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考前押题06 应用文写作
1.(24-25高二下·上海闵行·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的李明,最近你校英语报正发起“暑假我最想去的一个地方的”征文,你有意参加投稿:内容包括1、对最想去的地方的描述;2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.(24-25高二下·上海松江·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是实验中学高二学生李华,你校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动,现向学生征求以下两个方案的意见。请你仔细阅读方案内容,选择其中一个方案,并给校长写一封信。信中必须包含以下内容:
1)选择其中一个方案:
2)说明你推荐该方案的理由。
方案一:在图书馆设立“阅读分享角”,放置坐垫、书架等;
方案二:在教学楼走廊设立“文化展示长廊”,展示学生作品、学校历史文化、科普知识等。
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3.(24-25高二下·上海杨浦·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明信中学的学生李华,你的好友李明在完成英语作业时,过度依赖电子设备,如电子辞典等,你觉得这不利于他的学习,想与他进行沟通。写封信给李明,内容须包括:
1) 向李明说明该行为带来的弊端;
2) 给出建议并说明理由。
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4.(24-25高二下·上海·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是某社区居民李华。最近,社区计划在小区中央的绿地上修建一个儿童游乐场,但部分居民反对,认为这会带来许多问题或争议。社区居委会决定召开居民会议讨论此事,请你写一封邮件给居委会主任,表达你的意见并提出建议。
要求:
1.说明可能存在的问题或争议;
2.提出合理的解决方案并阐述理由。
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5.(23-24高二下·上海闵行·期中)Directions:Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的李明,你的好友李华受邀参加美国的夏令营活动。此时他有两种方案可供选择,一种是选择寄宿在当地居民的家中(homestay),费用比较高。另一种是参加30小时的志愿者服务活动,但提供免费住宿。对此,他向你求助。
请写一封信给李华,必须包含下列两点:
1.你建议选择哪一种方案;
2.你的理由。
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6.(23-24高二下·上海·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生李明,学校计划在每个班级组织“防灾减灾日(Disaster Prevention and Mitigation Day)”主题班会以提高学生防灾减灾意识,普及灾难应对常识。请你给班主任写一封信提出你对该主题班会活动设计的建议,内容应包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
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7.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校计划在下学期开设丰富多彩的社团活动,以丰富同学们的课余生活。为了解大家的需求,校学生会现面向全体同学征求意见。请你给学生会写一封邮件,内容需包括:
■你最喜欢的社团活动类型(从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧、体育中选择其一);
■你选择该类型的原因,以及你对该类型活动中哪些具体方面感兴趣;
■你希望通过参加该社团活动,在哪些方面有所收获。
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8.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生张华,近日你观看了一场昆曲演出,并与昆曲演员们进行了交流。你发现,虽然昆曲是中国的传统艺术瑰宝,但年轻观众却寥寥无几。请你给昆曲艺术团写一封信。在信中,你必须:
1. 提出吸引更多年轻观众的建议;
2.说明你的理由。
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9.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校英文报正在征集关于“如何丰富高中生校园课余生活”的建议,你是高二学生李华,请给校报编辑写一封建议信。内容包括:1. 提出2-3条具体建议;2. 说明建议的理由;3. 表达期待。
要求:词数120左右,格式正确,语言流畅,可适当发挥。
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10.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校学生会将组织一次“英语电影赏析会”,旨在提升学生的英语听力和口语能力,感受英语文化。请你以学生会的名义写一则英文通知。
内容包括:1. 活动主题和目的;
2. 活动时间(下周六下午2:00-4:00)、地点(学校报告厅);
3. 活动内容(观看经典英文电影+分组讨论剧情+分享观后感);
4. 报名方式(到各班班长处报名,截止日期下周四)。
要求:词数120左右,格式正确,信息完整,语言简洁。
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11.(24-25高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李华,你的英国好友Jim在你们学校网站上看到了你们前往农场参与学农(farming practice activities)的照片,对此很感兴趣,发来邮件询问。请你写一封回信,信件内容需包括:
1. 学农活动过程和内容;
2. 你参加学农活动的感受。
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12.(24-25高二下·上海浦东新·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李明,今年暑假学校将开展“传统民间艺术进社区”主题活动,并且该活动由你所在的校志愿者社团承办。请给社团主席以邮件形式写一份活动策划方案。内容包括:
1. 活动针对的人群、地点;
2. 活动的主要内容及其意义。
民间艺术:folk art
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13.(24-25高二下·上海浦东新·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你的英国笔友 Jenny计划今年暑假与父母一同来中国旅游。为期一周的中国之行中,他们将在上海停留一天。Jenny的父亲对中国历史比较感兴趣,她的母亲对中式建筑饶有兴致,而 Jenny本人则对中华美食情。有独钟。她希望你能为他们一家设计一个旅行安排,满足三人的各自需求。你的回信需包含以下内容:
1. 具体的行程安排(可以从参观景点、游览顺序、食宿推荐等方面展开);
2. 如此安排的理由。
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14.(23-24高二下·上海·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
77. 假定你是明自中学学生会主席,你校即将举行主题为“No Plastic Water Bottles”的一项环保活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书,要点包括:
1. 倡导No Plastic Water Bottles的原因;
2. 你的建议(至少三点)。80个单词左右
No Plastic Water Bottles
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
15.(24-25高二下·上海徐汇·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生会主席李华。学校计划试行“学生自主管理食堂周”,由学生团队设计健康菜谱、管理用餐秩序并收集反馈。请你以学生会名义写一份英文建议信给校长,内容包括:
●描述当前食堂存在的1个突出问题(如菜品单一、排队混乱等);
●提出具体改进方案及预期效果;
●说明该活动对学生能力培养的意义。
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考前押题06 应用文写作
1.
The Place I Want to Visit Most This Summer
I’m Li Ming from Mingqi Middle School. The place I want to visit most this summer is Lijiang, Yunnan.
Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city with unique Naxi ethnic culture. There are winding cobblestone streets, clear brooks and traditional wooden houses. It’s like a peaceful paradise away from the hustle and bustle of the city.
I want to go there mainly because I’m fascinated by its rich ethnic customs. I can experience the Naxi people’s special festivals and traditional handicrafts. Also, the natural scenery around Lijiang, like the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, is extremely charming. It will surely bring me an unforgettable vacation.
2.Dear Principal,
I am Li Hua, a senior student at our school. As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s library area.
I suggest transforming it into a “Reading and Sharing Corner” This space could include comfortable seating cushions , bookshelves, and small water features to create a serene environment for students to read and relax. The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life. This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.
I hope you consider this suggestion.
Yours,
Sincerely,
Li Hua
3.范文1
Dear Li Ming,
Recently I have found you relied heavily on electronic devices, like electronic dictionaries, to accomplish your English homework. As your friend, I think it necessary to offer my view.
Despite the convenience and accuracy of electronic “learning assistants”, I have to remind you that the original purpose of English homework should be to enhance your own language proficiency. In an examination, no electronic devices are ever allowed, so your long-term reliance on tools may hamper your own performance at length.
I suggest putting your electronic devices away and forcing yourself to stay focused. It can contribute to an improvement, though little every time, and finally help you make progress. Of course, you may get frustrated or puzzled when encountering unknown words, but bear in mind that over-relying on tools only offers you a “weak confidence”. What’s more, I’m not saying that electronic devices should be banned. Instead, it’s more sensible to employ them when you’ve already finished a task.
In a word, I sincerely hope you can take my advice into account.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Li Ming,
I’ve noticed that you have been relying on electronic devices such as electronic dictionaries too much when doing English homework, and as it can be harmful to your studies, I genuinely want to talk to you about it.
Over-relying on these external resources has many drawbacks. It skips the process of recalling what you’ve already mastered, which gives you the illusion that there’s no room for improvement and conceals potential mistakes. Additionally, it weakens your independent thinking skills and discourages you from autonomous learning.
To adapt a learning method that is more beneficial, I suggest that you put your electronic devices away when doing English homework, focus on your paper at hand and resist your urge of consulting external resources. In this way, you’ll have space to think independently and complete the work with your own knowledge. After finishing the homework, you can make full use of these devices to check whether your knowledge is accurate, so as to correct the mistakes and enlarge your vocabulary.
English learning is a process of accumulation, while relying on external resources can hinder you from making progress. I hope my advice helps, and let’s improve our English together!
Yours,
Li Hua
4.Dear Community Committee Director,
I am Li Hua, a resident of our community. I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
I understand that some residents are concerned about potential issues. For example, the playground might cause noise disturbances, especially during evening hours when children are more active. Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained.
However, I believe the benefits of having a playground outweigh these concerns. To address the noise issue, we could set specific operating hours, such as from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m., to minimize disturbances to other residents. Regarding safety, the community could allocate a small budget for regular maintenance and inspections of the playground equipment. This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents.
I hope my suggestions can be considered in the upcoming meeting. Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Best regards,
Li Hua
5.Dear Lihua;
I'm glad to hear that you have access to participating in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community to gain a chance to stay in it for free.
My reasons are as follows. Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must be high if you choose it. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there .On the other hand, during your spare time you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose one?
I hope that you will take my advice. It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Ming
6.Dear headteacher,
Knowing that our school is going to organize a “Disaster Prevention and Mitigation Day” themed class meeting in each class, I would like to put forward some personal suggestions on the design of this themed class meeting activity.
First of all, I suggest that we invite professional disaster prevention and mitigation experts or firefighters to give us lectures on campus, which can not only increase our knowledge, but also inspire our courage and confidence in the face of disasters. Secondly, I suggest organizing simulation exercises, which can make us more deeply understand the importance of disaster prevention and reduction, and improve our emergency response capacity. In addition, I suggest that we can make some posters or videos for disaster prevention and reduction. These publicity materials can make students always pay attention to disaster prevention and reduction issues in daily life.
I hope the above suggestions can get your approval and support.
Yours,
Li Ming
7.Dear Students’ Union,
I am glad to learn that our school is planning to offer various club activities next semester. Among the five forms — music, fine arts, dance, drama, and sports — I prefer sports the most.
I choose sports because I am passionate about ball games, especially basketball and badminton. I am particularly interested in learning advanced skills, teamwork strategies, and how to improve physical fitness through scientific training. Besides, I enjoy friendly competitions and the spirit of never giving up.
By joining the sports club, I hope to build up my body, develop determination, and learn to cooperate with others. Moreover, I believe regular exercise will help me relieve stress and focus better on my studies.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8.
I am Zhang Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. Having watched your wonderful performance and communicated with the actors, I was deeply impressed by Kunqu, a treasure of Chinese traditional art. However, it is a pity that few young people showed up.
To attract more young audiences, I have two suggestions. First, you can promote Kunqu on social media by posting short videos of classic scenes and backstage stories, which can make it easier for teenagers to get close to this art. Second, it is a good idea to hold Kunqu workshops in schools, allowing students to experience singing and performing in person. The reason is that young people prefer interesting and interactive ways to know traditional culture.
I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish Kunqu Opera a brighter future!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
9.Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions on how to enrich our school’s after-school life, which I believe will make our campus life more colorful and meaningful.
First, our school can organize more club activities, such as a debate club and a photography club. This not only allows us to develop our hobbies but also helps us make more friends with the same interest. Second, holding monthly sports meetings or outdoor activities like hiking can relax our minds after long hours of study and improve our physical health. What’s more, inviting experts to give lectures on career planning or art appreciation can broaden our horizons and add more fun to our daily life.
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration. I’m looking forward to a more wonderful after-school life in our school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10.Notice
To enrich our English learning experience and improve our listening and speaking skills, the Students’ Union will hold an English Movie Appreciation Session in our school.
The activity will take place in the school lecture hall from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm next Saturday. During the session, we will watch a classic English movie with English subtitles, which can help us learn authentic English expressions. After watching the movie, we will divide into groups to discuss the plot and share our feelings and opinions in English. This activity is a great chance to experience English culture and practice your oral English in a relaxing way.
Those who are interested in the activity please sign up with your class monitors before next Thursday. We welcome all Senior 2 students to take part in it!
The Students’ Union
January 17th, 2026
11.Dear Jim,
Glad to hear you’re interested in our farming practice activities! Last month, our class spent three days at Greenfield Farm, where we experienced real agricultural work.
We started by learning to plant seedlings in the fields. The farmers taught us how to loosen the soil and space the plants properly, and we worked in groups under the sun — though my back ached afterward! We also fed sheep and collected eggs in the barn, which was messy but fun. The most unforgettable part was making organic fertilizer with fallen leaves — a smelly yet eye-opening process.
What struck me most was how farming connects to everything we learn in class. Calculating seed amounts needed math, and observing crop growth tied to biology. More importantly, working the land made me respect farmers’ hard work deeply. Now, I never waste food!
Hope you can join us next time!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
12.One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m writing to propose a plan for our upcoming “Traditional Folk Art into the Community” event this summer. The activity will target local residents, especially children and elderly people, and will take place in our school hall and nearby community centers.
We can invite folk artists to demonstrate paper-cutting, clay sculpture, and traditional painting. There will also be interactive workshops where participants can create their own artworks.
This event will not only help preserve traditional culture and promote community bonding, but also raise public awareness of Chinese folk art. It’s a great opportunity for volunteers to contribute to cultural education as well.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Best regards,
Li Ming
13.Dear Jenny,
I’m thrilled to hear that your family is planning a trip to China this summer vacation. Here’s a detailed itinerary I’ve designed.
Day 1: After arriving in Shanghai, the family can settle into their hotel and rest from their journey. Day 2: Explore Shanghai- Start with a visit to the Shanghai Museum to explore China’s rich history. Day 3- 4: Traveling to Nanjing will give your father the chance to delve into China’s ancient history. You can visit the Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum and the Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum. Day 5-6: Travel to Hangzhou- A short train ride to Hangzhou will allow your mother to appreciate China’s beautiful scenery and culture. Day 7: Departure - On your last day, you can do some last-minute shopping in Shanghai.
This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, making your trip unforgettable. I hope this helps and you will enjoy your holiday!
Yours,
Wang Lei
14.
No Plastic Water Bottles
Dear fellow students,
Our school is launching an activity “No Plastic Water Bottles”. Plastic water bottles cause pollution as they’re made from non-renewable resources and take ages to decompose. In addition, they often end up in the ocean, posing a serious threat to marine life.
Here are some suggestions. Bring reusable bottles and refill them at school. At school events, use other containers for water. Also, spread the message about the harm of plastic bottles via posters and class discussions.
Let’s act now for a greener school!
The Students’ Union
15.Dear Principal,
As the chairman of the Student Union at Mingqi Middle School, I am excited to propose a new initiative: the “Student-Led Cafeteria Management Week.” Currently, one major issue in our cafeteria is the lack of variety in meal options, which often leads to student dissatisfaction and longer queues due to repetitive choices.
To address this, we propose involving student teams in designing healthy menus, ensuring a diverse range of dishes that cater to different dietary preferences and nutritional needs. Additionally, students will manage dining order to streamline the queuing process and collect feedback to continuously improve services.
