food variety / lack food variety 2.等待时间过长：long queues at peak hours 3.环境嘈杂：the canteen / dining hall is too noisy /so loud 4.份量少：the amount of the size / the portion of the dish is not enough 5.味道不好：not tasty / delicious （lack taste / flavor） 6.价格高：the food is too expensive（the prices are too high /are beyond students' budget） Para 2: body --- 现存问题（2点） Para 2: body --- 现存问题（2点） 主题句 + 问题1 + 问题2 ●Firstly, the dining hall is often noisy and chaotic, making it hard for us to relax. ●Meanwhile, the food prices are unreasonably high, which is a heavy burden for most students. ●What's more, the portions are not generous enough to satisfy us, which makes us hungry soon. ●Moreover, the food lacks flavor and is not tasty, and the bad taste ruins our appetite食欲. Para 2: body --- 现存问题（2点） ●Currently, the canteen has long queues at peak hours, which wastes us a lot of time. ●Besides, the canteen lacks variety in the menu, offering almost the same dishes daily, which fails to meet the nutritional needs of growing teenagers. 1.划分安静区： set up quiet zones / areas 2.调整价格：adjust the prices to a student-friendly level 3.增加分量：increase the portion sizes 4.改进味道：improve the taste / flavor 5.增设窗口：add extra service windows 6.丰富菜品：add more healthy and diverse dishes to cater to different tastes cater to 满足、迎合 Para 3：改造方案（2点） 主题句 + 细节1 + 细节2 Para 3: body --- 改进方案（2点） 主题句 + 改进方案1 + 改进方案2 ●Firstly, to create a more comfortable atmosphere, I suggest setting up quiet areas for students who want to eat peacefully. ●Meanwhile, it is necessary to lower the prices appropriately to make them affordable for most students. ●What's more, the serving portions should be increased to ensure that students can get enough energy from the meal. ●Moreover, we should improve the taste of the food to enrich the flavor of the dishes. Para 3: body --- 改进方案（2点） 主题句 + 改进方案1 + 改进方案2 ●Currently, more service windows should be opened to speed up the serving process and save students' time. ●Besides, the canteen is advised to introduce various regional cuisines to provide more dish choices. Dear Jack, ❶I'm Li Hua, a student at our school. Hearing that our school canteen is undergoing upgrades, I'm delighted to share my opinions. ❷The problems of the canteen are as follows. Currently, the canteen lacks variety in the menu, offering almost the same dishes daily, which fails to meet the nutritional needs of growing teenagers. Moreover, the dining hall is often too noisy for us to enjoy meals, and long queues during peak hours waste our time. ❸To address these problems, I suggest introducing more regional cuisines to cater to diverse tastes and setting up quiet zones for students to dine and relax between classes. Also, opening additional service windows can greatly reduce waiting time, especially during the short lunch break. I hope these changes will make our canteen more popular. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （模板） Dear Jack, I'm Li Hua, a student at our school. Learning about the "Upgrading Our School Canteen" activity, I'm writing to share my opinions. Currently, the canteen has two main problems: 【问题1】 and 【问题2】, which bring us much inconvenience. To solve these, I suggest 【方案1】 to 【对应解决问题1】, and 【方案2】 to 【对应解决问题2】. Besides, 【补充方案】 can also improve our dining experience. I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Hua THANKS $