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专题07 书面表达(书信)
Passage 1
(19-20高二下·湖南衡阳·期中)
假设你是李华。你的外国笔友打算于 7 月来中国,特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信,从以下几个方面作具体介绍:
1.见面时的问候方式;
2.接收礼物时的回应方式;
3.餐宴礼节。
注意:1.词数 80 左右,信的开头和结束语已写好,不计入总词数;
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 2
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对于中国粉丝给国外明星取昵称的行为非常感兴趣,比如说“卷福”、“霉霉”、“小李子”、“寡姐”等。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍一个你认为最喜欢的中文昵称。内容包括:1. 中文昵称的含义;2. 中英文名字在含义或发音等方面的关联;3. 粉丝起该昵称的原因。
注意:1. 该昵称可用中文或拼音表示;2. 邮件词数在80词左右。
Benedict Cumberbatch
Taylor Swift
Leonardo DiCaprio
Scarlett Johansson
卷福
霉霉
小李子
寡姐
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Passage 3
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友,你决定给他写封邮件,告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座内容:中国的名胜;
3.建议他去听这个讲座。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Passage 4
(24-25高二下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英文报就“如何保护中国传统文化”为主题征集学生建议。请根据以下内容,给报社写一封信。
内容包括:
1.保护中国传统文化的重要性;
2.你对中国传统文化保护的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(24-25高二下·湖南长沙·期中)
假定你是李华,最近你校英文报招募校园兼职记者,你对此很感兴趣,请给英文报编辑写一封申请信,应聘兼职记者,内容包括:
1.阐述自己的优势;
2.希望报道的话题;
3.期待得到回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 6
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你校组建了游泳俱乐部。请给在你校留学的朋友Peter写信,邀请他加入。内容包括:
1.组建俱乐部的目的; 2.俱乐部的主要活动; 3.报名的时间和地点;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 7
(24-25高二下·湖南娄底·期中)
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Tom暑假期间要来中国旅游,来信征求你的意见。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐旅行城市或景点;
2.推荐的理由;
3.注意事项。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 1
(20-21高二下·湖南·期中)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Jack想了解中国的新四大发明(China’s Four New Great Inventions)中对人们生活影响最大的一项。请你回信给他,内容包括:
①这一项发明的名称;
②这一项发明带来的影响。
注意:
①写作词数应为80左右;
②请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:新四大发明为:high-speed rail(Hsr)高铁;mobile payment移动支付;shared bicycles共享单车;online shopping网上购物
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Passage 2
(24-25高二下·湖南长沙·期中)
假设你是李华,打算邀请交换生Eric观看中国古代文化展(包括中国古代服饰,书 法,绘画等)。请给他写封邮件,内容包括;
1.发出邀请
2.展览时间,地点
3.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear Eric
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Yours,
Li Hua
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专题07 书面表达(书信)
Passage 1
(19-20高二下·湖南衡阳·期中)
假设你是李华。你的外国笔友打算于 7 月来中国,特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信,从以下几个方面作具体介绍:
1.见面时的问候方式;
2.接收礼物时的回应方式;
3.餐宴礼节。
注意:1.词数 80 左右,信的开头和结束语已写好,不计入总词数;
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and welcome you to China in July. You are eager to learn about Chinese social customs.The following are some of them.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” “Have you had dinner ?” to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say thanks to show politeness and then put it away instead of opening the package as in your country. Finally, at dinner parties, we usually chat loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone's health or success .
Anyhow, Customs vary from country to country. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here. I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful. Wish you a good journey to China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封回信。
【详解】第一步:
审题:信件 介绍中国人的社交习俗
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分欢迎他来中国,第二部分介绍中国人的社交习俗,第三部分希望对他有帮助,并希望他来中国。
要点:
1. 欢迎他来中国
2.介绍中国人的社交习俗
①见面时的问候方式:问候“你好” 或者问对方“你去哪里?”“吃了吗?”
②接收礼物时的回应方式:道谢,然后将礼物收好
③餐宴礼节:祝酒时大声交谈、碰杯
3.希望对他有帮助,并希望他来中国
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语)
be eager to;Chinese social customs;greet;show good manners;receive a gift;say thanks to;put away;chat;drink to one’s health;vary from… to …;enjoy;be helpful
第三步:连词成句
(1) I am glad to hear from you.
(2) You are eager to learn about Chinese social customs.
