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B3U3 Environmental Protection
Using Language
Reducing Water pollution in the Li River
Objectives
Objectives
Objectives
analyze the structure and writing methods of an environmental problem report;
O1
comprehend and summarize the causes and solutions of water pollution;
O2
integrate the information in the text (including the text structure, language features, and writing methods) and apply it into writing.
O3
Do you know where it is?
Li River in Guilin.
Lead-in
You must have heard this saying
“East or west, Guilin landscape is best.”
However…
What happened
to Li River?
Read the title and passage quickly,
finish the following questions.
1. The text is a __________
A. narration
B. argumentation
C. report
D. practical writing
2. The text is mainly about_______________________________ and
_________________________________.
3. The text is written in ________person.
Pre-reading
topic sentence
third
the problem of water pollution
some actions taken to deal with it .
Read the text and complete the paragraph summaries.
Para 1 Introducing the________
Para 2 Describing the _________
Para 3 Presenting some __________
Para 4 Presenting further _________
topic
problem
measures
solutions
problem-solution pattern
While-Reading
Para 1
The beautiful Li River and its amazing scenery is one of the most well-known tourist destinations in China’s Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region. It attracts millions of domestic and foreign visitors each year. However its reputation as a top destination has had negative effects on the river's water quality. This report looks at the problem of water pollution and some actions that have been taken to deal with it.
What:
Where:
Why:
______ pollution
_________________ in China’s Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region
This report looks at the problem of ________________________________
While-Reading
How to introduce the topic?
Water
The beautiful Li River
water pollution and some actions...
Para 2
Find out the factors that caused the pollution.
While-Reading
Para 2
Draw a mind map to show all the factors that caused the pollution.
Li River Pollution
Tour boats throwing___________ in water
Tourists throwing________ in water
Increasing number of tourists
More________ for crop production going into water
______________rise to meet tourism demand =more household waste
the rise in number of ___________ and ___________enterprises
=more waste
While-Reading
rubbish
cooking oil
chemicals
commercial
industrial
Local population
Para 3
What measures have been taken to address the issue?
While-Reading
Para 3
What measures have been taken to address the issue?
measures
the _________ and _________ of household waste
setting up _______
and ____
carrying out _________ and _______
construction of waste _____treatment facilities
closing or moving the _______________
media
While-Reading
collection
transport
polluting enterprises
rules
regulations
inspections
fining
water
What are the further solutions?
_______________and ___________________.
Para 4
While-Reading
“Water Ten Plan”
“River Chief System”
Read the words, phrases or sentence patterns.
Cause
and
Effect
(Para.1 and 2)
Solutions
(Para. 2 and 3)
1. have negative effects on
2. suffer from
3. contribute to the problem
4. water pollution levels increased
5. lead to severe...issues, causing...
1. Urgent steps should be taken to do…
2.A comprehensive initiative was started, with a number of measures that addressed…
3. The government set up strict regulations regarding...
4. New rules were introduced regarding...
5. ...spread environmental awareness
Results
(Para.3 and4)
1. With these measures, it is believed that...
2. With such campaigns in effect
Post-Reading
Reducing Water Pollution in the Li River
Para1: Problem: Water pollution ____________________(对...有消极影响) on the Li River’s natural environment.
Para2:Causes: Many factors ____________________(导致) the environmental problem in the Li River. (Topic Sentence)
Water quality _________(遭受,受...之苦) from garbage and waste.
Oil and chemicals _________ (导致) severe water quality issues.
Urgent steps should be taken to _________(恢复) the river’s original beauty.(Transitional Sentence)
Para3:Solutions: A number of initiatives was __________ to __________(开始去解决) the issues.(Topic Sentence)
____________ waste treatment facilities (改善污水处理设施)
____________ strict regulations and ____________ new rules(建立严格的规章制度,引进新规则)
____________ inspections regularly(进行定期检查)
____________ tourist organisations for abuses(对违规的旅游机构罚款)
____________ water pollution with the “River Chief System”(解决水污染问题)
With these measures, it is believed that the beauty of the Li River will be __________________________________
(为子孙后代保留). China’s waterways are ___________________(迈进) a clean and sustainable future.
had negative effects
contributed to
heading towards
preserved for generations to come
Writing(提纲)
address
started
restore
suffered
led to
improve
set up
introduce
carry out
fine
tackle
假定你是李华,你的家乡漓江曾经是一处旅游胜地,但近年受到严重污染,当地政府采取了一些有效措施,使得污染情况有所减轻。请写一篇报告,呼吁社会关注此事。内容包括:
1.曾经的美好情景;
2.被污染后的状况;
3.当地政府采取的措施,情况好转。
注意:词数80左右。可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Writing
第一段:Topic
美丽的漓江和周边的景色是最有名的旅游胜地之一。
________________________________________________________________________________________
它每年吸引了许许多多国内外游客。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二段:Problem:Cause? Effect?
先前,漓江的水质因游客数量的增加而受到了严重的影响,许多游客经常向漓江扔垃圾。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
随着越来越多工厂废水倒进漓江,水污染的水平上升。
________________________________________________________________________________________
第三段:Solutions: actions+look forward to the future
当地官员担心污染正在破坏自然坏境,觉得为了恢复漓江的水质,一些紧急措施亟待采取。(被动语态;urgent steps should be taken)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
数十家污染工厂被关闭,并对乱扔垃圾制定了严格的规定。(被动, litter 扔垃圾)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
此外,政府还开始利用社交媒体提高公众的环保意识,鼓励更多地使用清洁能源。
_________________________________________________________________________________________
有了这些措施,相信漓江的美丽能万世长存。(形式主语;preserve)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing
第一段:Topic
美丽的漓江和周边的景色是最有名的旅游胜地之一。
________________________________________________________________________________________
它每年吸引了许许多多国内外游客。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二段:Problem:Cause? Effect?
先前,漓江的水质因游客数量的增加而受到了严重的影响,许多游客经常向漓江扔垃圾。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
随着越来越多工厂废水倒进漓江,水污染的水平上升。
________________________________________________________________________________________
The beautiful Li River and its amazing surrounding scenery is one of the most well-known tourist destinations
It attracts millions of domestic and foreign visitors each year.
Previously, water quality in the Li River had suffered greatly from an increasing volume of tourists, many of whom frequently threw garbage into the river.
Water pollution levels increased, with more commercial waste ending up in the river.
第三段:Solutions: actions+look forward to the future
当地官员担心污染正在破坏自然坏境,觉得为了恢复漓江的水质,一些紧急措施亟待采取。(被动语态;urgent steps should be taken)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
数十家污染工厂被关闭,并对乱扔垃圾制定了严格的规定。(被动, litter 扔垃圾)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
此外,政府还开始利用社交媒体提高公众的环保意识,鼓励更多地使用清洁能源。
_________________________________________________________________________________________
有了这些措施,相信漓江的美丽能万世长存。(形式主语;preserve)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Local officials were concerned that the pollution was damaging the natural environment and felt that urgent steps should be taken to restore the river's original beauty.
Dozens of polluting enterprises were closed and strict regulations were set up regarding throwing litter.
Furthermore, the local authorities began to use the media to spread environmental awareness and encourage greater use of clean energy.
With these measures, it is believed that the beauty of the Li River will be preserved for generations to come.
Homework
1. Polish your writing.
2. Recite the words, phrases or sentence patterns.
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