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Unit 4 Honesty
单元话题(诚实)写作满分范文12篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练4篇
1.假设你经历了一件关于诚实的事情,请以“An Experience of Honesty”为题写一篇短文,描述事情的经过和你的感受,不少于5句话。
提示:what happened, what you did, how you felt
An Experience of Honesty
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2.作为一名学生,在日常生活中,你可能会遇到一些诚实很难做到却又很重要的情况。以“A Time When Honesty Was Important” 为题,回想一次你需要在诚实与不诚实之间做出选择的经历。写一个简短的小故事 (60-80字)。
In your daily life as a student, you may face situations where being honest is challenging but important. Think about a time when you had to choose between being honest or not. Write a short story (60-80 words) about what happened. Suggested Questions to Guide Your Writing:
1. What was the situation at that time?
2. What choice did you make?
3. What happened because of your choice?
4. What lesson could you learn from the experience?
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I learned that the truth never makes things worse.例文2:
3.假定你是某校学生李华,近日你校开展了以“共植诚信之树”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示,用英语给笔友Henry写一封电子邮件,分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
Time:Plant an Honest Tree Together
June 10th, 2025
Activities:
●watch a video
●listen to a speech
●have a discussion
●plant an honest tree
Feeling (s):
...
注意事项:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.古人云,人无信而不立。这句古训告诉我们,一旦做出承诺,就应该遵守自己的承诺,做一个诚信的人。这里,请你以“A promise I kept”为题,并根据以下要点和要求,写一篇英语短文。词数不少于90个。
要点:1.你对谁做出了承诺;
2.你是如何遵守承诺的;
3.你遵守承诺后的感受。
要求:1.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称等个人信息。
A promise I kept
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进阶拓展训练4篇
5.“不信不立,不诚不行”,诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德。某英文网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李辉,请结合生活实例用英语写一篇不少于 80 词的短文投稿。
要求:文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇:virtue 美德, honesty 诚实
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6.假如你是吴伟,你发现你的好朋友李华经常用搜题软件来完成作业,对待学习不够诚实。你想要写一封信给他,和他谈论这个问题。信的内容需包括:1.指出不诚信学习的危害;2.给好友提出帮助他改进的建议。写一篇不少于50词的短文。
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7.Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (请根据以下信息,写一篇不少于60个单词的短文,标点符号不占格)
孔子教导我们“言必行,行必果”。诚信,是刻在中华民族血脉里的精神基因,是跨越千年时空的文明传承。在我们的生活中,诚信同样闪烁着耀眼的光芒—或许是考试时抵制诱惑的坚守,或许是犯错后主动承认错误的勇气,又或许是拾金不昧彰显美德。请你以“An experience of being honest”为题,回顾发生在你身上的一次有关诚信的经历,并谈谈你从这次经历中明白了什么道理。
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8.Honesty is always the best policy. Write a blog post about an honest choice you made. Write at least 60 words. (请写一篇不少于60词的博客,描述你的一次有关诚实的选择,标点符号不占格。)
提示:生活中,我们常面临诚实与隐瞒的抉择,如损坏物品、发现错误等。正如谚语所说,诚实总是上策。请描述你的一次选择经历,并谈谈你的感悟与收获。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. What happened?
2. What did you choose to do?
3. How did you feel?
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能力综合实践4篇
9.Write at least 50 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
诚信是生活中一项重要的品质。在第二部分的语篇中,我们读到了一个关于诚信的故事。故事中的David因为不诚信的行为最终受到了惩罚。同学们,在你们的日常生活中,是否遇到过类似的情况?
●如果你经历过类似的情况,你是怎么处理的?且写出你这么做的原因和你的想法。
●如果你是David,再给你一次机会,你会怎么做?且写出你这么做的原因和你受到的启发。
选择以上情境中的一个,结合单元大问题Why is honesty the best policy?完成一篇不少于50词的短文。
Choose one of the following sentences and begin your writing:
● I remember one day ...
● If I were David, I would ...
注意:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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10.Write a passage of at least 80 words on the topic “The importance of honesty” (请写一篇不少于80词的短文,说明诚实的重要性)
以下两点供参考:
1.为什么诚实是重要的;
2.试举一例说明诚实的重要性。
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11.你是李华,班主任Mr Wang让你在以“诚信”(Honesty)为主题的班会上用英语做个发言,要求:时态正确,前后连贯,不少于80词。
开头已给出,可包含一下信息:
诚信很重要,是人们的优秀品质(good quality)之一,希望人人都能诚实守信(honest and trusting)。作为学生如何做到诚信?
提出以下建议:
1.按时到校,按时离校,上课认真听老师讲课,课后认真完成作业。
2.在班上,尽力帮助别人,不嘲笑别人。
3.不抄袭(copy)作业,考试不作弊(cheat in exams),不沉迷手机(indulge phones),不花时间玩游戏。
4.上学回家路上遵守交通规则(follow traffic rules),公交车上主动给老人让座(offer seats to the old)。
5.感恩父母,尊敬老师。
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12.民无信不立。诚信是一个道德范畴,是公民的第二个“身份证”,是日常行为中诚实和正式交流的信用的统称。某英文学习网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你自己讲诚信的一次经历,以及你有何收获。不少于80词。
提示词语: difficulty, copy, shame, virtue(美德), lose
Use the following points as reference(以下问题仅供参考)
●What’s your experience about honesty?
●What can you learn from it?
Honesty is golden. It means telling the truth and being fair.
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Unit 4 Honesty
单元话题(诚实)写作满分范文12篇
说明:此专题分三个难度层次,基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践,老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练4篇
1.假设你经历了一件关于诚实的事情,请以“An Experience of Honesty”为题写一篇短文,描述事情的经过和你的感受,不少于5句话。
提示:what happened, what you did, how you felt
An Experience of Honesty
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【答案】
例文
An Experience of Honesty
Last Sunday morning, I found a wallet on my way to the park. I opened it and saw some money and an ID card inside. I decided to take it to the police station nearby. The policeman praised me for my honesty. I felt very happy and proud because I did the right thing.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般过去时为主,讲述一次关于诚实的经历及感受
明确要点:叙述发现钱包的经过、归还钱包的行动,以及诚实带来的感受与启发
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:词数不少于5句,语言流畅,书写规范,不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
连贯式结构:
开篇:交代发现钱包的时间与地点
中间:依次描述查看钱包、决定归还、送交警察的完整过程
结尾:表达内心感受并说明产生该感受的原因
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:经历描述
内容:found a wallet/returning a lost item
应对行动:opened it and saw some money and an ID card/decided to take it to the police station/handed it to the policeman
表现与结果:The policeman praised me/the owner would get back his wallet soon
要点二:感受和原因
感受:felt very happy and proud/felt peaceful and satisfied
原因:because I helped someone in need/because I chose to do the right thing without hesitation/because honesty makes the world warmer
2.作为一名学生,在日常生活中,你可能会遇到一些诚实很难做到却又很重要的情况。以“A Time When Honesty Was Important” 为题,回想一次你需要在诚实与不诚实之间做出选择的经历。写一个简短的小故事 (60-80字)。
In your daily life as a student, you may face situations where being honest is challenging but important. Think about a time when you had to choose between being honest or not. Write a short story (60-80 words) about what happened. Suggested Questions to Guide Your Writing:
1. What was the situation at that time?
2. What choice did you make?
3. What happened because of your choice?
4. What lesson could you learn from the experience?
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【答案】例文1:
A Time When Honesty Was Important
During the holiday, I visited my aunt’s house. I accidentally broke her favorite vase while playing. At first I wanted to hide it. But my hands were shaking so I told the truth. Surprisingly, my aunt wasn’t angry! She hugged me and said my honesty was more valuable than the vase.