This activity not only aims to enhance the dining experience but also fosters essential skills in our peers such as teamwork, responsibility, and problem-solving. It’s a win-win for both the school and students’ personal growth.
We believe this initiative will significantly improve the cafeteria environment and we eagerly await your approval to proceed.
SSincerely,
LLi Hua
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1.(24-25高二下·上海闵行·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的李明,最近你校英语报正发起“暑假我最想去的一个地方的”征文,你有意参加投稿:内容包括1、对最想去的地方的描述;2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Place I Want to Visit Most This Summer
I’m Li Ming from Mingqi Middle School. The place I want to visit most this summer is Lijiang, Yunnan.
Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city with unique Naxi ethnic culture. There are winding cobblestone streets, clear brooks and traditional wooden houses. It’s like a peaceful paradise away from the hustle and bustle of the city.
I want to go there mainly because I’m fascinated by its rich ethnic customs. I can experience the Naxi people’s special festivals and traditional handicrafts. Also, the natural scenery around Lijiang, like the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, is extremely charming. It will surely bring me an unforgettable vacation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于征文。要求考生以明启中学李明的身份,投稿说明暑假最想去的地方以及给出相应理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
独特的:unique → distinctive
传统的:traditional → conventional
远离:away from → far from
迷人的:charming → attractive/fascinating
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city with unique Naxi ethnic culture.
拓展句:Lijiang is a beautiful ancient city which has unique Naxi ethnic culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The place I want to visit most this summer is Lijiang, Yunnan. (运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句)
[高分句型2] I want to go there mainly because I’m fascinated by its rich ethnic customs. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
2.(24-25高二下·上海松江·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是实验中学高二学生李华,你校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动,现向学生征求以下两个方案的意见。请你仔细阅读方案内容,选择其中一个方案,并给校长写一封信。信中必须包含以下内容:
1)选择其中一个方案:
2)说明你推荐该方案的理由。
方案一:在图书馆设立“阅读分享角”,放置坐垫、书架等;
方案二:在教学楼走廊设立“文化展示长廊”,展示学生作品、学校历史文化、科普知识等。
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【答案】Dear Principal,
I am Li Hua, a senior student at our school. As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s library area.
I suggest transforming it into a “Reading and Sharing Corner” This space could include comfortable seating cushions , bookshelves, and small water features to create a serene environment for students to read and relax. The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life. This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.
I hope you consider this suggestion.
Yours,
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动,要求考生给校长写一封信,推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:propose → recommend
宁静的:serene → peaceful
促进:promote → boost
提供:offer → provide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s library area.
拓展句:As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan, which is designed to optimize our school’s library area.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
3.(24-25高二下·上海杨浦·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120 — 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明信中学的学生李华,你的好友李明在完成英语作业时,过度依赖电子设备,如电子辞典等,你觉得这不利于他的学习,想与他进行沟通。写封信给李明,内容须包括:
1) 向李明说明该行为带来的弊端;
2) 给出建议并说明理由。
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【答案】范文1
Dear Li Ming,
Recently I have found you relied heavily on electronic devices, like electronic dictionaries, to accomplish your English homework. As your friend, I think it necessary to offer my view.
Despite the convenience and accuracy of electronic “learning assistants”, I have to remind you that the original purpose of English homework should be to enhance your own language proficiency. In an examination, no electronic devices are ever allowed, so your long-term reliance on tools may hamper your own performance at length.
I suggest putting your electronic devices away and forcing yourself to stay focused. It can contribute to an improvement, though little every time, and finally help you make progress. Of course, you may get frustrated or puzzled when encountering unknown words, but bear in mind that over-relying on tools only offers you a “weak confidence”. What’s more, I’m not saying that electronic devices should be banned. Instead, it’s more sensible to employ them when you’ve already finished a task.
In a word, I sincerely hope you can take my advice into account.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2
Dear Li Ming,
I’ve noticed that you have been relying on electronic devices such as electronic dictionaries too much when doing English homework, and as it can be harmful to your studies, I genuinely want to talk to you about it.
Over-relying on these external resources has many drawbacks. It skips the process of recalling what you’ve already mastered, which gives you the illusion that there’s no room for improvement and conceals potential mistakes. Additionally, it weakens your independent thinking skills and discourages you from autonomous learning.
To adapt a learning method that is more beneficial, I suggest that you put your electronic devices away when doing English homework, focus on your paper at hand and resist your urge of consulting external resources. In this way, you’ll have space to think independently and complete the work with your own knowledge. After finishing the homework, you can make full use of these devices to check whether your knowledge is accurate, so as to correct the mistakes and enlarge your vocabulary.
English learning is a process of accumulation, while relying on external resources can hinder you from making progress. I hope my advice helps, and let’s improve our English together!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给完成英语作业时过度依赖电子设备的好友李明写一封信,告知他该行为带来的弊端,为他提供改正的建议,并说明自己的理由。(详解以范文1为例)
【详解】1. 词汇积累
依赖:rely on→depend on, be dependent on
完成:accomplish→complete
提高:enhance→improve, sharpen
阻碍:hamper→obstruct, hinder
遇到:encounter→run across, face
简而言之:in a word→in short, in a nutshell
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I suggest putting your electronic devices away and forcing yourself to stay focused.
