Unit 10 Lending a help hand-Writing知识点清单＆范文 2025-2026学年仁爱科普版七年级英语下册

Unit 10 Lending a help hand ⭐Writing知识点清单 一、写作知识点清单 （一）写作主题与核心要求 · 主题：Community service activity（社区服务 / 志愿活动经历） · 核心要求： 1. 结构清晰：采用 “开头引入 - 主体按时间顺序描述活动过程 - 结尾表达感受与收获” 的三段式结构； 2. 内容完整：包含活动的时间、地点、人物、具体服务内容、互动细节与个人感受； 3. 语法正确：熟练运用一般过去时，正确使用时间顺序词，语句通顺； 4. 语言地道：使用单元主题词汇，按 “活动前 - 活动中 - 活动后” 的逻辑叙述，避免流水账。 （二）写作结构模板（三段式） 段落 功能 常用句型 / 模板 开头（Beginning） 交代活动的基本信息（时间、地点、活动名称） 1. On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience. 2. Last weekend, I took part in a community service activity at the garden. 3. On the Community Day, my classmates and I did volunteer work in our neighborhood. 主体（Body） 按时间顺序描述活动过程（用时间顺序词串联） 1. 时间顺序词：At first → Then/Next → Later 2. 活动内容：At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor. Then we visited some elders, chatted with them and played cards. 3. 互动细节：Mrs. Li, an old lady, was happy to listen to our school life stories. 结尾（End） 总结感受与收获，升华主题 1. I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place. 2. It was a great experience. Helping others made me feel warm and happy. 3. I learned that small acts of kindness can make a big difference. （三）写作核心词汇与句型 1. 高频词汇 / 短语 类别 词汇 / 短语 例句 志愿活动相关 volunteer at a nursing home, clean the windows, sweep the floor, visit elders, chat with, play cards We volunteered at the nursing home on Lei Feng Day. 时间顺序词 at first, then, next, later At first, we cleaned the windows, then we visited the elders. 感受与收获 wonderful experience, feel good about helping others, make the world a better place It was a wonderful experience to help the elders. 2. 高分句型（含一般过去时） 1. 时间状语从句：On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home.（雷锋日那天，我去养老院做志愿活动。） 2. 并列句描述动作：At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders.（起初我们擦窗户、扫地，然后看望了一些老人。） 3. 表达感受的句子：I felt good about helping others.（帮助别人让我感觉很好。） 4. 升华主题的句子：Together, we can make the world a better place.（我们一起能让世界变得更美好。） 二、七年级英语写作真题训练（Unit10 主题） 真题一 题目： 学校英语角正在举办 “My Volunteer Experience” 主题征文活动，请你以 “Volunteering at a Nursing Home” 为题，写一篇短文投稿。 要求： 1. 词数：60-80 词； 2. 内容需包含：①活动的时间、地点；②活动的具体内容（按时间顺序）；③活动的感受与收获； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，使用一般过去时。 范文 Volunteering at a Nursing Home On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home with my classmates. It was a wonderful experience. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor. Then we visited the elders. We chatted with them, played cards and told them stories about our school life. Mrs. Li, an old English teacher, was very happy to be with us. I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place. 真题二 题目： 假设你是李华，你的笔友 Tom 来信说他想参加社区志愿活动，但不知道做什么。请你写一封回信，分享一次你的社区服务经历并给他提建议。 要求： 1. 词数：70-90 词； 2. 内容需包含：①你的一次志愿活动经历（简单描述）；②2-3 条适合的社区服务建议；③表达鼓励； 3. 格式正确，语句通顺，使用一般过去时。 范文 Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear that you want to join community service activities. Last Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home with my classmates. We cleaned the room, chatted with the elders and played games with them. It was great! You can try these activities too: cleaning the community garden, helping old people carry things, or collecting rubbish in the neighborhood. Small acts of kindness can make a big difference. Hope you have a wonderful experience! Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $