内容正文:
类型2&3
演讲稿&询问信
题组
(2025·浙江1月卷:校内短视频拍摄现象+2025·全国Ⅱ卷:稿件催询)
(-)
(二)
语篇
类型
演讲稿:根据演讲主题,用简洁且具有号召力的
语篇类型一邮件:发件人一般用简洁、清晰易懂的语言
语言陈述观点或者描述某一现象,通常
说明目的、交代具体信息并表达期待
需要发出号召
审人称:根据题干信息“假定你是校英文报
写
编辑李华.请给Chris写一封邮
审人称:题目要求陈述对部分同学在校园内
写
用手机拍摄短视频这一现象的看法」
审题
件”和“询问进展”可知,写作人称
作
人称应以第三人称为主,可根据行文
以第一、二人称为主
导
审题
需求适当使用第一人称
审时态:根据题干信息“询问进展”可知,时
导
审时态:写作目的是介绍某一客观现象并发
态以一般现在时为主
出号召,时态应以一般现在时为主
Para.1:表明身份和写邮件的目的
Para.l:介绍部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄
谋篇
Para.2:询问写作进展,并提醒交稿时间
短视频这一现象及影响
Para.3:表达感谢并期待尽快回复
谋篇
Para.2:提出相关建议
One possible version
Para.3:发出号召并表示感谢
Dear Chris,
One possible version
I'm Li Hua,an editor of our school English newspaper.I'm
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
writing to ask about the progress of the article on Canadian sports
Good morning,everyone!Today,I want to talk about filming short
you promised to write last month.D(含省略hat/which的定语从
句)
videos on campus.While creating content can be fun and creative,
Could you please tell me the current progress of the article?
it's important to use phones wisely..①(While引导让步状语从句)
Additionally,I'd like to gently remind you that the submission deadline
Some students film during class or in quiet areas,which distracts
is June 13th.If you encounter any challenges,our team is more than
others from learning and invades others'privacy2(which引导非限制
happy to assist you
性定语从句).
We truly appreciate your dedication to this project.Looking
Here are my suggestions:First,choose the right time and place-
forward to your reply and the wonderful article,which will
undoubtedly enrich our readers'understanding of Canadian sports
avoid classrooms or libraries.Second,always ask permission before
culture.之(whih引导非限制性定语从句)
filming others.Finally,balance your time between studies and hobbies.
Best wishes,
Let's respect our campus environment and focus on what truly
Li Hua
matters(what引导宾语从句).Thank you!
【佳句变式】①I'm reaching out to inquire about the progress of the
【佳句变式】①Although creating content can be fun and creative,using
article regarding Canadian sports,which you committed to writing.
2We anticipate your timely response and the receipl of the article,as it
phones wisely is important.
will play an important part in enriching our readers'understanding of
2...distracting others from learning and invading others'privacy.
Canadian sports culture
专题六
读后续写
主题1个人经历&个人成长
练习(2025·全国Ⅱ卷:文化身份)
【写作指导】
同,被问到名宁是“我”在爱尔兰遇到的第一个挑战一很多以英语
◆义章主线
为母语的人很难正确叫出“我”的名字Qiuyu-一一有一次在课堂上,
已知线索:
教授在同学们面前遍遍地尝试跟着“我”重复“我“的名字,“我”
“我”是一名在爱尔兰的国际留学生—由于英汉发音系统不
不知道该继续纠他的发音还是干脆放弃这个问题一最终“我"”
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因担心同学们可能会厌倦“我”纠正发音的努力,甚至对“我”失去
name.At first,I was a little hesitant.But encouraged by the curiosity
耐心而放弃纠正教授的发音一那次事件后,“我”不再去纠正别人
sparkling in my classmates'eyes,I began,"Oiu means autumn and
对“我”名字的不标准的发音一一这种方式让“我”免去了过度解释
yu means rain,which respectively represent a harvest season and
的困扰,但“我”很快发现,这可能会让“我”失去一小部分分享自己
the flowing hope in Chinese culture.”(语言描写)I said slowly,
文化身份的机会…
making sure they could hear the exact pronunciation.As my professor
可续写线索:
and classmates nodded approvingly(a动作描写),I suddenly realized
第一段:在一次课堂讨论中,我被邀请解释我名字的含义。“我”
that though it was important to pronounce my name correctly,the culture
是如何解释的?教授和同学们有什么反应?“我”有什么感想?
behind it was even more absorbing and precious.
第二段:我的许多同学都很感兴趣,下课后来找我。同学们想
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要了解什么?“我们”讨论了什么?“我”有什么收获?“我”的心态
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class.
有什么转变?
They enthusiastically asked me how to write Chinese characters and tried
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to write my name.Some of them even asked me to help choose a Chinese
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name that was equally meaningful.Bringing me a lot of strength,this
hesitant,curiosity,harvest,flowing hope,approvingly,correctly,
absorbing,precious,enthusiastically,strength,embarrassed,upset,
sharing and communication is my most novel experience in this foreign
national pride ..
country.I was no longer embarrassed or upset when others were
One possible version
struggling to pronounce my name.(状态描写)Instead,.with a sense
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of national pride,I'd prefer to share the attractive Chinese culture
In a class discussion,I was invited to explain the meaning of my
behind it.
主题2家庭生活&感人温情
练习1(2025·全国I卷:人际沟通)
【写作指导】
invite,fence ..
◆文章主线
One possible version
已知线索:
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“我”和妻子通过举办小型聚会向亲朋好友展示“我们”的新
I realized it was me who was at fault.My brother,heartbroken over
家—“我”的哥哥带着他的狗Toy前米赴约—“我”因扣心
his wife's death and facing health issues,relied on Toby.I'd ignored his
Ty惹麻烦而让哥哥把它留在室外一晚饭后,突然下起了雨,所
emotions,focusing on the dog.A sharp pang of shame coursed
有人进入室内一“我”不愿让Toy进全,而哥哥不想让Toy淋
through me-family was supposed to be a refuge in storms,not a
雨,于是决定离开一几天后,“我”再次邀请哥哥却遭到拒绝,他对
battlefield over a pristine backyard.(心理描写)Calls went
之前我们分开时的情况感到不满一一但“我”认为,哥哥会消气
unanswered,texts unread;a face-to-face apology was needed.My wife's
的一一两个月过去了,妻子建议“我”联系哥哥,但“我”未听从妻子
urging helped me realize that pride had no place in mending what love
的建议,坚持认为哥哥应该先联系“我”一一“我”感到良心不安,试
had broken.
着站在哥哥的角度看待问题…
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可续写线索:
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother's door.
第一段:我意识到过错在我。“我”想到了什么?“我”应该如
His guarded expression softened at the treat."Can we talk?"I asked
何做?
(语言描写),my voice quieter than I intended.He nodded slowly,
第二段:带着妻子做的饼干,我来到了哥哥家的门口。哥哥看
stepping aside to let me in.(动作描写)I apologized.admitting I'd
到“我”有什么反应?“我做了什么?“我们”是否和解了?
ignored Toby's role in his grief.He regretted leaving,too.With Toby
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sprawled at our feet,we talked for hours.We shared the biscuits as he
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told his stories of his wife,his fears,and the quiet comfort the dog
rely on,ignore,shame,refuge,battlefield,apology,pride,provided.Before leaving,I invited him and Toby without rules.Love
mend,soften,nod,admit,regret,talk,share,comfort,provide,mended our fence.
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练习2(2025·浙江1月卷:一场“误会”)
【写作指导】
felt a mix of excitement and nervousness as he recounted the events that
◆文章主线
had unfolded earlier."Mr.and Mrs.Green,"he began,his voice
已知线索:
trembling slightly,"I have something important to tell you.Earlier
Kevin被父母托付给邻居Hill太太照顾一-Hill太太在睡觉.
today,I saw a man enter your house through the window.I called
室外的动静引起了Kevin的注意一一邻居Green夫妇家里没人,
the police,and they caught him.I think he might have stolen
Kevin看到有人从Green夫妇家的窗户跳了进去一Kevin报警之
something from your house,maybe a watch because he said that
后冲出Hill太太的家一Kevin也从Green夫妇家的窗户跳了进
was his father's watch.”(语言描写)Mr.and Mrs..Green listened
去一-Kevin大声让那个人停下,并让他马上离开一-那人看到
Kevin只是一个小孩,便说这是自己家一警车的声音响起,男人从
intently,their faces filled with surprise and concern."Kevin,thank you
窗户跳了出去—Kevin出去把事情的经过告诉警察一警察逮捕
so much for telling us,"Mrs.Green said,her eyes wide with
了那个男人一Kevin不确定自己做得对不对…
gratitude(神态描写).“We had no idea this happened.You were very
可续写线索:
brave to call the police."
第一段:当Green夫妇回家时,Kevin去和他们谈话。Kevin对
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Green夫妇说了什么?Kevin的情绪有什么变化?Green夫妇反应如何?
Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had found to the police
第二段:Kevin和Green先生带着他们找到的手表去了警察
station.The officer on duty listened to their story and examined the
局。Kevin和Green先生做了什么?警察有什么反应?
watch.(动作描写)“This could be evidence,”the officer said.
◆续写词汇
taking notes."Thank you for bringing it in.We'll investigate
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further and keep you updated.”(语言描写)Kevin felt a sense of
excitement,nervousness,enter,catch,steal,surprise,concern,
accomplishment..(心理描写)He had helped catch a thief and
gratitude,examine,investigate,accomplishment...
One possible version
potentially recover stolen property.As they left the police station,
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Mr.Green patted Kevin on the back."You did a great job today,Kevin.
When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them.He
Your quick-thinking and bravery made a big difference.'
专题七
阅读表达
练习(2025·北京卷:想象的魔力)
1.Mark was upset on seeing that many plastic bottles littered the parks
4.L.ike Mark and Sally,we should first identify real-world problems
and sidewalks.
(e.g.,pollution or urban exploration).Then,acquire relevant skills
2.The app maps small local parks and gardens few people knew about.
(3D printing programming)through learning.Finally,persist
3.With encouragement from his friends and parents,Mark built a small
through failures and seek community support to turn ideas into tangible
bike shelter for his neighbourhood after months of trial and error.
solutions.
It is with a little help from his school and the local community centre.
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主题1个人经历&个人成长
练习(2025·全国Ⅱ卷:文化身份)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语
into laughter.I forced a smile,unsure how to respond
续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
further.
“What is your name?”is a question most
After that incident,I stopped acting as a
frequently asked when people meet for the first time.
"Chinese teacher".Instead of correcting others when
But for me,it was the first challenge I encountered as
they were struggling to pronounce my name,I just
an international student in Ireland.
smiled and nodded approvingly.This approach spared
The pronunciation system of the Chinese me the discomfort of having to over-explain.
language is quite different from that of English.For
However,I soon found that by doing so,I might be
native speakers of English,some Chinese words are
losing something more important:the opportunity to
rather difficult to pronounce.My given name Qiuyu
share a small part of my cultural identity.
(秋雨),for instance,happened to be a great
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
challenge for many of them.Every time I gave a
(2)开头已给出。
self-introduction,I had to explain how to pronounce
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my name at least five times,yet they still could not
In a class discussion,I was invited to explain the
say it the way I did.
meaning of my name.
Once in a lecture,the professor tried repeating
my name after me over and over in front of thirty
classmates.I really did not know whether I should
continue correcting him or simply drop the matter.I
feared that my classmates might grow tired of my
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efforts or even lose patience with me.After all,I did
Many of my classmates got interested and came
care about how others would think of me.I realized
up to me after class.
that if I didn't stop,the entire lecture would be
ruined.“It's okay,professor,”I shrugged(耸肩).
The awkward moment ended with the class erupting
主题2家庭生活&感人温情
练习1(2025·全国I卷:人际沟通)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和给段落开头语
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and
续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
play.There was just one thing I hadn't counted on:
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with
My brother chose to bring his dog Toby,a 50-pound
family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the
ball of fire.Though friendly,he could easily knock
early summer.She had prepared lots of snacks,while
over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old
my job was to have the backyard in order.
granddaughter.So,when my brother showed up,I
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asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
bothering me.I tried to put myself in my brother's
My plan was working out just fine.Toby was
shoes.He was facing health issues and his wife of
using up his energy by running back and forth in the
thirty-five years had passed away a few months
backyard and giving the kids plenty of room.
earlier.Toby was his constant companion,the one
Unexpectedly,after supper,the weather changed.It
who kept him going.
started to rain and everyone went indoors.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右;
It was an awkward moment.I didn't want Toby to
(2)开头已给出。
be running around in the house,and my brother
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wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog.