拓展句:I suggest that you (should) put your electronic devices away and force yourself to stay focused.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Despite the convenience and accuracy of electronic “learning assistants”, I have to remind you that the original purpose of English homework should be to enhance your own language proficiency. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Instead, it’s more sensible to employ them when you’ve already finished a task. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
4.(24-25高二下·上海·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是某社区居民李华。最近,社区计划在小区中央的绿地上修建一个儿童游乐场,但部分居民反对,认为这会带来许多问题或争议。社区居委会决定召开居民会议讨论此事,请你写一封邮件给居委会主任,表达你的意见并提出建议。
要求:
1.说明可能存在的问题或争议;
2.提出合理的解决方案并阐述理由。
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【答案】Dear Community Committee Director,
I am Li Hua, a resident of our community. I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
I understand that some residents are concerned about potential issues. For example, the playground might cause noise disturbances, especially during evening hours when children are more active. Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained.
However, I believe the benefits of having a playground outweigh these concerns. To address the noise issue, we could set specific operating hours, such as from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m., to minimize disturbances to other residents. Regarding safety, the community could allocate a small budget for regular maintenance and inspections of the playground equipment. This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents.
I hope my suggestions can be considered in the upcoming meeting. Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】这篇写作是一篇建议信,要求考生就在中央绿地上修建儿童游乐场一事提出自己的建议。考生要囊括题目要求的几个要点,还要补充合理细节。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
潜在的:potential → possible, likely
干扰:disturbances → disruptions, interferences
优先于:outweigh → exceed, surpass
预算:budget → financial plan, allocation
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
拓展句:I am writing to share my thoughts on the plan, the purpose of which is to build a children’s playground in the central green area.
【点睛】【高级句型1】Additionally, there could be safety concerns if the playground equipment is not properly maintained. (if引导的条件状语从句)
【高级句型2】This way, we can ensure a safe and enjoyable environment for our children while also respecting the needs of all residents. (while 引导的状语从句省略句)
5.(23-24高二下·上海闵行·期中)Directions:Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的李明,你的好友李华受邀参加美国的夏令营活动。此时他有两种方案可供选择,一种是选择寄宿在当地居民的家中(homestay),费用比较高。另一种是参加30小时的志愿者服务活动,但提供免费住宿。对此,他向你求助。
请写一封信给李华,必须包含下列两点:
1.你建议选择哪一种方案;
2.你的理由。
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【答案】Dear Lihua;
I'm glad to hear that you have access to participating in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community to gain a chance to stay in it for free.
My reasons are as follows. Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must be high if you choose it. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there .On the other hand, during your spare time you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose one?
I hope that you will take my advice. It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友李华写一封回信,就李华在海外交流活动期间的住宿问题表明自己的态度,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加: participate in→take part in
建议:suggest→advise
获得:acquire→gain
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:On the other hand, during your spare time you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person.
拓展句:On the other hand, it is during your spare time that you will also spend time helping others to be a warm -hearted person.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs.(运用了部分倒装句)
6.(23-24高二下·上海·期中)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生李明,学校计划在每个班级组织“防灾减灾日(Disaster Prevention and Mitigation Day)”主题班会以提高学生防灾减灾意识,普及灾难应对常识。请你给班主任写一封信提出你对该主题班会活动设计的建议,内容应包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
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【答案】Dear headteacher,
Knowing that our school is going to organize a “Disaster Prevention and Mitigation Day” themed class meeting in each class, I would like to put forward some personal suggestions on the design of this themed class meeting activity.
First of all, I suggest that we invite professional disaster prevention and mitigation experts or firefighters to give us lectures on campus, which can not only increase our knowledge, but also inspire our courage and confidence in the face of disasters. Secondly, I suggest organizing simulation exercises, which can make us more deeply understand the importance of disaster prevention and reduction, and improve our emergency response capacity. In addition, I suggest that we can make some posters or videos for disaster prevention and reduction. These publicity materials can make students always pay attention to disaster prevention and reduction issues in daily life.
I hope the above suggestions can get your approval and support.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给班主任写一封信,提出你对学校计划在每个班级组织的“防灾减灾日”主题班会活动设计的建议,内容应包括:1.你的建议;2.你的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→recommendation
专业的:professional→specialized
专家:expert→specialist
另外:in addition→what’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Secondly, I suggest organizing simulation exercises, which can make us more deeply understand the importance of disaster prevention and reduction, and improve our emergency response capacity.
拓展句:Secondly, I suggest that we should organize simulation exercises, which can make us more deeply understand the importance of disaster prevention and reduction, and improve our emergency response capacity.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, I suggest that we invite professional disaster prevention and mitigation experts or firefighters to give us lectures on campus, which can not only increase our knowledge, but also inspire our courage and confidence in the face of disasters. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, I suggest organizing simulation exercises, which can make us more deeply understand the importance of disaster prevention and reduction, and improve our emergency response capacity. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校计划在下学期开设丰富多彩的社团活动,以丰富同学们的课余生活。为了解大家的需求,校学生会现面向全体同学征求意见。请你给学生会写一封邮件,内容需包括:
■你最喜欢的社团活动类型(从音乐、美术、舞蹈、戏剧、体育中选择其一);
■你选择该类型的原因,以及你对该类型活动中哪些具体方面感兴趣;
■你希望通过参加该社团活动,在哪些方面有所收获。
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【答案】Dear Students’ Union,
I am glad to learn that our school is planning to offer various club activities next semester. Among the five forms — music, fine arts, dance, drama, and sports — I prefer sports the most.
I choose sports because I am passionate about ball games, especially basketball and badminton. I am particularly interested in learning advanced skills, teamwork strategies, and how to improve physical fitness through scientific training. Besides, I enjoy friendly competitions and the spirit of never giving up.
By joining the sports club, I hope to build up my body, develop determination, and learn to cooperate with others. Moreover, I believe regular exercise will help me relieve stress and focus better on my studies.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写一封邮件,就学校下学期拟开设的社团活动提出建议,内容包括最喜欢的社团类型、选择该类型的原因及兴趣点、希望获得的收获。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
热衷:passionate → enthusiastic
提高:improve → enhance
缓解压力:relieve stress → ease tension
坚持:determination → perseverance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:By joining the sports club, I hope to build up my body, develop determination, and learn to cooperate with others.
拓展句:By joining the sports club, I hope to build up my body and develop determination, which will help me learn to cooperate with others.
3. 高分句型
【高分句型1】I choose sports because I am passionate about ball games, especially basketball and badminton.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Moreover, I believe regular exercise will help me relieve stress and focus better on my studies.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略that)
8.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生张华,近日你观看了一场昆曲演出,并与昆曲演员们进行了交流。你发现,虽然昆曲是中国的传统艺术瑰宝,但年轻观众却寥寥无几。请你给昆曲艺术团写一封信。在信中,你必须:
1. 提出吸引更多年轻观众的建议;
2.说明你的理由。
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【答案】
I am Zhang Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. Having watched your wonderful performance and communicated with the actors, I was deeply impressed by Kunqu, a treasure of Chinese traditional art. However, it is a pity that few young people showed up.
To attract more young audiences, I have two suggestions. First, you can promote Kunqu on social media by posting short videos of classic scenes and backstage stories, which can make it easier for teenagers to get close to this art. Second, it is a good idea to hold Kunqu workshops in schools, allowing students to experience singing and performing in person. The reason is that young people prefer interesting and interactive ways to know traditional culture.
I hope my advice will be helpful. Wish Kunqu Opera a brighter future!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给昆曲艺术团写一封信,提出吸引更多年轻观众的建议并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
印象深刻:impress → strike
促进;推广:promote → popularize
珍宝:treasure → gem
互动的:interactive → mutual
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:First, you can promote Kunqu on social media by posting short videos of classic scenes and backstage stories, which can make it easier for teenagers to get close to this art.
拓展句:First, you can promote Kunqu on social media by posting short videos of classic scenes and backstage stories, making it easier for teenagers to get close to this art.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having watched your wonderful performance and communicated with the actors, I was deeply impressed by Kunqu, a treasure of Chinese traditional art. (运用了现在分词的完成式作状语)
【高分句型2】The reason is that young people prefer interesting and interactive ways to know traditional culture. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
9.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校英文报正在征集关于“如何丰富高中生校园课余生活”的建议,你是高二学生李华,请给校报编辑写一封建议信。内容包括:1. 提出2-3条具体建议;2. 说明建议的理由;3. 表达期待。
要求:词数120左右,格式正确,语言流畅,可适当发挥。
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【答案】Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions on how to enrich our school’s after-school life, which I believe will make our campus life more colorful and meaningful.
First, our school can organize more club activities, such as a debate club and a photography club. This not only allows us to develop our hobbies but also helps us make more friends with the same interest. Second, holding monthly sports meetings or outdoor activities like hiking can relax our minds after long hours of study and improve our physical health. What’s more, inviting experts to give lectures on career planning or art appreciation can broaden our horizons and add more fun to our daily life.
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration. I’m looking forward to a more wonderful after-school life in our school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高二学生李华的身份,给校报编辑写一封建议信,就“如何丰富高中生校园课余生活”提出2-3条具体建议并说明理由,同时表达对校园课余生活改善的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有意义的:meaningful → significant
培养:develop → foster
拓宽:broaden → expand
期待:look forward to → anticipate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:This not only allows us to develop our hobbies but also helps us make more friends with the same interest.
拓展句:Not only does this allow us to develop our hobbies, but it also helps us make more friends with the same interest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to offer some practical suggestions on how to enrich our school’s after-school life, which I believe will make our campus life more colorful and meaningful.(运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, inviting experts to give lectures on career planning or art appreciation can broaden our horizons and add more fun to our daily life.(运用了动名词短语inviting experts to give lectures on career planning or art appreciation作主语)
10.(25-26高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你校学生会将组织一次“英语电影赏析会”,旨在提升学生的英语听力和口语能力,感受英语文化。请你以学生会的名义写一则英文通知。
内容包括:1. 活动主题和目的;
2. 活动时间(下周六下午2:00-4:00)、地点(学校报告厅);
3. 活动内容(观看经典英文电影+分组讨论剧情+分享观后感);
4. 报名方式(到各班班长处报名,截止日期下周四)。
要求:词数120左右,格式正确,信息完整,语言简洁。
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【答案】Notice
To enrich our English learning experience and improve our listening and speaking skills, the Students’ Union will hold an English Movie Appreciation Session in our school.
The activity will take place in the school lecture hall from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm next Saturday. During the session, we will watch a classic English movie with English subtitles, which can help us learn authentic English expressions. After watching the movie, we will divide into groups to discuss the plot and share our feelings and opinions in English. This activity is a great chance to experience English culture and practice your oral English in a relaxing way.
Those who are interested in the activity please sign up with your class monitors before next Thursday. We welcome all Senior 2 students to take part in it!
The Students’ Union
January 17th, 2026
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则英文通知,介绍“英语电影赏析会”的主题目的、时间地点、活动内容及报名方式。
【详解】词汇积累
提升:improve → promote
观点:opinion → perspective
真实的:authentic → real
报名:sign up → register
句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:Those who are interested in the activity please sign up with your class monitors before next Thursday.
拓展句:If you are interested in this activity, please sign up with your class monitors before next Thursday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To enrich our English learning experience and improve our listening and speaking skills, the Students’ Union will hold an English Movie Appreciation Session in our school.(不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】During the session, we will watch a classic English movie with English subtitles, which can help us learn authentic English expressions.(which 引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Those who are interested in the activity please sign up with your class monitors before next Thursday.(who 引导限制性定语从句)
11.(24-25高二下·上海·月考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李华,你的英国好友Jim在你们学校网站上看到了你们前往农场参与学农(farming practice activities)的照片,对此很感兴趣,发来邮件询问。请你写一封回信,信件内容需包括:
1. 学农活动过程和内容;
2. 你参加学农活动的感受。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
Glad to hear you’re interested in our farming practice activities! Last month, our class spent three days at Greenfield Farm, where we experienced real agricultural work.
We started by learning to plant seedlings in the fields. The farmers taught us how to loosen the soil and space the plants properly, and we worked in groups under the sun — though my back ached afterward! We also fed sheep and collected eggs in the barn, which was messy but fun. The most unforgettable part was making organic fertilizer with fallen leaves — a smelly yet eye-opening process.
What struck me most was how farming connects to everything we learn in class. Calculating seed amounts needed math, and observing crop growth tied to biology. More importantly, working the land made me respect farmers’ hard work deeply. Now, I never waste food!
Hope you can join us next time!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封回信,说明学农活动过程和内容以及你参加学农活动的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
合适地:properly→appropriately
感兴趣:be interested in→take interest in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The most unforgettable part was making organic fertilizer with fallen leaves — a smelly yet eye-opening process.
拓展句:The most unforgettable part was making organic fertilizer with fallen leaves, which was a smelly yet eye-opening process.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What struck me most was how farming connects to everything we learn in class.(运用了what引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Last month, our class spent three days at Greenfield Farm, where we experienced real agricultural work.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
12.(24-25高二下·上海浦东新·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 100-120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学的学生李明,今年暑假学校将开展“传统民间艺术进社区”主题活动,并且该活动由你所在的校志愿者社团承办。请给社团主席以邮件形式写一份活动策划方案。内容包括:
1. 活动针对的人群、地点;
2. 活动的主要内容及其意义。
民间艺术:folk art
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m writing to propose a plan for our upcoming “Traditional Folk Art into the Community” event this summer. The activity will target local residents, especially children and elderly people, and will take place in our school hall and nearby community centers.
We can invite folk artists to demonstrate paper-cutting, clay sculpture, and traditional painting. There will also be interactive workshops where participants can create their own artworks.
This event will not only help preserve traditional culture and promote community bonding, but also raise public awareness of Chinese folk art. It’s a great opportunity for volunteers to contribute to cultural education as well.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Best regards,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以明启中学学生李明的身份,给校志愿者社团主席写邮件,提交“传统民间艺术进社区”主题活动的策划方案,内容需涵盖活动针对的人群与地点、主要内容及其意义。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提议:propose→put forward
针对:target→be aimed at
展示:demonstrate→show
促进:promote→boost
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to propose a plan for our upcoming “Traditional Folk Art into the Community” event this summer.
拓展句:I’m writing to propose a plan for our upcoming event this summer, whose theme is “Traditional Folk Art into the Community”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There will also be interactive workshops where participants can create their own artworks.(运用了where引导的定语从句修饰workshops)
【高分句型2】This event will not only help preserve traditional culture and promote community bonding, but also raise public awareness of Chinese folk art. (运用了“not only…but also…”连接并列结构)
13.(24-25高二下·上海浦东新·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你的英国笔友 Jenny计划今年暑假与父母一同来中国旅游。为期一周的中国之行中,他们将在上海停留一天。Jenny的父亲对中国历史比较感兴趣,她的母亲对中式建筑饶有兴致,而 Jenny本人则对中华美食情。有独钟。她希望你能为他们一家设计一个旅行安排,满足三人的各自需求。你的回信需包含以下内容:
1. 具体的行程安排(可以从参观景点、游览顺序、食宿推荐等方面展开);
2. 如此安排的理由。
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【答案】Dear Jenny,
I’m thrilled to hear that your family is planning a trip to China this summer vacation. Here’s a detailed itinerary I’ve designed.
