九大联盟2026届高三下学期4月卷---英语应用文 完整课堂教学流程教案 讲义

九大联盟2026届高三下学期4月卷的应用文 第 一节(满分15分） 假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部新增的主题为“My Favorite Teacher”的每周分享活动深受同学们喜爱。请你 代表俱乐部给提供过建议的外教Mr.Brown 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.活动影响； 2.表达感谢。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 课堂教学步骤如下： 步骤一： 1.课后作业：要求学生按照题目要求认真审题后写作 2.提前给出相关词块和表达，其目的是在备考不到两个月的时间里，规范感谢信的常用表达 on behalf of … 代表…… express my sincere thanks to you 表达我诚挚的感谢 invaluable suggestions 宝贵的建议（高分替换 good ideas） professional guidance 专业指导 be well received 深受欢迎 arouse students’ enthusiasm 激发学生热情 improve oral English skills 提升英语口语能力 strengthen the bond between teachers and students 增进师生情谊 create a positive learning atmosphere 营造良好学习氛围 appreciate your great support 感谢你的大力支持 look forward to your continuous help 期待你继续帮忙 步骤二：批改后发现的问题并进行归类： 一、语法基础错误 1.不注意主谓一致和谓语的时态 1) It can arouse students’ enthusiasm and improve oral English skills. 2) Besides, it can improve oral English skills. 3) It not only strengthen the bond between teachers and students, but also create a positive learning atmosphere. 4)It improve students’ enthusiasm and improve their oral English. 2.“孙杨式” 错误（be+do的典型误用） 1)It’s strengthen the bond between teachers and students. 2)Finally, our school is appreciate your great support. 3)I’m truly appreciate your great support. 4)It’s help for club created a positive learning atmosphere. 5)Your suggestions is arouse students’ enthusiasm. 3.句子少成分/少连词 1)Every student shared their amusing stories , it made the topic more engaging. 2)The most importance , the topic has strengthen the bond between teachers and students. 3)The important is it can strengthen the bond between teachers and students. 4)More importantly, strengthen the relationship between teachers and students. 5)Last but not least, a positive learning atmosphere around us,it made us know the meaning of learning English. 二、词汇与句式表达错误 1.汉语式句子 1)Thanks you give us invaluable suggestions. 2)Not only arouse students’ enthusiasm , but also improve their oral English skills. 3)I on behalf of the school English club express my sincere thanks to you . 4)Improve oral English at strengthen the bond between teachers and students. 5)I on behalf of the school English club expressing my sincere thanks to you. 2.光杆名词的使用 1) It’s helpful for club to create a positive learning atmosphere. 2) Our school held activity with the theme of “My Favourite Teacher”. 3. At first 与 first 分不清 At first, this activity not only improved English skills but aroused students’ enthusiasm. 三、语用与文体语气错误 没有注意感谢信表达的语气，使用祈使句 1) Express my sincere thanks to you for your invaluable suggestions and guidance. 2) Thank you for your guidance. 四、篇章结构与内容逻辑错误 1.结构不清楚 1）第一段：How is everything going? I’m on behalf of my school to write the letter to you. 2）第二段：The new topic was well received among the students. I hope you can receive my sincere thanks and wish you have a good day. 2.跑题 I’m writing to you to invite you to join it. 步骤三：精讲 1. 审题： 体裁 人称 时态 语气 感谢信 第一人称复数：指代我们学生 第二人称单数：指代Mr. Brown 正文段落 强调对现在的影响用与现在有关的时态 真情恳切 不浮夸空洞 2. 搭建文本结构： 第一段开头 基本情况+写作目的 第二段正文： 活动的影响 第三段结尾： 再次表示感谢 3. 纠正学生本次写作存在的问题： 语法基础错误 1.不注意主谓一致和谓语的时态 1) It arouses students’ enthusiasm and improves oral English skills. 2) Besides, it improves oral English skills. 3) It not only strengthens the bond between teachers and students, but also creates a positive learning atmosphere. 4)It improves students’ enthusiasm and improves their oral English. 2.“孙杨式” 错误（be+do的典型误用） 1)It strengthens the bond between teachers and students. 2)Finally, our school appreciates your great support. 3)we truly appreciate your great support. 4)It helps the club create a positive learning atmosphere. 5)Your suggestions aroused students’ enthusiasm.(删掉be动词) 3.句子少或多成分/少连词 1)Every student shared their amusing stories , which made the topic more engaging. 2)The most importance thing is that the topic has strengthened the bond between teachers and students. 3)The important thing is that it can strengthen the bond between teachers and students. 4)More importantly, it strengthens the relationship between teachers and students. 5)Last but not least, a positive learning atmosphere around us made us know the meaning of learning English.（把 ,it去掉） 词汇与句式表达错误 1.汉语式句子 1)Thanks you give us invaluable suggestions. 应该为：Thank you for the invaluable suggestions that you offered. 2) Not only arouse students’ enthusiasm , but also improve their oral English level. 应改为：It not only arouses students’ enthusiasm, but also improves their oral English level. 3) I on behalf of the school English club express my sincere thanks to you . 应改为：I am on behalf of the school English club to express my sincere thanks to you. 4) Improve oral English strengthen the bond between teachers and students. 应改为：It improves oral English and strengthens the bond between teachers and students. 5) I on behalf of the school English club expressing my sincere thanks to you. 应改为：I am on behalf of the school English club to express our sincere thanks to you. 2.