摘要:
本讲义聚焦初中英语应用文写作核心知识点,系统构建申请信与书信的学习支架。申请信围绕“未来职业体验营”申请,引导学生按“自我介绍与目的—兴趣来源与职业认知—个人优势”三段展开,规范称呼、正文、结尾格式;书信以“即将消失的职业”为主题,通过“职业过去功能—消失原因—个人感受”逻辑链,培养情感表达,配套重要句型与高分范文辅助框架搭建。
该资料特色在于融合时代主题与实践应用,以AI训练师、公交车售票员等具体职业案例,提升语言能力(如运用将来时、过去时准确表达),培养思维品质(分析职业发展与科技关系),渗透文化意识(理解时代变迁与职业价值)。课中教师可借思路精讲引导学生联系生活,课后学生可通过范文与句型自主练习,有效查漏补缺,强化写作能力。
内容正文:
8下外研版unit1作文专练
题目一(申请书)
题目: 假如你是李华,学校将举办“未来职业体验营”,你想申请参加并学习一种未来职业(如人工智能训练师、太空导游)。请写一封申请信,内容包括:
1. 你对这个未来职业的兴趣从何而来;
2. 你对这个职业有哪些了解;
3. 你能为体验营带来什么(个人优势)。
教师思路精讲
这是一封申请信,要求学生结合对未来职业的想象进行自我推荐。教师可引导学生先选定一个具体职业(如AI训练师),然后按三段展开:第一段自我介绍并表明申请目的;第二段说明对该职业的认知和兴趣来源;第三段展示个人能力(如学编程、有耐心、英语好),最后表达期待。注意使用礼貌、积极的语气。
写作要点分析
1. 格式规范:申请信需有称呼(Dear Sir or Madam)、正文、结尾敬语(Yours sincerely)、署名。
2. 内容完整:必须包含三个要点——兴趣原因、职业认知、个人优势。
3. 语言得体:运用将来时和条件句(I hope to... / If I join...),展现热情和自信。
重要句型和词组
· I am writing to apply for...
· I am very interested in... because...
· As far as I know, a future job like... will...
· I have learned / I am good at...
· It would be a great chance for me to...
· I promise to...
高分范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the “Future Job Experience Camp”. I am deeply interested in becoming an AI trainer, a job of the future. I believe AI will change our lives, and trainers help machines understand human language. That sounds exciting and meaningful.
As far as I know, an AI trainer needs to collect data and teach computers to recognize words or feelings. I have been learning basic Python programming online for six months. Also, I am patient and good at explaining things to others. These skills might be useful for this future job.
It would be a great chance for me to learn more from experts. I promise to be an active member. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
题目二(书信)
题目: 假设你是张伟,请你给爷爷写一封信,告诉他一种即将消失的职业(如公交车售票员、电话接线员)。信中需要:
1. 说明这个职业过去是做什么的;
2. 解释它为什么正在消失;
3. 表达你对这种变化的感受。
教师思路精讲
这是一封家书,情感色彩浓厚。学生应选择一个即将消失的职业,用尊敬和略带感慨的语气写作。教师可引导学生联系生活(如爷爷曾从事的职业),先描述职业过去的样子,再分析消失原因(科技发展、自动化等),最后表达对时代进步的接受和对旧职业的怀念。注意使用过去时和现在完成时。
写作要点分析
1. 书信格式:有称呼(Dear Grandpa)、正文、结尾祝福(Your loving grandson)、署名。
2. 情感真实:用“I feel... but I also think...”表达复杂情感,展现尊重和理解。
3. 逻辑清晰:三个要点自然衔接——是什么、为什么、我的态度。
重要句型和词组
· I want to tell you about a job that is slowly disappearing...
· In the past, ... used to...
· Nowadays, ... have taken the place of...
· Because of the development of...
· It makes me a little sad, but I also understand that...
· I really respect the hard work that ... did.
高分范文
Dear Grandpa,
I want to tell you about a job that is soon to be history – the bus conductor. In the past, conductors used to sell tickets, announce stops, and help passengers get on and off. You once told me that you worked as a conductor for three years. That must have been a busy but warm job.
Nowadays, electronic payment and automatic announcers have taken the place of conductors. Because of the development of AI and mobile phones, people just scan a code when they get on the bus. This change saves time and money for the bus company.
It makes me a little sad to see a job disappear, because conductors brought human touch to daily travel. But I also think progress is natural. I really respect the hard work that you and other conductors did. Thank you for sharing those stories with me.
Your loving grandson,
Zhang Wei
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