Day 1: After arriving in Shanghai, the family can settle into their hotel and rest from their journey. Day 2: Explore Shanghai- Start with a visit to the Shanghai Museum to explore China’s rich history. Day 3- 4: Traveling to Nanjing will give your father the chance to delve into China’s ancient history. You can visit the Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum and the Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum. Day 5-6: Travel to Hangzhou- A short train ride to Hangzhou will allow your mother to appreciate China’s beautiful scenery and culture. Day 7: Departure - On your last day, you can do some last-minute shopping in Shanghai.
This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, making your trip unforgettable. I hope this helps and you will enjoy your holiday!
Yours,
Wang Lei
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友 Jenny计划今年暑假与父母一同来中国旅游。要求考生按照所给的要求对其旅行进行安排并回信告知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → excited
设计的:designed → planned
探索:explore → discover
深入了解:delve into → explore in depth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, making your trip unforgettable.
拓展句:This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, which will make your trip unforgettable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here’s a detailed itinerary I’ve designed.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Day 3- 4: Traveling to Nanjing will give your father the chance to delve into China’s ancient history. (运用了动名词作主语的结构)
14.(23-24高二下·上海·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
77. 假定你是明自中学学生会主席,你校即将举行主题为“No Plastic Water Bottles”的一项环保活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书,要点包括:
1. 倡导No Plastic Water Bottles的原因;
2. 你的建议(至少三点)。80个单词左右
No Plastic Water Bottles
Dear fellow students,
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The Students’ Union
【答案】
No Plastic Water Bottles
Dear fellow students,
Our school is launching an activity “No Plastic Water Bottles”. Plastic water bottles cause pollution as they’re made from non-renewable resources and take ages to decompose. In addition, they often end up in the ocean, posing a serious threat to marine life.
Here are some suggestions. Bring reusable bottles and refill them at school. At school events, use other containers for water. Also, spread the message about the harm of plastic bottles via posters and class discussions.
Let’s act now for a greener school!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于倡议书。要求考生以明自中学学生会主席的身份,就学校即将举行的“No Plastic Water Bottles”环保活动写一封倡议书,需阐述倡导该活动的原因并给出至少三点建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发起:launch → initiate
造成:cause → lead to
分解:decompose → break down
建议:suggestion → proposal
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school is launching an activity “No Plastic Water Bottles”.
拓展句:Our school is launching an activity which is titled “No Plastic Water Bottles”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Plastic water bottles cause pollution as they’re made from non-renewable resources and take ages to decompose. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, they often end up in the ocean, posing a serious threat to marine life. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
15.(24-25高二下·上海徐汇·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学学生会主席李华。学校计划试行“学生自主管理食堂周”,由学生团队设计健康菜谱、管理用餐秩序并收集反馈。请你以学生会名义写一份英文建议信给校长,内容包括:
●描述当前食堂存在的1个突出问题(如菜品单一、排队混乱等);
●提出具体改进方案及预期效果;
●说明该活动对学生能力培养的意义。
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【答案】Dear Principal,
As the chairman of the Student Union at Mingqi Middle School, I am excited to propose a new initiative: the “Student-Led Cafeteria Management Week.” Currently, one major issue in our cafeteria is the lack of variety in meal options, which often leads to student dissatisfaction and longer queues due to repetitive choices.
To address this, we propose involving student teams in designing healthy menus, ensuring a diverse range of dishes that cater to different dietary preferences and nutritional needs. Additionally, students will manage dining order to streamline the queuing process and collect feedback to continuously improve services.
This activity not only aims to enhance the dining experience but also fosters essential skills in our peers such as teamwork, responsibility, and problem-solving. It’s a win-win for both the school and students’ personal growth.
We believe this initiative will significantly improve the cafeteria environment and we eagerly await your approval to proceed.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封以学生会名义写给校长的建议信,要求描述当前食堂存在的突出问题、提出改进方案及预期效果,并说明活动对学生能力培养的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提议:propose → put forward
解决:address → tackle
包含:involving → encompassing
促进:fosters → facilitates
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Additionally, students will manage dining order to streamline the queuing process and collect feedback to continuously improve services.
拓展句:Furthermore, student teams will oversee dining etiquette to optimize queue efficiency and gather feedback systematically, thereby facilitating ongoing service enhancements.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Currently, one major issue in our cafeteria is the lack of variety in meal options, which often leads to student dissatisfaction and longer queues due to repetitive choices.(使用关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词为the lack of variety in meal options)
【高分句型2】This activity not only aims to enhance the dining experience but also fosters essential skills in our peers such as teamwork, responsibility, and problem-solving.(使用“not only...but also... 结构”)
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