I learned that the truth never makes things worse.例文2:
A Time When Honesty Was Important
Last math class, I failed to finish my homework due to playing video games the night before. When the teacher asked for it, I nervously told her I had left it at home. My face turned red when she called my parents. After getting scolded, I apologized and promised to always be honest. Now I complete work on time.
This experience taught me that lies cause more trouble than the truth.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:按照材料所给问题完成写作,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细阐述曾经需在诚实与否之间做选择的个人经历;
第二步,表达收获与感受,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fail to do sth.未能做成某事
②due to由于
③on time按时
[高分句型]
①My face turned red when she called my parents. (时间状语从句)
②This experience taught me that lies cause more trouble than the truth.(宾语从句)
3.假定你是某校学生李华,近日你校开展了以“共植诚信之树”为主题的活动。请你结合以下提示,用英语给笔友Henry写一封电子邮件,分享活动内容及感受。词数80左右。
Time:Plant an Honest Tree Together
June 10th, 2025
Activities:
●watch a video
●listen to a speech
●have a discussion
●plant an honest tree
Feeling (s):
...
注意事项:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to share with you the event “Plant an Honest Tree Together” in our school.
It was held on June 10th, 2025. First, we watched a video about our school model students, who always tell the truth and help others. Then, we listened to a speech about the importance of being honest. After that, we had a discussion on how to take action in our daily life and all promised to be honest in competitions and examinations. At last, we planted an honest tree in our school.
We all think the event is educational and we will take good care of the tree.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章为第一人称,介绍活动的过程和感悟,不可遗漏提示信息,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动内容;
第二步,介绍感受。
[亮点词汇]
①tell the truth说实话
②the importance of...……的重要性
③take action采取行动
④at last最终,最后
⑤take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①First, we watched a video about our school model students, who always tell the truth and help others.(who引导定语从句)
4.古人云,人无信而不立。这句古训告诉我们,一旦做出承诺,就应该遵守自己的承诺,做一个诚信的人。这里,请你以“A promise I kept”为题,并根据以下要点和要求,写一篇英语短文。词数不少于90个。
要点:1.你对谁做出了承诺;
2.你是如何遵守承诺的;
3.你遵守承诺后的感受。
要求:1.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称等个人信息。
A promise I kept
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【答案】例文:
A promise I kept
I made a promise to my parents last year and I managed to keep it.
Last year, I spent too much time playing games on my mobile phone. As a result, I failed the exams many times. My father and mother became so sad that they even cried. I promised to them I would give up playing games and try my best to make up for the lost time. To keep my promise, I gave my mobile phone to them and spent all my school time on my lessons. When I didn’t understand something, I would ask my teachers and classmates for help. With my hard work and their help, I have made great progress in my schoolwork.
Now my parents always praise me and I am also proud of myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般过去时为主;
③提示:写作要点提示已经给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,并适当补充发挥,注意语句的通顺,使用正确的词汇和句型,使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,简单介绍向谁作出承诺的背景;
第二步,具体介绍作出承诺的原因以及如何信守承诺,注意时态应以过去时为主,也可描述信守承诺后的成果如何;
第三步,简单介绍信守承诺后的感受并总结文章。
[亮点词汇]
①manage to do sth设法做某事
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③give up放弃
④keep my promise信守承诺
[高分句型]
①My father and mother became so sad that they even cried. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②When I didn’t understand something, I would ask my teachers and classmates for help.(when引导的时间状语从句)
进阶拓展训练4篇
5.“不信不立,不诚不行”,诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德。某英文网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李辉,请结合生活实例用英语写一篇不少于 80 词的短文投稿。
要求:文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
参考词汇:virtue 美德, honesty 诚实
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【答案】例文
It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest. Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. It’s really important for us to be honest in our life.
As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed. I never tell a lie to others. If I do something wrong in life, I usually choose to tell the truth, even if it brings me some trouble. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.
Being honest helps us have more confidence in people around us. All in all, honesty makes the world more trustworthy and a better place to live in.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给话题完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍诚实守信的重要性;
第二步,列举出日常生活中自己能诚实守信做的事情;
第三步,谈谈自己这么做的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①traditionally传统上
②as for至于
③tell a lie说谎
④tell the truth说实话
⑤make a promise作出承诺
⑥trustworthy值得信赖的
[高分句型]
Honesty is a great virtue which is traditionally encouraged by Chinese people. (which引导定语从句)
6.假如你是吴伟,你发现你的好朋友李华经常用搜题软件来完成作业,对待学习不够诚实。你想要写一封信给他,和他谈论这个问题。信的内容需包括:1.指出不诚信学习的危害;2.给好友提出帮助他改进的建议。写一篇不少于50词的短文。
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
I’ve noticed that you often use apps to complete your homework. Even though it may seem helpful, depending on them too much can harm your learning. Understanding the material is essential for your success and shortcuts won’t help you in the long run. I suggest setting aside time to study together, so we can help each other understand difficult topics. Remember, true learning happens when we face challenges honestly.
Yours,
Wu Wei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指出不诚信学习的危害;
第二步,给好友提出帮助他改进的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① depend on依靠
② suggest doing sth建议做某事
③ help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
① Even though it may seem helpful, depending on them too much can harm your learning.(让步状语从句)
② Remember, true learning happens when we face challenges honestly.(时间状语从句)
7.Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (请根据以下信息,写一篇不少于60个单词的短文,标点符号不占格)
孔子教导我们“言必行,行必果”。诚信,是刻在中华民族血脉里的精神基因,是跨越千年时空的文明传承。在我们的生活中,诚信同样闪烁着耀眼的光芒—或许是考试时抵制诱惑的坚守,或许是犯错后主动承认错误的勇气,又或许是拾金不昧彰显美德。请你以“An experience of being honest”为题,回顾发生在你身上的一次有关诚信的经历,并谈谈你从这次经历中明白了什么道理。
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【答案】范文:
An Experience of Being Honest
Last month, I found a wallet in the school playground. It was full of money and had a student card inside. I didn’t hesitate and gave it to our teacher. Later, the owner was very thankful. From this experience, I understood that being honest brings trust and respect. Honesty is not only a virtue but also a light that guides our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文,围绕“诚信”展开;
②时态:主要使用一般过去时讲述事情经过,结尾使用一般现在时总结感悟;
③提示:图文内容为写作提供了方向,考生需选取典型事件(如拾金不昧、主动承认错误等),围绕“诚实”展开叙述,并结合事件总结所得启示。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代故事发生的时间、地点及背景;
第二步,描述事件的起因、经过和结果,突出“诚信”行为;
第三步,结合事件表达自己的体会或感悟,升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① be full of 充满
② not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
① I understood that being honest brings trust and respect. (宾语从句)
② Honesty is not only a virtue but also a light that guides our lives.(定语从句)
8.Honesty is always the best policy. Write a blog post about an honest choice you made. Write at least 60 words. (请写一篇不少于60词的博客,描述你的一次有关诚实的选择,标点符号不占格。)
提示:生活中,我们常面临诚实与隐瞒的抉择,如损坏物品、发现错误等。正如谚语所说,诚实总是上策。请描述你的一次选择经历,并谈谈你的感悟与收获。
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分)
Suggested questions:
1. What happened?
2. What did you choose to do?
3. How did you feel?
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【答案】例文
Last week, I accidentally broke my classmate Lily’s favorite cup during a group study. At first, I was scared and thought of hiding it. But then, I remembered “Honesty is the best policy”.
I went to Lily, told her the truth, and apologized. She was surprised but said it was okay.
I felt relieved and proud. This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:事件引入,简述“打碎同学杯子”事件,抛出“想隐瞒”与“诚实”的矛盾;
第二步:描述“想起谚语,主动找同学坦白、道歉”的过程,呈现诚实选择;
第三步:总结诚实带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②bring peace of mind带来内心的平静
[高分句型]
①This choice taught me that honesty brings peace of mind, and true friends value honesty over mistakes. (宾语从句)
能力综合实践4篇
9.Write at least 50 words according to the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文,标点符号不占格)
诚信是生活中一项重要的品质。在第二部分的语篇中,我们读到了一个关于诚信的故事。故事中的David因为不诚信的行为最终受到了惩罚。同学们,在你们的日常生活中,是否遇到过类似的情况?
●如果你经历过类似的情况,你是怎么处理的?且写出你这么做的原因和你的想法。
●如果你是David,再给你一次机会,你会怎么做?且写出你这么做的原因和你受到的启发。
选择以上情境中的一个,结合单元大问题Why is honesty the best policy?完成一篇不少于50词的短文。
Choose one of the following sentences and begin your writing:
● I remember one day ...
● If I were David, I would ...
注意:1. 文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息,否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I remember one day that I was going to take an important exam. When I got to the school gate, I realized that I forgot to bring my ruler for that exam. I decided to buy a new one in the nearby shop. When I came back to the school, the exam had already begun. I hid the new ruler in my hand and felt very nervous. After the exam, I honestly told my teacher the truth. To my surprise, the teacher praised me for my honesty.
In my opinion, honesty is the best policy. It is not enough to just do the right things. It is more important to be honest about what we have done, no matter whether it is good or bad. When we are in trouble, honesty can help us solve the problem and even save our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述清晰并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,叙述自己的一次关于诚信的经历及自己如何处理的;
第二步,表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是
②in one’s opinion在某人看来
③in trouble处于困境中
[高分句型]
When I got to the school gate, I realized that I forgot to bring my ruler for that exam. (when引导时间状语从句;that引导宾语从句)
10.Write a passage of at least 80 words on the topic “The importance of honesty” (请写一篇不少于80词的短文,说明诚实的重要性)
以下两点供参考:
1.为什么诚实是重要的;
2.试举一例说明诚实的重要性。
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【答案】例文:
The importance of honesty
Honesty is of great importance in our daily lives. It’s the foundation of trust and respect among people. When we are honest, we build strong relationships with family, friends and even strangers. It helps us gain their trust which is invaluable in any interaction.
Once I accidentally broke a vase at a friend’s house. Instead of hiding it, I told her the truth. To my surprise, she didn’t get angry. Instead, she appreciated my honesty and we became even closer. This shows that honesty not only prevents misunderstandings but also strengthens relationships.
Thus, always being honest is important for us to live a fulfilling life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确认文体:这是一篇议论文,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:需说明诚实的重要性,并举例论证
确定人称:第一人称 (I, my, we, us) 和第三人称 (it, she)
注意事项:需有观点陈述和事例支撑;不得透露真实姓名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:提出观点,说明诚实是信任和尊重的基础
主体段:举例说明诚实的重要性 (个人经历)
结尾段:总结观点,强调诚实对生活的重要性
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:观点陈述
重要性表达:is of great importance / is very important / plays an important role等
基础作用:foundation of trust and respect / basis of good relationships等
具体作用:build strong relationships / gain trust / make friends等
具体说明:Honesty is of great importance in our daily lives. It’s the foundation of trust and respect among people. When we are honest, we build strong relationships with family, friends and even strangers. It helps us gain their trust which is invaluable in any interaction.
要点二:举例说明
事件起因:accidentally broke a vase at a friend’s house等
行为选择:told her the truth / didn’t hide it / was honest about it等
对方反应:didn’t get angry / appreciated my honesty / was understanding等
事件结果:became even closer / strengthened our friendship / gained more trust等
举例作用:shows that honesty prevents misunderstandings and strengthens relationships等
具体说明:Once I accidentally broke a vase at a friend’s house. Instead of hiding it, I told her the truth. To my surprise, she didn’t get angry. Instead, she appreciated my honesty and we became even closer. This shows that honesty not only prevents misunderstandings but also strengthens relationships.