I realized it was me who was at fault.
Eventually,my brother decided to leave rather than
force the issue.
A few days passed,and I hadn't heard anything
from my brother.I texted him and expressed wishes
for him to come out again.His reply came as a
surprise--a shock,actually:“Not a chance..”
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Clearly,he was unhappy over the way we had parted.
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at
After all,I had left him little choice.Well,he'll get
my brother's door.
over it,I reasoned.
Two months passed.My wife suggested I get in
touch with my brother,but I resisted,thinking he
should call first.However,my conscience()kept
练习2(2025·浙江1月卷:一场“误会”)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语
Thinking that the man might get away with
续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
whatever he wanted before the police arrived,Kevin
Kevin was pretty bored.His mother was at work,
decided to do something.He rushed out of Mrs.Hill's
and his father had been away on business.Therefore,
house and crossed the street quickly.Grabbing a
he was left in the care of Mrs.Hill,an old lady who
branch from a cut-down tree,he jumped in through
lived next door.His parents had raised the 12-year-old
the window."Stop right there!You must leave right
to be a good boy.He never got into trouble,though
now!"he called out,holding the branch with both
sometimes he wanted to do risky things.Mrs.Hill was
hands.
asleep.Kevin sighed(叹息)and hoped something
The man froze for a second,but when he saw the
exciting would happen.Suddenly,a movement
skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief."Hey,kid,
outside caught his eye.
put that down.It was my home.My parents used to
Mrs.Hill's front window faced Mr.and Mrs.live here and my father's watch was here,"he
Green's house across the street.The couple had both
explained,trying to lift a floorboard.
gone to work,so it was strange that someone was over
At that moment,the sounds of a police car
there.Kevin stared at the man at their front door.echoed()in the air.The man stood up in a
Suddenly,the man jumped through an open window panic,then ran through the house toward the window
into the house.With his heart in his mouth,Kevin and jumped out.Kevin followed out and told the
grabbed Mrs.Hill's home phone and called the police.
arriving police officers what had happened.They
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pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs.Hill's house.Somehow
he wasn't sure he had done the right thing."What if
he has told the truth?"he thought to himself.The
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man's words sounded pretty convincing.
Kevin and Mr.Green took the watch they had
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found to the police station.
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When Mr.and Mrs.Green got home,Kevin went to
talk to them.
专题七阅读表达
练习(2025·北京卷:想象的魔力)
阅读下面短文,根据题目要求用英文回答Carter loved reading fantasy books.Inspired by
问题。
magical maps in her stories,she wondered:what if
There's something magical about the way
we could build a real-world app that helps people
imagination works.Around the world,kids are using
explore hidden places in their own cities?She
imagination in ways that were once only found in gathered friends,learned some basic programming,
science fiction.
and together they created an app that maps small local
Take the story of Mark Lee.He loved biking
parks and gardens few people knew about.Their app
around his neighbourhood but grew upset seeing that
quickly grew popular in town and even won a local
many plastic bottles littered the parks and sidewalks.
youth innovation award.
Instead of simply complaining,he decided to do
Next time you see a young person lost in
thought,don't rush to pull them back.They might
something about it.
just be imagining the next great idea.
Using an old 3D printer,Mark started
experimenting.He melted(熔化)plastic bottles
1.What upset Mark when he was biking around his
neighbourhood?
down and tried shaping them into small bricks.At
first,everything went wrong-the plastic broke,the
2.How does the app created by Sally and her friends
printer jammed,and the pieces didn't fit together.
help?
Friends laughed a little,and even Mark's parents
thought he should just give up.
3.Please decide which part is false in the following
But Mark had a different idea.He redesigned
statement,then underline it and explain why.
the bricks to lock together like puzzle()pieces
With encouragement from his friends and
and adjusted the heating temperature carefully.After
parents,Mark built a small bike shelter for his
months of trial and error,he succeeded.With a little
neighbourhood after months of trial and error.
help from his school and the local community centre,
Mark used his bricks to build a small bike shelter for
4.How can you put your imagination into practice as
his neighbourhood.
Mark and Sally did?(In about 40 words)
And he's not alone.Thirteen-year-old Sally
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