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应用文评讲
假定你是校学生会成员李华,学校计划举办“中外美食文化节”(Chinese and Foreign Food Culture Festival),请给留学生Tom写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动内容。
1. 具体几点?
2. 时间地点哪个在前?
3. 需不需要对时间地点展开描写?
4. 活动内容用什么时态?
Dear Tom,
I’m Li Hua from the Student Union. I’m writing to share with you some details about the upcoming festival with the name of Chinese and Foreign Food Culture Festival, which will be held on the school playground from 3 p.m. to 6 p.m. this Friday.
It’s a great chance to explore diverse cuisines. At the festival, you can taste delicious food from different countries. There will also be cooking shows where chefs are to demonstrate their food-making skills, and a sharing session for everyone to talk about food cultures from their hometowns.
We hope you can join us and share with us your country’s food culture. Looking forward to your reply!
读后续写评讲
1. 立意
2. 对话描写太多
3. 情节推进节奏不当
解决方法:对困境/问题的描写 1
解决方法:对困境/问题的描写 2
解决方法:对困境/问题的描写 3
4. 主题升华的三个层次
1)无主题升华
2)有,但痕迹太重
3)不露痕迹
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