Unit5 Section 3 Writing 课件2025-2026学年沪教版英语七年级下册

Unit 5 Water is life 沪教牛津版七年级下册 How can we save water? Key question 主题范畴：人与自然 Writing 1 Pre-writing fix public tip v. 修理 adj. 公众的；公开的 n. 建议 New words 撰写节水建议 科学俱乐部 全世界有很多地方设有足够的清洁饮用水。水是非常宝贵的，所以我们应该智慧地使用它。我们应该如何节约用水？与我们分享你的想法！ 修理/报告漏水的水龙头 关闭水龙头 Water is precious, so we should use it wisely. Free talk: How can we save water in our daily lives? Share your ideas with others. Mind mapping Organize your ideas in the mind map below. You may think of other situations as well. wash more clothes together take quick showers turn off the tap when brushing teeth fix/repair dripping taps Use rainwater to water plants Key words Connecting lines 思维导图三要素： Different colours Translation Practice take a shower instead of having a bath 一、短语翻译 1. 淋浴代替盆浴 Water is so valuable that we all should save water. 二、句子翻译 水是如此珍贵，以至于我们应该节约用水。 2. 让水龙头开着 leave the tap running 3. 重复利用水来浇花 reuse water to water plants Think before writing 文体： 人称： 时态： 写作要点： 说明文 审题 第一人称 一般现在时 节水方法 Free writing Steps: 1. Decide on what situations you are going to write about. 2. Think of a topic sentence for each paragraph. 3. Add details or examples to support the topic sentence. 4. Use the words and sentence patterns you learnt in this unit. 5. Use the necessary linking words. Topic Sentence Details/ Examples There is not enough (1) ______ ______ ______ (干净的饮用水) on the earth, and we all need a lot of water in our (2) ______ ____ (日常生活).  (3) ______ ______ (关掉) the tap when you don’t use it. (4) ______ ______ ______(洗短时间的淋浴). (5) ______ ______ ______ (洗更多衣服) at a time. (6) ______ waste water ______ (用……来) water plants ...  Let’s start with small things around us and act to (7) ______ ______ (节约用水) now. clean drinking water daily lives Turn off Step 2: 谋篇布局 How to save water   Why water is valuable Ways to save water Conclusion Take short showers Wash more clothes save water Use to How to save water Water is the source of life—it is very important to humans, animals and plants. There is not enough clean drinking water on the earth, and we all need a lot of water in our daily lives. Water is valuable, but many people still waste it. We must take action to save water. We can save water in many different ways. First, turn off the tap when you don’t use it. Second, take a short shower instead of a long bath. Third, wash more clothes together at a time. Finally, reuse waste water. We can use it to water plants or clean the toilet. If we start to take action to save water today, we will do something great to the earth. Post-writing Check and revise 检查和修改 Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it. 根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。 I provided water-saving tips for different situations, such as . I presented the information in a clear and logical way. I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit. I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Grade and share Elements要素 Level档次 Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意 适当发挥 Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误 语言使用恰当，丰富 Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡 互评总分 ⭐可参考作业布置如下： Samples: Homework 个人作业（可选） 小组作业（可选） 1.背诵本篇作文，将其抄入作文集锦中。 1.互评作文。 2.完成超越范文挑战部分。 14 THANKS $