要点三:总结观点
总结表达:Thus / In conclusion / Therefore等
观点重申:always being honest is important / honesty matters in life等
目的表达:to live a fulfilling life / to have a happy life / to build good relationships等
具体说明:Thus, always being honest is important for us to live a fulfilling life.
11.你是李华,班主任Mr Wang让你在以“诚信”(Honesty)为主题的班会上用英语做个发言,要求:时态正确,前后连贯,不少于80词。
开头已给出,可包含一下信息:
诚信很重要,是人们的优秀品质(good quality)之一,希望人人都能诚实守信(honest and trusting)。作为学生如何做到诚信?
提出以下建议:
1.按时到校,按时离校,上课认真听老师讲课,课后认真完成作业。
2.在班上,尽力帮助别人,不嘲笑别人。
3.不抄袭(copy)作业,考试不作弊(cheat in exams),不沉迷手机(indulge phones),不花时间玩游戏。
4.上学回家路上遵守交通规则(follow traffic rules),公交车上主动给老人让座(offer seats to the old)。
5.感恩父母,尊敬老师。
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【答案】例文:
Hi, class, I’m so lucky to stand here and share my ideas about honesty with you! As we know, honesty is very important. It is one of people’s good qualities. People need honesty and I hope everyone is honest and trusting. As a student, how can we be honest? Here are some suggestions:
We should reach and leave school on time. We should listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish our homework carefully.
In class, we try to help others and never laugh at others.
We mustn’t copy homework and cheat in exams. We mustn’t indulge phones and spend much time playing games.
We should follow traffic rules on the way home and to school. We should always offer seats to the old on the bus.
Most of all, we should give thanks to our parents and respect our teachers.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。根据要点提示,以“诚信”(Honesty)为主题在班会上用英语做个发言。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般现在时为主。写作时首先开头点明主题,说明诚信很重要,是人们的优秀品质,希望人人遵守;接下来提出建议,讲述学生如何做到诚信,要求根据题干所给出的建议进行表达,也可适当进行扩展。
12.民无信不立。诚信是一个道德范畴,是公民的第二个“身份证”,是日常行为中诚实和正式交流的信用的统称。某英文学习网站正在开展以“诚信”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你自己讲诚信的一次经历,以及你有何收获。不少于80词。
提示词语: difficulty, copy, shame, virtue(美德), lose
Use the following points as reference(以下问题仅供参考)
●What’s your experience about honesty?
●What can you learn from it?
Honesty is golden. It means telling the truth and being fair.
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【答案】One possible version:
Honesty is golden. It means telling the truth and being fair.
Last year, during a math exam, I had difficulty solving a high-scoring problem that could affect my class ranking. Feeling anxious, I noticed that I could clearly see the paper of the student in front of me. I was tempted and almost started copying it. But then I realized it was a shame to cheat. It goes against everything honesty stands for. So I stopped.
Even though I was tempted to copy someone else’s answers, I believe I am still an honest person. Honesty, a traditional virtue of the Chinese people, makes our lives easier and more harmonious. Let’s never lose it and always strive to be honest.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般过去时为主
明确要点:有关讲诚信的经历,以及获得的感悟
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:使用所给提示词,详述相关经历,包含发展情节和个人感悟
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
第一段:总述诚信重要性,引出个人经历
第二段:按时间顺序描述事件经过(考试中拒绝作弊)
第三段:总结经验,分享感悟
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:讲述经历
时间:last year/during an exam/yesterday/last week等
地点:my class/home/park等
起因:have difficulty doing sth./there’s something wrong with等
经过:be tempted/start doing/take an action/try one’s best等
结果:go against everything honesty/stop/find out/finish等
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