(3) We greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” “Have you had dinner ?” to show good manners.
(4)When we receive a gift, we usually say thanks to show politeness.
(5) We put it away instead of opening the package as in your country.
(6) At dinner parties, we usually chat loudly and touch glasses.
(7) We drink to someone's health or success .
(8)Customs vary from country to country.
(9) If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.
(10)I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序: first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning
firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end
表示并列或补充关系: what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;
in addition, as well as;not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系:but, however, although, though, yet, while
on one hand…on the other hand ...,
表示因果关系:because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus
连句成文,运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
【点睛】
范文要点全面,结构清晰,层次分明,上下文连贯,在表达时用到了很多高级词汇,如 be eager to;greet;show good manners;receive a gift;say thanks to;put away;drink to one’s health;vary from… to …;be helpful. 等;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次,如状语从句的省略形式的运用when receiving a gift, we usually say thanks to show politeness;俗语的运用If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, ….;主语从句的运用…what’s mentioned above might be helpful等。
Passage 2
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对于中国粉丝给国外明星取昵称的行为非常感兴趣,比如说“卷福”、“霉霉”、“小李子”、“寡姐”等。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍一个你认为最喜欢的中文昵称。内容包括:1. 中文昵称的含义;2. 中英文名字在含义或发音等方面的关联;3. 粉丝起该昵称的原因。
注意:1. 该昵称可用中文或拼音表示;2. 邮件词数在80词左右。
Benedict Cumberbatch
Taylor Swift
Leonardo DiCaprio
Scarlett Johansson
卷福
霉霉
小李子
寡姐
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【答案】How is everything going? Hearing that you have a strong interest in the nicknames of western celebrities given by Chinese fans, I am more than willing to introduce my favourite one to you.
''卷福Juan Fu'' is the one. As you can see, Benedict Cumberbatch, a British actor who is famous for his role as Sherlock Holmes, is given the name ''Juan Fu'' by his beloved Chinese fans, which, of course, cannot be a more suitable Chinese nickname for him. In Mandarin, ''juan'' means curly, referring to his curly styles in his role as Sherlock Holmes. While ''Fu'' symbolizes happiness, fortune or blessing in Chinese culture, the implications of which are the ones that Chinese have been longing for since ancient times. Additionally, the pronunciation of ''Fu'' resembles that of the first syllable of ''Holmes'', which, if translated into Chinese, becomes ''Fu Er Mo Si''.
How do you like the name? Do you want a Chinese name for yourself, too? Don’t hesitate to ask me. Looking forward to your early reply.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Peter解释中国粉丝给外国明星取昵称的原因。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 中文昵称的含义;
2. 中英文名字在含义或发音等方面的关联;
3. 粉丝起该昵称的原因。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be interested in/ be willing to do sth./ be famous for/ be suitable for/ play a role in/ stand for/ be welcome in/ resemble/ hesitate to do sth./ look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. How is everything going?
2. Knowing that you are interested in the nicknames of western celebrities given by Chinese fans, I am willing to introduce my favourite one to you.
''卷福Juan Fu'' is the one.
3. As is known to all, Benedict Cumberbatch, a British actor who is famous for his role as Sherlock Holmes, is given the name ''Juan Fu'' by his beloved Chinese fans, the most suitable Chinese nickname for him.
4. In Mandarin, ''juan'' means curly, referring to his curly styles in his role as Sherlock Holmes.
5. While ''Fu'' symbolizes happiness, fortune or blessing in Chinese culture, the implications of which are the ones that Chinese have been longing for since ancient times.
6. Additionally, the pronunciation of ''Fu'' resembles that of the first syllable of ''Holmes'', which, if translated into Chinese, becomes ''Fu Er Mo Si''.