光杆名词的使用 3) It’s helpful for club to create a positive learning atmosphere. 应该为：It’s helpful for the club to create a positive learning atmosphere. 4) Our school held activity with the theme of “My Favourite Teacher”. 5) 应改为：Our school held an activity with the theme of "My Favourite Teacher”。 4. At first 与 first 分不清 At first, this activity not only improved English skills but aroused students’ enthusiasm. 应改为：First, this activity not only improved English skills but aroused students’ enthusiasm. 语用与文体语气错误 没有注意感谢信表达的语气，使用了祈使句，语气生硬 3) Express my sincere thanks to you for your invaluable suggestions and guidance. 应改为：I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you for your invaluable suggestions and guidance. 4) Thank you for your guidance. 应改为：We truly appreciate your guidance. 篇章结构与内容逻辑错误 1.结构不清楚 1）第一段：How is everything going? I’m on behalf of my school to write the letter to you. 应改为：How is everything going? I’m on behalf of my school to write the letter to express our sincere thanks to you.要明确写信的目的是感谢。 2）第二段：The new topic was well received among the students. I hope you can receive my sincere thanks and wish you have a good day. 应把I hope you can receive my sincere thanks and wish you have a good day.删掉。此句应写在结尾，正文段落主要写活动的影响。 2.跑题 I’m writing to you to invite you to join it. 应改为：I’m writing to express our sincere thanks to you.这篇作文不是邀请信，而是感谢信。 4.总结学生作文错误的总体根源： 学生写英语作文出现中式表达、名词不加限定词、主谓不一致、be动词与实义动词连用、时态错误、句子缺成分等问题，根本原因就是用汉语的思维和语法习惯去写英语，没有分清两种语言的本质差别。 1. 英语重形式，语法规则严格，时态、单复数、主谓一致都必须体现；汉语重意思，不靠词形变化，只要句意通顺即可。 2. 英语名词不能单独使用，单数可数名词前必须加限定词（a/an/the/物主代词等）；汉语名词可直接使用，无此要求。 3. 英语一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，be动词和实义动词不能同时用；汉语一句话可以连用多个动词。 4. 英语靠动词变形表示时态；汉语动词不变，只用“了、过、要”等字表示时间。 所以，想把英语学好，养成良好的英语思维习惯是关键！ 步骤四：官方范文 One possible version: Dear Mr. Brown, I would like to extend our sincerest thanks for your valuable suggestion. The newly added weekly sharing session, My Favorite Teacher, has been warmly welcomed by most students. This activity has created a meaningful opportunity for us to express gratitude and share inspiring stories about our teachers. Not only does it encourage public speaking, but it also strengthens the bond between students and teachers. Many members have told us how much they enjoy listening to and participating in these heartfelt stories. We truly appreciate your thoughtful ideas and continued support. Your contribution has made our club more engaging and vibrant. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 步骤五：学生所写的作文 学生1： Dear Mr. Brown,   On behalf of the school English club, I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you for your invaluable suggestions and professional guidance on the activity "My Favorite Teacher".   The activity is well received .It arouses our enthusiasm for English learning and helps us improve oral English skills. Also, it creates a positive learning atmosphere and strengthen the bond between teachers and students.   We really appreciate your great support. We are looking forward to your continuous help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学生2： Dear Mr. Brown, I'm Li Hua. On behalf of our school English club, I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to your invaluable suggestions and professional guidance. This activity with the theme of "My Favorite Teacher" is popular with students. Firstly, it not only improves oral English skills, but it also arouses student's enthusiasm. Besides, it creates a positive learning atmosphere, which will be of great help in English learning. What is more important is that it can strengthen the bond between teachers and students. We appreciate your great support. Looking forward to your continuous help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学生3： Dear Mr. Brown, I'm Li Hua.On behalf of the school English Club, I'm writing to express my sincere thanks to you. This activity is so well received that it has aroused students' enthusiasm and improved oral English skills! Through this activity, Not only have we strengthened the bond between teachers and students, but it has also created a positive learning atmosphere. I am truly grateful for your invaluable help and professional guidance throughout the process. Look forward to your continuous help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学生4： Dear Mr. Brown, I'm Li Hua. I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you on behalf of the school English Club Thanks to your invaluable suggestions, our club held a new weekly sharing activity themed "My Favorite Teacher", which is well received among students. It not only strengthens the bond between teachers and students, but also creates a positive learning atmosphere. There is no doubt that only in this way,can we improve our oral English skills and arouse enthusiasm for English We truly appreciate your great support. Looking forward to your continuous help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $