摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“大自然的威力”单元话题写作,聚焦恶劣天气经历叙述,涵盖天气变化、情景描写、个人活动及内心感受等核心内容,强调过去进行时的运用。课堂导入通过阅读极端天气经历材料引出写作任务,以语块积累(如“all of a sudden”)、句式范例(如过去进行时句子)和谚语素材为学习支架,帮助学生构建写作框架。
其亮点在于以“输入-示范-输出”教学模式系统培养学生语言能力,通过语块、句式等素材积累提升表达准确性,结合写作典例的审题指导和谋篇布局培养思维品质,练写作环节则强化学习能力。例如高分范文展示结构逻辑,练习题目呼应主题,助力学生掌握叙述类写作方法,教师可借助该资料高效开展分层教学,提升课堂效果。
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Unit 5 Nature’s Temper
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本单元的话题是“大自然的威力”,主要通过阅读材料展现人们在极端天气中的经历与感受。写作任务是叙述一次自己遭遇恶劣天气的经历。写作时,可以从天气变化、现场情景、个人活动和内心感受等方面展开,并恰当使用过去进行时,使文章描写更细腻,让读者有身临其境之感。
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【语块积累】
1.作准备_____________________ 6. 到……的时候 _______________
2. 除……之外 _______________ 7. 发生 _______________
3. 一……就…… _______________ 8. 席卷而过 ____________________
4. 醒来 _______________ 9. 灭火 _______________
5. 突然;猛地 _______________ 10. 储存应急物资 _______________
make preparations
except for
as soon as
wake up
all of a sudden
by the time
take place
sweep through/across
put out a fire
store emergency
supplies
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【句式积累】
The rain was pouring while she was waiting for the bus.
People were leaving the beach instead of swimming.
There are going to be strong winds this afternoon.
We were packing our luggage as quickly as we could before the storm came.
What a terrible day!
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The sky was getting darker and darker.
We waited for over an hour at the bus stop, feeling hungry and cold.
Volunteers all worked together to keep the people safe.
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【谚语积累】
1. The only thing that is constant is change. 唯一不变的就是变化本身。
2. Only by obeying nature can we overcome it. 只有服从大自然,才能战胜大自然。
3. Nature is both a kind mother and a cold-blooded killer. 大自然是善良的慈母,同时也是冷酷的屠夫。
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生活之中,恶劣天气总是不期而至,而那些与之相关的经历常常令人难忘。请以“An Unforgettable Day in Bad Weather”为主题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述你在恶劣天气中的一次经历。
提示:(1)How was the weather?(2)What were you doing when the bad weather started?
(3)What did you see, hear, do, or feel during the bad weather?(4)What happened because of the bad weather?
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(2)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Last Saturday, I had a scary experience. ________________________________
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【思路点拨】
▶ 第一步 审题:1. 时态:_______________________
2. 人称:___________________
▶ 第二步 谋篇布局:
以一般过去时为主
以第一人称为主
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▶ 第三步 组织成文,润色定稿:
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大自然的脾气不仅只有风暴与严寒,难以忍受的酷热同样是她威力的一部分。请根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一次你经历极端高温天气的故事。
提示:(1)Describe the heat. (2)What were you doing when the heatwave hit?
(3)What did you see, hear, do, or feel that day?(4)What happened because of it?
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(2)词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Last summer, a heatwave hit our city.___________________________________
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Last summer, a heatwave hit our city. The sun burned the sky, and the air felt like a hot oven. While I was walking home from school, I saw dry trees and flowers. Birds stayed in the trees. I was sweating heavily, my throat was dry, and my head hurt. I walked slowly, trying to stay away from the sun. When I got home, I drank lots of water and rested. Later that day, I felt weak, so my parents took me to the hospital. It was one of the hottest days ever. Nature's temper isn't just about storms; its burning heat can be just as powerful and dangerous.
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