7. How do you like the name?
8. Looking forward to your early reply.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:Hearing that you have a strong interest in the nicknames of western celebrities given by Chinese fans, I am more than willing to introduce my favourite one to you.中that引导宾语从句;As you can see, Benedict Cumberbatch, a British actor who is famous for his role as Sherlock Holmes, is given the name ''Juan Fu'' by his beloved Chinese fans, which, of course, cannot be a more suitable Chinese nickname for him.中as和which引导非限制性定语从句,who引导限制性定语从句,
Passage 3
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友,你决定给他写封邮件,告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括:
1.讲座的时间和地点;
2.讲座内容:中国的名胜;
3.建议他去听这个讲座。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear Mike,
Good news for you. There will be a lecture for foreign students at 9 on Saturday morning in the city training center. The lecture is about places of interest in China. So why don’t you attend it? It’s really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China. Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你所在的城市将有一场面向外国留学生的讲座。Mike是你的留学 生朋友,你决定给他写封邮件,告知该讲座的有关信息。内容包括:1.讲座的时间和地点;2.讲座内容:中国的名胜;3.建议他去听这个讲座。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):places of interest (名胜古迹);attend (出席,参加);opportunity (机会);get a better understanding of (更好地理解)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如It’s really a good opportunity for you, as you are so interested in travelling in China.运用原因状语从句;Not only will you learn more about famous places in China, but you will also get a better understanding of Chinese culture and history.运用倒装句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
Passage 4
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你校英文报就“如何保护中国传统文化”为主题征集学生建议。请根据以下内容,给报社写一封信。
内容包括:
1.保护中国传统文化的重要性;
2.你对中国传统文化保护的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Editor,
Protecting traditional Chinese culture, from my perspective, is of great significance. Firstly, it can help pass down the wisdom of the Chinese people from generation to generation. Besides, traditional culture provides a motivation for the constant development of the country. On a deeper level, it serves as a stepping stone to the international world. To preserve Chinese traditional culture, the government should strengthen regulation to protect it, and it is our responsibility to be a good steward. What’s more, providing various cultural exchange activities will have a far-reaching impact.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“如何保护中国传统文化”为主题,给报社写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来:in my opinion→from my perspective
充当:act as→serve as
保护:protect→preserve
深远的:profound→far-reaching
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Firstly, it can help pass down the wisdom of the Chinese people from generation to generation. Besides, traditional culture provides a motivation for the constant development of the country.
拓展句:Not only can it help pass down the wisdom of the Chinese people from generation to generation, but also it provides a motivation for the constant development of the country.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Protecting traditional Chinese culture, from my perspective, is of great significance. (运用了动名词 Protecting作主语)
[高分句型2] To preserve Chinese traditional culture, the government should strengthen regulation to protect it, and it is our responsibility to be a good steward. (运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语)
Passage 5
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,最近你校英文报招募校园兼职记者,你对此很感兴趣,请给英文报编辑写一封申请信,应聘兼职记者,内容包括:
1.阐述自己的优势;
2.希望报道的话题;
3.期待得到回复。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a student in Class 2, Grade 3. Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters, I'm writing to apply for the position.
I am equipped with sufficient skills to do this job well. First, l am interested in reading English news in my spare time. Moreover, l am good at English writing. As for the topic of news, I would like to cover news about campus sports as I'm a crazy fan of football. I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英文报编辑写一封申请信,应聘兼职记者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有资格的:be qualified for/be competent to do
熟练的:skillful/proficient/experienced
对......感兴趣:be crazy about/be addicted to
此外:additionally/besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I'm writing to apply for the position.
拓展句:I'm writing to apply for the position,which I will spare no effort to devote myself to.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having heard that the school's English newspaper is recruiting part-time reporters,I'm writing to apply for the position.(现在分词完成时态having heard作状语)
[高分句型2]
I hope that I could win the chance to be a reporter. (that引导宾语从句)
Passage 6
(24-25高二下·湖南·期中)
假定你是李华,你校组建了游泳俱乐部。请给在你校留学的朋友Peter写信,邀请他加入。内容包括:
1.组建俱乐部的目的; 2.俱乐部的主要活动; 3.报名的时间和地点;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been formed recently in our school. In light of your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.
In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle. In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills. Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.
Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it. I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Peter写信,邀请他加入学校组织的游泳俱乐部。
【详解】体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1.组建俱乐部的目的;
2.俱乐部的主要活动;
3.报名的时间和地点;
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
invite sb. to do sth./ set up/ provide sb. with sth./ in order to/ in addition/ range from…to…/ be aimed at/ as well as/ sign up/ be convinced that…/ live up to
第三步:连词成句
1. With swimming sweeping nationwide, a swimming club has been set up recently in our school.
2. Knowing your great passion about it, I'm writing to invite you to join it.
3.In order to enrich our campus life, the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle.
4. Additionally, a variety of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills.
5. Please sign up in Mr. Smith's office before next Friday.
6. Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it.
7. I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:In addition, a diversity of water-based activities are held, ranging from routine practice to regularly-organized matches, which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills.中which引导非限制性定语从句;Such a great chance is it that you can’t afford to miss it.中that引导结果状语从句,且使用了部分倒装。
Passage 7
(24-25高二下·湖南娄底·期中)
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Tom暑假期间要来中国旅游,来信征求你的意见。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐旅行城市或景点;
2.推荐的理由;
3.注意事项。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter and know that you're coming to China. I'm writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome. I'd like to tell you something about some places of interest in China. Personally, one of the best is the Great Wall of China. With a history of over 2,000 years, it runs like a huge dragon across North China. And now it's a world-famous tourist attraction.
If you come to visit the Great Wall, you'd better come a day before maintaining the Wall and avoid weekends or holidays, when it is too crowded with tourists, so as to enjoy its beauty more peacefully.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给暑假期间要来中国旅游的英国朋友Tom,向他推荐一个旅游城市或景点。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 推荐旅行城市或景点;
2. 推荐的理由;
3. 注意事项。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
would like to do sth.;interest in sth.;tourist attraction;be crowded with sb.;so as to…
第三步:连词成句
1. I'd like to tell you something about some places of interest in China.
2. And now it's a world-famous tourist attraction.
3. when it is too crowded with tourists, so as to enjoy its beauty more peacefully.
(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如If you come to visit the Great Wall这句话中用了If引导的条件状语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如interest in sth.,tourist attraction,be crowded with sb.等,为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
Passage 1
(20-21高二下·湖南长沙·期中)
假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Jack想了解中国的新四大发明(China’s Four New Great Inventions)中对人们生活影响最大的一项。请你回信给他,内容包括:
①这一项发明的名称;
②这一项发明带来的影响。
注意:
①写作词数应为80左右;
②请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇:新四大发明为:high-speed rail(Hsr)高铁;mobile payment移动支付;shared bicycles共享单车;online shopping网上购物
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【答案】Dear Jack,
How is everything? I am more than glad to introduce high-speed rail to you, as you wish to know the new great invention that primarily influences my life.
Branded as a “name card” for China, HSR appeals to the world with its unparalleled convenience. People can reach the destination by train within hours while it could have taken days in the past. Besides, the tickets are accessible and affordable to ordinary people. With an ID card, passengers do not even need paper ticket anymore.
You can imagine what a blessing it is to travel around in China with HSR. Come and have a ride yourself.
Love,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友Jack写封信,介绍中国新四大发明中的其中一项发明。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了解:learn→know
无比的:matchless→unparalleled
高兴的:happy→glad
吸引:attract=appeal to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:People can reach the destination by train within hours while it could have taken days in the past.
拓展句:People can reach the destination by train within hours, which could have taken days in the past.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am more than glad to introduce high-speed rail to you, as you wish to know the new great invention that primarily influences my life. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] You can imagine what a blessing it is to travel around in China with HSR. (运用了感叹句)
Passage 2
(24-25高二下·湖南长沙·期中)
假设你是李华,打算邀请交换生Eric观看中国古代文化展(包括中国古代服饰,书 法,绘画等)。请给他写封邮件,内容包括;
1.发出邀请
2.展览时间,地点
3.展览内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear Eric
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric
Knowing that you have a strong passion for traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to see an exhibition on it to be held in the museum.
The exhibition is scheduled for his weekend, from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm each day. It covers a wide range of content. Quantities of ancient Chinese clothes will be on display. Meanwhile, you can also appreciate traditional Chinese calligraphy and paintings. Besides, lectures on the history of Chinese clothing will be given by a group of famous experts who specialize in traditional Chinese clothes.
Hopefully, you will accept my invitation. Looking forward to our early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写 邀请信。邀请交换生Eric观看中国古代文化展(包括中国古代服饰,书 法,绘画等)。
【详解】1.词汇积累
包括:cover→contain
展览:on display→on show
欣赏:appreciate→enjoy
精通:specialize→be expert in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:The exhibition is scheduled for his weekend, from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm each day. It covers a wide range of content.
拓展句:The exhibition is scheduled for his weekend, from 8:30 am to 5:30 pm each day,which covers a wide range of content.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you have a strong passion for traditional Chinese culture, I'm writing to invite you to see an exhibition on it to be held in the museum.(运用了现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, lectures on the history of Chinese clothing will be given by a group of famous experts who specialize in traditional Chinese clothes. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
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