Unit 4 History and traditions Reading for Writing 课件 -2025-2026学年高中英语人教版必修第二册
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摘要:
该高中英语课件聚焦“描述喜欢的地方”写作教学,核心知识点为运用“引言—主体—结尾”结构化写作及多感官细节描写。课堂导入从爱尔兰风景与传统范文切入,先分析结构框架,再拆解视觉、听觉等感官词汇与拟人修辞,通过仿写练习搭建支架,最终引导学生实战撰写校园描写,形成从输入到输出的完整学习脉络。
其亮点在于融合语言能力、思维品质与学习能力培养,通过“feast for the eyes”等感官短语、拟人句仿写等方法,帮助学生掌握生动表达技巧,结构化写作训练提升逻辑思维。同伴评价清单与自查表促进主动学习,学生能写出连贯生动的文章,教师可借助清晰教学步骤与评价工具高效开展写作教学。
内容正文:
How would you describe it?
The view is amazing/fascinating/breathtaking.
Its view is beyond words.
It attracts people around the world.
It enjoys wide popularity.
It is well worth a visit.
......
Reading for Writing
Describe a place that you like
Book 2 Unit 4
Read and Study
the Structure
Judging from the title, what may it be about?
Could you divide the passage according to it?
beautiful scenery
Traditions
第一句引入话题,第二句过渡,第三句详细说明:爱尔兰乡村对人和传统有重大影响(什么重大影响呢?)--产生了很多伟大作家和诗人(为什么呢?)--(因为)它的风景激励和启发了人们
body
Inspiration1: write a passage of a place with “Introduction---Body---Ending” structure.
Do you think the structure is good? Why or why not?
ending
introduction
With its appealing scenery and striking traditions, Ireland is no wonder worth a visit.
beautiful scenery
Traditions
Read and Study
the Structure
第一句引入话题,第二句过渡,第三句详细说明:爱尔兰乡村对人和传统有重大影响(什么重大影响呢?)--产生了很多伟大作家和诗人(为什么呢?)--(因为)它的风景激励和启发了人们
lts beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the "Emerald Isle" and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
With all these beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you're lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Read and Study the Structure
Topic Sentence
Supporting Details
Inspiration2: The body consists of the topic sentence and supporting details.
Find out the senses and the words to describe the sensory details.
Senses Sensory details
sight
a feast for the eyes; rolling green hills; dotted with...
Read and Study the Language
the roar of ...and cries of...
make up the music of …
hearing
...with morning song
touch
feel the sun on your skin
Inspiration3: describe a place in sensory details.
breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers
smell
Which sentence do you like most?
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
在山里宁静的早晨,感受眼光洒落在你身上,呼吸着鲜花的芬芳,而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天的到来。
personification(拟人)
一阵花香扑面而来。(greet)
We are greeted by the sweet scent of fresh flowers.
multi-sensory
我们的校园是如此美丽,在里面漫步真是令人赏心悦目。(feast)
Our school is so beautiful that it is a true feast for the eyes to wander in it.
操场独特的红色跑道上,遍布学生运动的身姿。(dot)
The unique red track of the playground is dotted with students playing sports.
读书声、欢呼声、笑声构成了青春的乐章。(make up the music of...)
The sound of reading ,cheers and laughter make up the music of youth.
Make Sensory Descriptions
“绿宝石岛”风光宁静秀美,郡县草木葱茏,青山连绵起伏,牛羊点缀其中,堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
In what order is the beautiful scenery shown?
Inspiration4: organize information using transitions(连接词).
Places.
Read and Study the language
In the morning /afternoon/evening
First, second, etc.
In the north...In the east...
Let’s find out what senses are talked about.
第一句引入话题,第二句过渡,第三句详细说明:爱尔兰乡村对人和传统有重大影响(什么重大影响呢?)--产生了很多伟大作家和诗人(为什么呢?)--(因为)它的风景激励和启发了人们
Summary: how to describe a place
Present to readers your topic in the ______________and a summary/suggestion in the _______.
Begin the body with _________followed by supporting details.
Use______________to make the description more vivid.(生动的)
Use _____________to make your writing cohesive.(连贯的)
introduction
ending
sensory details
transitions
the topic sentence
Now is your turn!
实战演练
假如你是李华,你校英文报正在征集有关美丽校园的文章,请你就这一主题写一篇投稿。
I study in the middle school attached to HUST, which enjoys beautiful scenery that keeps me spellbound.
My beautiful school excites and inpires us all, offering something for each of the senses. (....supporting details )
With...... , my school is no wonder worth a visit.
Reference
Useful Expressions
rolling green hills
feel the sun on your skin
breathe in sweet scent of ...
greet the new day
it is no surprising that...
against the blue sky and the white sky
时间不够就换成draw an outline
Peer Assessment
Do you start with an introductory sentence? (2 points)
Is the description well-organised and easy to read?(3 points)
Have you included sensory details?(5 points)
Is the ending effective?(2 points)
Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?(3 points)
use the checklist to give feedback on the draft.
Appreciate your work!
Thank you!
Homework:
Polish your writing based on the checklist.
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